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kurai
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| Subject: Kurai Kazuma Mon 21 Jan 2013, 6:14 am | |
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KAZUMA,KURAITHE INFO. Name:Kurai Kazuma Uzumaki Nickname: None Age: 14 Gender: male Appearance: Kurai is a tall, slender, muscular, man with dark ebony skin celebrating his Kumogakure Heritage.
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Weight:165 lbs.
Figure/build:muscular
Hair colour: jet black
Hairstyle: messy spiky hair
Eye colour: brown Tattoos: He has a tattoo of the kumogakure symbol on his right arm and konohagakure on his left
Piercings: his right ear has a stud in it
Scars/distinguishing marks: two black stripes on the corners of his face
Preferred style of clothing: He likes to wear his shinobi leggings and bandages
Forehead Protector:Konohagakure Personality:He is happy go lucky kind of guy who loves to hang out with his friends. And he is always looking on the bright side of things. Clan: Uzumaki Nindō: I will protect my friends and family if they want it or not cuz that's my ninja way.
THE NINJA. Origin:Kumogakure Affiliation:Konohagakure Rank:Genin Specialties: Elemental Affinities: - Raiton user - Fuinjutsu Combat Style: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu Special Characteristics: The Uzumaki clan can use Fuinjutsu (Sealing Techniques) to seal objects, living beings, chakra, along with a wide variety of other things within another object. Fūinjutsu can also be used to unseal objects either from within something or someone. The Uzumaki can form sealing script using their chakra were as other shinobi would have to draw the script onto parchment beforehand.
THE BACKGROUND. History: BACKSTORY
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childhood (newborn - age 10): My childhood? *kurai laughs* What about it? Yeah, I was born in Kumogakure. What of it? Who are my parents? Why'd do you want to know that? I thought this was a interrogation. Hokage's orders? Well, okay but let's start at the very beginning. My parents are Kazushi and Ayame Kazuma who currently live in Kumogakure. Have i visited them recently? No, I haven’t. *Kurai looks down at the floor* I promised them that I would become a great ninja before i go back home. Anyways *Kurai shakes his head* I was a little hot-head as a child. Doing whatever I wanted and not caring about the consequences. I got in trouble all the time. I remember when I rigged the Raikage’s door with a simple bucket of water prank.*Kurai chuckles* Man my dad was furious but proud that I didn’t get caught but.... I had to fess up because a kid down the way was blamed instead. And letting others taking the blame of your actions is something a coward would do. Well the Raikage wasn’t too mad about the joke. He gave me community service for a month. How old was I? At the time I was eleven years old. That month was the worst month of my life.
Why? Well here is what happened. It was about the middle of my punishment. I had to clean the gutters of the Raikage building which had not been cleaned for months. Anyways remember that kid I was talking about earlier that got blamed for my prank? Well he thought he could get some revenge. My mom came by, about the same time he did, to give me some lunch then the joker showed up and threw one of his custom made flash bombs. I saw him do it so I tried to warn my mom. What the joker didn’t know is that he added too much gunpowder so it was more like an explosive tag than a flash bomb. I was thrown back by the explosion. And half the building collapsed on my mom. I ran to the rubble screaming for help but no one came so I started to frantically dig through it looking for her. After thirty minutes of digging I found her. I grabbed her and ran to the hospital as fast as I could.
The doctors told me that she had three broken ribs and was paralyzed from the waist down. They also told me that if I didn’t take her to the hospital when I did my mom would have been dead. I stayed by her side for a week unknowing that the joker had turned into a slithery snake tongued liar and told everyone that it was me who had blown up the Raikage’s office. He said he saw me set the bomb in the gutter and tried to warn my mother. I was called to the Raikage’s Office later that week.
