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| ![Senju, Shoji [Konoha Genin] Naruto_670___ashura_otsutsuki_by_emixxiisan-d7bpfzh](https://2img.net/h/th04.deviantart.net/fs70/200H/i/2014/085/4/3/naruto_670___ashura_otsutsuki_by_emixxiisan-d7bpfzh.png) Senju, ShojiTHE INFO.
Name: ShojiSenju
Nickname:
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Height: 5’6”
Weight: 152 lbs
The size of one Senju, Shoji is really pretty good for a twelve year old boy that is just starting out his shinobi career. Standing at five feet six inches tall, his frame is thick at 152 pounds. That’s something that is to be cherished, especially when you’re young. Shoji's 152 pounds is practically all muscle; at least that is what it looks like. Of course a person needs some amount of fat but from the looks of this young Senju, his ripped muscular body hopefully adds a somewhat intimidation factor. The hair of Shoji is most likely classified as medium, in length; it spikes up at the top and comes down to the base of his neck in the back. In the front that are two tails that hang down that are tied together with a white wrap; the same white wrap that is wrapped around his forehead up underneath his forehead protector. The color of his hair is brown which makes his eyes stand out more than they already do with the dark lining that is around them. The color of Shoji's eyes are a crystal clear grey and they are small and beady like too, giving them a real unique sort of look. His skin tone is darker than fair but not so dark that he is really tan.
The type of clothing articles that Shoji loves to wear are sort of loose fitting clothes. Starting with his upper body, Shoji loves to wear a long sleeve white shirt that has a long collar at the top going around his neck. Usually he leaves this unbuttoned at the top where he can breathe and people can clearly see all of his face. Now, he does have another shirt that he wears occasionally when he feels that it is appropriate. It’s the same type of shirt but black all the way around; this piece is usually used if he wants to be stealthy or if he just wants to change it up every once in a while. Moving on down to the lower half, this young senju wears black ninja pants that are wrapped up near the bottom half of his shin in the same type of tape that he uses on his forehead, except of course this tape is black so it can match the pants. These are really the only types of pants that Shoji wears, unless given a directive by maybe his sensei or someone high up in the village. Though this is highly unlikely and so no worrying is necessary from Shoji.
To give a little bit more information on the shirts that Shoji wears, they have the senju symbol on the back side of them, right in the center. On the white shirt, the symbol is black in color and it’s opposite on the black shirt; the symbol is white in color.
- Senju symbol:
Forehead Protector: Shoji wraps his forehead protector around in the most generic of places, his forehead. No special way, just the standard way.
Personality: The personality of Shoji is pretty much a fun loving guy with a happy go lucky attitude. He enjoys laughing a lot and really thinks that laughing a key part into keeping yourself young as you grow older and being happy. It makes you feel good and can even keep your attitude up when you’re down in the dumps. Now, all of this does not mean that Shoji is a jokester and likes to perform pranks on people. In fact, he doesn’t really consider himself a good prankster and so he usually shy’s away from stuff like that unless it’s someone else’s idea and he finds it hilarious. Most of Shoji's funny moments come from sarcastic comments that are reeled off at other people’s failures in something they do or in what they say. This is not to be a bully but it’s to help keep the mood light so that when someone does something and fails, they don’t get depressed or down on themselves. Along with this, Shoji really hopes that people never take it in a way that he is bullying them, so he does have to remember to sometimes not be as “harsh” sarcastically as he could be.
Moving on to a different part of the personality of Shoji, we get to the part where he is a hard worker. He isn’t perfect and doesn’t always get everything done on the first try, but he works hard and doesn’t give up on things he hasn’t completed. He always wants to finish the task or complete the training exercise; he believes that being this way will help him become a great man one day. Always work hard for what you want, even if you’re blessed with amazing talent, work hard and don’t let that talent go to waste.
