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[Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] SaberxSaver

YAEZAKURA JIN, YAEZAKURA SHIKI




THE INFO.

Name: Yaezakura Jin / Yaezakura Shiki
Nickname: "Overbearing Idiot" / "Nee-san <3"
Age: 17 / 17
Gender: Male / Female
Appearance: Yaezakura Jin stands at about 5'7". Lean and with a good natured face, he has a pleasant aura about him typically and a laid-back helpful mentality. Blonde medium length hair coupled with bright, emerald green eyes full of life and spirit. His default outfit is a pair of black dress pants, a red t-shirt with a light black jacket. His accessories include are minimal, a silver-chain with a cross and a pair of unadorned silver earrings. An individual of relatively light humor and disposition, he should appear approachable and unintimidating outside of battle and matters related to his sister. During matters of serious disposition, such as meeting with high ranking shinobi or missions involving professional matters, he wears a tight-fitting black suit and slacks, well-suited for stealth operations and matters of a grim nature. / Refined, indifferent, and stone-faced, Yaezakura Shiki is not quick to provide worth. Her eyes constantly wary, deep green in color like her siblings. Her long blonde-hair is kept pulled back in a business-like fashion, the woman giving off a chilling and abrasive expression save when caught off-guard. Standing at 5'5", she is slightly shorter than her brother, much to her own frustration. She prefers to maintain professional in appearance, clean, dark apparel her first choice, wearing a tight-fitting suit. When in the comfort of her own home or when her brother demands it, she'll wear light colored outfits, typically a blouse and short skirt. Her only accessories are a black ribbon used to tie back her hair, always black, and a pair of silver earrings, identical to her brothers.



Outfits
Jin Casual / Shiki Casual
Jin Professional / Shiki Professional
Jin and Shiki Professional

Forehead Protector: Worn on his right as an Armband / Worn on her left as an Armband
Personality: A burning wish that supersedes all else. A desire, a wish, a loyalty which burns in his heart every moment of his life. To Yaezakura Jin, his life has been guided by the influence and affection of his sister, the individual he considers most important to his love. The young woman who is always beside him makes the young man place her safety, her wishes, and his love for her over all else. Because of this, Jin is normally a peaceful and kind young man, but quickly becomes brash and irrational over any subject involving his sibling. Outside of matters involving his sister, Jin is a fairly respectable and agreeable young man, not quick to cause issue and will often allow himself to be led by the wishes of the group. Slow to anger and quick to aid, he does not judge people over their mistakes nor lay blame to those without consideration. He is, admit-ably, a bit thick-headed and slow to realize what other picks up, an issue not caused by innocence as much as optimism. He believes in the community and is never willing to abandon someone or believe them incapable of redemption.

All of this serene demeanor ignites whenever is sister becomes involved, becoming quick to anger, quick to pick fights, and quick to destroy any who challenge his sibling in any regard, placing her however irrational as the defining being of his life. His 'head over heels' love for her, though incestuous and disapproved of by Shiki, completely overpowers his reason and sense of self, causing him to become daring when normally unwilling to cause conflict or disagreement.
Because of this, people will find it difficult to dissuade him from notions once placed in his mind, and will always follow Shiki's lead. While easily controlled by both sibling and others alike, once impassioned by his feelings he will rarely stop, quite likely willing to die for whatever cause his intense burning zeal has awakened for.

In terms of hobbies, Jin has a love of gardening. To him, little is quite as satisfying as taking a seemingly useless patch of dirt and filling it with blossoming life. To him, creating things is an exhilarating experience, despite the time and effort involved in it. He has a strong sense of color and decor, and will often go out of his way to make something seemingly unimportant just right. A painting not hanging quite at the right angle, a chair turned the wrong way when a table is set, a single red flower poorly placed in a vase of white roses. To him, there is a certain order to everything that subtly tugs out. Ignorable, but incredibly satisfying to correct. Because of this, he has an affection towards architecture, art, and landscaping, albeit having peculiar notions on how to go about it.




