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PostSubject: Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char EmptyMon 19 Apr 2010, 3:32 am

Basic Information:

    Name:
    Leanne/Lanfear Cauthon
    Secondary Title:
    Mistress of Night
    Sightblinder
    Moonhunter
    Age:
    17
    Gender:
    Female
    Physical Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    Lanfear is quite tall, about 5'6 which is above average for a girl of only 15. She has black hair and brown eyes that are almost dark enough to be considered black. She has flawless skin, with no defects to it. Small plump lips usually covered in a thin maroon lipstick. Her body is slender and well toned, little to no fat is found on her, and any speck of fat that is is well covered or hidden by clothing.

    She wears mainly very expensive dresses of a Victorian style, usually of a black color. These dresses usually include a corset which keeps her very tightly wound around the waist and stomach. The dress reveals little to nothing of her actual skin except her face, which is sometimes covered by a simple black or white veil held on by a large hat which can be used to block the sun. Gloves and a varying amount of jewelry is usually included when in this attire.

    In battle she wears very tight and free moving clothing, usually in a deep maroon color, this is not always the case, if confident she doesn't bother with it and simply will go with her usual attire. This is usually worn with a tight mask over the face. It also does not reveal much of her skin, perhaps less then her casual attire but since it is so tight, it can be considered more revealing.


    Personality:
    Lanfear is extremely deceptive, everything she does is to work in her favor, she has an amazing ability to think on her feet which helps to complete her goals. She is a puppet-master and extremely manipulative, so much that some people fear her voice, this mainly applies to males who have attempted to get with her, but nonetheless, she is quite manipulative.

    Lanfear also has a very cautious view of herself and others, she always watches for her own weaknesses and her own problems. She rarely breaks down or breaks as a person, and rarely gets angry. She looks at things very obscurely, almost to the point of mental collapse when she gets really into something, but eventually she calms herself and everything works out in the end.

    She is two-faced, at times she is calm, collected and friendly, other times she is manipulative, cunning, witty and looking for ways to increase her power.

    While in her first half, she likes to befriend everyone, and even when she is acting nice and friendly, she always has something in mind. She is two-faced, but its not a double-personality disorder, it is simple a mask. A "fake." She uses this face to get into the minds of people and observe and take in information, as well as have a little fun with herself.

    While in her second half, it is strictly business. She gets her sights set on something and goes at it. She is good at keeping track of many things at the same time and can at times confuse herself with all the things running in her mind. This is the part of her, which is purely there for personal gain, she may wear a smile and a beautiful outfit, but she is definitely evil, beware what you say to her while she is in either face.

    Catch Phrase:

    "Don't get Angry, Get Even."
    "Whatever you can do, I can do. And better."
    "I'm Sorry."

Clan Information:

    Clan Name:
    Cauthon
    Clan Location:
    Kusagakure
    Clan Traits:
    The Cauthon usually are quite plain, they do not have any real distigubileness about them, which makes them oddly distigushable.
    Kekkei Genkai:
    Mind chakras are a set of chakras that allow the character to enter the mind of another and do damage. These chakras are dangerous and can easily backfire, so a character cannot have a skill of Mind Chakras higher then his rank, and it is ill advised that you use a mind-chakra equal to your rank. Once the user has probed into the mind of an opponent he can do a manner of all things to him. It is used in a way that genjutsu is and is strictly genjutsu based. This requires the person to be standing/sitting still and clear of distractions, the higher the rank the better they can preform. Please note that the jutsu used to enter the mind is only a jutsu used to enter it, not to control it, another jutsu must be placed after a jutsu is used.
    E ; Still standing and little to no Distractions
    D ; Still standing and little distractions
    C ; Moving and some distractions
    B ; Moving and few distractions
    A ; Moving and several distractions
    S ; Moving and extreme distractions
    Secret Clan Jutsu:
    These are Jutsu used to Probe into the Mind of an Opponent
    Name: Forced Entry
    Rank: D
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: The character is exceedingly efficient at brute forcing the minds of others, this is a preemptive jutsu that allows for the use of a genjutsu. This is done by using an Insult that offends or pinning the opponent.

    Name: Crippling Entry
    Rank: D
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: This is used to enter an opponent's mind using emotion, the user will do or say something that ignites an emotional fire, Rage is easiest to do, sorrow one of the harder. Once the opponent is 'enraged' or 'sorrowful' Nat's entry of the mind is complete and he can use a genjutsu

    Name: Secret Entry
    Rank: D
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: This is used by offering something to the opponent to eat, after this object is placed in the mouth, or even touched to the lips, the user has succeeded in entering.

