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Raiden, Dinamita "Saji" [Kiri Genin]

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Raiden, Dinamita "Saji" [Kiri Genin]  Young_Raiden

Raiden Jr, Dinamita Saji.

THE INFO.

Name: Dinamita Saji Raiden, Jr
Nickname: (usually called by middle name to differentiate himself from his father) Saigo no Rakurai
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance: Saji stands five feet four inches tall and weighs eighty four pounds. He is shorter than most ninja, but this can sometimes work to his advantage. Saji has off-white hair, which he usually spikes up. When it's not spiked up, his hair is curled and left hanging down; quite a different look from the usual. He is light skinned and has turquoise eyes. He has a small nose and chin, and an oval-shaped head. To most people, he would look weak but his muscle definition is actually quite astounding for his age. He has a 72 inch wingspan, which is long compared to the average height-to-wingspan ratio.

He wears a black and white robe which goes up to his ankles. Instead of a black and white robe, he sometimes wears a completely black robe with a white sash around his waist. He wears white socks underneath his brown sandals. Sometimes, usually when it is a windy day, Saji wears a white cape over his robe. He thinks this makes him look bad-ass. When Saji is going for a walk or if he wants to look good, he wears a white and black hooded sweater, a grey vest, black pants, and a brown pair of low-cut Vans. On sunny days, he will wear a pair of sunglasses that his father had given to him as a child.
Forehead Protector: Saji usually uses it a wrist band, however he does occasionally wear it traditionally.
Personality: When Saji is assigned a job, he will do it without any complaints unless the job is completely outrageously difficult. Saji is not the kind of person that you would try to piss off. Saji is rather short-tempered and can be too aggressive at times. If not enraged, Saji would be very calm, responsible, and laid back. Saji takes training very seriously, since he wants to take be ready to take on the killer of his parents. When Saji is enraged, he is not easily distracted. In his mind, the only thing he thinks about his is opponent and how he would like to defeat him. He feels that he must protect it. Saji despises killers who kill for the hell of it.

Saji doesn't like to talk a lot. However, he doesn't not talk to the point in which you would think he was an introverted person. He is quite friendly and tries to talk to new people he meets. Saji prefers to let his fists do the talking for him. He thinks he is a strong ninja and feels that he can beat anyone of his caliber. He strives to become the best fighter and wants to prove to his family that fists can overpower the sword. Although he likes fighting, he thinks killing is stupid, wrong, and disgusting. He believes killing is only for the weak of heart.

Saji's motives lay out plain and simple. Kill my uncle, train my fists to become durable, light, fast, strong and concussive weapons of terror, protect the innocent, and show loyalty to his village. He tries to abide by these rules at all time and never falter away. Saji lives in an orphanage with a few elders and doesn't really mind this. They rarely bother him and he is able to live peacefully most of the time. Saji's usual day is waking up early in the morning, training for an odd number of hours, resting for about one, and looking around the village for some food and for some new friends.
Clan: N/A
Nindō: "Let my fight speak."

THE NINJA.

Origin: Mizu No Kuni
Affiliation: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: 1st Ninjutsu, 2nd Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities: 1st Fuuton, 2nd Raiton
Combat Style: Saji doesn't have a strong chin, so he uses a hit and run strategy and speedy attacks. He hides in the shadows and strikes when the opponent has their guard down. When he is unable to use the surroundings to his advantage, he likes to strike his opponent once or twice and back away to make it difficult to hit for the opponent to strike him back. If Saji is in a head-to-head fight, he will try to use fast blows to confuse his opponent. He also loves to perform aerial grapples and slam them into the ground. However, he isn't overly aggressive in these types of fights because he could get hurt easily and he could also lose his energy quite fast, leaving him open to attacks. His favourite thing to do is link his jutsus to quickly finish his opponent off.
Special Characteristics:
Spoiler:

THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Birth and Childhood Arc: Saji was born to his parents Dinamita Sr and Miziro Raiden. They lived in the western part of Kirigakure. When Jack was four, his father, Dinamita Sr, entrusted Saji his sword. It was the Raiden sword passed down through the ages. It had a green handle and sheath. Saji wondered why he received the sword so early, but he would soon find out. The next day, his home was lit on fire by a village invader. Saji's father was expecting him, as he lost the invader lost to him in a fight. Everyone in the house was running frantically around. His parents told Saji to hide in a tiny closet only he could fit into. Then, he heard the village invader come into the house with a sword. Through the blinds of the closet, he witnessed his family getting murdered by the village invader. He could only watch, or else he would die as well. After the invader left, Saji stepped outside and kissed his parents on the cheek, vowing to find the killer.

Academy Arc: After the Raiden massacre, he was taken in by an orphanage. They promised the would take good care of him. In the first month of being in the orphanage, his uncle had come to visit. His uncle lived on the other side of the village. He just wanted to greet Saji and pay his condolences, but Saji wanted to be strong. He wanted to take down his family's killer. He asked his uncle if he was trained in the way of the sword. His uncle was trained in kenjutsu, being a Raiden, and offered to help his nephew. They trained for two months until Uncle had to leave to the other side of the village. However, Raiden seemed to like using his fists more than his sword. The day before Uncle's departure, Saji was enrolled into the Ninja Academy. He learned the basics of being a ninja, and the Academy decided his basic ninja skills and fighting skills were good enough for Saji to become a Genin. He graduated from the Academy at the age of eight.

Genin Arc: After five years of doing community service around the village, Saji decided that it was time to do some real fighting. He asked the village to send him on a mission, and they told him to go hunt an animal, as that would be a real challenge for Saji. He couldn't take the insult and went off to find some missing-nin. He found his uncle near the shore, using his sword to impale a Kiri shinobi through the heart. He was trying to get steal his money! Saji couldn't believe this, but before Saji could get worked up, Uncle told Saji that it was him who killed his parents. Uncle then knocked Saji out cold and dragged him back to the front of the orphanage. Saji woke up, still filled with rage. He realized his uncle didn't want to hurt him, but wanted Saji to grow stronger. This would work against him as Saji focused all his time into training to kill Uncle.
Roleplay Sample:
Spoiler:

THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.

Academy Jutsu:

Taijutsu:

Ninjutsu:

Elemental Ninjutsu:

Equipment:

FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Raiden
Source: Metal Gear series
Image URL: http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120518190542/metalgear/images/0/07/Young_Raiden.jpg


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Needs more of the following:

  • Appearance length
  • Personality Length
  • Combat Style length
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Checklist:

  • Appearance: Fine.
  • Personality: Fine.
  • Combat Style: Fine.
  • Jutsu: Pre approved/Fine.


Approved 1/2.
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Before I can give a second approval I just have a few things :
  • You mention his nickname is Jack and use it to refer to him in every section of the application, but you give no reason behind why someone from a predominately Japanese and Asian setting would have such a western nickname, especially when it holds no similarities with the original name. Most often the reason behind a nickname should relate to some aspect of their personality or be mentioned within the history of the character.

  • Your personality is very small and nondescript of your character, other than a mere vague listing of traits with no elaboration. I feel it would be better to add at least a few more lines of description in attempt to elaborate more on your character himself.
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Fixed
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(2/2) Approved

Dont forget to make your account here
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Archived due to user inactivity.
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