Ambition, unparalleled and unstopped. Schemes, paranoia, preparation, and doubt. Yaezakura Shiki leads her life under this ploys, to guard herself from the outer world and ensure her position within it. There are no sinless people, there are no humans that do not lie, and there is nothing better about be unable to be the dominant force in your own life. To Shiki, she and her brother are the most vital aspects of the world, and ensuring their survival and dominance within it are worth any cost. Village code, allies, morals- All disposable when their price equals advancement. To her, nothing is true of the universe say she and Jin. Slow to trust, quick to criticize, and distant from all, Shiki worships and respects those who are independent, even whiles she and her sibling could never think of being apart from another.

Shiki knew only Jin at first. She did not dare to touch the outside world, encouraged by Jin to but unwilling to touch it until prepared for it. To her, the outside world is dangerous, and her chief reason for even venturing out of Jin is to ensure his, and in turn her own, protection. Her drive is that of self-interest, raising herself and Jin out of the hands of others dominion in order to rule over their own lives. Jin is the closest being to her, and even then her brother is treated with some distance. She considers her brothers clinginess and insane infactuation with her to be disgusting, and regularly informs of him of it in order to encourage his distance from her. Shiki is far more willing to commit murder and amoral actions than Jin, but is more rational in her decision making, rarely letting her emotions get better than her save when feeling trapped or manipulated. Shiki is willing, however, to show Jin affection if it will serve her needs at the time, toying with his emotions in order to use him as one would a tool.

In terms of hobbies, Shiki has a fondness to the written language, enjoying novels of fantastical nature which, while unrealistic and out of the world, bring her a certain sense of wanderlust and desire to explore. Words are important to her, making poetry an unusual way of expressing herself that she normally fails to accomplish with the spoken tongue. As such, she is an accomplished amateur poet, and occasional sends her works in to magazines and papers under pseudonyms. Because of this, ancient languages, foreign lands, and mysterious artifacts all provide a sort of wondrous curiosity that excites her, causing an unusual amount of curiosity from the young woman, who normally remains reserved. Ancient legends, heroic epics, and enigmatic groups all are of an interest to her, and any situation involving them will have her full interest.


Clan: Souma no Kou
Kekkai Genkai:
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Nindō: "Love triumphing over all!" / "Ascension at any cost~"




THE NINJA.

Origin: Kumogakure
Affiliation: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Taijutsu / Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Katon / Futon
Combat Style:
Special Characteristics:
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THE BACKGROUND.

History: *17 Years Ago - Born to fisherman parents in a coastal village. Modest wealth, good family, no sign of unusual traits or kekkai genkai. Grows up with little trouble or signs of unique condition beyond "Imaginary Friend" signs.

*12 Years Ago - At the age of 5, signs of Souma no Kekkai Genkai began to arise. Parents confused and afraid. Unsure of what to do with them. Ask for local medical doctors assistance. Twins are separated from other children and Shiki is discouraged from showing herself.

*11 Years Ago - Kumogakure Shinobi discover the twins and their condition. Interest is taken concerning practical applications of their rare condition. Parents feel it best to let go of Jin and Shiki. They are taken to Kumogakure and intend to enroll the twins into the ninja academy.

*10 Years Ago - The Twins are enrolled into the academy despite their age, giving them a late start. Their combined minds give them an edge in respects to learning and performance, due to their combined array of talents. Jin becomes well-acquainted with classmates. Shiki remains distant.

*9 Years Ago - Jin and Shiki begin emphasis on taijutsu, due to the advantages their combined bodies have. Jin takes an interest in the Celerity Gear style, whilest Shiki prefers the Subservience Arts. Their combined attacks give them an unfair advantage in hand-to-hand combat. They perform well in the academy.

*7 Years Ago - Jin goes on a rampage, severely beating several students due to disrespect of Shiki. Their graduation from the academy is pushed back. Shiki further isolates herself from the class, while Jin continues to get into scuffles. Concern about the twins stability and potential as ninja is questioned.

