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PostSubject: Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] EmptyThu 08 Nov 2012, 9:42 pm



The Profile
But I know, all I know is that the end's beginning

Name: Viera Yamanaka
Nickname: Vivi
Alias: “The Lost Girl”

Gender: Female
Age: Fourteen
Birthday: January 12th
Zodiac: Rabbit

Apppearance:
    The first thing to be noticed is that Viera is very small proportioned – she looks more like a doll than a young kunoichi. This petite girl has relatively fair skin and a clear complexion, neither tan nor pale. Her skin remains smooth and soft, seemingly never having been scarred. Viera doesn’t have any markings or piercings. Not even her ears are pierced, which are usually hidden beneath her radiant locks that range from platinum blonde to gold in different lighting. And to compliment these features are her sparkling blue eyes, appearing like shallow pools of light. Despite her rather frail-looking physique, she is actually quite fit and flexible. And although her muscles may not appear as well toned as most in her profession, she should not be underestimated – she is quick on her feet, and has exceptional natural balance in her movement. However, that doesn’t mean she can’t be a bit clumsy here and there.

    Her hair is commonly left down, and appears somewhat untamed. Sometimes she even tucks a flower in her hair for an added touch. She normally dresses simple and comfortable, ranging from plain dresses to pieced clothing. Another consistency in her attire are the colors pink, purple, and even blue – which only brings out the color of her eyes even more. Viera may wear sleeves, and sometimes even knee high stockings and hooded jackets depending on the temperature. Her shoes almost always match, but are chosen more for comfort, protection, and ease of maneuverability rather than style. She keeps any useful items she might have in a backpack she sometimes slings over her shoulder, but keeps most of her weapons in a conveniently placed pouch strapped around her upper left thigh.

    Headband: Her village headband is usually tied loosely around her waist.

Personality:
    If Viera were to be described in one word, it would be “backwards”. Even before the unfortunate events of her past, she had always been quiet and extremely shy. She has always been extremely sensitive when it came to herself and others, and can often times read people like a book. However, she often refrains from sharing her intuitive feelings and thoughts to others. Nonetheless, she’s astonishingly intelligent and wise far beyond her years. She is also considerably mature for her age, but also tends to be naïve and childish at times. Due to the fact that she is abnormally empathetic, she may become easily attached to things and others, often times presenting a longing to make friends with those she just met.

    Another thing to be noted is her gentle nature. Although she isn’t really outgoing or talkative, she’s genuinely kind to others and happens to be a very good listener. She also isn’t one for violence, preferring healing over harming people; hence her choice is specializing in medicine. She only fights when she deems necessary, or to defend those she holds dear. Viera would never want to cause anyone pain and feels guilty if she does, likely due to her acute sensitivity to others’ feelings. In hopes that she doesn’t burden others by projecting her own feelings onto them, she often keeps to herself and wears an indifferent expression.

    She is almost always calm, though she does get a bit flustered when she becomes the center of attention. If she ever gets really upset or frustrated over something, she has the tendency to cry. Though she doesn't necessarily blubber like an idiot, her eyes do water. This incidentally only makes her feel worse, because she hates crying, as she finds it utterly embarrassing and a sign of weakness. Very rarely will she raise her voice; she always speaks in a light and almost melodic tone. Viera also daydreams a bit, and has the tendency to pause frequently mid-sentence when deep in thought. These traits may make her seem a bit aloof.

    As for things that she likes, there are plenty, as she is easily content. However, there are a few things that make her significantly happier than most. First on the list is her love for flowers and herbs. She loves their variety of color, scents, and all around appearance. Viera also likes moderate temperatures and fresh air; therefore she isn’t too fond of extreme heat or cold. One of her favorite things to do is lie in the grass, and watch the clouds in the sky pass overhead. This is when she does most of her thinking and consequentially, daydreaming.

    Believe it or not, there are also things she doesn’t like, and some that she particularly hates. She doesn’t mind the rain and in fact finds it refreshing, but she is afraid of especially violent storms. Due to a traumatic event, she is also terrified of fire. In fact, fire often times brings back unwanted memories. Another big fear is being alone, although she herself may not realize it. A few other less prominent fears include utter darkness, losing those she holds close to her heart, and what she doesn't know or can't seem understand.


The Placement
Who I am from the start, take me home to my heart

Rank: Genin

Birthplace: Nami no Kuni
Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato

Clan: Yamanaka


The Proficiency
Let me go, and I will run - I will not be silent

Specialties:
    Primary: Ninjutsu
    Secondary: Eijutsu

Elements:
    Primary: Fuuton
    Secondary: Suiton

Combat Style:

Special Characteristics:

Equipment:


The Potential
All this time spent in vain - wasted years, wasted gain


Note: Chakra Cost for Techniques have been differentiated according to the Advanced Chakra Control SC.
Academy Techniques:

Secret Clan Techniques:

Wind Techniques:

Water Techniques:

Medical Techniques:

The Past
All is lost, hope remains - and this war's not over

Lost Childhood Arc:

New Life & Academy Arc:

Genin Arc:

The Parallel
There's a light, there's the sun - taking all shattered ones

Face Claim:

RP Sample:

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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 09 Jan 2013, 12:11 am

I think I'm finally finished.
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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 09 Jan 2013, 12:38 am

Your application is looking really good!

There are just three things I wanted to mention;



  • You are missing the headband section of the template, and also are missing your FC.

  • Quote :
    Name: Samon Hosa no Jutsu - Hearing Aid Technique

    Water doesn't really amplify sounds except for things that happen -in- the water (like when you are in a bathtub and you can't really hear anything that's being said to you when someone is standing next to the bathtub, but you can clearly hear the echoing sounds if you tap on the bathtub in the water). But if you would maybe explain better to me how this works, like you said the water takes the shape of an amplifier? Can I get more details on this?

  • In your history you never state that she joins the academy, and thus she wouldn't really be graduated as a Genin.
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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 09 Jan 2013, 1:03 am

Where her headband is located is specified in her appearance. As for a Face Claim, I don't have one - my images were edited by me, so as long as they don't use my exact images, which I don't think anyone in their right mind would do, I have no intentions of putting claims on the original images. As for the water technique, I borrowed it from a friend with his permission. Considering what you brought to my attention, the technique itself doesn't make much sense. I'll simply remove it. And she did graduate from the Academy, I simply stated in indirectly. I'll further elaborate on her graduation to avoid confusion though.

Consider it edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 09 Jan 2013, 3:04 am

- I was under the impression that you shouldn't mess with the original template, even if it got prettified. =O So the part with the headband should stay where it was, I'd think.

- And we still need you do to the FC thing, just say it's your work/that the original is edited and link us to the image you use where it is uploaded so we can make your FC in the list.

- Thanks for working with me Smile But there is one thing I just noticed now, not sure how it slipped by last time; really sorry about that. But you are missing your rp sample =O
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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 09 Jan 2013, 6:30 pm

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 09 Jan 2013, 7:15 pm

(1/2) approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] Yamanaka, Viera [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 09 Jan 2013, 9:01 pm

It looks good, though I'm sad you are going to Konoha and not coming to Kumo. I was looking forward to RPing with you. Anyway, good job.

Approved
2/2


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Archived.
Due to inactivity.
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