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| Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) | |
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Kotaro
Age : 29 Posts : 26
| Subject: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Tue 17 Sep 2013, 10:19 am | |
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Clan Name: Kajiya
Location: Kaminari no Kuni
Signature Traits: Highly reproductive, care deeply for family, and tend to all carry a head of naturally messy snowy white hair. Most of the members choose to fight only when threatened, leading to a low amount of Kajiya shinobi. When they choose to fight, they fight as a family. Primary Chakra Nature- Doton Secondary Chakra Nature- Suiton Tertiary Chakra Nature- Odeition(Sludge Release)
Kekkei Genkai: This Kekkei Genkai gives the Kajiya member the ability to control a unique sludgy substance with qualities of Doton and Suiton, called Odeiton. Making their techniques pack the same punch a normal Doton attack would, but with the versatility and fluidity of water. Another advantage this Kekkei Genkai has is the thickness and impact absorbing nature of the sludge gives it minor resistance to taijutsu and blunt weapons. The can also integrate their chakra with the earth freely making it change forms from solid rock to sludge and sludge to rock. This Kekkei Genkai was formed from an adaption they made due to being nomadic. Moving so much they constantly had to prepare new land for farming and found the sludge was rich in minerals, and their chakra also made the plants healthier than most. With this unique new soil(in a sense) farming became something they specialized in.
Setbacks The major setback of the Kekkei Genkai is its chakra expensive qualities. Most of its jutsu require a special sludge only the Kajiya clan can create. This sludge must be set prior to an attack being made.
History: The Kajiya clan is a fairly small clan that originated in Kumogakure. The clan is the product of two merged clans. The two would always battle the other for land, resources, and various other commodities in the mountain ranges. One day the leaders decided to end the constant fighting and made their off spring marry into the other clan becoming one. Many did not like this idea or could not tolerate the other clan and slowly the numbers diminished. The ones left over truly cared for one another and valued the ideals of not fighting.
They eventually left the mountains due to them becoming barren, and discovered large plot of recently owned land that became available. Quickly they began re-establishing their small buildings and homes settled down and made a small little village. This village had more than enough space, for their many children to play and grow and room for the older members to grow food and enjoy other leisure activities. They are a poor clan, but they value family and the small things in life. So even when they do obtain large amounts of money they stick together and try to spread the wealth. They have stuck to their nonviolent ways of living taking the title of non-aggressive clan. But when angered they will fight back and they fight as a family. Not always partaking in battle the ninja world has little information on their abilities.
Odeiton Sludge takes time to harden, and follow this format. 1st Post User Jutsu 2nd Post Opponent's post 3rd Post back to user and sludge hardens.
- Clan Jutsu:
- Nazo no Busshitsu(Mysterious Substance):
Name: Nazo no Busshitsu(Mysterious Substance) Rank: D-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid Element: Odeiton(Sludge) Description: Being the most basic jutsu from the Kajiya clan, the user forms the ram handseal, before placing their palms onto the earth. They then infuse their chakra into the very earth, creating an area of sludge varying in size, depending on rank. D-Rank: Can only affect an area the size of a puddle. Usually used the trap feet. D-Rank Chakra Cost: 3 C-Rank: 8 meters diameter. 2 meters deep. Chakra Cost: 7 B-Rank: 10 meters diameter. 5 meter deep. Chakra Cost: 15 A-Rank: 15 meters diameter. 10 meters deep. Chakra Cost: 23
- Odei Ōto(Sludge Vomit):
Name: Odei Ōto(Sludge Vomit) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Odeiton(Sludge) Description: This is the base to utilizing most of the Kajiya jutsu. The user enchants their chakra with their unique Odeiton. They then vomit a monstrous mass of sludgy substance from their mouth imbued with their chakra, at the opponent if they desire. If this attack lands it will slowly begin to solidify binding them.(Solidifies on 3rd Post to give opportunity to defend.) Being heavier than topsoil and subsoil, if it misses it seeps into the earth to rest onto the bedrock layer below. When needed this sludge acts as the ammo for the Odeiton arsenal of jutsu. Each jutsu from this list that is noted "*Requires source of Odei Ōto's Sludge." can only be accessed after this sludge has been set. Each jutsu uses half of the amount of sludge. Each Kajiya Bunshin use 1/4 of the sludge. This sludge can not be carried in any container or scroll for storage purposes. Chakra Cost: 6