*5 Years Ago - Jin and Shiki separate themselves from the academy, failing their classes. For Shiki's sake Jin decides to live alone on the outskirts of the village. Shiki finds herself enamored with history pieces while Jin reflecting upon his decisions in live. Jin begins gardening as a method to vent his frustration.

*3 Years Ago - Jin decides that he was wrong in failing to become a Genin. Asks Shiki to return to the academy and work with him to succeed. He desires to create a better environment with her, ninjas making far better earnings. Shiki agrees, believing that being able to control the world around her will improve their lives.

*2 Years Ago - Jin and Shiki take a make-up exam, showing their skills and talents. They easily reenter the academy and excel in their studies. Their both learn their element type and catch the eyes of their teachers with their fire and wind ninjutsu. Shiki begins separating from Jin at night while he sleeps and has suspicious dealings.

*1 Year Ago til now - Shiki begins taking shady jobs ninjas would normally frown on. Her lack of official record unlike Jin allows her to move through the underworld effectively while Jin sleeps. The two pass as Genins, but due to the shifting of policy and the new Kage, their team placement is postponed.

Roleplay Sample:

THE ARSENAL.



Academy Techniques
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Katon (Fire) Techniques
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Futon (Wind) Techniques
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Combination Techniques
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Kaisoku-giya (Celerity Gear) Techniques
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Jidai-ryuu (Subservience Style) Techniques
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Gear and Equipment
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FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Saver / Saber
Source: Fate/Stay Night Universe
Image URL: https://2img.net/h/i144.photobucket.com/albums/r196/KARJ_2006/SaberxSaver.png


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PostSubject: Re: [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] EmptyMon 29 Oct 2012, 11:05 am

Jutsus has been made. Given they tend to be my most controversial and difficult part of my projects, best you look them over now. Give me a heads up to any typos, template mistakes, and issues with individual techniques. I'm used to different standards than this site, and my descriptions can be a little shaky, so if I can make something more acceptable, lay it on me.
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PostSubject: Re: [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] EmptyMon 05 Nov 2012, 5:56 am

Just want to let you folks know that I do intend to finish this. I am not putting this together then forgetting about it- Life's just been disagreeing with me of late. Gotta put it in it's place.
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PostSubject: Re: [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] EmptyThu 29 Nov 2012, 10:16 pm

Lazy Shiro is done
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PostSubject: Re: [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] EmptySat 01 Dec 2012, 7:49 pm

Strong spirit requires an upkeep cost.

Zoufuku is very controversial in my opinion but at the same time I'm liberal enough to allow it...

Other than that your app is fine. I'll discuss some of the jutsu with other mods before slapping my approval.
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PostSubject: Re: [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] EmptySun 02 Dec 2012, 11:38 pm

Kigai's maintenance cost added. Must've forgotten about it

I assure you that despite the fancy pseudo-science explaination, its just attacking faster. I like to fancy things up cus I an Razz I promise not to break reality with a single punch, lol.

Feel free to. I'm still unsure on your guy's stance in many realms, so I apologize for anything that's blatantly controversial. Well. That I didn't intend to do Razz
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PostSubject: Re: [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] EmptyMon 03 Dec 2012, 4:19 am


Quote :
Name: Houden [Electrical Discharge]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: The user will charge their legs with an intense amount of chakra, increasing their ability to soar forward through their air by increasing the force in which the user propels them off the ground, pushing them far further than a normal leap would, closing distance significantly. Momentum of leaps can be utilize for aerial attacks.
Cost: 4

How fast do you soar and how high?

Quote :
Name: Denryuu [Electrical Current]
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: The ninja will gather chakra into their legs akin to Houden, channeling energy into their legs. Unlike Houden, however, the ninja will maintain the flow of energy into their legs, enabling their body to move rapidly across the battlefield, surging forward, if in a less explosive fashion than Houden. However, this technique is difficult to control, turning and stopping a difficultly, and thus more challenging to react to an opponent's techniques.
Cost: 8+2 per turn

Need exact speed. Like compared to an SC or like twice your natural speed ect.

