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Teion Shiin
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PostSubject: New Things for Teion #1 New Things for Teion #1 EmptyThu 31 Jan 2013, 9:54 pm

Name: Wire Manipulation
Rank: D
Type: Weapon
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user Manipulates wire with chakra the same one would with any other jutsu to move said wire in position for any strategic move necessary. The wire can be used to wrap around opponents or objects. Also, the user may channel an element type for an extra effect. A good combination would be with a kunai or senbons. The wire moves only as fast as one could swing or throw a weapon ordinarily. The Jutsu can also be used to create a field which can become a trap if one would to fall for it. The wire can be activated and ensnare the target for a shocking or burning surprise.
Chakra Cost: 4cp + 2cp per post. (+2 when element is applied)

Custom Kaguya Clan Jutsu:


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PostSubject: Re: New Things for Teion #1 New Things for Teion #1 EmptyFri 01 Feb 2013, 2:02 am

Hey Teitei~ You're going to need to apply for the SCs in a separate post in the Miscilaneous Registeation area, because they're obtained through training which you link back to the same topic when you're done where it is also evaluated. Also, as you're still a Genin, you won't be able to gain that B rank SC yet, gotta wait till Chuunin to that one, sorry!
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Teion Shiin
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PostSubject: Re: New Things for Teion #1 New Things for Teion #1 EmptySat 02 Feb 2013, 3:14 am

Thanks. I fixed it.
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PostSubject: Re: New Things for Teion #1 New Things for Teion #1 EmptySat 02 Feb 2013, 3:24 am

The Kaguya jutsu both need to be D ranked.

And also, how do you make a wire from your bones?
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Teion Shiin
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PostSubject: Re: New Things for Teion #1 New Things for Teion #1 EmptySat 02 Feb 2013, 4:39 am

Fixed rank and added in explanation on how the wire is made.
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PostSubject: Re: New Things for Teion #1 New Things for Teion #1 EmptySun 03 Feb 2013, 3:27 am

So, after another glance I noticed that your first jutsu is indeed -not- a Canon one. A huge derp on my behalf, and pardon about that. But as that has to do with manipulating Chakra into a weapon, then you cannot have it. Seeing as you need the Chakra Conductive SC in order to use such a skill, and you don't possess the rank for that SC (which is B rank).

If you want, you can make another jutsu and I will mod that one along with the others?

Name: Shaved bone wire
My argument against this, is that a bone wouldn't be flexible enough to have the attributes of a wire no matter how thin you make the 'bone wire'. If it was so thin, it would simply break even if it is a Kaguya bone.
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PostSubject: Re: New Things for Teion #1 New Things for Teion #1 EmptyWed 24 Apr 2013, 10:13 am


Archived.
Due to inactivity.
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