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PostSubject: Ryuzaki Clan Ryuzaki Clan EmptyMon 15 Feb 2010, 3:50 pm

Clan Information:

    Clan Name: Ryuzaki
    Clan Location: Unknown to the Ryuzaki Brothers
    Clan Traits:
    Natural Affinity with the Fire Element. Quite longing to find details and facts to help them find answers to their problems. Change of hair color to their natural hair color to red then back to the natural hair color.
    Kekkei Genkai:
    First and foremost is the usage of the flame is that of chakra and real flame. The flame the Ryuzaki clan use can burn, when the user will allow it, heat, shape manipulate, or combine with other elements and even other Katon jutsu only amplifying its power and so on.
    The only Power of the Ryuzaki that seemed the brothers have tapped in is the ability to learn and use fire element at an easier and faster rate then the other elements they try to learn. With that Said the clan is able to use/handle fire within there own will. (I.E Gaara's sand without the overpower of creating it from everywhere xD) There is a story within a close personal friend of the Flame Ninja's father. "The use of the fire was like no other. The shape of the flame can only be wielded by the member who can see ever color of its potential" This has been a small suggestion that the clan is able to have a different power within the different colors of the flame. This has been known to be true because the red/orange flame has been used for offense and defense from the Flame Ninjas but they have used a White flame for their Medical ninjutsu. With this KKG. It seems that the Shinobi of the Ryuzaki can use and withstand Fire type ninjutsu better then your normal ninja. The shinobi of the clan can use 50% less chakra then needed to use the jutsu as well as 25% more withstanding heat and fire chakra from nature and his opponent. This only involves jutsu involving heat and fire that their advantages take place, Also the advantage can only be used to their shinobi rank. I.E B rank shinobi(Chuunin) can use 25%less chakra in jutsu up to and including B rank. As well as withstanding fire, fire like chakra 25% less damage to the shinobi if the jutsu used is B rank or less. Or if the flame is the size of a everyday house or smaller.

    It is know that Blaize and Kyo uses the following colors of flame to their way of the shinobi life.

    Chakra usage
    [Note: please note the shinobi of the clan's fire usage is 50% less chakra cost then a normal shinobi. Thought the following chakra cost are ranked as if a normal shinobio as using this. The reason being is so they get to see the cost of the chakra before adding on the 25% less fire chakra usage from the clan]
    Chakra usage to use free will fire is at least C rank or above. Unless using flame to light a small candle or burning a tip of a rope or something similar in that aspect. In that case that is D rank usage. Anything the size of a softball to the size of a basketball is at C rank cost. As well as flame engulfing the hands and up to the elbow, or Feet up to the kneecap is considered C rank Usage. [See Ryuzaki Inferno]. B Rank usage of fire is anything larger to the size of a basketball or longer than 20 feet or rope up to the size of a Shed is considered to be B rank usage of free will flame. Any thing the size of the Kazekage's mansion, distance from the Fire temple to the location of grass were team Kakashi was trapped is considered A rank usage of fire/fire chakra

    Chakra Distance
    With the use of the flame in the Ryuzaki clan the limit of a C rank Flame is anywhere from 0-5meters (short range) B rank Flames can reach up to 15 meters (Mid range) as well as A rank Flame can reach Long range.

    Red Flame:
    Users: Blaize and Kyo Ryuzaki: There main attribute of the KKG. They are able to summon fire chakra from within and use them at will. They are able to manipulate flame from their surroundings as long as their chakra had some connection with the point they are trying to make. For example if there was a tree burning on fire and one of them sends chakra(meaning in form of red fire) to the flame they can manipulate the flame to die down and disappear or use them for their own will. Though the usage of flame to control another Flame has to be equal to have full control of it. Though if the flame seems to be to much or if the shinobi can not waste chakra then they can send at least C rank flame to the target to dibust the flame.

    For example: If a wagon was on fire Blaize would need to give flame equal to that of a C rank flame (look at chakra usage) to take control of the flame. if Blaize only needs to just release the flame then Blaize will still need C rank flame at least to do that.

    Another example is if the left wing of the Medical greenhouse was erupted into flames and the size of the flame is larger then the size of a shed then Blaize would need at least B rank chakra to control the flame. C rank chakra to help lower the flame to half its size, or B rank chakra to take it all away.

