Ketsueki [Kekkyon - Blood Release]

Age : 31 Posts : 787

Clan Name: Ketsueki
Location: Any
Signature Traits:

Requirements

•Must have Medical Ninjutsu / Eijutsu as a specialty.
•In order to perform B - Rank and above techniques, members must have Experienced Medic Nin as an SC.
•Members are prevented from taking Taijutsu as a specialty.

~Distinct Blood Lust~

All shinobi with in this clan have a very distinct bloodlust and urge to constantly battle and spill blood. This lust exists as a seperate psyche, sort of like a second concious, that whipsers directly into their mind, constantly reminding them of the need to spill and see the blood of the enemy. This does not make them "evil" in any way shape or form. Like all natural desires, it can be controlled given the right discipline and guidance and/or personal want to do so. To them battle is just like sex and spilling the blood of the enemy is the equivelent of an orgasm, though it is not quite as extreme an emotion. However, due to these arcane views and natures, they are often outcastted, especially when the shinobi is a child being that those are the most difficult years to control the desires by far due to the under developed mind set. If not given the correct guidance though, the person can go insane and become blood crazed and an overall danger to society as a whole as well as themselves. This can be brought on in shifts as well. Simply stated, this trait makes the ninja very unstable mentally to a certain degree.

Kekkei Genkai:

~Rapid Blood Production~

Across many generations of experimenting and researching, members of the Ketsueki clan have finally discovered what the secret is behind their name. Thanks to their close relation with the Kaguya clan, the latest generation of Ketsueki members have found that they can naturally accelerate the rate at which their bone marrow creates blood. With their bone marrow feeding off of their chakra, blood is produced at incredible speeds for various uses. Red blood cells, white blood cells and plasma are all created in order for the end product of blood to be created, with bone marrow feeding off of their chakra to ensure they have the materials to create new blood cells. Through years of evolution, their bodies have adopted themselves to this ability, by increasing the size of key organs, such as the heart and lungs, and by also increasing the size of veins and arteries in order to carry more blood.

A positive aspect of the naturally rapid creation of blood, is that members of the clan are renowned for being able to fight off dangerous infections and diseases. This is due to white blood cells being continuously created in a fast pace, allowing for more cells to fight off foreign bodies that may have lurked into the bloodstream. As a result, after having been infected with a poison or illness twice, they will devlop the white blood cells needed to fight it off and become immune to it's effects. (It is assumed that when a member creates their own poison, the character has exposed themselves to it twice and are immune to any poison in their arsenal). Also, for the first two times of exposure, the effects will be reduced at a rate that depends on the ninja's rank. A genin will see a reduction by one post, a chunin two, jounin three, and an S rank nin by 4. This grants the ninja a pass on the more drastic effects of poisons and a shorter duration in which to suffer from them.

With the rapid creation of blood, the body needs to ensure it can keep on top of all the old and new blood circulating the body. Over the generations, members of the clan have begun to find that their heart rates are naturally higher compared to the average human, allowing for blood to be pumped through the body at a faster pace. An advantage to this is hormones are now able to travel through the body at a faster pace, though the speed of creation cannot be controlled. With the introduction of chakra, members of the clan have created a technique known as Hachidori no Hāto [Heart of the Hummingbird], which allows for clan members to rapidly begin pumping their heart at inhuman speeds. This is only typically used during battle, where much blood is needed. There are consequences with this technique however, for if it is active for ten consecutive posts, the user is prone to heart attacks as the heart is being overworked, something you don’t want to happen during battle. A minimum of three posts is needed in order for the heart to be ‘recharged’ and allows for the technique to be used once more.

~Unique Glands~

Sprouting from the very first generation of Ketsueki clan members, each and every individual born into the clan have found themselves with two very unique and recently discovered to be useful glands on their body. The glands themselves are found on both palms, with them usually being directly in the centre of the palm. The glands are directly linked to arteries found within the arm, with no veins connecting to them, as the purpose of these glands is to force blood outside of the body in order to be used for whatever purpose the clan member has intended. Other methods can be used in order to force blood out of the body, however this is typically the favourite, as no chakra and no pain is needed to open and close the glands. To accompany this they also have glands next to their tear ducts that over time fill up with blood. Through the use of jutsu, they can cause an abnormal muscle contraction around the gland, causing it to squirt blood in a stream.

