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NuclearTreerat
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PostSubject: Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] EmptyWed 07 Aug 2013, 9:22 pm

Mission Title: Killer Kunochi
Mission Type: Generic
Mission Location: Fire Country
Shinobi Requirement: S-Rank
Mission Rank: S
Mission Objective: You/Your team are in serious trouble. In your last mission your killed a B Rank Missing Nin among others not realizing his lover was far more dangerous or prone to extreme violence. The Kunochi in question is an S Rank Three Tomoe Uchiha and she has no one intention, killing those responsible in the most painful manner possible. She has threatened to attack the village if you don’t meet her in battle. You must journey to the valley of end to meet her and end her suffering. (Note: Her eyes are not harvestable)
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NPC
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Name: Uchiha, Sakura (alias "The Black Rose" and "Washboard")
Letter Rank: S (205 CP)
Specialty: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Fire
Combat Style: Typical of those who focus on the chakra-arts, Sakura is rather weak (by shinobi standards), her physical strength and speed being comparable to fit civilians. Thus when forced into close combat she relies heavily on her dojutsu to provide the time required to avoid an opponents attacks while her own attacks consist almost entirely of kicks and the use of kunai, dagger, and ninjato. Her preferred method of combat however is the tried-and-true strategy of trapping an opponent in a genjutsu, preferably one that causes extreme anguish, then roasting her victim with katon techniques.

Special Characteristics: Large Chakra Capacity, Katon Master, Clan Master, Black Market, Yin Release, Expert Infiltrator
Description: A former kunochi of Konoha, Uchiha Sakura went rogue from her home village at some point shortly after becoming a Tokubetsu Jounin follow the unsolved murder of her only surviving parent (her mother), resurfacing years later as a dangerous missing-nin selling her services to the highest bidder.  result

Physically she is rather unimposing,  having the typical Uchiha black eyes and hair  and barely topping 5 feet 4 inches with a figure best described as slender or perhaps athletic. Being a late-bloomer has resulted in her being highly sensitive to comments about her lack of large "assets", a deficiency that lead to the derogatory nickname of "washboard".  A lack she takes great pains to conceal with her usual attire of a blue sleeveless zip-up vest, matching spandex shorts, and a white apron-like skirt with identically colored elbow guards and black gloves.

While normally projecting the stoic "in control" appearance characteristic of Uchiha, Sakura's service record during her time in Konoha made mention that her temper was highly volatile, make the girl prone to fits of rage when certain triggers are pulled. Among those are her nickname form the Academy, when a woman with a larger bust compares Sakura's own to hers, and when something (or someone) she views as hers is taken from her. One of the last being  her lover; an otherwise unremarkable B-rank missing-nin from Kumogakure posing as a sailor on a Kiri privateer that was part of the flotilla that attempted to annex part of Sea Countries territorial waters. An ill-fated venture when one Hinamori Toshiro sank the ships and massacred nearly all the crews including Sakura's beau. Now her overriding desire is to erase her lover's killer from existence, going as far as threatening to wage all-out war on Konoha if he does not face her at the Valley of the End.

Kekkai Genkai:
Sharigan
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Jutsu:
Academy
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Uchiha Techniques:
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Non-Elemental Jutsu:
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Katon Jutsu:
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Genjutsu:
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Taijutsu:
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Weaponry Jutsu:
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PostSubject: Re: Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] EmptyWed 07 Aug 2013, 10:51 pm


  • Special Characteristics: Large Chakra Capacity, Katon Master, Clan Master, Black Market, Yin Release, Expert Infiltrator
  • Name:
    Rank: A
    Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu
    Medium: Eye Contact
    Range: -
    Requires: At least Three-Tomoe
    Element: -
    Description:
    Chakra Cost: 


COOKIE! Strong completion of this NPC. Did you create this, or is there some topic full of generic NPCs that I'm heretofore unaware of? Because if the former case, I gotta check to see if Mangekyou NPCs are allowed.
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PostSubject: Re: Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] EmptyWed 07 Aug 2013, 11:35 pm