    Flames that are in control to the Ryuzaki has to be used as soon as possible. In form of a jutsu, placing flame into an item, or dissapearing the flame. A ryuzaki can not use new flame until the flame they have absorbed or used now is used. If not then the flame goes away in two rp battle posts.

    It is known that the Flames can also be used as different sources of fire such as heat. The most notably form of that is Blaize's Flare heat jutsu and Fire rope jutsu. he can use his KKG of flame to use the jutsu to make heat and make flame from the heat. The Flame can also be used within weapons and other items without intentionally burning the said items with their flame control. The way it it seemed to the target the flames are there but it does not burn the reason being is that the Ryuzaki's flame can take a half to their natural burning effects and make it nutural or not depending on the Ryuzaki shinobi. Though it seemed easy for them now because they had to train how not to burn each other while they were C rank Ninjas. The first to gain control from the flames was Kyo Ryuzaki and then in turn taught Blaize how to control the aspects of his flame.
    (Description of jutsu on Blaize Profile)
    (Chakra Cost: In order to use the flame they must have to use at least C rank chakra at minimum. Stated above in chakra cost)

    Beige (Sand color) Flame: Another use of the flame. This flame seems to be perfected by Blaize Ryuzaki. The color of flame is used with his natural fire element with his secondary element Wind. With the training of wind control and uses in Suna, he has learned to use flame with wind within his KKG. This started to change the color of the flame to Beige.
    This Flame is a flame mixed with Fire and wind nature. This is a flame that is amplified with the power of wind. Not only does this flame is empowered but it has a effect of wind with the flame. The Wind with the flame is able to make cuts within the body. Flesh wound type cuts that opens the skin and the flames will get into the skin to make a different type of burning within the body.

    This chakra control is B rank at minimum. The flame can only be engulfed in Blaize's hands and arms not legs. This flame can reach up to 10 meters in length. It is a double flame and can be combined with additional red flames and Jutsu that includes Wind and or Fire chakra only.



    Yellow Flame: A use that seems only Kyo Ryuzaki can use. When having learn of his second element, lightening Kyo has tried to use this with his control of fire chakra to produce this yellow flame. Though he cannot Handel lightning like the use of his flames but he can get a seemly good sense or ration, he cannot manipulate the lightning however though he can use the lightning at will and can directed it using this method. During combat when hit with this flame the target will not only feel burning on its self but it will feel a shocking sensation. it is used to help disturb there concentration on a jutsu or give them a slow reaction time though not strong enough to stun unless given a powerful blow.

    Other Types of uses grow within the two shinobi lives, there may be More Ryuzaki out there or not though they will keep on training in order to find out more about their clan.

    Secret Clan Jutsu: (Blaize Uses)
    Name: Ryuzaki Style: Ryuzaki Inferno
    Rank: C
    Type: Taijutsu/Clan
    Element:Fire
    Description: With the Style of the Ryuzaki this was one of their basic form of offense and defense. While focusing the fire element chakra they can make it so that The fist and feet are engulfed in flames. While adding damage it also leaves the opponent left with a burning effect.


    Blaize is able to channel the flames that was stored up in his hands and feet and extended it out of his body. This skill can be used over again to increase the flame in his hands and feet. This skill can only increased three times. Also with each increase it takes that much hits or use to exit out of his body.
    (For Example if Blaize uses this skill to engulf his hands in flame he can use it again to double the flame and damage in his fist or the arm in that general area. In order to take out the flame Blaize must be hit in his fist twice[or in the arm or shoulder of the side of the engulfed fist] to let the flames go out. But if he extended the flame out of his hands one time then the flame is gone and the skill must be used again in order top have flame in his hands.[The flame can go about 5 meters-Midrange])
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    This skill can also be added to jutsu to add a fire effect to them. In the form of bring out the flames out of his body. For example if Blaize uses the Shield of debris and add flame to the shield the shield will add a burning effect and may be harden if the user chooses to.

    The weakness to this is that its natural enemy, Water can drench out the flame if used a C rank or above water. Though because of the clan it is noted that the flame will not just wash away they will invert itself to steam to create around the area. though the steam is small and will not cover more then the circle area of the user it is just a last use of the flame before it is put out.

    [the flames and its effect changes within the color of the flame and its classifications. The Clan shinobi makes jutsu based on the flames but are limited to that shinobi only and not to the clan as a general whole.

