An odd request.

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Okay, so before I begin, I'd just like to say that when these jutsu are approved, may the approved unlock my application for me myself to edit, because I wish to edit the jutsu format a little. I promise I won't add anything I shouldn't and shizz like that because you'd be on me like a kid on a porno. So, please? :3

Name: Genjutsu Kai
Type: General Skill
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: The user stops the flow of chakra in their body, and then applies an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the genjutsu caster's chakra. It can be used to break genjutsu of an equal or below rank. Other methods to escape genjutsu are also available, such as inflicting pain upon oneself to break free.

Name: Utsusemi no Jutsu
Type: General Skill
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: In order to hide their location and not disclose their position, the user projects their voice by resonating everything they say from all possible directions with this jutsu. The user can make it sound as if they are moving around whilst talking, or even make it sound like more than one person is talking.

Name: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei
Type: General Skill
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: Utilizing chakra, a ninja is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant or nearby bomb tag. This can also be used to deactivate any explosive tags in the vicinity of the user, which were set to explode by means other than through the use of this jutsu.

Name: Kawara Shuriken
Type: General Skill
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: This technique requires chakra to pressurize nearby tiles in an area. The tiles are then levitated and hurled over towards the opponent, spinning at fast speeds similar to shuriken. This technique is especially useful when fighting in urban terrains, such as on rooftops.

Name: Chakuranōdo [Chakra Concentration]
Type: General Skill
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: This skill can only really be mastered after the user has mastered Ki Nobori no Shugyō [Tree Climbing Practice] and Suimen Hokō no Gyō [Water Surface Walking Practice]. The user successfully concentrates chakra to one part of their body, be it for increased strength or control.

Training topic for all these jutsu can be found here: https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/hokage-mountain-f172/make-the-hokage-proud-training-topic-wip-t960.htm#8576

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Quote :: Name: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei
Type: General Skill
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: Utilizing chakra, a ninja is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant or nearby bomb tag. This can also be used to deactivate any explosive tags in the vicinity of the user, which were set to explode by means other than through the use of this jutsu.

Unless they are your own tags, this has been deemed a Fuuinjutsu skill. Its name on both my jutsu app and Hugh's character app is Unfriendly Activation.

Chakra Concentration requires Hage's opinion, and most likely will be denied.

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Most definitely looks like Eijutsu since you have a physical attribute increase of such a high level by concentrating chakra into your entire body's cells. The way its presented, I can't find an alternative to suggest that could achieve the same effect without it being Eijutsu as well so you're better off removing it if you're not a medic. Its also more of an A Rank tech than B.

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Caranore wrote:

Quote :: Name: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei
Type: General Skill
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: Utilizing chakra, a ninja is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant or nearby bomb tag. This can also be used to deactivate any explosive tags in the vicinity of the user, which were set to explode by means other than through the use of this jutsu.

Unless they are your own tags, this has been deemed a Fuuinjutsu skill. Its name on both my jutsu app and Hugh's character app is Unfriendly Activation.

Chakra Concentration requires Hage's opinion, and most likely will be denied.

They are my own tags. xD

And why will it be denied? I put in as many drawbacks as possible so it wouldn't be OP.

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Edited.

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Bump?

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Koe no Mozouhin: This technique is rather vague and I don't like it. How would this go past a normal humans ability to make a sound if it doesn't use chakra?

Kusai: I'm gonna flat out deny this. First of all its says how this is done is unknown, and then it can even fool the sharpest noses.

Hakken no Jutsu: This would be either medical or a trait of the Inuzuka clan.

Chakuranōdo: Like Hage said, Eijutsu.

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Z wrote:: Koe no Mozouhin: This technique is rather vague and I don't like it. How would this go past a normal humans ability to make a sound if it doesn't use chakra?

Kusai: I'm gonna flat out deny this. First of all its says how this is done is unknown, and then it can even fool the sharpest noses.

Hakken no Jutsu: This would be either medical or a trait of the Inuzuka clan.

Chakuranōdo: Like Hage said, Eijutsu.

Koe no Mozouhin: The technique is on loads of other people's apps, and has been accepted. I don't see a problem with it. I think it's canon and it doesn't have much of a description to it.

Kusai: Fair enough.

Hakken no Jutsu: Why would it be medical? Exerting chakra out of your body doesn't seem like a medical skill to me.

Chakuranōdo: I think Hage was talking about the jutsu I already deleted, which was [Complete Chakra Control]. Chakuranōdo is just a ninja skill, being able to concentrate chakra to points of the body to deal more damage.

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Koe no Mozouhin: Link me to where it is on LN.

Hekken no jutsu would be medical because it uses chakra to increase one of the bodies senses, which is a criteria for eijutsu.

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Koe isnt a leafninja jutsu, its one I found on a site. Its kind of like a ventriloquisst technique based on its description.

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Z wrote:: Koe no Mozouhin: Link me to where it is on LN.

Hekken no jutsu would be medical because it uses chakra to increase one of the bodies senses, which is a criteria for eijutsu.

Okay, I didn't know that. I'll remove Hekken.

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If its not on LN I wouldn't count it as cannon, I don't trust any of the other Naruto sites like Narupedia and others.

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

I can't use LN, the layout is all weird.

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

Regardless, LN comes straight from databooks, making it the most accurate.

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Okay, I've started using Leaf Ninja - so I know this might sound stupid, but can you recap what needs to be edited for this to be approved? :3

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Bump.

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Z wrote:: Koe no Mozouhin: This technique is rather vague and I don't like it. How would this go past a normal humans ability to make a sound if it doesn't use chakra?

Thats the only thing

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Eh, in order to get this approved, I just removed it. Razz

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Zapproved