    Name: Last Caress
    Rank: D
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: The user touches the intended target to gain entry, this is usually the most frequently used entry, the only problem is it must be done in a way so that the opponent does not notice it. A kiss, Hug or caress is usually the best methods. Something like a punch would want to be avoided.

    These Are Jutsu used once inside the Mind

    Name: Thought Bubble
    Rank: C
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: After probing into the opponents mind, the user can gain access to everything they are thinking, without them ever knowing. This however requires the user's eyes to be closed and he cannot be moving unless he is B-rank or above.

    Name:Coercion
    Rank:C
    Type:Genjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Once the user has probed into the mind of an opponent, he can convince them to do his or her bidding with little to no argument. The actions of bidding can never be to kill yourself or fight or kill something, only little things like, "get me a sandwich." or "Sit down." "Stop" little things. The will-power of an indiviual allows or doesn't allow this to happen as easily, but it will eventually happen.

    Name: Persistance of Vision
    Rank: E-S
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Once inside the opponents mind, the attacker can plant a vision that will last a certain amount of time. The time is set by the character before the jutsu is used. A vision like this requires double the normal amount of chakra to break if it is realized. So if he used a C rank persistance, it would require a B-rank amount of chakra to dispell.
    E-Rank : 1 post
    D - 1-2 posts
    C - 1-3 posts
    B - 1-4 Posts
    A - 1-5 Posts
    S - 1-6 posts

    Name: Depth of Field
    Rank: C
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: The character can, if probed into their mind, gain access to the sense organs of a person. And while they cannot change anything, they can see, touch, feel, hear, and taste, everything that person is feeling without them ever knowing.


    These are Defensive Mind-Chakras

    Name: Firewall
    Type: Genjutsu
    Rank: E-S
    Element: N/A
    Description: A mind chakran's mind is not a toy, this allows a mental barrier of genjutsu on their own mind. No genjutsu can enter the user's mind for the amount of posts used once activated.
    E - 2 Posts
    D - 3 posts
    C - 5 Posts
    B - 6 posts
    A - 7 Posts
    S- 10 posts

    Concentration Techniques

    Name:Compress Sleep
    Type: Genjutsu
    Rank: D
    Element: N/A
    Description: Using a small amount of chakra the user is able to compress a full nights sleep into a simple 2 hours of meditation. This allows him or her to have much more awareness throughout the day and can help them stay awake for longer periods of time.

    Name: Dull Pain
    Type: Genjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: N/A
    Description: The wound penalties to a character's damage are reduced by 10%. This allows a character to fight just as hard despite the pain they will have later. This cannot be used on a broken leg or arm to make it work again or anything.

    Name: Thought Mask
    Type: Genjutsu
    Rank: C-S
    Element: N/A
    Description:The character is good at blocking his mind out to others, this jutsu is like Firewall but it can also block out emotions the character is having. It will block out any emotional effects a character is having as well as genjutsu.
    C - 3 Posts
    B - 4 posts
    A - 5 Posts
    S - 8 posts

    (Note that these are not all the Clan Techniques, these are simply the ones my character has, as she becomes stronger I will add more)

    History:
    Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char 206iyo7

    **The symbol is also an illusion, when staring at it, it seems to turn.**

    The Cauthon are an Ancient clan whom began inside Kusagakure. They have been known to not share or let people know of their secret clan techniques or Jutsu for fear of the clan losing their identity in case someone decided to copy or create a way to copy the jutsu or techniques. They have very few actual Ninja inside the clan, but are known to be a warrior type clan, instead of relying on Ninja they rely on their own unique abilities to fight their enemies. They pray to the Deity Nio, who are two Gods who's purpose is to protect Buddha. Their history is mystery since no written documentation of the clan's history is kept, only tales told down from generation to generation. The few things that are known facts is the clan began in Kusagakure, but due to their warrior like attitudes and needs to be the better soldier they often got into disputes, a wise Leader rose up [Jin Cauthon] and he moved the clan outside of Kusagakure and began to hide their techniques and jutsu's. Now the clan is on the verge of becoming a Myth. The current leader however [Kinoto Cauthon] decided to send the clan into Kusagakure and a large group of Ninja began to arise from the Cauthon clan. Now many Cauthon Ninja are inside Kusagakure, helping defend the country against its enemies and the clan's enemies.
    Clan Details:
    Open, With Permission, otherwise Closed. I must approve of a character going to use this clan.

    Clan Size : 20-50 Members.