~Blood Manipulation~

By experimenting with the idea of chakra infusion, members of the Ketsueki clan have managed to control the shape, force and speed of their blood to a level akin to controlling an element. By adding their own chakra into their bloodstream, usually done so within the arms, before it leaves the body, members of the clan have begun to gain a skill in being able to manipulate their own blood to a controllable degree, with blood being used for both offensive and sometimes defensive moves. However, they can only manipulate their own blood that has been infused with their own chakra, with the source of blood always being from their own bodies. Never are they able to control the blood of others.

~Engineered Weapons~

It is also propper to note that the founding members of this clan were quite barbaric. Their common rituals were quite infamous but none more so then the consumption of the bodies of fallen foes. Being that humans are not predisposed to consuming the flesh of their own species, this presented several health issues for the earlier members, often leading to early and untimely deaths. It was once believed that 35 was a ripe old age for a Ketsueki. Over time and generations, the clansmen began to devlop a naturally growing bacteria that resided in the stomach lining and aided in the consumption of human meats and other bits aside from the bone. The bacteria became more agressive as it was passed down genetically, reaching a point that most meats of any kind were digested with in minutes after consumption. The bacteria soon became too fierce in a group of Ketsueki known as the bridge generation. Over time the bacteria in these members began to feed on their hosts body, namely the stomache lining. The bacteria entered the bloodstreams and while they slowed down, still ate away at the bodies. Extraordinarially, the offspring of that generation were born with a dormant form of the bacteria already in their bloodstream that could be awakened by the hosts chakra through the use of jutsu. This has become a signature property of the clans arsenal and why they are so feared. As they became more integrated into society the practice of canibalism was banned and eventually the genetic chain weened out the bacteria in the stomach, but the dormant bloodstream bound remained and still does.

History:

Quote :: The Ketsueki originated from the bowels of Water Country, having a close kinship with the Kaguya clan. Where the Kaguya clan excelled in their bone manipulation and were quite feared for it, The Ketsueki clan excelled in blood manipulation, and were feared even more so. Where as the Kaguya had a lust for the love of battle, The Ketsueki had a knack and lust for killing, torture, maiming, and sadism, quickly earning them an infamous name. Before Kiri was ever founded, the Ketsueki clan ravished the land with out law and threatened to exterminate several lesser clans, one of them being the Koori who were far less in number. They were also said to have been born from the same lineage and it was for that reason the members of both the Kaguya and Ketsueki clans often refer to each other as brother and still do today.

It was around the time, just before the villages began forming that an unsettling change occurred in the ranks of the Ketsueki. A man rose to the top in the clan who was not plagued by the resounding lust for blood in his mind. He saw his clans potential to do great deeds and services for the people of the world, if they could manage to gain control of their minds, finding that the members were exceptionally crafty, and did not act out in evil, simply put, they were governed by their carnal desires. He quickly learned that the older generations were lost for hope, but that the children were very susceptible to his teachings, and were quick to become civilized when given the correct guidance.

He inspired a rebellion amongst the young teens who, after seeing their parents and elders in a new light, sought the path of a righteous kill. With in a single night, the reformed Ketsueki rose up and destroyed their elders, completely recreating the clan, and halving their numbers. It was at this point they approached the Kaguya and Koori clans and the construction of the Village Hidden in the Mist began. They assssted the Koori in the Kaguya rebellion, and aided in keeping the peace. It was shortly there after the clan began to thin out amongst the shinobi world, no longer being limited to just the Mist village.

Clan Jutsu:

Medical Kekkyon

Spoiler:

Kekkyon: Ninjutsu

Spoiler:

Kekkyon: Fuuinjutsu

Spoiler:

Elitist Exclusives

Spoiler:

Avaliability: 1/5

*Note that permission must be granted for the use of the clan and is solely at the creator's, my, discresion.

Age : 31 Posts : 787

Done, and ready for mod action

Age : 32 Posts : 869

Quote :: Name:Carrier Metod - Quick Access to Death
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Self
Element: -
Description: This justu is used on ones own body. The user will place this on themselves, and once placed, it will drain a liter of blood from their veins into seal. It is recommended that the user utilize the "Blood Replication" technique following as to not suffer to much from the blood loss as it is rather significant. Later on, when the user chooses, they will stimulate the seal with chakra, causing it to fly off of their body and land on the ground. It will then unseal the blood, creating a small pool of blood on the ground. The user can place many seals on their body but chakra is required to activate each one separately and they must be reapplied once used. (Number must be specified in appearance and may not exceed more then 5 per letter rank. E.G: C=5, B=10, etc.)
Chakra Cost:7 to seal or unseal.

