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Yoruma, Ryuga
THE INFO [/size] Name: Yoruma, Ryuga Nickname(s): Shinigami - Given to him by fellow villagers because of the icy feeling of death that they get in his presence. Age: 15 Gender: Male Appearance: Ryuga stands at 5' 4" and weighs 108 pounds. He has dark blue shoulder-length hair that he wears in a bedhead style and with the bangs usually shielding his eyes as he does not care to make himself look presentable for people everyday of his life, nor does he really even care what other people think of him. He has sharp, emotionless light blue color that reflect brightly in the sun. He also has a small pointed nose, small rounded ears, and a sharp chin, these features fueling the emotionless expression that he almost always wears. He has the symbol of his clan tattooed onto the back of his right wrist, a tradition that has been done since the formation of his clan during the Second and Third Great Wars. Ryuga thinks of it as a branding of sorts, one that reminds him of who he is and what he his purpose is in life. His body is rather petite for someone his age and not really toned, showing a select few tell signs of muscle, but he uses this to his advantage in battle as his style consists of more acrobat-like maneuvers. It is not a surprise that because of his features and emotionless attitude that many girls he comes across tend to fall in love with him, stereotypicaly classifying him as the "cool and collected" type of guy.
His usual attire consists of a plain white T-shirt, black pants, black traditional ninja sandals, a belt that holds his pants in place, and a chain skull necklace that he inherited from his father before his passing. When in more relaxed situations (his civilian attire), Ryuga tends to wear baggy shirts, shorts, a grey jacket that is one size too big for him, the necklace that he inherited from his father, and traditional sandals. When in battle he sports a black tank top, baggy black pants, traditional ninja sandals, a white sash that holds up his pants and doubles as a means of holding his katana in place, and his father's chain skull necklace. For his formal attire (which he rarely ever wears), Ryuga wears a black kimono that stops at his knee caps, black pants, traditional sandals, and a sash to hold up his pants and kimono in place.
Forehead Protector: - Around neck (usual attire) - N/A (Civilian attire) - On forehead (Battle attire) - N/A (Formal attire)
Personality: Ryuga is generally looked upon as a cool and collected person. A true member of the Yoruma clan, Ryuga is a bloodthirsty being whose only goal in life is to kill and create bloodshed. He does not socialize with other people, nor does he really care for them, not even those of whom he is somewhat close with, and when he does socialize with people it is generally short and serious, most of the time even violent. He is also very sadistic as he loves to torture and kill small creatures and sometimes the occasional human being by using his katana, which he nicknamed Kira (Death), to slowly cut of their limbs and pierce the points in their bodies that he know will cause them the most pain, but not kill them all too quickly. Because of his sadistic ways, it is fact that he knows just about everything there is to know about the anatomy of the human body. It is also fact that he is a genius, which can be backed up by the fact that he graduated from the academy after three years at the top of his class in all subjects except teamwork. Although Ryuga is the way he is, he does have one fear: the fear of being nonexistent. He fears that if he does not kill and continue on his clan's ways, he would cease to exist in every shape and form. Because of this fear, he suffers from anxiety and sleep derivation. This fear stems from the death of his parents when he was eight years old, a turning point in his young life and the meaning for the way that he is today. Other than his goal for bloodshed, he does have one personal goal: to get revenge for the person who murdered his parents. he does not know who the person was, but is following the clues that the murder left behind very carefully to find out whom.
Being raised as an assassin by his uncle, there is very little honor to Ryuga's life. He tends to hide from his problems and other people, feeling that it is pointless to have bonds when they could be severed at any given moment. Through all of the roughness of his being, however, Ryuga does hold one secret, one that he himself tries to deny, but cant because it is a part of him. If one were to dig deep enough, they would find that Ryuga is actually a very different person. Suppressed deep inside of his soul, Ryuga hides a very sensitive, scared little boy that resembles the way that he was before his parents' deaths. This was hidden from the surface as a means to remove the pain that he feels for his parents' death, but it does not work and sometimes even surfaces when he becomes confused, overwhelmed, or scared (which rarely ever happens).
Clan: Yoruma Clan Nindō: "Living with no bonds is better than dying with many regrets."