Rank Information:

    Rank:
    Chuunin
    Village Affiliation:
    Kumogakure


Special Information:

    Character Speciality:
    Main:Genjutsu
    Sub:Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity:
    Main: Fire
    Sub: Water
    Special Characteristics:
    Upper Class
    Though not truly an aristocrat, the character is a member of the upper class. The character may have been adopted into all Clan houses
    or attended one of the best schools in the Empire. He may be a celebrity of some status, whose popularity among the Quality excuses his lack of breeding; opera singers and other entertainers at the top of their field commonly have this Quality.
    He may be a member of an aristocratic Clan that has fallen on hard times due to a well publicized scandal or lack or resources. The character may have been disowned or dissociated himself from his family to pursue a career. The character may be an industrialist rather than being a true member of the gentry. Alternately, the character could have been given some honorific title that has elevated his position in the world.
    The character has access to the world of the upper class. He can gain entrance to the best clubs, arrange introduction, to the best people, even marry into an aristocratic Clan. Of course, the character will still be looked down upon by true Holders, but such is the privilege of good blood.

    Haunting Beauty
    Some people are so achingly beautiful that they can stop traffic with a smile or strike a viewer dumb with a glance. The character is one such individual. The character always stands out in a crowd, and no one will ever forget his face. Upon first meeting, every detail of the character is etched into the mind of the observer: the character's name, what he wore, what he smelled like, etc. In years to come, old men and women will fondly remember just staring at the character; of course they will not remember a single word he spoke. Those eyes were just too lovely.

    Wanted
    The character is a wanted criminal on the run. Whether or not he has committed a crime is incidental, something for the courts to decide once he is apprehended. What is important is that the Ninja Police, CIO, and perhaps a small number of consulting detectives are looking to drag him into custody. If the character is captured, he will be held for some time, perhaps permanently, depending on the nature of the crime he is believed to have committed. The Character is wanted by the Members of Konoha ANBU for crimes against the Government, the Person ANBU is looking for is named Mierin Eronaile, which is one of Leanne's Aliases.




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PostSubject: Re: Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char EmptyMon 19 Apr 2010, 10:02 pm

Skill Information:

    Jutsu:

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    Canon
    Spoiler:

    Name: Corruption of the Mind
    Type: Ninjutsu/Minor Genjutsu
    Rank: B
    Element: N/A
    Description: The User's body changes significantly. They become a shadowy figure. Only their actual body changes in color or tone, their clothing does not change. Long claw/talon like extension protrude from the fingers allowing for cutting action, Their face becomes distorted like a strange beasts with large teeth capable of ripping flesh. Many mental problems arise with the use of this technique, rage becomes unbearable and any small amount of light can burn the user. This has an extreme weakness to Fire and Earth property attacks. This Visual entity is caused by using the user's genjutsu affinity to confuse himself and his opponent into seeing these additions to her body instead of just chakra.

    Name: Disruption of Sensation
    Type: Genjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: N/A
    Description: The User is able to blend into the very shadows of the surroundings allowing for a very clever way of trapping an opponent. A dark alley way can suddenly have Leanne at Both ends of it utilizing this illusion. She could be standing behind one tree in the shadows, when you turn to look she isn't there. When in reality she is in a designated spot, most likely moving towards you. This requires the mind to be Probed.

    Name: Doppelganger Effect
    Type: Genjutsu
    Rank: C-S
    Element: N/A
    Description: The user can change the forms of people around her to look like herself. This is done to seriously confuse an opponent as to where her position is and since its only genjutsu, the people really do exist. At C-rank, the maximum amount of people changed is 3, B-5 A-10 S-20. They are not like Shadow clones however, who will do your bidding, they act like any normal human would and the people don't even recognize that they are in the genjutsu. So a person shopping, will still just be a person shopping, they do not become Ninja/able to be controlled.

    Name: Heat to Fire
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: D-S
    Element: Fire/ Water/Fire.
    Description: This technique utilizes Leanne's fire element, she is able to suck the heat out of the air and manifest it into a fire jutsu, this would decrease the temperature in the air that heat is being siphoned from and requires a large source. This technique would be impossible in snow regions or regions below 50 degrees Fahrenheit. This makes Fire Jutsu cost half the normal chakra required to preform it. This can also be done to water, but instead of just making the water colder, it can if using enough chakra, freeze it to become ice. This requires double the chakra required to do on Water as it would on Air since it is utilizing both of Leanne's elements. The larger the area done on, the more chakra and higher rank it requires.
    10x10 Meters = D, 20x20 = C 30x30 = B and so on.


    Name: Distant Slap
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: D
    Element: Water/Fire
    Description: The user takes water in small amounts, like droplets, and raises it into the air near the opponent, then saps the heat out of it to make it ice and preforms a slapping movement, this causes the ice to slap across the face of the opponent to sting quite a bit. This all happens within a matter of seconds.