Shoji exudes a lot of confidence in everything he does, which really allows him to do excellent things. However, having too much confidence can sometimes come off as cocky or arrogant and everyone knows that being cocky is not a good thing; so Shoji has to work really hard to not be a cocky ass. Occasionally it does happen and he doesn’t apologize for it, it is what it is and he is okay with it sometimes. It almost goes hand in hand with his sarcastic type of jokes. He doesn’t want people to think that he is a cocky, arrogant, SOB, but some people will and it will probably be the people who do not truly know him and that’s why he is okay with it sometimes.
To add on to the hard worker that Shoji is, he also loves being a shinobi. He doesn’t believe that it is all about power or war or whatever the case may be. He loves the fact that being a shinobi gives him the opportunity to help people in ways that he may not be able to if he was a civilian. Now of course he wants to a powerful and a great shinobi; but those two are very different things. You can be powerful but be a terrible shinobi, so Shoji strives to be a great and excellent shinobi, not only for himself, but for the village and the people of the village.
Clan: Senju Clan
Nindō: “Protecting the lives of those people that deserve it the most.”
THE NINJA.
Origin: Hi no Kuni
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin – C rank
Specialities: Main: Ninjutsu / Sub: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities: Doton / Suiton
Combat Style: Shoji is a Ninjutsu and Taijutsu user so he can obviously attack from a range and from up close and personal; which is really what he enjoys doing. He loves to savor his chakra and keep his stamina up so that later in battle he can outlast his opponent and wear them out. Shoji has a lot of options with him being a senju and having doton and suiton as his elements. He can be really defensive and change it up in a hurry and be offensive. Doton and Mokuton really give him that option. His favorite thing though is fighting up close with his taijutsu skills. He thinks that it really lets him feel out his opponent and gives him an idea of how they are going to fight; whether it be really aggressive or really passive.
After exchanging taijutsu blows and trying to figure out his opponent, he’ll mix it up and give them a taste of the old ninjutsu, which usually comes from a range of mid but you never know. Since he has wood and earth, he can use ninjutsu up close and personal along with his taijutsu. Now, there are some opponents that this strategy will not work against and those opponents are long range people. So he just has to figure out his opponent and find out what option is best to face his opponent and give him the best chance to win and stay alive for the mission for the training exercise or for whatever reason.
Special Characteristics:
Combat SC’s
- Chakra Based:
Name: Increased Chakra Capacity
Rank: C
Type: Chakra Based
Prerequisites: -
Training: A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic
Restrictions: –
Description: Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP.
- Physical Based:
Name: [Tier I] Enhanced Speed
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Prerequisites: -
Training: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restrictions: Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them.
Description: After training relentlessly in cardiovascular and high speed movement, shinobi are able to greatly increase their overall stamina and movement speed. Those talented with this speed are capable of running with speed half a man greater than their peers and even last a bit longer during extraneous activities without becoming exhausted. This boost in speed is usually enough to quickly catch escaping targets or outrun most regular citizens.
Name: One-Handed Seals
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Prerequisites: -
Training: A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restrictions: This cannot be used as a way to perform two jutsu at the same time.
Description: the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack.
Social SC
- Social SC:
Name: Animal Speaking.
Rank: C.
Type: Social Based
Prerequisites: -
Training: A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restrictions: -
Description: A rare characteristic that one develops which allows them to understand and communicate with animals. Verbal exchange is common amongst those with this ability as the user will literally alter their voice to mimic the animal their speaking to as a way of communicating. More advanced people are even capable of feeling the emotions and pain of animals as well, although that requires physical contact. Animal Speaking is a very useful skill because they can manipulate animals to accomplish tasks, such as acting as scouts or gathering information they have already witnessed. Animals that serve as familiars to specific clans or people such as Kakichu Bugs, Inuzuaka dogs or summons, cannot be controlled due to their loyalty to their owners.
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Shoji [Konoha Genin] Thu 27 Mar 2014, 8:51 pm | |
| THE BACKGROUND.
History: - Spoiler:
The history of one, Senju, Shoji; is really rather ordinary. He was born to a lovely Senju couple who had great respect for the leaf and for all the people within the village. Both, Shoji's mother and father were shinobi of the Hidden Leaf Village and had achieved the rank of Jonin before they ever had Shoji, so once they found out they were having a son, they retired gracefully so they could make sure that their son grew up healthy and so that they were there for him. Of course they were young when they retired but they had enough money and plus they were Senju, so that kind of took care of itself. They were passing the torch of the Will of Fire to their young, ready to watch him blossom into a fabulous shinobi.
