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Kessho, Nao.

THE INFO.

Name: Kessho, Nao

Nickname: -

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Appearance: Nao stands at 5 feet and 9 inches which can be considered the average height in the shinobi world. His physique is borderline muscular, and is the reason he’s won himself admirers. His weight is around 160 pounds, which is the proper weight for someone his height. His physical attributes would be considered intimidating to people who have just recently met him, which Nao likes to consider an useless advantage.

Just by looking at Nao, one could tell that he was a man who liked to properly groom himself, personal hygiene was also of great significance to him. He would openly admit to being a metrosexual, and considered it to be a rather wonderful thing. However, Nao does not consider it to be even slightly feminine, which is arguably correct.

Nao has a rather fair complexion, and it becomes quite obvious to observe that he took good care of his skin as there are absolutely no blemishes he makes visible. Since it is a Kessho clan trait, Nao possesses the same eyes as his father, shiny dark brown. On top of both eyes he has perfectly shaped eyebrows that have an unusual grey shade. Below the right eye, a scar is visible, which is from something he does not remember, and chooses to keep it that way. His hair, which should originally be dark blue, was dyed white as an attempt to be rebellious during his adolescent years. It was due to his rebellious and secretive nature that he decided to go against clan traditions and change the color of his hair, as this would not tip off the enemy of his abilities. His hair was usually rather long, and straight, as he would groom it religiously. His hair is coiffed in such a way that that it has the ability to catch anyone’s eyes.

In his early days, Nao could be seen wearing a dark blue collared robe with a black fishnet shirt, with the symbol of Kessho proudly showing. However, after leaving the village he had decided against it. His apparel now consisted of a black collared jacket, and a casual plain black colored t-shirt underneath. He considers himself to have a great sense of fashion, which according to others is untrue. Nao's apparel constantly changes as his metrosexual nature would not allow him to wear something twice in a row. Thus, he would switch t-shirts and trousers quite often.

Ever since the beginning, Nao had not been interested in anything but combat. This lead to a development of scars all over his body. A medical ninja once revealed that 80% of the back of his body was covered in scar tissue. However, this was something that no one knew. He made sure that the only scar visible was the one below his right eye, and he didn’t want to compromise his comfort in order to hide it. Scars were something he considered should be kept unrevealed, as they are sometimes signs of weakness.

Just like his back, his forehead protector was unusually scarred. The symbol of his former village, Kumogakure could hardly be seen anymore. As far as accessories go, Nao considered them to compromise the the ability of a ninja, one would have to converse with him to realize what that meant. Thus, there were no visible accessories except one, his forehead protector. The only reason he would still keep that is to show that he was indeed a shinobi. One would have to look hard enough to realize it was a Kumogakure headband.

Forehead Protector: On the right arm.

Personality:Similar to his looks, Nao has a mysterious personality. His emotions are not entirely predictable, his wants can differ by the day. As they say, change is constant in nature. Consistency is something that Nao had loved. However that was not the case earlier, change is what Nao had to go through every single moment in life. Change helped him let go of his need for approval, it let him develop his individuality. He had changed from the time he was a child and an adolescent. Initially, this was something that disappointed Nao and made it frustrating for him. So to change that, he learned to embrace the change and allowed it to control his actions and feelings, making it easier to live his shinobi life. However, during this time, the only word which made any sense to him was indifference, as it was also something that can be constant. He felt comfortable knowing it was present. It was something he could rely on to not change. Change is a different kind of constant, thus, it has its exceptions, like almost everything else.
As far as morals and values go, they were not something Nao believed in anymore. He believed that there are many things which influence morals, and it makes a person weaker. Nao was someone who couldn’t afford to become weaker, not with the plan he has for himself, thus he chooses to ignore such “trivial things”, as he likes to call them. People can only take so much before they break, for Nao that point came at the age of 16 when he decided to leave his village after his mother broke his father’s heart by revealing her secret, and after watching his mother be killed with the intention of doing the same. However, as a child, Nao had been emotional, which is completely opposite from indifference, but one couldn’t blame him. He found it hard to make friends who could put up with his need for attention and sympathy. Luckily, having a younger sister had compensated for the lack of friends. Even from that moment, the only thing he focused on was acquiring knowledge. He would often find himself reading instead of playing, eating, or sleeping. As a stubborn child, Nao was typical.

Materialistic, sensitive and unreliable, luckily these characteristics didn’t last in the long run.
Circumstances had changed drastically, and Nao started realizing all that he had thought was important, which is family, wealth, country, friendship did not stand a chance against the evil and power in the modern world. Being familiar with love, compassion, sympathy, etc. is what made the transition extremely difficult, but at the same time, the circumstances made it much easier. He had never been extremely close to his mother, but she was such. And if there was anything that book had taught him, it was that one should respect and listen to one’s parents no matter what. But, that all had changed when he found out that her love for his father and his sister was non-existent. He no longer cared what she had thought about him, and let his own father murder her. However, he didn’t blame his mother for doing such a thing, he blamed the people who pressured into doing what she had done. He wanted to get vengeance for not being able to have a healthy family like the rest of the shinobi.

