Kaguya, Dota [Kiri Genin]

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When I got high, I felt pretty fly.
When I got stoned, I felt stronger boned.
When I came down, I wore a frown.
But I fixed this wrong with a hit from my bong.
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Kaguya, Dota.

THE INFO.

Name: Dota Kaguya
Nickname:

Demon Of Kirigakure:

This is a nickname that was given to Dota in order to establish his role in Kirigakure. Throughout his life, he has hated shinobi openly, and never stopped to think about why. As such, this hatred has turned him into something that is known as the Demon of Kirigakure. He is known for being very blood thirsty among those that have heard of Dota, and he is known to maim and injure people on a whim, if they so much as annoy him. He is very crude, and the name actually came from the fact that he was treated like the holder of a tailed beast by those within the shinobi society, each one looking down on him while fearing him simultaneously. There are few lines that Dota would not cross.

Bingo:

This is a name that was given to Dota during his childhood. For a long time, this was the only name that he knew, and he still answers to it today. That said, hardly anyone knows the name, and only the people that were there since Dota's beginning are able to recall such a name; even then it is still rare for people to know him by this name. Something to also take into consideration is that Dota is still very much involved with the black market, and its gang related dealings, acting as a male prostitute of sorts. Bingo is his prostitute name.
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Appearance:

Kinky. Naughty. Devious. Cruel. Dirty. Careless.
Kaguya, Dota [Kiri Genin] Sum_jo12

Dota Kaguya is someone that is obviously a bad guy. He holds a dark smirk on his face at most points, and is mostly always giving a look that obviously suggests he does not care. He was born with white hair, but due to his hatred towards the Kaguya clan, and ninja in general, Dota dyes his hair black. He keeps the hair black with constant dye so that the white never shines through. He keeps his hair cut short, breaking another tradition of the Kaguya clan, and wears it messy. He can go long times without showering, or washing his hair, and so his hair is often messy. He is also known to wear his bed head out of his house, should he be staying in one, and not even care to look at it. His physical appearance does not matter much to him. He has pale skin and green eyes that are large. Dota's nose is slightly turned up, but has a masculine bridge. His lips are full, but not very large, and often held in a frown. As for the Kaguya clan marks that would normally fall onto any member of the clan, Dota has had his removed through the normal tattoo removal process, leaving his forehead completely cleared of the red marks. It is not uncommon for Dota's eyes to be red, seeing as he is often high, and late nights and partying have made his eyes have bags under them at some points; but this is not always the case. Dota's body is lean, but athletic, with ample muscle bulk from working out and fighting and basic activities. His torso is very toned, with a clear six pack, defined pectoral muscles, and in inward belly button.

For clothes, Dota does not exactly follow his clan's tradition, but does not stray far from it in some regards. Basically, Dota does not like being a ninja so he does not wear very ninja like clothes. He wears sweat pants of jeans most of the time, with a white tank top or wife beater over his torso. The tank top is cut low under the arms, so most of his side is showing when he raises his arms, including his armpits, all the way down to his boxers, which often poke out of his pants like your typical teenager. He often wears heart boxers, or other baggy variants, and very rarely wears briefs or boxer briefs, if ever. His jeans are often slender and fitting, without being super sknny. Over top of his tank top, which is often dirty from his late night activities, but not always, he has been seen wearing a long sleeved jacket that is black on the outside and red on the inside. He has his a small patch on his left shoulder that has a gang symbol on it, displaying his loyalty to the gangs that are within the Kirigakure outskirts, and showing that he has done the terrible things that the gang has demanded of him; although only few people know what those things are. Unlike most shinobi, Dota does not wear the traditional sandals with the open toe and open heel. Instea, he wears laced up boots that are high top and have a metal toe for extra kicking damage. Although there is metal in his shoes, it is light metal and not something that hinders his movement; the metal is iron and makes for a good kick to the face.

The Scars On His Back:

Forehead Protector: Dota almost never wears a forehead protector due to his hatred of the ninja. He does keep it in his tools pouch in case he needs it ever. The only instance that he would need it is when he is faking being a ninja, or needs it to appear to be a ninja in order to gain access to certain things.
Personality: Dota is very complex, and yet appears to be very simple. He's intelligent, but not in a book smart way. He is very bright in the sense that he is very street smart, and can think well in the heat of various situations. While he may not be able to do any math to save his life, and surely cannot write an elegant sentence to save his life, he is able to problem solve in places that others may not be able to do the same. He is by no means a genius, just someone that is able to keep up when a strategy is being played out. That does not mean he'll follow the strategy. Dota's personality can be split into two main sections, those sections being his shinobi hatred, and his addiction to drugs. Both of these are main points in his personality. Since Dota was young, he heard about the horrible things that shinobi did, as well as the things that his own Kaguya clan did. He knows Kaguya's as "Bone Wackers" and has called them that since he was young. He was able to endure pain that he thinks no other individual has ever endured and because of that he thinks that the shinobi are weak. He hates that they think they are so tough and so trained when really they are nothing more the posers. He thinks that if they were ever submitted to the level of pain that he had been submitted to, they would not be able to take it and would quickly admit it. Dota sees ninja as weak, arrogant people that train in rich environments and do nothing but fiddle around with their beloved chakra - something that Dota hates. He does not enjoy using jutsu, or using his chakra in order to do anything other then fool with people. This is because he not only considers himself a civilian, not a shinobi, but because he hates the shinobi and does not want to be anything like them. That said, he does use them on occassion and he learned them in order to come across as a ninja of the mist village in order to gain the perks that may be given to them.

The other half of his personality is that of an addict. Dota from a young age was addicted to drugs. Cigarettes, alcohol, and other, much more powerful and dangerous drugs. As soon as he was able to get his hands on them he took them and became addicted to them. It is likely that he drowns himself in drugs in order to escape the pain of real life, seeing as he is not even happy without his drugs. It is rare to see Dota completely sober or without a cigarette in hand lit and ready to go, but it does happen on occassion. His addiction goes beyond that, and he has an addiction to stealing, theft, all kinds of crimes as well as an addiction to combat and fighting. He gets into bar fights all the time over his addictions and stealing habits but most of the time wins without much competition. Feel bad for the people that get stuck in a fight with Dota.
Clan: Kaguya
Nindō: Do what you want because you want to do it. Never do something because you're told to do it and feel like you're obligated. You're not. Live life the way you want, and don't let anyone tell you how else to do it.

THE NINJA.

Origin: Mizu no Kuni
Affiliation: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Taijutsu & Weaponry [Dom: Close/ Sub: Far]
Elemental Affinities: Lightning & Earth
Combat Style: Dota is very aggressive in battle, and does not fool around with analyzing and what not. He has full confidence that he can walk into a fight and mess the other person up. He uses an almost street fighter approach to his combat and taijutsu movements, allowing him to appear less shinobi like, and more like a bruding fight machine. He goes for solid punches and jabs, as well as basic kicks that are all aimed to cause damage upon impact due to his hard bones. He is often the first person to attack, unless attacked first in a surprise situation. But he has no problem with being the first to attack. He is not the kind to hold back against anyone, and does not give a rat's ass about testing an opponent, or testing his own skills for the most part. He'll either knock an opponent out, or kill them, depending on how annoyed he is. Sometimes, in rare cases, he'll let them walk after a little beating, but that is not often the case. He enjoys making someone beg to be let free, and still hurting them when they beg. He does not change his approach to fighting people based on his knowledge of them, unless it is obvious that it's not going to work. He is smart in combat, and can think quickly, but is not one to strategize before hand, and instead makes the plans as he goes. He loves the idea that he is better than a shinobi without even meaning to be and that shinobi are weak. Because of this, he has started to develope a style of combat which he calls the shinobi crusher, a style that is formed to counter a shinobi due to the random movements and un trained looking attacks and defences. Dota is a tank, for all intents and purposes, and is not afriad to be set out onto the font line, or fight ninja of higher ranks in almost any circumstances. He's stubborn in combat, which makes him harder to beat, and seems to alwasys be able to get back up.
Special Characteristics:
Endurance

Spoiler:

THE BACKGROUND.