THE NINJA Origin: Hi no Kuni • The Fire Country Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato Rank: C -rank (Genin) Specialties: -Weaponry (Main: Close / Sub: Mid) -Taijutsu Elemental Affinities: -Katon -Suiton Combat Style:
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Ryuga strengths lie in his strategical way of fighting, which he has inherited from his Yoruma bloodline. He uses his intelligence to make a multitude of strategies and applies the most appropriate one which will result in the most possible damage to his opponents (whether it be torture or physical damage). As a member of a team, he is usually the one who takes the responsibility of attack his opponents effectively, whether it be from the shadows like his ancestors assassin-like battle style, or head on like a bull. Almost always will he attack an opponent alone at close range, with his best opening being when their attention is diverted elsewhere. He mixes basic ninjutsu with his weaponry to create an opening to paralyze the opponent, allowing either himself, or rarely his teammates, to deliver the finishing blow.
His katana nicknamed Kira (Death), is his weapon of choice. His fighting style while using his katana uses a lot of acrobacy and spinning motion to get momentum, and because of his unusual movement style his strikes aren't as easily predictable as ordinary ninja's attacks are. As much as possible, he likes to finish his battles quickly, using lethal stabs, slashes and basic killing moves, but he does have skills that he uses for leaving his opponents alive. Ryuga also has common sense of the anatomy of the human body, knowing where to slash or stab to kill immediately and which spots will leave the target marked for death, allowing him to toy with his opponents.
Ryuga also uses ninjutsu, mostly katon (fire) and suiton (water) style techniques, when he does not have his katana at his disposal. He is also average in taijutsu, not to the point where he can do advanced moves such as Dynamic Entry and Leaf Hurricane, but good enough to the point where he can put up a pretty good hand-to-hand fight, and he has basic knowledge of genjutsu, often relying on his own raw intelligence to see through it, but he is not adept at using it for himself, rather using distracting tactics than actual illusion to occupy the enemy.
Special Characteristics:
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Name: [Tier I] Improved Acrobatics Rank: C Type: Physical Prerequisites: - Training: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them. Description: The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and twists than their peers.
THE BACKGROUND History:
Childhood
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Ryuga was born into the Yoruma clan, a clan made up of assassins from the remains of the Second and Third Great Wars. Infamous for their fierce fighting style and cruel natures, they are feared by many who come into contact with them, and because of this they tend to stay hidden within the shadows. Ryuga's father was a member of the elite Anbu Black Ops working right under the Hokage and his mother was an assassin for hire. After Ryuga was born, however, they settled down in Konoha.
As a child, Ryuga lived a happy life with his family in Konoha. He had many friends and he was a kind and caring kid. His parents to were happy with their new lives and went on living natural lives until one day when Ryuga was seven years old. After a day of playing with his friend at the park, Ryuga came home to find his home in shambles. He heard some loud banging and hid in a storage closet under the stairs leading to the second floor. He heard his parents yelling and fighting against someone whom he did not know: an intruder. After a long struggle his parents were left bitterly defeated and had some of their most valuble items stolen from them. Ryuga came out of hiding after he knew the intruder was gone, but it was too late for his parents. While on their death beds, they said their goodbyes to Ryuga and his father gave him his most prized possession and good luck charm: a chain skull necklace. After a little while, his parents finally passed away. Ryuga went to live with his uncle, an assassin for hire like his mother once was, and was trained in the ways of his clan. He had his clan's symbol tattooed onto the back of his right wrist and he eventually received a katana from his uncle once he passed his uncle's training.
During the time that Ryuga spent with his uncle, he slowly started to erode into a heartless and cruel being. He became sadistic and bestowed a love for torturing and killing creatures and humans. He even became an expert on the anatomy of the human body so that he could have as much fun as he wanted when torturing and killing other humans. He also spent the nights alone in his room, crying himself to sleep. He blamed himself for the death of his parents. He understood, however, that it happened and that he had to live with it. He stopped his mourning and closed off his happy, caring self.
Academy
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At the age of 12, Ryuga started training at the academy. After 5 years of living with his uncle , Ryuga had eroded into a death machine. Fellow villagers granted him the nickname Shinigami (God of Death) because of the icy feeling of death that they get in his presence. Many people took a disliking towards him because of his sadistic and indifferent attitude, but he didn't care. All he cared about was graduating and continuing his training under his uncle. Ryuga was at the top of his class and got the best grades in all of his subjects except teamwork, something that he lacked greatly. He also studied his clan's techniques and had his uncle teach the most basic ones to him before his graduation.
