Konryou Clan CHECK IT PLEASE

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Clan Name: Konryou
Clan Location: Originated in Amegakure
Clan Traits: The members from the Konryou clan can be easily identified by their dark shades of blue hair, gray eyes, and pale skin. Most of the members have Tribal tattoos that are most common on their arms and back. Every member can efficiently execute Water techniques, as well as summon special subordinates that could be anything from a giant bird to a terrifying tiger.
Kekkei Genkai: Amarigan is a doujutsu technique that every Konryou member is able to unlock in their teenage years. The ability of the clan is to create a close link between the living and spirit world, and provide sacrafices of souls to the Gods for sacred techniques. Being able to see spirits in others is one of the abilities of the Amarigan.
Secret Clan Jutsu:

Spoiler:

History:

The Konryou clan is a noble family dating six generations back that protected their lands from any invaders with their life. Mainly influenced by faith and religion, the members started to develop a very close bond with their fallen comrades and paid their respects at every battle. Created to uphold the peace, the Konryou family was soon involved in harsh wars in the Rain Village that caused them to part from their original views and head more toward coldhearted violence. Being disapproved by many of the close clans, the members became more distant from their foundation and relationships with others, causing them act on their own for many years. Mainly hidden in the vast mountains of the neighboring country's borders, the clan unlocked its ability and started to develop techniques that would completely shock the ninja world. Going through harsh training routines and rituals, not many could endure the physical strain as well as social isolation from the world.

The number of Konryou clan members started to decrease dramatically. At that point, there were two unofficial branches of the family. One followed their clan's original views and and left to support their village, while others aimed for power. Soon enough, both of the branches suffered a heavy blow. Many of the members died from the use of their techniques, and it was later made obvious that it was a punishment from the Gods. Being reunited to form what's little left of the clan, the remaining members built strong relationships amongst each other. In an attempt to cover up the past, and to possibly weave the Gods' curse, the sacred scrolls and monuments were burnt and destroyed. The few remaining shinobi possessing the abilities passed them down onto next generations. With even higher raked death toll, the clan lessened the use of their family's cursed techniques and would only pass it on to children expected to be more powerful than their previous generation. Today, there are few members of the Konryou clan still around, and many of those are listed for a costly bounty. With most of the family's past records destroyed, it is uncertain as to who the founder of the clan was.

Clan Details: Open with permission.

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First off, unless you add a hefty chakra cost, B-rank Genjutsu immunity is a no. That said,

Name: Kontan Taigen no Jutsu [Soul Embodiment]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: With souls sealed inside the body, they are capable of being released to give life to inanimate objects like puppets, newly deceased human beings, or even replacing the user’s current soul in case the body is no longer fit to survive. Unlike other clan jutsus, this technique requires the eyes to be closed and the seal pertaining to that soul needs to be released. When ready to release, the user will show two pupils again, and then the soul will be guided to its new vessel. The newly transferred soul will only be able to live in a fresh body. Puppets and objects can only hold the spirit for no longer than two days, and have a weak mind of their own, most of which belongs to the previous body. The user will go shortly blind after the release, but that’s only the first side effect. Raised temperature and incredibly quick heartbeat is present, as well as stabbing pain of the body’s organs that get worse with movement. This technique is generally too much to handle for weaker shinobi and can kill them right away.

Are you in complete domination of the soul once they are placed in their new form? Can they use the jutsu they owned in life?

Name: Kigen Sono Nai no Jutsu [Rise of the Dead]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: This technique calls upon the lost and dead souls in the user’s body. When the jutsu is activated, the seals on the body start to burn and disappear. Seen only by members of the clan, the souls are released into the air and after entering a solid or liquid vessel, they take form of their former body and show themselves to their opponent. They are quick and agile, but unable to perform any of the former shinobi’s jutsus. If bit or cut by the zombie’s claws, the opponent will start feeling drowsy and weak, which leaves them vulnerable to any attacks. Only way to stop the zombies is to cut off their limbs or their head, which will cause them to turn to ash. They will continue to roam unless stopped by the user, or eventually die down and turn to ash.

How Many at once?

Name: Tenshi Tenraku no Jutsu [Angel's Fall]
Rank: C
Ninjutsu: Genjutsu
Element: None
Description: A succession to the Jouten Tacchi no Jutsu, this technique dispels the previous one and focuses more closely on the opponent’s mind, weakening and altering it. When affected by this jutsu, the opponent starts feeling tired and experiences low self esteem, seeing negative outcome of the battle. All of these factors, as well as decreased reaction time and speed, make the target even more vulnerable. This technique allows the final stage of the ritual to be executed.

Name: Tenma Koujou no Jutsu [Demon's Rise]
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Description: A succession to the Tenshi Tenraku no Jutsu, this technique increases the opponents physical sensitivity by over a thousand percent. This jutsu cannot be blocked or released, unless the user has been prevented from using it after the previous technique. The effects wear off after about twenty minutes. This jutsu is excellent for close ranged combat, and gives the user the upper hand.

These two are B-rank.

Name: Taishou Mozou no Jutsu [Target Mimic]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: This jutsu is performed as a ritual to the Gods, which requires the sacrificial blood of the opponent. Once the user has the enemy’s blood running through their veins, a soul is released that takes the form of the enemy. Any damage done to body of the newly formed being is given back to the target. The user is able to control the mimic, but is unable to move their own body. The jutsu wears off after about thirty seconds, turning the spirit to ash and releasing the side effects of the technique.

