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Basic Information

Name: Sabure Kagami

Secondary Title: N/A

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Appearance:

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Kagami stands at just over six foot, making him slightly taller than the average fourteen year old. He is quite thin with not much muscle. Kagami has more of a lean appearance than an over weight one. He is healthy, despite his pale complextion. He has straight, brownish white hair that is rather long. The front is shorter than the back and is composed of about five bangs that fall below his nose. His ears are always covered by his hair, which seems to point slightly to the side around that area. The most striking feature about his hair is that a large proportion of the top is spiked up to the left. In his younger years Kagami wore a ridiculously long scarf that became quite hazardous. To remedy this, he completely cut of the part of the scarf that wasn’t around his neck, causing him to know wear what appears to be a loose muffler. Kagami’s eyes are very relaxed, his eyelids almost always being slightly closed. His eyes are a deep shade of red and seem to lack pupils (not like the hyuuga, more like Ino). Although his jaw is narrow it seems to be quite average looking. The most shocking feature of his face would defiantly have to be his pointed teeth; something his mother did to make them smaller.

Like his scarf, Kagami’s jacket has been altered so that it is completely sleeveless. It appears to have a zip but this is just a fashion feature, as it only slips over his head. The jacket is a dark grey colour and abnormally plain for a naruto universe piece of clothing, the only symbol on it being a red Sabure clan logo. The bottom is lined with short, white faux fur that provides very little protection from the cold. Kagami’s jacket ends just at the bottom of his waist, giving the appearance that he tucks it in. This appearance is backed up by Kagami wearing his forehead protector as a belt. Around his arms and hands Kagami has adorned a light layer of bandages due to slightly rough training. Kagami wears black gi pants that are quite a bit too large for him. To remedy this, Kagami rolls the up to about ankle height. The pants allow excellent freedom of movement for Kagami and thanks to his forehead protector, they don’t fall down. Both of Kagami’s legs are covered in bandages down to his toes, looking like socks. Foot wear isn’t much of a problem for Kagami as he always wears standard, black shinobi sandals. He also wears a yellow gourd on his back.

Casual:

When not on a mission or anything else business related (usually just when he’s staying at home or going out to get milk), Kagami tends to dress more casually. When in this state Kagami loses all his bandages and gains two sweatbands on his arms that extend from his wrist to his elbow that are striped black and white. Instead of his usual contact lenses Kagami now wears thickish black glasses that have thin white bandages in the middle that keeps them together. For his new outfit Kagami now wears a fairly loose, white button up shirt that is usually left undone. Underneath this he wears a simple black shirt with a white stylized cloud on the chest. Kagami also wears black harem pants solely for comfort and the same black shinobi shoes as in his outfit, although this pair is older and more beat-up. Kagami sleeps in these clothes as well, the only difference being that he takes off his white over shirt and sweatbands.

Personality: Kagami is a very kind and caring person. Although somewhat of a coward, he is always willing to help out his comrades. Looking into his cowardice you will see that this is actually intelligently careful, knowing his limits and not being ashamed to retreat. Kagami is very humble, always making sure to be polite to everyone. In the Sabure clan respect plays a large role and Kagami has good sense of it. He has a great knowledge of herbs and spices, an attribute that allows him to create food sources no matter were he is. This doesn’t mean that he won’t appreciate good food, often going to great lengths to salvage it. Kagami is a coward, plain and simple. He much prefer to run than participate in any kind of fight. He rarely moves in battle due to his sand techniques. Unlike most people his age Kagami rarely gets angry, even when a very stressful problem faces him. He is some-what clingy, often showing very strong bonds with people who have shown kindness to him. His calmness allows him to create relatively good strategies in the heat of battle, although he isn’t really cut out to be a leader. Although Kagamis style revolves around strength, he often allows others to go first and isn’t the type to show off. Kagami has somewhat of a split personality. Whenever he or one of his friends is extremely close to dying or has been insulted on a level of high cruelty, Kagami will sometimes go into a blind fit of rage, adopting a somewhat crazy persona.

Personality Trait: He is a coward, so he is often running away or acting scared.