Seal flies off the body? Correct me if I'm wrong but I think that's not possible.

Quote :: Name: Forced Entry - Seal of Corrosion
Rank: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Close
Element: -
Description:Using this jutsu the user must gain direct contact with the persons body. Clothes do not count, it must be skin to skin. When the seal is placed upon the body, it also siphons a good deal of blood out of the users system and places it into the seal. This seal will lay dormant for three posts. After these three posts, the seal can be activated with an additional C rank amount of chakra, flooding the targets body with a liter of blood causing it to corrode and eat away at the effected area. It is highly recommended that this also be used with the Blood Replication technique to replace the blood that is lost.
Chakra Cost: 15 to place, 8 to activate

I feel that this should be a higher rank. When you say eat away, do you mean if you placed the seal on the arm, it would eat away the arm completely, as in the opponent would lose the arm? Also, how can one defend from it?

Quote :: Name: Vampire's Fang - Closer to the Dark
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Close
Element:-
Description:Name: Vampire's Fang, Closer to the Dark
Type: Fuinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: -
Description: This jutsu requires skin to skin contact to be placed upon the body of the target. When placed upon the target, the seal will begin draining blood from the targets circulatory system the following post. It will drain the blood at 5% total volume per victims post. The drain will occur at the end of their posts. To keep the seal active, the user must sacrifice a C rank amount of chakra per post, so that it will drain in the opponents next post. The effects go as follows.
4 Posts - Heart Beat starts picking up rapidly, pumping blood much faster. Difference in blood pressures starts to lessen. Vaso-constriction sets in and the skin starts to become paler.
5 Posts - The condition worsens slightly, the victim will begin to feel light headed.
6 Posts - The condition starts becoming serious. Blood Pressure drops and heart rate increases immensely. The victim can no longer think straight or move 1/2 as efficiently, drastically decreasing speed and stamina. Vision becomes slightly blurred and tunnel vision sets in.
7 Posts - The victim will pass out.
9 Posts - The victim will die.
Chakra Cost: 25(+5)

Same as the above. How can one defend against it? Because if you can't, this tech will basically turn the battle into a waiting game and a sure death.

Last thing. How strong is the acid that you get from the blood?

Age : 31 Posts : 787

Carrier Method ~ Quick Access to Death: Changed to " Later on, when the user chooses, they will stimulate the seal with chakra, causing it to unravel into a line of runes that will travel down their body and onto the ground. It will then unseal the blood, creating a small pool of blood on the ground." Should be reasonable I think.

Forced Entry ~ Seal of Corrosion: "After one post the blood will return to the seal and the seal will "evaporate." This sort exposure time will limit the damage to skin corrosion and some inner tissue damage, possibly some light wear on organs based on placement. Also in places where there is not much between bone and skin (wrist, ankle), some bone damage can also occur. The best way to defend against this seal is during the 3 post delay by either having it unsealed or scraping it from the skin."

Closer to Dark: "If the user dies or the seal is removed, the process will cease which will allow the targets body to begin replacing its blood and recover slowly."

So that gives the opponent 7 posts to kill me, 9 if they have a friend. Also note the massive chakra consumption. 25 + (5*9) = 70 for an A rank tech. In any scenario, this jutsu is unlikely to go off or be successful because people rarely allow for a tech like this to hit and then you need to have the chakra to do it fully and be able to keep fighting. The text insinuates and is meant as also being able to be scraped off the skin, which is a great alternative to death by blood loss.

Thanks for checkin it Ivan! Very Happy

Age : 32 Posts : 869

Somehow I completely missed the Ninjutsu... Sorry about that Saint. Anyway, here it goes.

Quote :: Name: Deep Red Resounding Screams
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: Kekkyon
Description: This jutsu requires a substantial source of blood to be successible in order to be worth its use. It must be either encoded with their own DNA or have been crafted with the Kekkyon release to be applicable in this technique. This is a passive technqique which allows for creating small waves and torrents of blood to mobilize following the hand movements of the user. Passive meaning that it doesn't require handsigns or an exclamation of recognition through name. This can only be used with in 5 meters of the user in any given direction and takes a constant chakra drain to utilize for an extended period.
Chakra Cost: 4 (+1)

Ok, this might be just me being very stupid but, I do not really understand what this technique does. Could you maybe explain it a bit better, as in what's the use of it?

