Custom Nara Jutsu {Done!}

Age : 28 Posts : 55

Name: Kage Tsume ~ Shadow Claws
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-A
Element: Shadow {Nara KKG}
Description: The User pulls out pieces of They're own shadow or something(someone) else's shadow and they Form sharp 5 inch talons on each hand. These are on they're fingertips, and continue to go down until they the wrist. They can be used to slash or stab. They are flexible, So you can move the Claws as if they were your own hands. The jutsu only stays up for five posts, Each post it gets Weaker and Duller until they Finally fall off. After one turn the sharpness of the blade goes down until it reaches 3 ranks below it's own. So C will keep going down until it reaches E then they will fall off, B will fall off at D, A will fall off at C.

C-Rank ~ The claws are sharp enough to rip through flesh and puncture but not much more, If striked more then once it will rip through muscle but it won't get any farther.

B-Rank ~ The claws are Sharp enough to rip through Flesh and bone in three swipe, If used for stabbing will make a hole right through the body.

A-Rank ~The claws are Strong and Sharp enough to cut straight through a tree and the Claw length is extended to 7 Inches.

Link: [When making new jutsus you must train them. Read the Training Page in rules. post the link here for admins to check]
Medical use/Bastardized use: N/A

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Name:Kage no Kabe - Wall of Shadows
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Element:N/A
Description:Upon completion of the needed handseals[6], Tatsuya will stretch out his shadow and increase its and a completely black wall will rise from his shadow. This wall can reach up to five feet wide, five feet tall, and one foot thick. It can withstand two C-ranked attacks (depending, of course) before breaking. When it breaks, it will shatter like glass and simply sink into the earth. This wall is very simple, thus Tatsuya can simply return his shadow back to him after raising the wall. However, the wall will disperse by itself after three turns, regardless if it was damaged or not. He can raise a wall up to 1 meters away from him, but all the other effects remain and the wall will convert back to shadow after three turns are over.

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Age : 28 Posts : 55

Doone.

Completion Buump~

Age : 31 Posts : 2547

Kage Tsume ~ Shadow Claws - Ripping through flesh and bone with one swipe at B rank with enough force to create a large hole in someone? Remove from B and that to the A rank effects.

Kage Bakudan ~ Shadow Bomb - How do you make a shadow explode and release black smoke?

Age : 28 Posts : 55

Last Temptation wrote:: Kage Tsume ~ Shadow Claws - Ripping through flesh and bone with one swipe at B rank with enough force to create a large hole in someone? Remove from B and that to the A rank effects.

- I changed it to 3 swipes to cut through Flesh and bone.

Last Temptation wrote:: Kage Bakudan ~ Shadow Bomb - How do you make a shadow explode and release black smoke?

- I removed the part about the black smoke.
- Changed it so that it doesn't explode but unfurls a Kage mane no Jutsu(Meaning When it makes contact with something it unfurls and The line that is usually made when using kage mane no jutsu is made but there are four of them.)

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

Kage Tsume ~ Shadow Claws: Make it either an offensive jutsu are a defensive jutsu. As It is right now, its an offensive jutsu with some unneeded defensive uses thrown in there for the hell of it, making it somewhat OP.

Age : 28 Posts : 55

Thought I could get away with it, Anyways

Edited.~

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

If it gets duller and weaker by post, what is the difference per post it is used?

Age : 28 Posts : 55

Added.

Age : 28 Posts : 55

>.>... I added another Jutsu, If you don't mind.

Age : 30 Posts : 66

I've seen these somewhere before.. oh yeah Ingoo anywho I digress.

for wall of shadows, give a random number for handsigns if you say needed handsigns just to give a general idea of timing. since timing is everything in a battle :]

Age : 28 Posts : 55

Oho, Sly your a Mod I see ;]. Anyway Added a Random Number

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Age : 30 Posts : 66

I'd think that Shadow bomb would be a higher rank then Kage Mane, which is C rank *I believe* make this at least B rank.

I don't really see anything else wrong with other things, but I'll have someone that's good at checking jutsu make sure everything is in check.

Age : 28 Posts : 55

Removed kage Bomb as I cannot have B-ranked jutsu

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

Tatsuya Nara wrote:: The Claws can Transport Kage Mane No jutsu, The user must use both jutsu and then if the claws even touch the enemy the jutsu will get set into effect.

That makes the claws more powerful then they should be, allowing them to transfer such a lethal jutsu.