Clan Information:

Clan Name: Sabure

Clan Location: Suna

Clan Traits: -

Kekkei Genkai:

Sand Manipulation

The members of this clan have a very unique ability to manipulate sand as though it were an extension of themselves in terms of ultimate defense and ultimate offense. It is said to be one of the most dangerous and effective tools a ninja of the sand village can have. The members of this clan have unique chakra with in themselves that allow them to do this, and it is not a mix of two elements, rather it is a new off set basic element and as such is the main element of all ninja who wield it. (This meaning that all ninja in this clan can only have sand and a sub element contrary to advanced element clans which allow three elements.) However, they can not create sand just from their chakra (another difference from advanced elements) and need a source of sand to use their jutsu. For this reason, many find a way to carry sand with them at all times.

This ability is largely tied into their history and founding from the ninja Gaara, the very first Kazekage and founder of the Village Hidden in the Sand as well. The man was imbibed with a demonic beast known as Shikaku, the sand demon. Having the demons influence his entire life, it altered his very genetic structure, granting him the natural ability to manipulate sand with his will at the expense of chakra. Being that the demon provided a mutation on a genetic level, this trait was passed to his children, and the children of his children. Being that this derived from one person alone, and by comparison is a relatively new clan, it is small by comparison to other clans, but is abundant enough to be considered a clan.

Secret Clan Jutsu:

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History:
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The clan started with the man Known as Gaara Sabure, Ironically his last name meaning sand. It is unknown if this was his given last name at birth or a change made later on with the birth of his children and the underlying creation of the clan. At birth the man was imbibed with a demon known as Shukaku who was known to all as the demon of sand. It was a fairly wicked demon, but precautions took by the family of the child and their friends created barriers to which the demon could not come out and control the child, as it would have liked. In desperation the demon tried to fuse itself physically with the boy at a genetic level but was not able to over come his strong will. In the end this only granted him the ability to manipulate the sands of the earth and gave the demon no more control then before.

The man later became known as one of the greatest Shinobi of his time and became the founder of the village in the sand, creating the structures and everything from the desert itself using his powers granted by the accursed demon. He was known as a hero and was one of the most respected founding Kage's. He eventually wed and his wife bore unto him children. Three. These three all showed the natural talent to manipulate the sands and so was revealed that the ability was a dominant trait and that it would be passed down through the ages so long as his children and their children and so on continued to create new life. With the passing of Gaara also came the passing of the demon, and his death day became known as a holiday for a celebration of his life and also the destruction of a threatening demon who was no more.

Clan Details: Open

Rank Information:

Village: Sunakagure

Rank: Genin

Special Information:

Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Wind
Sub: Earth
KKG: Sand

Special Characteristics:

Fits
The character suffers from chronic seizures caused by abnormal electrical impulses in the brain. These violent fits take hold of the character without warning. The character may have suffered brain damage or tumors, though in most cases the cause of the condition will be unknown.

Basic jutsu:

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Taijutsu

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Secret Clan Jutsu:

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Background Information

Post - Academy arc:

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Academy Arc:

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Weapon Template:

Name: Sand Gourd
Quantity: One
Rank: C
Appearance:
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Special Abilities/Characteristics: This gourd is primarily used to hold the sand that Kagami uses for his jutsu. The gourd, including the sand, weighs about thirty kilos. Not only can the sand be released through the cork, but also through the middle, as the whole thing can come apart from there. The gourd contains his own chakra molded sand, containing about thirty kilos worth of sand.
Origin: There isn’t really much to say about this gourd. Kagami bought it at his house from his father.

Name: Knives and forks
Quantity: twelve of each
Rank: E
Appearance
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Special Abilities/Characteristics:

These knives and forks are really all that you would think they are, relatively blunt weapons that only really work when cooking. The forks are useful for blocking kunai, however, and the knives are heavier that your average shuriken, so they work well for deflection.
Origin:

Kagami suffered a lot of unfair abuse from the villagers. The general store owner wouldn't even sell him basic kunai and shuriken. To remedy this Kagami stole some from his parent house, much to the dismay of his folks. They actually work quite well, and he has grown rather fond of them.