    Name: Bursting Water Collection
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Water
    Description: Produces a large amount of water, (the size of a small pond) in the area for use with Water techniques.

    Name: 10 Fingers of Harmonious Pain
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Fire
    Description: The user builds up chakra into their hand and points their finger at a target, then fires a small bolt of chakra about the size of a pinky finger at the opponent, This can be done up to 10 times, or can be used on both hand 5 times. The flame launches at approximately 35 mph and has a distance of 50 meters. For added versatility it can be used while touching the opponent, and fire all 10 shots into them at a single time. Causing their insides to boil. This requires the person to be touching the opponent however.

    Name: Torrential Water Destruction Wave
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Water
    Description: The user utilizes the water on the ground and spreads it out so that it becomes very small droplets over a large area. Then in one swift move fires all the water in the area into a designated spot, creating a wave that approaches from all sides. Crushing anything within the 5x5 meter space. This requires 2 posts to use, 1 to spread the water, the second to target it in its location. If the target is outside of the watered area, the effect would be like a normal wave instead of a wave from all sides. It creates a 50x50 meter area of droplets using a 10x10 meter of still standing or running water.

    Name: Violent Water Protection Wave
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Fire/Water
    Description: The user forms a shield around themselves made out of Ice from the use of a Heat to Fire technique. This only covers the sides of the user, and reaches up 10 feet, anything that is large enough to blow over it will do so. The Shield is susceptible to Earth and Lightning based Attacks.

    Name: Crushing Distorted Water Wave
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: B
    Element: Fire/Water
    Description: After fusing some ice via Heat to Fire, the user fires a multitude of ice shards about the size of a pencil at the opponent. The shards are easily capable of puncturing skin and light armour (Such as leather or weak wood), the shards fire in a storm of at least 50 shards, shooting in a straight line sort of like a machine gun, able to be aimed by the arm of the user. The shards fly at around 35 mph and have a distance of 60 meters.

    Name: Orientation Disruption
    Type: Genjutsu
    Rank: B
    Element: -
    Description: This technique works much like Synaesthesia. It swaps one sense for another, (Only 2 senses). For instance Hearing can be swapped for sight so that you see sound in color. Or touch can be swapped with taste so you have to lick something to see how it feels and you taste everything you touch. The swap should be listed in the post the genjutsu is used, not the post in which it takes effect.

    Name: Snap Reaction
    Type: Basic Skill
    Rank: E
    Element: N/A
    Description: The character prepares an action for the next post, this allows for a characters action to take place before the action of the attacker in the next post, however when using this technique you cannot use any jutsu with it, meaning if you use this, you have to wait until your next post to attack the character. For example; Your character uses Snap Reaction this post, (And no other jutsu) the opponent attacks you (this would be their post), (your post) since you have snap reaction ready you can move or attack before that attack occurs, this also works for defense, your attack is sent out before their defense is up. The character must post the Jutsu they intend to use With Snap reaction In the post they use Snap reaction, it however does not take effect until the next post. (So you can't metagame)

    Name: Force Reflexes
    Rank: E
    Type: Basic Skill
    Element: N/A
    Description: The ninja is able to parry projectile weapons.

    Name: Night Fighter
    Rank: C
    Type: Basic Skill
    Element: N/A
    Description: The user is well trained at fighting at night and does not suffer eye-sight penalties and can see as well as a trained eye can in night as he could in day.

    Name: Freerunning
    Rank: D
    Type: Basic Skill
    Element: N/A
    Description:Utilizing a characters superior acrobatic and balance, he is able to do some pretty neat stuff. Some basics of this once this jutsu is activated is extreme percision, able to jump from something to another something without falling, another is his ability to balance on the thinnist of objects, more would be balance on his hands instead of his feet, basic acrobatics as well like back flips, front flips, hand springs and jumps, all combined is what gives this jutsu its valued ability.


    Weapon's:

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    x1 Kris - A Blade with an S-shaped Curve. 1' in length
    x10 Kunai
    x5 Exploding Tags
    x1 100 Foot Reel of Industrial Strength Wire
    x1 Lockpick
    x1 Glass Jar
    x1 Vile of Gasoline, 8 Fl Oz

    Item's:


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    Name: Fire Bomb (x5)
    Rank: C
    Type: Explosive
    Natural Abilities: When Chakra is forced into this, a small flame is produced, capable of starting a good fire.