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History:
1. Was born in Kirigakure.
2. Parents gave him to a notorious gang in Kirigakure as a way to save themselves when he was six months old. The man that ruled the gang was named Shou, and was a sick man with perverted morals.
3. From the age of six months to the age of two, Dota was raised as Shou's own child, but forced to live in horrible environments that were abusive, even at that age.
4. On his third birthday, Dota was locked away in a single room where he would remain for years, confined in a cold cell and chained to a wall for solitary confinement. Here, he was abused and tortured through sexual and purely abusive means by the members of the gang.
5. At the age of five, he was given the nickname "Bingo" by Shou, the name jokingly representing one of the sexuallly abusive games that they would play with him against his will. What is more, he started ot hear the term "Bone Wacker" which was the gang's name for Dota's clan the Kaguya.
6. At the age of six, the harrassment started to get more and more intense, and he was subjected to less and less food and water. Shou pretended to care about him, but put him though the most torture of all in numerous ways, including sexual abuse. Even so, Dota grew to think that Shou was his father, despite the way that he acted.
7. Dota was able to leave the room that he was chained up in at the age of seven once every two weeks in order to shower, where he would then be brought back and chained up. It was at this age that he first saw a women by the name of Tsurino, someone that was older than him, and someone that he grew to having conflicting emotions about.
8. Dota's anger started to grow towards the gang members, and most of all Shou, and Dota started to understand that he was from the Kaguya clan, although he knew nothing about it. All he heard was that they were monsters with an infection in their blood called a kekkei genkai that made them inhuman. He hated the Kaguya even more, and started to hate ninja or shinobi just because the gang members talked about them so negatively. The sexual abuse continued and got worse as he grew older.
9. Dota, at the age of nine started to realize that he was different then the men. His hair was a rare white color, and his skin was much more pale. He was able to be thrown against walls without feeling as much pain. Perhaps it was because his pain tolerance had gone up, and perhaps it was because he was the monster that had been described by the gang members when they didn't know that Dota was listening.
10. At the age of ten years old, Dota breaks free of his restraints and kills the gang members holding him down, making his escape. Dota tries to find Shou, but when he does he realizes that there are too many weapon holding gang members to approach him, and instead he flees, making his escape from the gang. He finds refuge in the boarders of another gang that takes him in and tell him that they'll protect him if he joins the shinobi force of Kirigakure and pretends to be a shinobi in order to gain access to their secret files and information, and objects. Dota agrees, despite his hatred for the shinobi and join the next gang, which he has forever been a part of since that point. He also engaged in a couple of other jobs in order to bring in money; jobs that could be considered highly crude and not advised, as well as illegal. Whether it be selling, dealing, or transporting drugs, or actually selling his body out to strangers for money, Dota worked within the black market's dealings in order to make his living.
11. After graduating from the academy, Dota resumed being a ninja for a short while before he took a hiatus on the ninja life and focused on himself, no engaging in any missions of any kind. This hiatus started when he was about fourteen, and lasted until he was about twenty three. After this point, he came back into the ninja life for the sake of his gang who demanded that he return.

Roleplay Sample: "You'd better shut the fuc* up before I kill you. I am not in a good mood so just start being more respectful to people and get on with your life. I am coming down there to see what you look like so I can report you to the 'Cocky for Life' group cause you speak all fearless and think your cool but on the inside you are just a pussy piece of crap."

Dota's face pulled back as he heard the instant reply. The voice sounded harsh, shrewed, and thrown out without any real consideration for who he was talking to. Of course, Dota was not very well known, especially not among the ninja folk, and their goody-two-shoes crew. He hated them all for being such know-it-alls. What is more, their snot nosed way of going about life made him wanna literally pee on them while they slept. A wresting in the leaves of the tree above Dota was heard before the ninja hiding in their midst jumped out from the tree. He was a ninja for sure, and someone that looked as though he belonged to the whimpy little game that shinobi called life.

"What the hell is your name?"

Dota's silence only lasted a second. As he studied the boy in front of him, he tore him apart with his mind. A strict grin ripped across Dota's lips as he sized up this boy for all that he was. Was he serious? Was he really planning on taking on Dota with his little, whimpy, and wannabe attitude? Dota would enjoy this. It was the perfect timing - everything seemed to fall into place at the perfect timing.

"What is my name? Ha! You wanna know my name? Hahahaha!" Dota laughed, his arrogance pushing the limits of humanism, and his violent temper starting to take hold of his bones. "My name is I am going to fuc' your sh*t up! Ill give you three seconds to start running kid, you picked a fight with the wrong guy... so get going..." As Dota spoke, his hands reached for a kunai that he brought out of his pouch and pointed it at the boy opposite him. "If you dont pull that log out of your ass, and you think you can stick around and try and compete with me, Ill beat your face in and walk away laughing... so get lost idiot."

THE ARSENAL.

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FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Dante
Source: Devil May Cry 5
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Completion bump.

Age : 31 Posts : 1490

Your title needs to be formatted as "Last Name, First Name [Kiri Genin]"

I believe Seventeen is the maximum age for a Genin.

You are missing the required clan marks of the Kaguya clan.

You need to link your clan to your app.

You need to classify your Weaponry Categories by your main and sub usage. For example Weaponry-[Dom: Close/ Sub: Far]

Judging by your history your character is a civilian with Shinobi skills which is not allowed, it is required for you go through the Shinobi Academy. Additionally you need to remove all references to mostly illegal drugs from your application, including the drug pouch in your items.

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Title: Fixed.
Age: I heard that was changed so that there is no upward limit.
Clan Marks: Explained in looks; he had the tattoos removed at a young age.
Clan Link: Fixed.
Civilian Problem: He's not. He went to academy like other ninja.
Drug: Removed marijuana reference. Cigarettes and alcohol should be fine seeing as he is 23.