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Name:Zoufuku [Amplification]
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: The user will channel their chakra abruptly in an intense fashion to one of their limbs, their nervous system sending signals through their body causing their limb to respond in the millisecond of the decision to attack, their limb striking at an intense speed towards their opponent, striking them with an inhuman velocity. Repeated use of this technique has the potential to break the users bones as much as their enemies.
Cost: 7

Need speed and strength to be exact for this.
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PostSubject: Re: [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] EmptyMon 03 Dec 2012, 7:38 am

I don't know how to be exact, Kiseki. You tell me. I don't know your standards, your loose numbers, what's appropriate for ranks. I'll ask you in turn, how fast are Genins compared to Chunins? What are the limits of power-ups from Jutsus? How am I suppose to answer that without scouring the site for other speed-up techniques to compare, which, by the way, might not be even be similar themselves?

Unless you start having a d20 system, there's no way for me to give you exact numbers as of the moment. And I'm not a Physics major. xD So, best that you just tell me what to put, I think. You'd know better than I what I can get away with.

Lil unfair to ask for exact when you guys don't give exact for us to work with :/
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PostSubject: Re: [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] EmptySun 09 Dec 2012, 1:46 am

Kiseki wrote:

Quote :
Name: Houden [Electrical Discharge]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: The user will charge their legs with an intense amount of chakra, increasing their ability to soar forward through their air by increasing the force in which the user propels them off the ground, pushing them far further than a normal leap would, closing distance significantly. Momentum of leaps can be utilize for aerial attacks.
Cost: 4

How fast do you soar and how high?

Quote :
Name: Denryuu [Electrical Current]
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: The ninja will gather chakra into their legs akin to Houden, channeling energy into their legs. Unlike Houden, however, the ninja will maintain the flow of energy into their legs, enabling their body to move rapidly across the battlefield, surging forward, if in a less explosive fashion than Houden. However, this technique is difficult to control, turning and stopping a difficultly, and thus more challenging to react to an opponent's techniques.
Cost: 8+2 per turn

Need exact speed. Like compared to an SC or like twice your natural speed ect.

I gave you some examples here mang. Sorry for not replying. I literally had no idea you replied till someone told me. But as for how fast you soar you can just say twice as fast or even just at normal speed. Iunno. Think about it and be creative. Compare yourself to the majestic eagle. Loljustkiddingplsdon'tdothat.

But for as fast as you soar you can say that you go as fast as you would run. Considering that if I run up to 3 mph (Shh bad example) doesn't mean I soar that fast when I jump.

As for
Quote :


Quote :
Name:Zoufuku [Amplification]
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: The user will channel their chakra abruptly in an intense fashion to one of their limbs, their nervous system sending signals through their body causing their limb to respond in the millisecond of the decision to attack, their limb striking at an intense speed towards their opponent, striking them with an inhuman velocity. Repeated use of this technique has the potential to break the users bones as much as their enemies.
Cost: 7

Need speed and strength to be exact for this.

You can say it hits with the force of 50 pounds moving at twice the speed a normal human's arm can move.
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PostSubject: Re: [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] EmptySun 09 Dec 2012, 4:03 am

Telling me to be creative and be exact is kinda hard, lol. But I kinda feel the techniques already self-descriptive. I kinda feel like I'm being told to score 100 points on a dart board, but I have no idea where I'm supposed to be throwing. But I'll throw some stuff up and let ya pick it a part. That said, it still seems like you could just tell me how much faster techniques should make ya, lol.

Edits made.
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PostSubject: Re: [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] EmptySun 09 Dec 2012, 7:31 am

1/2 Approved
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PostSubject: Re: [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] [Yaezakura Jin, Yaezakura Shiki] [Kumo Genins] EmptyFri 14 Dec 2012, 9:18 pm


  • I find your appearance a bit lacking tbh... perhaps make another decent size paragraph?

  • You don't need to put your kekkei genkai on there, instead please link your clan to the profile.

  • You need a combat style.

  • You also need an RP sample.
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Is this character still up for consideration or can we archive this, seeing as you have another character you are currently trying to get approved.
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This can be archived.
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