Growing up, Shoji never had any trouble trying to find someone to help him learn the way of the shinobi, his parents were always there and for that, he felt and feels really blessed. He wanted to learn everything his parents could teach him at that time and go into the academy already prepared and knowing what to expect. It wasn’t until Shoji was 10 that he was able to even enter the academy; there was a situation that held him out for a couple of years. He got really sick at one point when he was like 8 years old and so that really held him back. However, once he was able to get in… he was in.
So, 10 years old and Shoji is at the academy. He quickly learned that test taking was not his strong suit and that he was average or just a hair above at that; what he really strived in was hands on activities. He was usually at the fore front in that category, though not without struggles of course. Shoji worked hard in the Academy and really tried when he didn’t understand something the first time or get it right the first time. His teachers loved this quality in him, it also helped that he didn’t get down on himself when he didn’t get something right, he just tried again. It took Shoji two years to graduate from the academy, in which he was 8th among the thirty-two students who graduated with him. His test scores on paper are what held him back, luckily he wouldn’t be doing much of that when he got out in the real shinobi world.
Since graduating from the academy, the young and rookie genin has been training and working hard until he gets placed with a team, or if it even gets placed with a team. They do have little solo missions that he could do to get his feet wet. His next goal is to go out and meet some of the other genin that are around the village. Surely there are some that have experience and could help him train and learn about new stuff. Learning about the different abilities that some of the other genin’s have would be something really awesome.
Roleplay Sample: - Spoiler:
The day was a glorious one, one that had been filled with excitement, along with some slight nervousness. Naomi was about to embark on a journey to the Land of Fire, or more specifically, Konoha(Village hidden in the leaves). She wasn’t aware of all the people who would be taking part in this trip to Konoha, but she did know that the Raikage was leading the way. This was the thing that made this trip as exciting as it was, simply because he was a very handsome man and Naomi, well, she may have a slight crush on him. Why though? She never spent any time with him one-on-one, so there’s no particular reason she should have the feelings that she does. The young chunin didn’t care and had started to look around at the audience that had gathered for this event. It wasn’t just shinobi; all kinds of civilians, clan “leaders” or representatives, along with some of the higher ranking ninja in the village, also the swordsmen that seemed to be the guard of the man himself, Mr. Raikage.
”God, I really wouldn’t mind if the Raikage hit on me at this very moment, holy hell.”
The thought had made the teenage girl chuckle a bit and after the fact, she looked around to make sure nobody had paid her any attention. She knew that the age difference may throw some people off, but she didn’t really care. It wouldn’t be any of their business anyhow and since it was the kage of the village, people probably wouldn’t say much. As she noticed that people hadn’t been looking at her while she chuckled aloud, she moved through the pack of people to edge to the front-lines, making sure she could leave on time, not wanting to make a punctual error. Soon after she made her way to the front of the crowd, he began to speak, although it wouldn't be very many words.
”We’re moving out,” was all that had been stated and immediately he began to head out; his “scarlet guard” mimicking his every move, covering every angle, and making it almost impossible to reach the man to talk with him. Naomi would give it a try though as she made her way outfrom the outskirts of the crowd and pushed upward, just behind this so called guard that walked beside and behind the Raikage. She decided to try and squeeze inside of the moving guard and was denied so quick she didn’t have a chance. Her arms crossed her midsection and then her right hand rose up to her chin, giving off the thought that she was pondering a way to get past these damn people.
”Maybe I can just walk in front on all of them, of course not directly in front of Raikage but in front and to the right some. I’ll give it a go and see if he notices me at all. I don’t even know why I tried to squeeze in between them, they aren’t surrounding him. I am a freaking idiot.” She grinned and frowned all in one motion as she put her plan in to action. With her feet movingfaster than everyone else’s, she quickly moved ahead of the guard and positioned herself just a couple of paces in front of the guard directly on the Raikage’s right. He would have no choice but to notice the young chunin who was desperately trying to get the man’s attention. With her long black hair flowing that ended at the middle of her back, she slightly turned her head to the left to gaze at the man and then calmly looked back in front of her, as to be aware of the area.