It is at the academy that Ryuga also experienced his first lust for blood. Because of his parents death and because he blamed himself for it, he became overwhelmed with anxiety and also became sleep deprived, sometimes going as many at four days without sleep at a time. During one of these incidences, Ryuga was being bullied by a group of kids in his class. This bothered him greatly because it was stopping him form doing his best, something that he promised his uncle that he would do. One day after school, Ryuga followed the group to a back alley and slaughtered them with his katana. This excited him, and he slept peacefully when he arrived home. He never felt any remorse for this brutal crime, nor was he ever caught. When Ryuga turned 15, he graduated from the academy at the top of his class, continued his training under his uncle, and became a genin. Ryuga also made it his own personal goal to find the person who killed his parents, following the clues that the intruder left very carefully.
Roleplay Sample:
-----------This is from a Naruto fanfiction that I am working on------------
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BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! A blonde haired boy jumped out of bed, a little frightened by the loud noise that his alarm clock had made. It read 6:30. 'Time to get ready for school.' He thought to himself before getting up to get a shower. The boy's name was Naruto Uzumaki and today was going to be his first day at Konoha High School, one of the best schools in all of Japan. Naruto had moved to Konoha City from Ota, Tokyo, where he attended Tokyo High School before the death of his father Minato. After Minato's untimely death, Naurto moved to Konoha City to live with his god-father Jiriya. After Naurto got out of the shower, he threw on a white-T-shirt, baggy blue jeans, black sneakers, and a black and orange jacket. He turned to walk out of the room when he remembered something. He turned around and walked over to the nightstand next to his bed. There was a blue crystal necklace sitting on the edge of the stand. He picked it up, studied it, and started to cry a little. "You remembering your father?" Someone asked. Naruto turned around, wiping the tears away from his face. Jiriya was standing at the doorway leading from the hallway to Naurto's bedroom.
"Yeah." Naurto replied as he threw on the necklace. Jiriya walked into the room and told Naruto to sit next to him on the bed.
"Now Naruto," Jiriya looked a little sad and a little irritated at the same time. "I know what your going through, but you shouldn't cry over Minato's death. He would want it that way."
"I know. It's just really really hard, knowing that Father was killed the way he was." Naruto whipped tears away from his face again. "I will do my best to keep my emotions in check though."
"That's my boy." Jiriya said as he patted Naruto on the back. "Have a good first day of school." Jiriya exited the room, leaving Naruto weeping a little bit. Naruto gazed over at his alarm clock; 7:13. 'Crap! I got to catch the bus in five minutes!' Naruto dived to the edge of his bed and grabbed his school bag and ran out the front door.
Naruto walked onto the bus, looking over the seats towards the back. He found a seat in the very back of the bus, where he could see rats and a little bit of mold growing on the side of the seat. He was used to these types of conditions though. After Minato's death, he was treated like crap and was secluded from everyone and was always given shitty conditions. That all ended when he moved in with Jiriya though. After a few minutes of driving, the bus came to another stop. Naruto eyed the people getting onto the bus; and old man, a finely dressed couple, and a girl with long dark blue hair. Naurto gasped, she was one of the prettiest girls that he had ever seen in his life. He watched as she made her way to the seat next to him. The girl was fine with the crappy conditions. Why would someone as pretty as her sit in the back of a rutty old bus, next to him of all people? Naruto must have been staring at her for sometime because when he came back to his senses, the girl was staring back at him, open mouthed and beat red. "My apologies." He said, taking his eyes off of the girl and turned to look out the window, blushing a little bit. For the rest of the bus ride, Naurto kept taking quick glances at the girl next to him, who had her hands on her legs and looking down at the floor. She was still blushing brightly. Naurto felt like such a creeper. The bus took one final stop at the entrance of Konoha High School. Naruto and the girl who he had stared at were the only two people to get off of the bus before it took off down the road and rounded a corner. 'This place looks preppy.' Naruto thought as he studied the neatly mowed grass and the students. He looked over at the girl that he had saw on the bus. She was running over to two girls, one with short pink hair and the other with long blonde hair tied up into a ponytail. 'I really hope that I see that girl again.' He thought before walking into the huge school ahead of him.
After walking for a few minutes, he found the main office. There were two ladies sitting at a large desk towards the back of the room and three boys sitting in chairs lined up against a big window that showed activity from the entrance hall; one of the boys had red claw marks on both of his cheeks, another had black hair tied up into a weird ponytail, and the last one was morbidly obese and eating a big pack of potato chips.
"Excuse me," Naruto asked one of the ladies at the back desk. The lady looked up, eying him a little suspiciously. "My name is Naurto Uzumaki and this is going to be my first year at Konoha High School."