On my way there everyone was giving me this look sometimes it was disappointment, sometimes it was fear others it was anger, hate, disgust. I ignored them. I was often called a freak because of my black hair which is extremely rare in Kumogakure. Mainly everyone there has white hair and some legend says that there was a child was born with black hair and he brought great misfortune to the village and got the raikage killed. I don’t believe in crap like destiny or myths. I make my own destiny. So yeah basically everyone was talking about what happened to the second Raikage. Then an older man jumped me and started ranting on and on about the legend and started beating me in the face saying I was a cursed child and I should have never been born and how all his problems in life were because of me. How did I survive it? Well during his monologue I pulled out my treasured kunai my parents gave me and put it to his throat as he was rearing his hand back for another punch. And I told him *Kurai closes his eyes and imagines the event just like it was yesterday*
“I don’t give a crap about some legend that was made before my time old man. I don’t care that I am supposedly going to bring the village horrible luck. I don’t care that you are all cowards who blame all their problems on a child just because his hair is a different color than yours. What I do care about is my mother and father and the Raikage. The only people who seem to care about me and not some prophecy. Now you have about three seconds to make a decision. You can A. get the hell off me and we both go our merry ways or B. I slit your throat and throw your lifeless body off me. Your choice. One......Two.......” The guy panicked and ran away screaming and everyone else watched in horror. I glared at them and screamed “ What is your problem people?!?!? Why didn’t any of you help me?!?! I’m a kid and I was getting beat to death!” There was just silence. I shook my head in disbelief, got up and dusted myself off and kept walking toward the Raikage’s office. When I got there my dad was waiting at the front steps. I was shocked because last time I heard my dad was on a mission if he was called back then this was far worse than I thought. Not saying a word to each other we made eye contact and my dad nodded towards the door like he was saying “I know son.” and I walked right past him with my head down so he couldn’t see my face. The explosion hadn’t really hurt the building much. The repairs were pretty much done. When I reached the hokage’s office he was staring into a blank space. His hands were folded in front of his face and his elbows rested on his desk. The village elders were there and as soon as I entered the room, three of the four two of them were male and the other female, glared at me. I was so sick of everyone giving me looks that i pointed at them said defiantly “What?!!? Are you going to try to beat me to death too?!?” The Raikage came out of his trance and looked at me and laughed. He spoke in a loud and booming voice “See mom this is the kid I was telling you about. The one who did the bucket of water prank.” He smiled. I was so confused by this point. The only village elder who wasn’t glaring at me smiled and said “He’s got a good heart and a lot of spirit in him. From looking at him I don’t think he did it son.” The other elder’s jaws dropped. They started arguing but the Raikage put his hand up and they all went silent. He smiled and said “Before we decide what to do with him lets hear his side of the story.”
I looked at him confused and asked “Uhhh, what is this all about again? Last time I checked I haven’t done anything wrong.” One of the elders, an old man with no hair and he wore these giant thick round glasses, he pointed at me enraged and yelled “You destroyed the front of the Raikage’s building! Which is an act of terrorism also you severely injured a jounin kunochi which is worthy of banishment from the village!” How did I handle this? Well it was something along the lines like this. I jabbed my finger in his chest with tears streaming down my face “Who the hell gave you the right to tell me that I did something wrong you dried up little prick! Do you even listen to yourself dumbass?!? Why the hell would I blow up the Raikage’s office?!? What would be my motive for it? And why would I injure my mother? Huh?!?!? Tell me this since you know everything!” The elders were silent. The Raikage started laughing again “Hah-ha serves you right ya fool. Now kid tell us your side of the story.” I told them everything that had happened. And the elder that tried to blame me his face started getting paler and paler the further I revealed to them the truth. After I was done the Raikage leaned back in his chair and spoke “So mom what do you suggest we do?” The Raikage’s mother spoke “ I say we let this child stay in the village unless his parents have something else in mind.” My father stepped forward and spoke “Actually we do. We want to send him to konoha.” I was shocked by this “D-dad! why?!?” He looked me in the eyes and grabbed my shoulder “ I’ve already talked to your mother about the matter and she agrees. We want you to grow up in a better place. A place where you won’t be looked down on because of who you are. We want to give you a fresh start. Is that ok Lord Raikage?” The Raikage thought about it for a second and smiled “Yeah thats perfect since everyone wants him out of the village he shouldn’t have any problems leaving. I’ll ask the Hokage to send some anbu black ops members to escort him safely there.” And with that I had to leave my home. As I was leaving the gates everyone was there to make sure I left. So I turned around and looked at my father who had pushed my mother there in a wheelchair to see me off. I yelled at them “When I become a Bad-ass shinobi I’ll come back here to Kumo to become the next Raikage so that the next child born like me won’t be mistreated the same way. And that cowards go punished.” I turned and left after that and thats it. Thats the end of my story. Roleplay Sample:
THE ARSENAL. Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.
Jutsus: -Call Lightning Jutsu: Ninjutsu Lightning style Shinobi calls down a strike of lightning upon his foe Black Lighting Jutsu: Chained Lightning jutsu: Weapon of choice: His Kunai his parents gave him as a kid.
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| | | Enzo
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Kazuma Mon 21 Jan 2013, 6:21 am | |
| Bro, you're not even using our template.. Did you read the rules? |
| | | kurai
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Kazuma Mon 21 Jan 2013, 6:24 am | |
| Whoops Sorry >_< i forgot to adjust it for this |
| | | kurai
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Kazuma Mon 21 Jan 2013, 6:48 am | |
| Ok I have made it fit the template |
| | | Setsugekka
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Kazuma Mon 21 Jan 2013, 6:52 am | |
| Thank you for taking the time to adjust things to our site. (;
However, I would suggest you take a look at accepted profiles and see what we're looking for. You are missing a lot of detail and given the fact that this is a literate ~ advanced roleplay forum, we expect quality descriptions in our profiles. For example, the average appearance section is over two hundred words, which is two or more paragraphs. Please take a look at our rules & guides on the sidebar and adjust accordingly, since there are a plethora of qualms I have with this profile and it would be fruitless to list them all. As always, if you ever need help with this profile, feel free to send me a PM or contact another staff member for assistance. |
| | | kurai
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| Subject: Re: Kurai Kazuma Mon 21 Jan 2013, 6:56 am | |
| Ah okay @_@ just give me a sec |
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