Naomi hadn’t even really thought about the events that they were about to see, she had been so fixated on the Raikage. A slight breeze had found the area the group were in and ruffled the top of her outfit, which consisted of a white kimono with long sleeves that was tied by a black sash that had a purple flowery design, which held her katana too. Thoughts of the actual reason for going on this journey had begun to surface and made her feel, indifferent… at best. Naomi absolutely loved weddings but she didn’t know the people who were getting married and then there was also the election of the Hokage. It was quite odd that they were even going to these events but she didn’t have time to think about that; they were and that is all that really mattered.
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Shoji [Konoha Genin] Thu 27 Mar 2014, 8:52 pm | |
| THE ARSENAL.
Ninjutsu:
- Doton Jutsu:
Name: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Double Suicide Decapitation Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized. Chakra Cost: 4 Name: Doton Bunshin no Jutsu - Earth Clone Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Doton Description: Doton Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes the earth to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Doton Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target, but none utilizing chakra. The range of the clone is limited however, it can travel no further than 10 meters from the original body. If the Doton Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into rock that crumbles to the ground. Chakra Cost: 7 (Per clone) Restrictions:
- No weapons, armor, or equipment can be replicated to have above C-rank quality.
- Replicated explosive notes, explosive kunai, explosive senbon, and exploding pouches are inert and cannot be set off.
Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. Chakra Cost: 6 (2 per post) Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall. Chakra Cost: 6 Name: Doryuusou - Earthen Rising Spears Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: This technique lets the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes are brittle, and can be broken with a strong blow or tough defense. Chakra Cost: 7
- Suiton Jutsu:
Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his/her gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.
Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a solid bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Chakra Cost: 9 (2 per post)
Name: Water Release: Water Drowning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. It can be guided to strike a target in a number of angles.
Chakra Cost: 5 (1 per post)
Name: Suiben - Water Whip
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: The ninja will create a whip of water which can strike and bind an opponent. The user can also funnel lightning chakra to shock anyone wrapped in it. Can only affect one target at a time.
Chakra Cost: 6 (2 per post)
Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a large volume of water; roughly the size of a waterfall, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in just an instant.
Chakra Cost: 8
- Mokuton Jutsu:
Name: Mokuton: Semaijurin no Jutsu | Wood Release: Small Forest Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Mokuton (Wood Release)
Description: Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan.A technique that changes one's own arm into big trees. Using chakra, the tissues are transformed into trees at the cellular level. Then, by activating the trees, stimulating them to grow rapidly, they lengthen at high speed and fork into many branches. It is possible to capture the enemy with these branches and at the same time, these branches, though not sharp, are still capable of performing ranged blunt damage. Though a powerful technique, it's not capable of destroying a solid surface very easily, and is a beginner's version of Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu
Chakra Cost: 8CP (2 per post)
Name: Mokuton: Shichūrō no Jutsu | Wood Release: Four Pillars Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Element: Mokuton (Wood Release)
Description: Mokuton: Shichūrō no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan. This technique lets the user summon a tree around their opponent to bind them. The user changes chakra into timber under the ground and makes it grow rapidly, while forming it into a wooden prison. The size of the prison is five meters in each side, making it capable of containing multiple individuals if used in one spot. The timber itself is treated with a chakra coating, making its destruction extremely difficult. During war, it has the great ability to detain prisoners, but it can also be used as a disciplinary measure for quarreling subordinates.
Chakra Cost: 8CP
- Custom Mokuton:
Name: Mokuton Shi-rudo (Wood Shield)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0-5m)
Element: Mokuton (Wood)
Description: The user performs the necessary hand-seals, once done, four pieces of timber that equal seven feet tall and a foot wide, rise from the earth in any one direction of the user as a shield to protect against blunt attacks, shuriken, kunai, and the like. The same type of timber rises on all sides of Shoji to protect him. The shield is 8 inches in thickness all around, so there is a possibility of a sword piercing through and hitting Shoji. As stated, the shield only protects one side of the user, however, it doesn't have to be just in front of him, it can be the side or behind as well.
Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
- Custom Doton:
- Custom Suiton:
Taijutsu
- Konoha Taijutsu:
Name: Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Konoha Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. This move is used before preforming "Omote Renge - Front Lotus" or "Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo".
Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user first uses the "Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance" to manuever his/her opponent in a vulnerable aerial position. While shadowing his/her opponent, the user will attempt to strike them from a vulnerable angle. If he/she is unable to make a clean strike, he/she will strike anyway as a feint, to draw his/her target's attention and defense to one area. The user can then strike the undefended area and begin knocking them downwards towards the ground. As the enemy falls back to the earth, the user will deftly rotate his/her body around to deliver a full force kick to their chest.
Chakra Cost: 7
Kit
- Genin Kit:
Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Quantity: 1
Contents: 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].
FACE CLAIM.
Character Claim: Ashura from Naruto
Source: Deviantart.com
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Shoji [Konoha Genin] Thu 27 Mar 2014, 10:51 pm | |
| Finished!  |
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Shoji [Konoha Genin] Sat 29 Mar 2014, 5:39 pm | |
| Could you please fix the spacing between the jutsu?
- Name: Mokuton Kakei (Wooden Stake): How you describe this reminds me very much of that one Kaguya technique where you shoot out the knuckle bones or something of that sort. I'd rather you would have wood appear around his hand that would shoot out the small stakes. It doesn't really make sense to me that he can instantly shoot out the stakes out of his own hand when he isn't exactly made out of tree. Regardless of the whole Mokuton affinity.
- Name: Mokuton shi-rudo (Wooden Shield):
- Quote :
- It completely encases the user in wood, so of course fire could be a weakness with suffocating the user, of equal rank or greater. It can also be pierced from a weapon of equal rank or greater.
I don't really get where you are going with the first sentence. And where does this shield stand with other types of jutsu? Blunt attacks? I will allow it to protect from thrown projectiles, but a bladed weapon being thrust into it by force should be able to pierce the defence no matter the rank of the weapon.
Also up the cost to 9.
- Name: Doton Jousho (Earth Feeling): Cost per post is needed, plus more cost of the technique. Also needs a certain amount of cool down. Perhaps 1 post. |
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Shoji [Konoha Genin] Sun 30 Mar 2014, 1:55 am | |
| I just took out the custom Mokuton techs but left the spoiler tag there, because I'm sure i'll try again with the custom jutsu.... maybe.
Added more cost, a cooldown, and chakra per post to my doton technique.
In place of the 2 mokuton I took away, I added 2 suiton. (Water whip and Stormy Upheaval.) |
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Shoji [Konoha Genin] Sun 30 Mar 2014, 2:36 am | |
| | 1/2 approved. |
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Shoji [Konoha Genin] Mon 31 Mar 2014, 11:22 pm | |
| Doton Bunshin no Jutsu - Earth Clone Technique: You've broken the list code at the end of your technique.
Doton Jousho (Earth Feeling): My major grievance with this is the complicated nature of the technique, for a technique such as this to function it would largely intercede with the concept of the Sensor SC, at least given that there is little explanation to the functionality of the technique, that is how I must assume it works. That being said, your chakra, doton or otherwise cannot inherently sense the presence of others without some degree of outside factor, such as the sensor SC.
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Shoji [Konoha Genin] Tue 01 Apr 2014, 1:46 am | |
| Fixed the coding issue.
Took out the custom doton and tried another angle with a Custom Mokuton. Hopefully its acceptable or at least easy to work with.
I also added a Custom Suiton spoiler tag. |
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Shoji [Konoha Genin] Tue 01 Apr 2014, 3:08 am | |
| 2/2Approved.
Don't forget to make your account here.
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Shoji [Konoha Genin] Tue 22 Jul 2014, 3:51 am | |
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