That's the opposition so its anything goes. Especially since the misision expressly requires that the opposition have the Mangekyo. As for why the blank - because I MAY let someone npc her for extra points and if that is the case I may or may not hand let them have the Susanoo depending on if I think they they'll abuse it or not.
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PostSubject: Re: Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] EmptyWed 07 Aug 2013, 11:54 pm

Still, I'd like to double-check and make sure. Hell, by the guide, we're not even allowed to have specialized clan NPCs, like from the Uchiha clan, so it's beyond me why there's even a mission that requires an Uchiha NPC e_e

So the unquenchable eats-fire flame that burns for seven day/nights, and the most powerful illusion in the world, (Which will cost you 100CP to break out of if you can even Kai it, mind, since you so thoughtfully gave her Yin Release) are okay, but the nigh-invulnerable armor is overkill.

Also- and I assure you, this is me speaking purely as a fellow player, who has himself spent some time crafting meticulously detailed NPCs- Sakura Uchiha. Just... Why. Why you do dis.
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PostSubject: Re: Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] EmptyThu 08 Aug 2013, 12:34 am


Sharingan Training System wrote:
Mangkyō Sharingan

    One of the final stages of the Sharingan in Narutoverse terms, the Mangekyō Sharingan is said to hold unique powers that defy the impossible and create utter chaos on the battlefield. Because of this destructive power, the fourth stage of the Sharingan will be blocked off from any Sharingan - wielding character to gain. Thus, the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan will also be unobtainable. To reiterate, the three tomoe form is the final stage of the Sharingan on Ultimate Shinobi and the Mangekyō Sharingan will not be possible to gain.
As interesting as a take it is for a mission involving the Mangekyō Sharingan, with the current limitations in place we simply cannot allow you to create an NPC that harbours this evolved form of the eyes. Sorry to burst your bubble like this but it's simply following site rules. You're more than welcome to create one with a three tomoe Sharingan, however that's your absolute limit, as the Mangekyō Sharingan is non existent on Ultimate Shinobi. For now at least...
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NuclearTreerat
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PostSubject: Re: Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] EmptyThu 08 Aug 2013, 4:32 am

... then might I suggest removing mention of that ability from the mission opposition? Since the misison, which is generic, expressly states a Mangekyo (ie the MS) I assumed that the opposition - which is what that hostile NPC is - would be required to have it. So I'll put it this why. Did you just drop the ball when it came to updating the generic missions to follow the rules, or are people incapable of understanding that the NPC created is the enemy?
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PostSubject: Re: Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] EmptyThu 08 Aug 2013, 12:12 pm


Apparently we dropped the ball. The mission objective has now been updated to state that the Nukenin is now a Three Tomoe wielding Uchiha rather than a Mangekyo Sharingan wielding one. Apologies for the inconvenience in all this, though we'll still need to see the NPC's Arsenal changed appropriately.

Generic Konohagakure Missions wrote:
Mission Title: Killer Kunochi
Mission Type: Generic
Mission Location: Fire Country
Shinobi Requirement: S-Rank
Mission Rank: S
Mission Objective: You/Your team are in serious trouble. In your last mission your killed a B Rank Missing Nin among others not realizing his lover was far more dangerous or prone to extreme violence. The Kunochi in question is an S Rank Three Tomoe Uchiha and she has one intention, killing those responsible in the most painful manner possible. She has threatened to attack the village if you don’t meet her in battle. You must journey to the valley of end to meet her and end her suffering. (Note: Her eyes are not harvestable)
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NuclearTreerat
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Now can I get the final official approval so myself and Winged can start this?
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PostSubject: Re: Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] Cleaning up loose ends hurts [Misison, generic] EmptyThu 08 Aug 2013, 7:43 pm

You've still gotta edit out the MS abilities on your NPC.
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Changes are made.
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Approved for Missioning.
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