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Aries
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| Subject: Bokudo Mon 10 May 2010, 3:32 am | |
| Poison Name: Bokudo (IDK english name) Rank: B Poison Description: Solid State: Liquid State: The is a poison technique created by Torein himself. By collecting up his venomus mucus Torein then spits a short range(5meters) poison that disrupts the opponent chakra system. The chakra system that is poisoned will only be disrupted for as long as the poision last. This poision first contact the skin breaking it then works it's way straight to the chakra stream disrupting it fot 2 post. By disrupting I mean it makes it near impossible for them to perform jutsu normally and when they do they use twice the chakra. Moderatly quick this poison doesn't actually react until 1 post after being used. Gaseous State: Poison Effect(s): [ Post 0 / Turn of Infection/Injection] Nothing happens at all [ Post 1 / Effect] Nothing happens at all [ Post 2 / Effect] The opponent chakra become disrupted rendering them from using jutsu properly [ Post 4 / Effect etc] The opponent regains the ability to use their chakra correctly
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Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Mon 10 May 2010, 9:58 pm | |
| Hmm.... A B rank ninjutsu that.... stuns chakra? I'm not sure how this would work, or why.. |
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₡amisado
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Mon 10 May 2010, 10:12 pm | |
| Its not a ninjutsu, its a poison |
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Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Mon 10 May 2010, 10:19 pm | |
| I meant to say poison. regardless, how would a poison affect chakra? It works by targetting things like nerves, or organs, or blood... |
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Aries
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Tue 11 May 2010, 3:32 am | |
| What do u mean Patty |
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Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Wed 12 May 2010, 12:47 am | |
| What chemical affects chakra? |
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Aries
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Wed 12 May 2010, 4:29 am | |
| Well patty I see what ur saying but it's just like the Hyuuga.....How does simple pokes from their finger tips cut off the opponent chakra supply....noone really knows but it just a thing they can do...........
My clan naturally has their own Venom/poison they create to do such a thing.... Instead of aiming for blood, Nerves or organ this poison particually aims for the Chakra stream.....
I'd perfer if I could have this as a jutsu* If that's possible please let me kno. |
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Travis
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Wed 12 May 2010, 6:09 am | |
| Actually the Hyuuga is known, by injecting their own chakra into the opponent's chakra system, cutting off the flow at the Tenk-whatsyoucallit.
To use this as a jutsu you'd need Hyuuga Eyes to actually see the chakra system, I'm unsure how'd you make this a jutsu. |
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Aries
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Wed 12 May 2010, 12:14 pm | |
| I thought that was a given considering my character was spitting this poison......I thought that it was a given that my chakra would be in it the poison since my clan naturally produce this poison/venom. As for the the poison why can't can't it attract to the charka stream? Does it have to go straight to organ, blood, or nerves? I mean this is a fictional RP, how about we step out the box of RL things. |
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Travis
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Wed 12 May 2010, 11:49 pm | |
| But how. You need to explain how a poison attacks the Chakra System. |
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Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Thu 13 May 2010, 1:09 am | |
| precisely. Why would your poison home in on it? What makes it function? |
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Aries
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Thu 13 May 2010, 11:33 pm | |
| changed |
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Aries
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Fri 14 May 2010, 9:48 pm | |
| did I get it right this time patty |
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Aries
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Sun 16 May 2010, 5:54 am | |
| bumpo....come on guys |
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₡amisado
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Mon 17 May 2010, 4:02 am | |
| I still don't see how an organic poison could mess with the chakra system. |
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Aries
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Mon 17 May 2010, 4:30 am | |
| I kno Z but we also don't kno how the Aburame bug feed on chakra nor do we kno ho Kisame's blade divours it....it just does and we accept that......So why can't this poison be the same way
becuz we need logical RL explinations for everything here it limits our creativity due to the fact that this is RP for and animated series.....
I still don't understand how medical ninja touch people hand heal all of someone wounds but i accept it...and so does everyone else.......
You can't compare this to RL or expect for me to explain how my poison reaches the chakra system using RL antics |
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₡amisado
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Mon 17 May 2010, 1:37 pm | |
| Fix the grammer, also
fluc·tu·ate: to change continually; shift back and forth; vary irregularly: The price of gold fluctuated wildly last month.
Fluctuate should be used to show a change between one thing to another, like things can fluctuate from one wall to the other. |
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Aries
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Tue 18 May 2010, 2:52 am | |
| edited...
hmmm... Z I did use it right...thats exactly what I meant. The poison make it where the opponens chakra is unstable, making it hard for them to use jutsu.....and when they do use the jutsu they usually use twice as much chakra |
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₡amisado
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Tue 18 May 2010, 3:33 am | |
| Fluctuating would be changing from one thing to another, its not a synonym to vibrating, which is just shaking. |
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Aries
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Tue 18 May 2010, 3:41 am | |
| done |
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Aries
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Thu 20 May 2010, 2:25 am | |
| bumps |
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₡amisado
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Fri 21 May 2010, 1:31 pm | |
| For how easily transmitted this poison is and its effect, three posts is too long. |
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John
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| Subject: Re: Bokudo Fri 18 Jun 2010, 4:37 am | |
| Archived due to incompliance. Should you wish for this topic to be moved back, PM me. |
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