"Oh yes, you're the Uzumaki kid." She said irritated. She shuffled through some papers on the already cluttered desk and after a moment she pulled out a piece of paper and handed it to Naurto. "This is your class schedule. We are going to have Inuzuka, Kiba show your around. Kiba!" The four boys in the room jumped. The boy that they called Kiba walked over to Naruto and the lady, smirking. "You are going to show Mar. Uzumaki here around the school and show him his classes and so fourth. Think of this as a way to get out of that detention that you almost earned yourself for removing the nails from Mrs. Tsunade's chair."
"Yes, Ma'am." Kiba said. He looked over at Naurto and stuck out his hand, smiling welcomingly. "Hello. My name's Inuzuka, Kiba."
"My name's Uzumaki, Naruto." Naurto replied as he took Kiba's hand. He was shocked that someone other than Jiriya was being nice to him after so long.
"Come one, lets get going." Kiba said as he waved his hand, guiding Naurto to follow him. Naruto was finally happy that he found someone who was willing to be kind to him after so long.
THE ARSENAL Academy Jutsu:
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Clan Jutsu:
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Name: Yugana Shi no Hitosashi (Dance Of The Graceful Death) Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close Element: N/A Description: The user starts using his/her weapon in a free-flow system of movements, making no stops for rest. The movements are of a spinning fashion, utilising dance-like acrobacy, such as flips, jumps, rolls to inflict highly damaging cuts. The longer the jutsu continues, the more momentum the weapons gain, cutting stronger and faster. The higher rank the technique, the more damage the cuts inflict with C rank causing bleeding, to A rank possible dismemberment. Chakra Cost: C ( 4 CP per post)
Name: Yoru no Hitosashi (Dance of the Night) Rank: C-A (C) Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The technique begins with the user slashing repeatedly at the opponent with their weapon. Rather than focus on a single strike, the movement of the weapon and the user is fluid; the user advances towards their target, lashing out repeatedly and unceasingly, as if in some intricate dance. With each consecutive slash the user and his weapon gain momentum and consequently, this causes the power of the slashes to increase. Once the user finds an opening, a finishing thrust will be performed to end the dance and accumulate all that momentum and power into a single attack. There is a substantial increase in the strength and speed of the slash, as the Rank of this Jutsu increases. At A Rank, elemental chakra can be conducted through the weapon to increase the damage dealt. The speed and strength of the Jutsu increases with each post. Chakra Cost: 4 + 1 CP per post (C Rank); 6 + 2 CP per post (B Rank); 10 + 3 CP per post (A Rank)
Name: Ikinari Sentou (Sucker Punch) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close to Mid (0 to 0,5 metres) Element: N/A Description: After using a smoke bomb, the user's clone charges out of the smoke, with intention of being struck down, while the opponent is distracted, the user sneaks up behind and punches a punch with a small amount of lightning chakra that numbs the opponent for one post, making it harder for him/her to move and dodge. The punch itself is only slightly stronger then a normal punch. Chakra Cost: 5 CP
Katon:
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Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Chakra Cost: 5 (2 per post)
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Katon Bunshin no Jutsu - Fire Clone Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon Description: Katon Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes fire to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Katon Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target, but none utilizing chakra. The range of the clone is limited however, it can travel no further than 10 meters from the original body. If the Katon Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into a stream of fire that reaches two meters in height before dissipating. Chakra Cost: 7 (Per clone) Restrictions:[list]
[*]No weapons, armor, or equipment can be replicated to have above C-rank quality.
[*]Replicated explosive notes, explosive kunai, explosive senbon, and exploding pouches are inert and cannot be set off.