Quote :: Name:Dark Eye: Fatal Warning
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: Kekkyon
Description: This is another passive technique of the Ketsueki, utliizng the blood producing glands in their eye. Given the added energy provided by chakra, a preassure is created and an increase in blood flow is directed toward that eye. It will then spurt in a thin stream only a few inches long that can travel two feet away from the user.
Chakra Cost: 3

So a blood spurting eye technique? Gross but cool.

Quote :: Name: Small Bombardment: Attack on All Sides
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid
Element: Kekkyon
Description: The user will create up to five marble sized balls of blood that float and orbit each other in their hand. They can launch this small grouping which will spread out upon being released from the users hand. Using a finger apiece to dictate movement, they can control the path and coordinate the spheres around a target and cause them to burst at a select time. The splatter can reach up to six inches from each sphere
Chakra Cost: 8

I'd like this to have CC Per Post since you are manipulating them through air and can last for several posts.

Quote :: Name: Hand of blood
Rank: C-B
Type: Ninjutsu/Eijutsu
Range: Close
Element: Kekkyon
Description: To use this technique, the user will have an open wound on their hand which is either a gash in the palm or a pinprick on each finger tip depending on prefference. The user will then Force the blood through the wound(s) and surge it into the object. It will begin to break down the object and mix with whatever moisture/water is within, creating an illusion that the object is being turned into a puddle of liquid and sludge-esk blood. At C rank this is limited to a size equal to a bouldur (fairly large rock that can be stood/perched upon), and at B rank can equate to large trees etc. It takes time to use this technique, an entire post at C and two at B, leaving them vulnerable during its use, thought they are capable of interupting it if need be. This jutsu also includes the use of the blood replication technique, keeping their body at a sustainable level.
Chakra Cost: 6 | 12

Again, probably me being very stupid but I'll ask anyway. What is the actual use of this jutsu?

Age : 31 Posts : 787

- Deep Red Resounding Screams:Only way I can think to clarify this one is think similar to how Gaara manipulates his sand when hes not using a special technique. At 5 meters, this is much more restricted then that though.

- Dark Eye: Fatal Warning: Yes, very cool.

- Small Bombardment: Attack on All Sides : Great point, added

- Obviously it makes blood for use, but that could be done with the replication technique along which is less restricting. So why this technique? Showcasing and invoking fear. "Holy Fuck this guy is turning a rock into blood......um.....I think I pooped myself."

That kind of thing.

Age : 32 Posts : 869

Sorry for the wait Saint. Again. This clan completely escaped my mind... Anyway, here it is, the long awaited Approved 1/2.

Age : 29 Posts : 4301

Clan in General:

Distinct Blood Lust

The Birth of the Lifestream:

Arcane Tradeoff:

The Art of Blood:

The Dark Secret:

Slight Body Modifications:

Age : 31 Posts : 787

General: Yes it is bizarre, and yes that would be way over powered to control the blood of other individuals. Back when I was still noob sauce and had first made the clan that HAD been a function of the clan. I later revoked the power after reviewing it and realizing that it was insane to be able to practically win every time just because the opponent suffered a cut.

Lifestream: It is Earth and Water because this is an advanced element which requires a two part combination to utilize. Earth is the only element that makes sense as the secondary element as fire, lightning, and wind are not present in the bloodstream at all but a portion of blood is made up of earthly substances, minerals, etc. The reason I had it set up this way was to allow access to not only controlling the blood that already existed with in the user's body, but also to be able to make blood through the use of jutsu and chakra. I will expand on this when addressing a later concern of yours as it addressed this specifically. Also I thought about it some more and revoked the Eijutsu requirement, making it optional, because the clan is still useable with out it, just vastly less effective in my eyes. This could be taken as a personal preference and just because it is what I will use it for does not mean it should dictate the path others may choose to take with it if they join the clan.

Arcane: I believe my above statement covers this as well.

Art: Good question, though if you had looked a little further into the clan, namely the jutsu, you would have seen the regimental precaution to this otherwise massive flaw to blood use. One of the medical techniques that Ivan moderated (I am assuming that is why the techniques were not included in your review) does in fact allow medical users to replicate blood cells, and this does not happen naturally but at a chakra cost and is tiered per rank. Essentially this forces a greater chakra cost altogether by using the clan to its fullest potential and also a need to strictly monitor oneself while using the clan to logically assert it with out accidentally causing one's own death. As for those who do not take up the medical specialty, this is the exact reason I made this a blood "release" and not just manipulation. I realized that if someone wanted to say use the ninjutsu and fuuinjutsu side only, then they would have no way to actually use the techniques and would drain themselves at an exceptionally fast pace (its 5.5 liters btw). Through the use of Kekkyon release ninjutsu the blood for the technique can be created, much like as you stated, a senjuu can produce wood from their arms and the other examples go on. This is best understood by culmination of individual jutsu but I do hope I did a good job of explaining it here.