Rp sample:

Kagami rubbed his eyes, his vision blurred due to the sudden light change. He was in the most bizarre place he had ever laid eyes on. From what he could see, Kagami was in a cemetery that had seemingly endless rows of tombstones. There was a large, stylized cross as the main feature. A large river ran down the middle, dividing the cemetery into two parts, rich and poor. Two young men, only about sixteen, where standing on either side. They where, in Kagami’s opinion, the strangest people he had ever seen. The one on the left had a hood covering his face, although Kagami could see glowing yellow eyes glaring through the darkness. His whole body, in fact, was covered by a large trench coat, his scaled hands where the only things visible. Kagami began to freak out. Where was he? Why was he here? Although he was also hooded, the man on the right was wearing a black, pinstriped suit. He was shorter than the other one, and didn’t have yellow eyes, causing Kagami to assume he was a human. He had his arm outstretched, holding a mangy black vulture with a large tuft of black feathers on its head. The bird eyeballed Kagami with glowing red eyes, cawing menacingly. The taller man began walking forward. When he stepped into the moonlight, Kagami became very worried indeed. His face seemed to be comprised of several animals, although Kagami could only recognize a scaled cheek and two, still glowing snake eyes. The man dramatically through his arms to the side and threw his head back. Suddenly, a large amount of lightning began forming in his hands, shaping themselves into two small metal rings. The other man did something much more bizarre. He opened his mouth to a ninety-degree angle and swallowed his bird. The man was clearly proficient in medical ninjutsu as he healed his broken jawbones afterwards. Slowly, almost one by one, midnight black feathers began sprouting all over his body, along with a large, grey beak. This was all starting to become a little too much for Kagami. He stumbled too his feet and began walking slowly backwards. The birdman saw this and beckoned to his friend, “Sora, you may attack now, if you wish”. With that Sora leapt forward, his chakrams twirling around his two index fingers. He was clearly a shinobi, although Kagami couldn’t tell from which country. Kagami clasped his hands together, forming the ram handseal. “Sand shuriken!” He yelled as a three sand shaped weapons where thrown at Sora .. Sora laughed, spinning his chakrams faster and sending visible electric pulses through them. He then threw them through the air with such force that they cut the Sand in two. Kagami stood, staring with a very nervous look in his eyes and yelled “Sand shield”, causing the blade to grow about twelve feet in length, allowing Kagami to block the incoming Chakrams. Unfortnatley for Sora, he had no way of getting his chakams back, and was currently unarmed. This, however, didn’t seem to worry him. Kagami felt something on the back of his neck, and shuddered. His friend was behind him, holding the very same tombstone that once stood in the middle of the cemetery. There was an almighty flash as he brought it down on Kagami’s head. Every thing went black. Kagami shot up in his bed, sweat poring of his whole body. It was only a dream.


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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Sabure [Sunakure Genin] (Completed) Kagami Sabure [Sunakure Genin] (Completed) EmptyFri 19 Feb 2010, 12:22 am

Make all links into Images.

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Name: Henge no Jutsu – Partial Transformation Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Another variation on the common technique, this jutsu allows Kagami to change his appearance partially, such as changing his arm into a blade.
-Would it become the actual blade or no?
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Sabure [Sunakure Genin] (Completed) Kagami Sabure [Sunakure Genin] (Completed) EmptyFri 19 Feb 2010, 5:11 am

At the moment you dont know any of your clan jutsu because you dont have the justu in the jutsu section for your character, having it in the clan secition doesnt count because that is just all the jutsu clan members can use and is not subjected to rank. You need to copy and past the clan jutsu to your characters jutsu section as well, unless your just planing on training for all your clan jutsu, which is fine. Also please change the links to pictures
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Done
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Sabure [Sunakure Genin] (Completed) Kagami Sabure [Sunakure Genin] (Completed) EmptySun 21 Feb 2010, 8:18 am

Regarding your elements yours is like this;

Quote :
Main: Sand
Sub: N/A

It should be something like this; (Note: You can have earth and wind either way)

Quote :
Main: Wind
Sub: Earth
KKG: Sand

- You have some quote/spoiler issues with your jutsu that you might want to sort out.

- Regarding the sand Gourd you would need to state its connection with your charak and how the sand can be release. Also how much sand it can hold.

- Lol Knives and Forks, that made me laugh. ^^
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Edited. I put the amount in weight.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Sabure [Sunakure Genin] (Completed) Kagami Sabure [Sunakure Genin] (Completed) EmptyTue 23 Feb 2010, 3:34 am

Where's your history?
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Sabure [Sunakure Genin] (Completed) Kagami Sabure [Sunakure Genin] (Completed) EmptyThu 25 Feb 2010, 2:32 pm

Kumo is closed. You need to wait till it reopens which could be a little while yet or apply to another village
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I believe Sabure is Suna only, though you may use Meikiri for a somewhat similar effect more related to Kirinogakure.
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History could use a little work, but as the techniques and stuff seem normal, and the application overalll decent, approved.
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