- Kajiya Bunshin(Kajiya Clone):
Name: Kajiya Bunshin(Kajiya Clone) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Odeiton (Sludge) Duration: 4 Post Description: *Requires source of Odei Ōto's Sludge. Kajiya Bunshin is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes 1/4 of Odei Ōto's Sludge to create one Kajiya Bunshin . Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Kajiya Bunshin has the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target, but none utilizing chakra. The range of the clone is limited however, it can travel no further than 10 meters from the original body. When struck, it will absorb the attack. Then revert to its blackish tone, the Kajiya member can then control the sludge in attempt to subdue the target.(Sludge hardens on 3rd Post, after opponents response.) Chakra Cost: 8 Per Clone Chakra cost per post: 2 - Odei Ranji(Sludge Lunge):
Name: Odei Ranji(Sludge Lunge) Rank:C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid ( 5 - 10m ) Element: Odeiton (Sludge) Description: *Requires source of Odei Ōto's Sludge. The user forms the Ram handseal and places their palms against the earth. They can then manipulate any sludge laid on the battlefield to form hands made of sludge in attempt to subdue an enemy. The hands form in front of the user, and are about 1 foot thick. Upon successfully grabbing the target, the hand(s) will them down, allowing limited movement.(After the 2nd post, that being te opponents post, the hands harden.) Chakra Cost: 8 - Odei Ase(Sludge Sweat):
Name: Odei Ase(Sludge Sweat) Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: Oseiton(Sludge) Duration: 5 Post Description: This jutsu requires no handseals to perform, making it a very useful technique. The Kajiya member builds up their unique chakra, then forces their perspiration system to ooze the strange material out of their pores giving them an inch of sludge armor; this armor is unnoticeable, but it does moderately weigh down the user. The sweat does take time to gather a decent amount, so the Kajiya shinobi cannot instantly form this armor. But this technique is rarely used for its defense . With this layer of thick ooze they now have access to any weapons or body extensions they can imagine. These weapons do have a limit on size, due to the limited amount of sludge, and have no extra abilities. The down side to this technique is that sense the perspiration system is forced to create sweat one becomes quickly dehydrated. These weapons are only as powerful as B-ranked weapons. If the weapon clashes with a B-Ranked or higher Kenjutsu or Raiton Jutsu the weapon will break. Chakra Cost: 12 Chakra Per post: 3 - Chikyū no Chēn(Chains of Earth):
Name: Chikyū no Chēn(Chains of Earth) Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid ( 5 - 10m ) Element: Odeiton (Sludge) Description: *Requires source of Odei Ōto's Sludge. After performing a quick combination of handseals, the user places his/her palms onto their earth surface of choice. Eight chains travel through the ground, leaving a small trail of cracks on the surface of earth they are traveling in. The chains then emerge from the ground, attacking the target from eight separate directions in attempt to bind him. If successful, they target will find themselves bound in thick earth chains forced onto the ground. Chains automatically harden on 3rd Post. If the target evades the attack the chains turn into a puddle of the mysterious sludge. Taijutsu users captured in this jutsu A-Rank or higher may break the chains themselves. Chakra Cost: 12 - Ashura no Gurēsu(Asura's Grace):
Name: Ashura no Gurēsu(Asura's Grace) Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Odeiton(Sludge) Duration: 4 Posts Description: After performing a string of handseals, the user must prepare the jutsu with their hands placed on their large source of earth bleeding their chakra into the earth (Takes 1 post). After preparation the user forms the ram seal to utilize that source of earth as if it were their own hands. The user does not have to make contact with the source to activate the technique. If the jutsu was prepped, then after forming the ram seal the Kajiya member has access to the source of imbued earth. These hands are slightly larger than the Odei Ranji technique, with these arms being 10 feet thick. If needed the arms can split, giving the Kajiya clan user more appendages. (Limited 6) An offensive way to manipulate this technique would be to simply pummel the opponent with a barrage of fist. Or to attempt to crush the target. Defensively the hands can form around the user, and be used to shield the Kajiya clan member. One could also lift them self to higher elevation, by making an arm rise from underneath them. However, the defense can be destroyed with considerable force, or a Raiton attack ranked B. Chakra Cost to Prep: 25. Chakra Cost to Activate: 10. Chakra Cost Per Post: 5.
