Kagutsuchi Clan (Hell Release) finished

Age : 35 Posts : 306

Clan Name: Kagutsuchi Clan
Location: Kumogakure
Signature Traits:
Physical Traits.
Most members of the Kagutsuchi clan are built for speed. They have slim toned bodys that are more built for speed then strength and and their skin color can range from pale to lightly tanned. The hair color for clan members range from black to dark brown and their eye color tends to be shades of blue. however those that hold an affinity for the bloodline will often be born with heterochromia or two different color eyes.

Mentally the personality of clan members can vary but one thing is certain about them. They are very protective and when they find people and things they like and care about they will fight to protect them even if they sacrifice themselves in the process. They are also like to be where its hot and enjoy being outside in the sun and fresh air. Cooping a kagutsuchi clan member in a small space is a good way to get hurt badly as they tend to get agitated quickly if they can’t escape.

The corrupted flame

Because of the nature of the Seithr chakra in them most clan members have a high fire affinity and those that hold the bloodline limit find themselves only able to use one type of elemental ninjutsu and it will always be Fire because of the Seithr burning out any other affinity the user might have. Its not known why Seithr does this but its never been researched.

Blade masters.
Members of the Kagutsuchi clan are naturals with bladed weapons and will often use kenjutsu or some other type of weapons. The clan is well known for combining their deadly fire and their sword skills together to make powerful Nin-Kenjutsu techniques

Kekkei Genkai: Narakuton - Hell Release

Because of the user having tainted chakra naturally blended into their system with their regular chakra, the users fire becomes darker, a dark grey or pitch black color. It becomes much hotter and taints what it touches. This fire can be shaped easily and gives off a very evil and unholy feeling to those that are around it. As a consequence the user can only use non elemental ninjutsu along with Katon Jutsu and as well as the sub release Narakuton

Clan Requiements-
Can only have the Katon Element and the Narakuton sub element
Must specialize in ninjutsu
specializeing in Weaponry is optional.
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History: The beginning of the Kagutsuchi clan Dates back to before the hidden villages were formed. During that time the clan was composed of many like minded shinobi that lived within the valleys of Kaminari no Kuni.They were a very successful clan even during the warring times they lived in and despite the fame they had they kept mostly to themselves so the did not draw too many enemy's to them. Despite this one day a strange occurrence happened.

One day as they traveled thru one of the mountains in the are, the members of the clan started to show signs of sickness, it was slow at first only two or three of them showed any signs. After three days most of the clan had become stricken with illness. It was only after one more day that the clan found out the reason for their illness, the mountain they had been traveling thru had a strange ore in it that gave off a bizarre form of chakra and it had seeped into their chakra coils and blended in as if it was a natural part of them. The clan recovered after a few days and exited the cavern to daylight.

It was not untill the next generation was born that the Kagutsuchi clan realized what the illness in the cave had done to them. It had tainted their bodys down to their dna and they had passed the tainted chakra to their children. While the elders did not feel anything more from the tainted chakra their sons and daughters were not so lucky. As they grew they slowly produced the tainted chakra in their systems naturally. Soon they noticed other symptoms like the ability to only use nonelemental and katon jutsu. They also noticed that their fire had turned dark till it was almost black as night. Despite the problems it caused the clan decided to use this to their advantage and trained untill they found out how to use this new chakra that the clan named Seithr and by utilizing the tainted chakra that naturally blended with their own they created a new sub element. They named it Narakuton or Hell Release as the fire that they had created was a dark and twisted flame that felt like the fires of hell itself.

Clan Jutsu:

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Age : 29 Posts : 1236

As it stands, Hazama, I cannot see this Clan being approvable. Namely for its relation to 'Hell' and it just being a more advanced Fire-element clan..

Also, this:

Hazama wrote:: Because of the user having tainted chakra naturally blended into their system with their regular chakra, the users fire becomes darker, a dark grey or pitch black color. It becomes much hotter and taints what it touches.

What would the tainting of something entail?

You have a plethora of grammatical errors within every part of this clan, namely your use of 'thru' as opposed to its correct spelling of through. If it was up to me, this clan will be denied. However, I will get a second opinion if you can 'taint' my opinion on it.

Age : 35 Posts : 306

hmm your right about it being a more enhanced version of a fire release but after having some time to contemplate I have found a few reasons why it differs from normal fire release.

you asked how tainting something would work. the fire would taint what it touches in the same manner as nuclear radiation does. what ever it touches would be contaminated and it would sink into what it touched for a period of time. depending on the rank of the jutsu depends on the severity of the exposure and the damage the radiation does.

The reason the clan members are not killed outright from being constantly exposed is because they are born with a resistance to the radiation the tainted chakra gives off.it only makes them sick in large amounts and with daily training they can regulate the chakra in their system so it stays at a constent level.

if you would like Dan I will edit the errors and add the radiation part to the jutsu and change the color of the flames if it is an issue. if the name is still not allowed would Radiation Release be alright?

Age : 29 Posts : 1236

Whilst not written in any systems I can find, I am near 100% certain that Radiation and all of its variants is not to be approved on this forum. Will get confirmation from an Admin on this issue. Either way, I don't see it being likely to get this clan approved at all in its current state of hell/radiation release and what it can do..

Age : 30 Posts : 8965

Radiatian exists in Naruto, surely. It's energy, the sun exists in Naruto. Manipulating it however is a whole different ball game. I don't really imagine it's allowable.

Age : 35 Posts : 306

alright then scrap it I guess. thanks for looking at it though ^^

Age : 29 Posts : 1236

Denied and Archived.