Nao himself is not aware of what he feels about something before it happens, but what he has to do, after he’s almost certain with. His likes and dislikes are unknown even to him. It is that goal to achieve power and vengeance, which drives him to work hard and stay motivated. His hard working attitude has allowed him to gain experience in combat that is unmatched by shinobi his age. All the nights he spent alone without friends, reading about combat has helped him acquire immense knowledge in the field. It has helped him become better at what he considers to be the true purpose of a shinobi, combat.

Socially, Nao had no experience, he didn’t know how to talk to strangers and make friends. But, he wouldn’t make a fool of himself either. He was patient and calm when it came to conversations. He feels they are the best way to extract information from someone, which he claims to be the only reason as to why he would ever converse with strangers. As a kid, Nao would constantly work for the approval of his peers and elders, but now none of it mattered. His demand for attention had become completely non-existent. He mostly keeps to himself, unless the circumstances require otherwise.

Nao was able to develop patience and stability at a higher level than anyone at his age. Due to his immense knowledge of the shinobi world, he could always be calm under high-pressure situations, and would always remain calm and collected. Due to always being superior from the start, Nao had never felt true fear, and what makes him nervous is that he knows it exists.

Clan: Kessho

Nindō: Indifference is bliss.

THE NINJA.

Origin: Kaminari no kuni.

Affiliation: None

Rank: B

Specialties: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu

Elemental Affinities: Doton, Raiton

Combat Style: Nao has a combat style similar to that of the Nara clan. He uses the power of knowledge to attain an advantage over his enemies. By knowing the weaknesses of most of the bloodlines, and abilities, he considers himself to be immune to confusion. His intelligence combined with what he knows helps him be the strategist that he is. Nao is able to perform better than most under pressure, this is due to being able to resist and deny the importance of emotions. His actions are always calm and collected. The only time that Nao becomes worried is when he isn’t one step ahead of the enemy.

Being born in the Kessho clan, Nao has the ability to crystallize any substance or manipulate any existing crystals. Thus, he prefers long-range battles. He is also an avid genjutsu user, which is another long-range specialty. However, his crystal release abilities helps him defend against short-ranged attacks.

His strong will, determination, and discipline along with the desire to fulfill his objectives gives him the most extreme form of mental power, which lets him fight with all his will. Though he doesn't know it, that fire is what has given him most of his success in combats. Nao believes that impossible tasks do exist, only if they are only for a certain period of time. Thus, he allows himself to believe that he knows when to when to give up.


Special Characteristics:
Increased Chakra Capacity:
High IQ:

THE BACKGROUND.

History:

RP Sample:

THE ARSENAL.
Chunin Kit:

Explosive Kit:

Academy Jutsus:
Spoiler:

Kessho Clan Jutsus:
D ranked:
C Ranked:
B ranked:

Elemental Ninjutsu:
D Ranked:

C Ranked:

B Ranked:

Genjutsu:
D Ranked:

B ranked:

Kumogakure Specific
B ranked:
FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Joseph
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Note: Yes, I have taken Adam's permission to create a B ranked nukenin.


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PostSubject: Re: Kessho, Nao [B-Rank Nukenin] Kessho, Nao [B-Rank Nukenin]  EmptyTue 05 Mar 2013, 5:36 pm

Hey Drake, nice profile. I know we talked on skype about how long things needed to be but at the time I hadn't known you were going to be at B rank (you told me later in the conversation and I forgot to go back over this) but as a B rank shinobi you will need to expand your appearance, personality, and combat style a bit more as you aren't a simple genin, rather you are a chuunin which is a privledged spot. I know you can do it! So far your writing is looking good and I can find no problems with any other part of your application. Expand the sections I listed to 3 to 5 good sized paragraphs and you'll be good. Sorry for the confusion.
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PostSubject: Re: Kessho, Nao [B-Rank Nukenin] Kessho, Nao [B-Rank Nukenin]  EmptyWed 06 Mar 2013, 1:53 am

No problem Kite.

Extended: Appearance, Personality and Combat Style.
Added Custom Jutsu. (Genjutsu, B ranked.)
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PostSubject: Re: Kessho, Nao [B-Rank Nukenin] Kessho, Nao [B-Rank Nukenin]  EmptyWed 06 Mar 2013, 3:07 pm

Alright, everything looks fine here. My only complaint is in your combat style section you say that your character has knowledge of virtually all clans:

Drake wrote:
By knowing the weaknesses of most of the bloodlines, and abilities, he considers himself to be immune to confusion.

I don't know whether I should take this as you saying you already have this knowledge or that this is what your character believes-meaning that by gaining this knowledge he'd be okay. For reasons that should be obvious, to say you know the weaknesses of "most" of the bloodlines and abilities, is a bit of a stretch. I understand you are chuunin so you'll have a reasonable level of experience, but to plainly state you already know that much without really mentioning specifics in your history and such, is a bit much. Other than that I have no complaints about the profile.
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TOPKite wrote:

this is what your character believes-meaning that by gaining this knowledge he'd be okay.

This is what I was getting at!
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Edited.

Appearance, Personality and History increased. Face Claim section modified.
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