Last edited by Panda on Thu 26 Sep 2013, 1:50 am; edited 18 times in total (Reason for editing : Post timer) |
| | | ♥ Serah
Age : 30 Posts : 211
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Tue 17 Sep 2013, 10:29 am | |
| - Special Characteristics wrote:
- Name: Doton Master
Rank: A Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: Must have Doton Prodigy Training Requirements: A 1600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The title given to those elite ninja who've become legendary for their power and skill over the doton element. Being classified as a prodigy during their early years, the ninja has now mastered the doton element and attains great power from their continuous training. The ninja's earth techniques are now 40% stronger with an increase in strength, durability and power. The ninja can now naturally produce soil from molding their chakra, which can form into fine earth for their techniques or convenient uses. Through such mastery they also gain the ability to access a sub-element from the earth element known as 'Mud Release'. This allows them to create specialized jutsu under this sub-element. Clans that simulate special characteristics are denied on principle, sorry. |
| | | Kotaro
Age : 29 Posts : 26
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Tue 17 Sep 2013, 12:03 pm | |
| Bwah my dreams! Haha, if I make an edit to change to substance would that be acceptable? If so I have made the edit and added more info to make it more logical. |
| | | ♥ Serah
Age : 30 Posts : 211
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Tue 17 Sep 2013, 9:51 pm | |
| Nope. The only way you could do it would be to make it an advanced element requiring Doton+Suiton, and all clan members then gain Doton, Suiton and the clan element. Literally no other option here. Sorry. |
| | | Kotaro
Age : 29 Posts : 26
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Tue 17 Sep 2013, 10:23 pm | |
| No need to apologize, I understand. Edit made! |
| | | Kotaro
Age : 29 Posts : 26
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Tue 17 Sep 2013, 10:40 pm | |
| Want me to kill the color here also? |
| | | Kotaro
Age : 29 Posts : 26
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Wed 18 Sep 2013, 5:17 am | |
| Fixes made along with color deleted. |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Sun 22 Sep 2013, 10:23 pm | |
| What I don't like about your advanced element is its ability to be hardened and acquire the properties of stone right after a technique has been fully used on the enemy. A solution to this problem would be to create a jutsu that requires a reasonable amount of chakra in order for the user to harden the sludge by forming a hand seal. This way the techniques can be more predictable, while it would be too much for a jutsu to land and immediately turn to stone, immobilizing the target.
I also want to point out that I spotted more than enough typos (typing mistakes) than can confuse the reader and make the reading unpleasant. Please read through your descriptions and correct those. Don't use Microsoft's Word to search for them, since I think they come from Word's corrections. |
| | | Kotaro
Age : 29 Posts : 26
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Mon 23 Sep 2013, 5:33 am | |
| Fixes attempted |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Wed 25 Sep 2013, 4:35 am | |
| You didn't make the change I requested about solidifying your sludge. |
| | | Kotaro
Age : 29 Posts : 26
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Wed 25 Sep 2013, 7:05 am | |
| I added a one post timer for the sludge to harden, in the descriptions. Were you wanting me to make it a separate jutsu? |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Wed 25 Sep 2013, 5:55 pm | |
| So that means,
1st post: Use the Jutsu. 2nd post: Opponent post. 3rd post: Sludge becomes solid in this post.
Am I right? If so, clarify it like that. |
| | | Kotaro
Age : 29 Posts : 26
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Wed 25 Sep 2013, 7:59 pm | |
| Makes sense, my bad. Fixed it |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Thu 26 Sep 2013, 1:52 am | |
| You added that post order twice in there, so I went ahead and removed one.
Approved 1/2 |
| | | Kotaro
Age : 29 Posts : 26
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Thu 26 Sep 2013, 5:24 am | |
| Put it in there twice for clarity, but thanks. Sorry for all the trouble. |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Sun 29 Sep 2013, 5:18 am | |
| No trouble.
Clan Approved 1/2. |
| | | Kotaro
Age : 29 Posts : 26
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Mon 30 Sep 2013, 4:33 am | |
| Sooo, I'm not starting my character up anytime soon, I'm assuming? |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Mon 30 Sep 2013, 7:52 am | |
| I don't know if they are going to deny your clan or not yet. They may do it due to the fact that your advanced element is the same as that of the mud release that can be used by characters with the Doton Master special characteristic. Instead of waiting for somebody to decide what you should do and maybe lose a lot of time until you actually get approved, I would suggest archiving your clan and going for a canon clan for your character, so that you can get approved quickly. I am willing to help and I can personally approve this, but the rest don't look like it.
Sorry keeping you waiting and thank you for your patience. |
| | | Kotaro
Age : 29 Posts : 26
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Mon 30 Sep 2013, 9:32 pm | |
| Eh it's whatever. I understand the problem and don't want to seem like that one guy who tries to bend rules and stuff. Could you go ahead and delete this for me? I don't know how. |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kajiya Clan Odeiton (Sludge Release) Mon 30 Sep 2013, 11:58 pm | |
| We don't delete anything on here. We're like a government that likes to archive everything!
Archived due to request. |
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