This is a bit similar to jashinism.. But that aside, i'm assuming 30 seconds is one post. And if they destroy your actual body during this time, are you dead?

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Jsalos wrote:: First off, unless you add a hefty chakra cost, B-rank Genjutsu immunity is a no. That said,
I have removed the immunity to avoid further trouble with it. The point of it was that Amarigan has no pupils, and doesn't allow weaker illusions to channel through because there is no 'connection' without actual pupils. But Kaika is not blind too.. so it's your call if you have a suggestion of keeping it.. cause they wouldn't work on her period, so she wouldn't really be losing chakra 'repelling' them. Let me know about THAT

Name: Kontan Taigen no Jutsu [Soul Embodiment]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: With souls sealed inside the body, they are capable of being released to give life to inanimate objects like puppets, newly deceased human beings, or even replacing the user’s current soul in case the body is no longer fit to survive. Unlike other clan jutsus, this technique requires the eyes to be closed and the seal pertaining to that soul needs to be released. When ready to release, the user will show two pupils again, and then the soul will be guided to its new vessel. The newly transferred soul will only be able to live in a fresh body. Puppets and objects can only hold the spirit for no longer than two days, and have a weak mind of their own, most of which belongs to the previous body. The user will go shortly blind after the release, but that’s only the first side effect. Raised temperature and incredibly quick heartbeat is present, as well as stabbing pain of the body’s organs that get worse with movement. This technique is generally too much to handle for weaker shinobi and can kill them right away.

Are you in complete domination of the soul once they are placed in their new form? Can they use the jutsu they owned in life? In no way do their abilities enter the user, as well as memories. The 'nightmares' that you read about are supposed to fright Kaika.. mainly because her Bloodline is kind of like.. "Gods here to punish ya cause you not letting souls rest in peace," kind of deal. So, abilities, no.

Name: Kigen Sono Nai no Jutsu [Rise of the Dead]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: This technique calls upon the lost and dead souls in the user’s body. When the jutsu is activated, the seals on the body start to burn and disappear. Seen only by members of the clan, the souls are released into the air and after entering a solid or liquid vessel, they take form of their former body and show themselves to their opponent. They are quick and agile, but unable to perform any of the former shinobi’s jutsus. If bit or cut by the zombie’s claws, the opponent will start feeling drowsy and weak, which leaves them vulnerable to any attacks. Only way to stop the zombies is to cut off their limbs or their head, which will cause them to turn to ash. They will continue to roam unless stopped by the user, or eventually die down and turn to ash.

Amount of zombies?
I added the amount. It's generally depending on how many souls the person has sealed in the body, but since there could be a hundred souls there, even though Kaika would probably only have like a dozen maximum herself. So for genin it's only one and two for higher trained, and chuunin and jounin would be up to 6. And then higher obviously. The zombies can't use ANY techniques either.

Name: Tenshi Tenraku no Jutsu [Angel's Fall]
Rank: C
Ninjutsu: Genjutsu
Element: None
Description: A succession to the Jouten Tacchi no Jutsu, this technique dispels the previous one and focuses more closely on the opponent’s mind, weakening and altering it. When affected by this jutsu, the opponent starts feeling tired and experiences low self esteem, seeing negative outcome of the battle. All of these factors, as well as decreased reaction time and speed, make the target even more vulnerable. This technique allows the final stage of the ritual to be executed.

Name: Tenma Koujou no Jutsu [Demon's Rise]
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Description: A succession to the Tenshi Tenraku no Jutsu, this technique increases the opponents physical sensitivity by over a thousand percent. This jutsu cannot be blocked or released, unless the user has been prevented from using it after the previous technique. The effects wear off after about twenty minutes. This jutsu is excellent for close ranged combat, and gives the user the upper hand.

These two are B-rank. fixed to B rank

Name: Taishou Mozou no Jutsu [Target Mimic]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: This jutsu is performed as a ritual to the Gods, which requires the sacrificial blood of the opponent. Once the user has the enemy’s blood running through their veins, a soul is released that takes the form of the enemy. Any damage done to body of the newly formed being is given back to the target. The user is able to control the mimic, but is unable to move their own body. The jutsu wears off after about thirty seconds, turning the spirit to ash and releasing the side effects of the technique.

This is a bit similar to jashinism.. But that aside, i'm assuming 30 seconds is one post. And if they destroy your actual body during this time, are you dead?I am greatly fond of Jashinism abilities, but thirty seconds could be anywhere from one post to even five. It depends on the RPers now, don't it? Anyway, yes she can die while this technique lasts. But obviously, I won't use it if it would hurt my character. Also, may I add a 'release' function to the jutsu? In case she's in trouble? Didn't think of that..

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Bump?

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Hoooooolright, Hi, flash here, just read through everything and here are my first thoughts;

This is a good idea but I have always been iffy about the idea of 'soul manipulation', and in doujutsu form makes it a bit harder to approve.

First of all, the genjutsu immunity isn't going to be allowed. Sorry.

Second of all, all techniques involving sealing would include Fuuinjutsu attributes. If that was the case, the Ninjutsu-Genjutsu based clan would have alittle (well more like a big) continuity error in it. This is something you may want to take into consideration now before I continue with the judgment of this concept.

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Immunity taken care of, thats out.

And explain "the Ninjutsu-Genjutsu based clan would have alittle (well more like a big) continuity error in it."

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