Secret: Unfortunately this is a founding princible to the clan that gives it it's true edge. I am willing to compromise greatly on this though as acid is not the only way to achieve the desired result. I am thinking if I edited this to be a paragraph outlining an agressive flesh-eating bacteria, it would be acceptable. This would actually aide the clan as a whole as a bacteria could be programmed in symbiotic state with it's host and would not harm the user which would then cancel the nasty side effect of having one's acid burn the flesh when it exited the blood vessel which WAS the only protected spot of the Ketsueki member. Obviously this would be greatly elaborated on but I want to make sure the fundamental idea is at least acceptable before I spend a great deal of energy on the explination, and reworking a few of the jutsu. Rest assured this would come with a very open weakness that I would explain among other key points to make the idea whole. Again, consider this a pitch. Also you may want to go and remove "Zetsushi Nensan - Tongue Tooth Sticky Acid" which is in the medical encyclopedia and directly mentions utilizing acid.

Modifications: Shabing!

Final Note: Just as a precaution as my history has labeled me a hot head and often I can come across as brash and rude, if this presumption was sustained from reading the above response I hastily apologize and meant only to explain and make attempts at compromise. Also thank you and much love earned for having allowed my clan to come under judgment at long last. I believe the Ketsuki had felt like Guantanamo detainees before this day. {I know you are British so you are pardoned if you do not understand the relevance and connection}

Age : 29 Posts : 4301

If I may, I'd like to offer an alternative way in how the clan functions as a whole.

Ketsueki
Rapid Blood Production

Requirements:

Must have Medical Ninjutsu / Eijutsu as a specialty.
In order to perform B - Rank and above techniques, members must have Experienced Medic Nin as an SC.
Members are prevented from taking Taijutsu as a specialty.

Kekkei Genkai:

Rapid Blood Production

Unique Glands

Blood Manipulation

I strongly advise that you go about the creation of your clan using the method I have created before you. I believe it gets rid of problems that I can see and makes the explanation of the clan more clear and understandable, at least in my eyes. It also opens up the clan as well, as you'd no longer have to have Suiton and Doton as elements, though I have enforced Eijutsu and an SC. The barring of Taijutsu is up to you, I'm fine whether it goes or stays. I do hope that you go about it this way and that this has also been of help to you.

Age : 31 Posts : 787

Though I am of two minds on you recreating the clan, I am willing to make that compromise. However I would still, if possible, like to utilize the flesh consuming bacteria. If you deem it plausible I will write up the paragraph describing it.before edits are made. I would include it in this post but I am on my ps3. As a thought I would be willing to incorporate this idea as a clan based poison if need be.

EDIT: I also thought possibly adding a concept where their blood has the capability of becoming compatible with poison which would allow members to incorporate their characters poisons with clan jutsu. Again this needs fleshed out. I can write up examples of all the above ideas tommorow.

Age : 29 Posts : 4301

Thanks for compromising with me on this, Saint. Really do appreciate it. As for your flesh consuming bacteria, I'm sure there's something we could come up with. Perhaps it's created somewhere within the body and remains within the bloodstream, yet you have no worry of it damaging your own body, as the vast amount of white blood cells keep it in line. Feel free to have something written up about it and I'm sure we can work something out.

Age : 31 Posts : 787

Also I will be keeping the Distinct Blood Lust trait. This should be alright as you stated before that you saw no problems with it and your revisal of the clan does not interfere with its application in any way so far as I can tell.

Here is my attempt at utilizing this flesh eating bacteria in a sensible way.

