Mors Atra's... Poetry Corner?

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So, I have a bit of a hobby that usually revolves around making words rhyme. Sometimes in ways pretty novel, and on other days, as sour as a lime. I may get around to showing off my work, for those of you who'd like to lurk. In any case, now that I've set up this place, perhaps I can save a little face, and craft some things fitting your pace?

So, name the who or the what, and once I can be bothered to get off my butt, I'll see if I can make something for the cut.

And just for your information, I crafted that little demonstration, in less time than it'd take for you to look up "Tarnation!"

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Six miles down
In a broken well
Nowhere to go
But straight to hell

Old Grimm Bones
Got his hand on my back
I'm a long long way
Off the beaten track

This little light
Ain't gonna hold
Won't be long
'Afore it gets real cold

Six miles down
In a broken hell
No-way to go
That'll end well

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I like it a lot :3

Could you do one for Uchiha, Itachi, please.

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I know I know best out of all of them
I know for you enough is never enough
For you for you the horizon is always farther again
Every mountain is just a short bluff

You're never satisfied
You've never settled on "tried"
You're far out in the zone
Please don't leave me all alone

I know you'll never settle for less than reaching the stars
You've got a fire in your eyes that says you're gonna go far
Wait for me
You're the only one I trust
Wait for me
Don't leave me choking on the dust
Wait for me
Wait for me

I know I know that you care
Even if it's buried deep within
You know you know that I'm still your friend
But friendship can't live on air

You're never sorry for what you do
You've always twisted it about you
You're way out past the ozone
And now I'm here all alone

I know you'll never settle for less than reaching the stars
You've got a fire in your eyes that says you're gonna go far
Wait for me
You're the only one I trust
Wait for me
Don't leave me choking on the dust
Wait for me
Wait for me

I'm tired of how it's injust
You've always done what you must
Well now you're on your own
I'm tired of being all alone

I know you'll never settle for less than reaching the stars
You've got a fire in your eyes that says you're gonna go far
Wait for me
You were the only one with my trust
Wait for me
You left me crying in the dust
Wait for me
Wait for me
Wait for me
Wait for me........

Imagine it to whatever musical tune suits you. I think "Fireflight" works rather well.

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"Say a requiem for the broken hearted
Those still living yet clearly departed
They walk among us in a hollow husk,
Ignoring the grave that's claimed to their soul
Ignoring the stench of their sorrowful musk
Ignoring that they will never be one and whole

What is it to love, but to want
What is it to love, but to desire
And what is pain, a physical affront
To that of being unwanted, a soul fire

Gristly broken bones and rent flesh
Congealing blood and organs still fresh
Shattered bodies and living dead
Sweet sweet agony come to a head
One and all a meager pain
Compared to that which I reign

Broken bones may be set amend
Flesh re-knit with time to spend
Blood be brewed fresh anew
Organs shoved back within you

Time may best all wounds
All physical aches and pains
But even against the entropic hound
This agony will never wane

To have loved and lost is a mercy. To never love at all is bliss. To know love, and to know it will never be reciprocated, is to be a corpse yet still breathing."