    History:

    There is no records that blaize of Kyo found within there search to find more of the clan. Though shinobi who has faced both Kyo and Blaize said that they have wielded a great sense of chakra as well as masters of the flame element. Though younger they could only grow Stronger. The mother and Father of Blaize and kyo has died during a travel t a new land. Kyo believed to think it was an assassination because during the time of death Kyo saw a man who used wind to get away from the sense after looking at the dead bodies during the time of the attack.

    There is another who knows slightly more about the Ryuzaki clan. a name Blaize and kyo refereed to as a friend of their father. he was an excellent man of Weaponryand the one who gave blaize his katana. he worked with their father for many years. Though he could not tell them of the past he can be seen as the only link they know about their identity of the clan and why the mother, father and even this man keep it a secret for all these years still.

    ooc: History from the creator.

    There was shinobi in the small villages near the moon country that has ninja forces. This is were the Ryuzaki clan was born. The clan was friendly with other ally nation and groups of clans that seem to wonder were there was work. The clan has been making return trips to the moon country to help in the aid of the hidden star village. The clan has been dispersed after the third great attack for the star. The attack has made clan's extinct and the few remaining members of the many clans aiding and fighting for the star has been taking into hiding. The ryuzaki was no different. They had enough of protecting the star. and to increase its forces they have decided to roam along within the ninja world with different names and alias. The parents of the Blaize and Kyo Ryuzaki has moved to a small country land before they have has that murdered from a clan who blames their parents for deaths of that specific clan.

    The Ryuzaki clan has lived within different areas of the shinobi land. Within each area of the country they have learned the main elements of the village. In example: Sand village learns the secondary element Wind. The Hidden Rock has learned the Earth Style. The Lightning country has learned the lightning element. SO on and so fourth. Though the only two elements has come within the light has been Fire, Wind, and Lightning elemtents. The other combinations of elements with fire are possible but has not been shown or known to the Ryuzaki Brothers.
    And since this clan is closed then there is no need to add it on this clan page.

    Clan Details:
    Closed.


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PostSubject: Re: Ryuzaki Clan Ryuzaki Clan EmptyMon 15 Feb 2010, 6:32 pm

33% is an odd number, make it 25% or 50%, nobody wants to worry about odd numbers like 33.

How much chakra does it consume to make fire? How much fire can be made? Is it pure flame or is it pure chakra that acts like flames? Is it both? If so, what is it treated as for other jutsu that depend on that? Can it mix with other Katon jutsu? How far does their chakra reach?

I find it very difficult to believe you could prevent something from burning being near contact with fire. That would actually consume additional chakra, which should be noted, and I want to know HOW you do that.

Combing Fuuton with Katon would not change the color of the flame, it would simply become larger and more powerful. Also, you're going to need to set some limits on this, A Rank minimum to create and control because you have to contain a very powerful blaze if its mized with Fuuton. Plus, this would consume much more chakra because its effectively two jutsu, a Fuuton and a Katon.

White flames need way more detail. Its medical chakra that can burn? That should have its own chakra cost in addition to jutsu used with it, plus, you're going to have put some limits and explain how heat is added or taken. How much? How? How far? Etc.

Ryuzaki Inferno: Two hits makes no sense, a Suiton jutsu would douse it period.

Ryuzaki Minstral: Wind control is a completely different thing, remove this.

I don't want to see the 'myserious clan' history. If nobody knows it, you still do, so write it out.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuzaki Clan Ryuzaki Clan EmptyTue 16 Feb 2010, 3:55 am

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuzaki Clan Ryuzaki Clan EmptyTue 16 Feb 2010, 4:19 am

Please fix the coding so I can look at this without distractions.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuzaki Clan Ryuzaki Clan EmptyTue 16 Feb 2010, 4:22 am

complete? i belive?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuzaki Clan Ryuzaki Clan EmptyTue 16 Feb 2010, 7:24 pm

I think that 25% less chakra and a 25% increase would be more fitting. Also, remove the part about medical uses for fire. as well as bits of the different color stuff. Color dictates heat and/or what is being burnt.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuzaki Clan Ryuzaki Clan EmptyTue 16 Feb 2010, 7:28 pm

fixed to 25 percent.

Also the color is just a unique use with the clan. It is not for describing the amount of heat. Just in this case. just a unique traits of the Ryuzaki clan

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuzaki Clan Ryuzaki Clan EmptyTue 16 Feb 2010, 9:24 pm

Looks fine though I can help but feel you could have better explained it in half the words. Approved

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