Suiton:
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Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: In order to use this technique, the user must first be on top of water (lake, sea, etc). Then, after preforming the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below. This can possibly drown the opponent. Chakra Cost: 6 (1 per post)
Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: This technique allows the user to summon a large volume of water; roughly the size of a waterfall, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in just an instant. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: A jutsu that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade. This sword can also go through most fire jutsu of equal rank and below. Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Name: Water Release: Water Drowning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. It can be guided to strike a target in a number of angles. Chakra Cost: 5 (1 per post)
Non-Elemental Jutsu:
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Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals and objects to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows them to summon different size and skill levels of creature. Signing this contract also allows the animal to reverse summon the human ninja to their location. Chakra Cost: 5 (C Rank Summon), 10 (B), 15 (A), 20 (S)
Name: Dageki Rimen Tataku - Knock Back Smack Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m) Element: N/A Description: Sometimes, the enemy just gets too close to properly swing a nodaichi. That's where this technique comes into play. Gripping the hilt in one hand and the back of the blade in the other (a good glove is advised), the user generates a surge of chakra through their limbs before shoving out with their horizontally held blade, the burst of chakra giving them a brief burst of strength and speed. Using this technique can allow to user to knock back a target who is not significantly stronger than them by a meter or two, giving the user swinging room for their weapon. Chakra Cost: 7CP
Name: Soto Nise - Fake Out Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0-5M) Element: N/A Description: The user will draw their opponent's attention to their blade or blade-wielding handing, telegraphing an eminent attack with it. The user will begin to spin, as if building up momentum for the attack, before surging chakra through their feet to stick to the ground to arrest their momentum before swinging around to strike from the other direction. Alternatively, the user can simply release the original blade, letting it fly at the opponent, while quickly drawing forth another weapon and attacking with that. Chakra Cost: 3
Weapons/Kits:
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[*] Name: Kira Rank: C Type: Close - Medium Appearance: A weapon made for slashing and inflicting slashing wounds, this weapon is made for disembowelment and dismemberment. Slightly curved to enhance slashing speed and reduce visibility while in-motion, might look rusty but actually isn't it's leftovers of blood on the steel that made it. It's a special kind of steel that doesn't actually do anything but has this rusty-golden color when contacts with proteins in blood. The more blood this blade seen, the more rust-gold-ish it becomes. Not very large, just a bit longer than arms length. Created specially for Ryuga by his uncle, this blade resembles Ryuga's need for blood and want to kill. Quantity: 1 Storage: Carried on Ryuga's hip by the use of a white cloth sash. Special Abilities: N/A Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Quantity: 1 Contents: 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].
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| Subject: Re: Yoruma, Ryuga [Konoha Genin] Tue 03 Dec 2013, 5:00 pm | |
| - Origin is the country your character is from [Hi no Kuni • The Fire Country], not the village.
- Genin are classed as C-Rank on US, not D-Rank.
- Weaponry ranges are Close/Mid/Long, there is no Medium range. Please edit accordingly.
- Please extend your combat style slightly, to at least 250 words.
- Also, your history could do with some work. What was the intruder’s motives for killing Ryuga’s parents? Did he ever find out? Does he have any desire to? Try to explain something other than bloodlust that happened in the seven years it took for Ryuga to graduate the academy. Why did it take him so long, if he graduated at the top of the class? Most Genin graduate at 11 or 12.
- You have only used 11 out of an available 15 starting jutsu for you character. Are you sure you don’t want to use up the remaining 4 slots? You will have to pay EXP for jutsu once your character is approved.
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| | | redninjaguy
Age : 26 Posts : 18
| Subject: Re: Yoruma, Ryuga [Konoha Genin] Tue 03 Dec 2013, 10:21 pm | |
| - Aaron wrote:
- Origin is the country your character is from [Hi no Kuni • The Fire Country], not the village.
Fixed
- Aaron wrote:
- Genin are classed as C-Rank on US, not D-Rank.
Fixed
- Aaron wrote:
- Weaponry ranges are Close/Mid/Long, there is no Medium range. Please edit accordingly.
Fixed
- Aaron wrote:
- Please extend your combat style slightly, to at least 250 words
Fixed
- Aaron wrote:
- Also, your history could do with some work. What was the intruder’s motives for killing Ryuga’s parents? Did he ever find out? Does he have any desire to? Try to explain something other than bloodlust that happened in the seven years it took for Ryuga to graduate the academy. Why did it take him so long, if he graduated at the top of the class? Most Genin graduate at 11 or 12.
Fixed
- Aaron wrote:
- You have only used 11 out of an available 15 starting jutsu for you character. Are you sure you don’t want to use up the remaining 4 slots? You will have to pay EXP for jutsu once your character is approved.
Fixed.
Ready for approval |
| | | Aaron
Age : 27 Posts : 2538
| Subject: Re: Yoruma, Ryuga [Konoha Genin] Wed 04 Dec 2013, 1:41 pm | |
| Approved 1.2 |
| | | Cross
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| Subject: Re: Yoruma, Ryuga [Konoha Genin] Wed 04 Dec 2013, 7:32 pm | |
| Approved2/2
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| Subject: Re: Yoruma, Ryuga [Konoha Genin] Fri 20 Dec 2013, 8:21 pm | |
| Archived.
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| Subject: Re: Yoruma, Ryuga [Konoha Genin] Fri 20 Dec 2013, 11:10 pm | |
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