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PostSubject: Kirochamaru -C rank Rhino Summon- Kirochamaru -C rank Rhino Summon- EmptyMon 18 Mar 2013, 11:18 pm

Name: Kirochamaru
Rank: C
Appearance:
Apperance:
Kiro stands at an amazing 8 feet tall and 5 feet wide. His body weight is nearing almost a ton. Being a Rhino, his body looks fairly similar to the basic gray rhino. There are only some minor differences. First off the Skin tone of Kiro, It has a Muddy, chocolate tone to it all the time. It's thick armor hide is his main protection from most attacks. Instead of only having one horn, he has dual horns that run down his nostril. With the main large on on his snout, being at a mere 1 meter long, and the smaller one only being half a meter long. The are sharp, with only a slight serrated edge to them. His armor hide is pretty effective on keeping his skin from being penetrated. His legs are ovals with 3 large nails that are used from trampling and for digging into to the ground. His eyes are a bright green, just like Munenoris' possibly even brighter.
Personality:

There are a few words that define Kiro quite accurately. he is selfish, violent and short tempered. A terrifying combination. The Rhino is constantly on the lookout for himself. Almost anytime he does anything, it will likely have some ties to a benefit for himself, and he almost never does anything for free. Kiro doesn’t particularly care for the well being of others, though he will certainly help someone if he feels that they’re better to him alive than dead. Often he will actually spare his opponent’s lives, so that they can grow in strength and challenge him again.

Speaking of which, let’s talk a bit about violence. If your problems aren’t being solved by it then you’re clearly not using enough of it. That alone sums up his stance on violence. He is incredibly violent when enraged and he is VERY easily enraged. His violent personality, coupled with this trait, has meant that many unfortunate people have met a most unpleasant end due to fairly minor transgressions against him. He loves inflicting violence on others, and takes any violence done to him as a challenge. He revels in combat, and, as mentioned above, often takes it upon himself to spare the life of his opponent for the opportunity to fight them again, particularly if they should prove some degree of potential. Weak foes however are often dispatched without a second thought.

Kiro is well known for having an extremely short temper, which complements his violent personality. Although he is normally in a state of either perpetual amusement or boredom with what goes on around him, the smallest of things can trigger his temper, such as someone bumping into without apologizing. At this, he can fly into a rage. If hell hath no fury like a woman scored, then scorned women ought to flee in terror from an angered Kirochamaru. If enraged, he typically doesn’t use any tactical planning or the like. He simply becomes a force of wanton destruction, not caring if what he destroys is ally or enemy. Everything dies. It’s a short trigger, and when it’s pulled, everyone dies. Thinking of taking advantage of this rage can be foolhardy, as one may attempt an attack, only to be hit by a far more devastating blow from Kiro , who is no longer caring about defense.

kiro has a very sadistic sense of humor. He finds death, blood and violence absolutely hysterical, even if he’s on the receiving end of it. Get angry at him and cut off his ear? Hilarious (by the way, start running, you’re about to die). Impale him through the belly? Hysterical (Again, start running, he’s gonna be on you in ten seconds or less). Have him smash your face through solid concrete? Well, now you’re on your way to comedic gold. Kiro can’t understand when others don’t get his sense of humor.

Amazingly, despite all of these tendencies he is a social character. Because he gets bored easily, he is constantly seeking the company of others to alleviate that boredom. Often times he will refrain from hitting people when socializing with them so that he won’t return to that state of boredom. his life really seems to always be about keeping himself from being bored, and entertained. So if someone is able to keep Kiro entertained for awhile, than they’re more than worth keeping alive, in Kiro’s mind.

However, he should never be taken as simple. While certainly straight-forward and looking to the easiest solution, Kiro is fully capable of planning things out, and can be quite manipulative. He is aware he comes off as simple and brash to others. This is because he wants to come off that way, and so he makes use of this at times, allowing him to manipulate those around him without them suspecting. He will often go far to propagate his image as a simple minded, fight-hungering psychopath because it means others are much more likely to underestimate him. That said, it doesn’t mean he isn’t a violent psychopath, because he is. But there’s a fine line between a rampaging violent psychopath, and a calculating one, and Kiro is undoubtedly the latter.

Contract Type:personal
Species: Rhino
Speciality:Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity: Doton
Summons Jutsu:

custom Taijutsu:

canon Tai:



Last edited by Cross Out on Fri 22 Mar 2013, 3:34 am; edited 3 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Kirochamaru -C rank Rhino Summon- Kirochamaru -C rank Rhino Summon- EmptyTue 19 Mar 2013, 11:15 pm

I got two things for you to fix:
  1. His long horn is 3 meters that's about 10 feet which means it is bigger than him. Make this smaller as well as the small horn.
  2. Make the word affective into effective on the first custom jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Kirochamaru -C rank Rhino Summon- Kirochamaru -C rank Rhino Summon- EmptyTue 19 Mar 2013, 11:32 pm

Edited and made it 1 meter long, and half a meter long for the horns.
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PostSubject: Re: Kirochamaru -C rank Rhino Summon- Kirochamaru -C rank Rhino Summon- EmptyWed 20 Mar 2013, 2:39 am

Approved for training.

Unapproved at user's request for edits.

EDIT: Reapproved for training.
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