Engineered Weapons
It is also propper to note that the founding members of this clan were quite barbaric. Their common rituals were quite infamous but none more so then the consumption of the bodies of fallen foes. Being that humans are not predisposed to consuming the flesh of their own species, this presented several health issues for the earlier members, often leading to early and untimely deaths. It was once believed that 35 was a ripe old age for a Ketsueki. Over time and generations, the clansmen began to devlop a naturally growing bacteria that resided in the stomach lining and aided in the consumption of human meats and other bits aside from the bone. The bacteria became more agressive as it was passed down genetically, reaching a point that most meats of any kind were digested with in minutes after consumption. The bacteria soon became too fierce in a group of Ketsueki known as the bridge generation. Over time the bacteria in these members began to feed on their hosts body, namely the stomache lining. The bacteria entered the bloodstreams and while they slowed down, still ate away at the bodies. Extraordinarially, the offspring of that generation were born with a dormant form of the bacteria already in their bloodstream that could be awakened by the hosts chakra through the use of jutsu. This has become a signature property of the clans arsenal and why they are so feared. As they became more integrated into society the practice of canibalism was banned and eventually the genetic chain weened out the bacteria in the stomach, but the dormant bloodstream bound remained and still does.

Sound about right and logical?

Age : 29 Posts : 4301

Happy with both you keeping the Blood Lust trait and the Engineered Weapons. Am I right in assuming you'll be creating a poison for the Bacteria? As an idea, could you look at the possibility of limiting the amount of members holding the dormant trait over the recessive trait? Obviously if you do, then people who try to join the clan will have to seek approval from yourself.

Age : 31 Posts : 787

Actually, lets make it a SC. This makes the most sense, no? It is, after all something that only a few members would have and if the role player wants the trait then to do so they sacrifice one of their SC slots in order to have it, which I would say is a fair trade. Also I do not think that a bacteria is a poison. I believe this is a lot more logical.

Name:
Rank: B
Type: Chakra Based
Physical Requirements: Ketsueki Clan
Training Requirements: A 1400 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: For a certain few in the Ketsueki clan, their arcane abilities go far beyond that of simple blood control. For them, true power lies in the flesh eating bacteria that over time developed in their bodies and found housing in their own blood stream. For the current generations and those to come, these bacteria typically remain dormant and inactive. However, when aggravated by chakra they awaken and will vigorously consume the flesh of whatever the blood carrying it happens to be in physical connection with. This is accomplished through the use of Kekkyon release techniques and makes these members much more effective in combat. Unfortunately this bacteria cannot survive outside of their hosts blood and are also restricted to eating fleshy material. Fabric and earthly material alike are both unable to be broken down by the parasite. The extent of the bacteria's effect is directly correlated to the individual jutsu that is used to deploy it.

Once I get your review of that I will edit the clan and the jutsu accordingly as this will now require two versions of several techniques and distinct edits to a few as well.

Age : 29 Posts : 4301

Can't find anything wrong with the SC, apart from a name which I'm guessing you'll add later.
All looks good to me.
Thumbs Up

Age : 31 Posts : 787

Alright, made all the edits we discussed above.

Age : 29 Posts : 4301

Wonderful, now all we need to go through are the techniques and then I'll be able to slap an approval on this clan!

Control of Blood Flow Technique. Simply require a chakra cost per post in case it's used over a numerous amount of posts.
Dark Eye: Fatal Warning. I believe this is a technique from your original version, as it mentions the special glands on the eyes. If you wish to keep the technique, simply add in the information of your eye glands within the Unique Glands section.
Vampire's Fang - Closer to the Dark. Seems that you copy and pasted the coding over twice, just get that fixed up and have the topics bolded. (Rank, description etc...)
Ketsueki Elitist. Have the coding bolded please.

Age : 31 Posts : 787

1. Added as 1 for E and 2 for D rank application
2. Added needed information to the unique glands section of the clan
3. Not sure how that happened, but fixed
4. That was a slight oversight, I apologize, fixed

Age : 29 Posts : 4301

Thanks for making the edits, Saint!

Approved.
1/2

Age : 31 Posts : 787

Um isn't that 2/2 since Ivan approved it first?

Age : 29 Posts : 4301

Since the clan has gone through such a large rework, the approval is taken back down to one out of two.
Sorry about that!

Age : 31 Posts : 787

I fail to see why this is necessary. The basis of the clan is fundamentally the same, and the issues addressed by you and Ivan were in totally different areas. Ivan addressed the jutsu which have not changed, and actually a few have been removed due the modifications made through the process of your modifications. The clan is also over all now weaker then it was before, with ultimately the same principle and methods, again, I fail to see why this is necessary. I feel like I have waited more then long enough for an approval by now and I can safely say that this a first I am seeing on any roleplaying forum, ever.

Age : 27 Posts : 2538

Approved
2/2

Age : 29 Posts : 1688

Archived on Saint's request.