    Name: Exploding Marbles/Pebbles
    Rank: C
    Type: Special
    Natural Abilities: These are small chakra infused marbles or pebbles that have been crafted BEFORE a fight topic. (You cannot just use any ordinary Pebbles). Best used to disguise them, the user throws them at the ground or an opponent and they explode upon contact. Both produces shards of glass or earth that prove to be quite painful.

    Name: Brísingamen
    Rank: E
    Type: Medallion
    Natural Abilities: Mythical Abilities that would allow the user to have complete control over humans, however, this is just a myth. Leanne doesn't even know it. It is simply a valuable piece of Jewelry... for now.



Background Information

    History:

    The Bitter End
    Your Birth is a mistake You'll spend your whole life trying to correct.

    Leanne was born in Konohagakure, under the roots of a Tree with an Akateko dangling from it. The mother didn't realize this, perhaps for the better. The Akateko is a mythical thing on which an infants hand, covered in blood dangles from a tree. These are generally seen above children whose futures are condemned to failure. The father, could have been anyone. Leanne's mother was quite.. -ahem- Promiscuous. She was poor and it was her 'job.' This was looked down upon by everyone, whores were.. well whores. Soon after birth her mother left Leanne on the porch of some random home and left. Not to be seen again. The family was a single father, and he was a drunk.

    The baby was taken into the hospital and cared for, and the father pretended to be the father of the baby. (It could have been for all Leanne knows) and when she turned 4, old enough to not require a mother's care, she was given back to the father. She grew up rough, everything she did was taught by her drunk father. She learned 3 things from him, 1. Never fight fair with a stranger, 2. Its only Illegal if you get caught, and lastly, 3. Know how to wear a face. She quickly developed the third one. At this time it should be mentioned that her name was not "leanne" but Meirin Eronelle. Though her mother was truly a Cauthon.

    As she grew up she quickly learned how to lie and deceive her way through any situation. But before long she was getting into trouble. She was a pretty girl and some of the boys had taken a liking to her, (12 now) and she was quickly gaining admirers. However, she did something a little... wrong.

    One of her traits was to steal, and steal she did. Her father was a drunk poor bastard and Leanne was a greedy little girl. Using some of her tricks she managed to steal a scroll holding some important ANBU knowledge in it, the contents she didn't understand since she sold it to a man within the hour. The ANBU member she had nipped it off however learned of it and went after her. One of her boy-friends, tipped her off. And at age 13 she fled the country, with this young lad and a pocketful of cash.


    Somewhere I Belong
    Make the lie big, make it simple, keep saying it, and eventually they will believe it

    The girl and the lad showed up in Kumogakure, where she quickly ditched the boy. She needed a hot meal, a warm bed and someone to teach her properly. The Cauthons had a keen act for realizing when fellow members of the clan were in the area. Since the clan was so small it becomes really obvious when one is near. Nathaniel Cauthon, now in his mid-years, spotted the young Leanne, which is what she had begun to call herself now and approached her. Their conversation was simple and short, Leanne didn't understand it at the time. One thing she picked up on then and there from the conversation was "Tell the truth always, and you'll still be lied to. Learn to lie; and you'll always be handed the truth." With the tip of his chin and a point of his finger he was gone. He had also given her a token, a small medallion which she carries on her to this day.

    That finger pointed to a large house standing 4 stories tall from what Leanne could see. Her name now was Leanne, picked up off the street, Cauthon, from her childhood inspirer, not knowing he had done this on purpose. She quickly embedded herself into this 4 story home using her cunning lies and was raised as a spoiled little girl. For a month or two until the family got sick of it. Nat was always around when she exited onto the streets, she thought he had a liking for her, he was watching. Nat was not much of a good role model either. Her 'parents' never told her anything besides how to look properly, her father told her his 'get rich quick' scheme and Nat taught her the streets. And how to run them. With a couple of other things; like Cauthon Clan techniques.

    Nat became her mentor for the next year or so, and she enrolled into the academy for a month, her parents paying a handsome fee to have her passed within the year, and there she was. Leanne Cauthon. A genin.

    Storm in a Teacup
    You have to learn the rules of the game. And then you have to play better than anyone else.

    As a genin Leanne was treated like the royalty she claimed to be. She had 3 separate teachers during her genin years which made her improve rather quickly. Nat taught her more street-stuff and more Cauthon clan things. She enjoyed these lessons the most since Nat was pretty fun, she also had a sort of "Personal Trainer" who helped her to develop most of her custom jutsu as well as increase her skill and strategy with her jutsu. Lastly she had her sensei who was pretty plain and boring and most of what he taught her had already been taught by Nat or her Personal Trainer.

    She continued to 'run her own show.' She didn't show up to missions on time, skipped practice and spars and rarely did anything for herself. She had one of her assistants do the work for her. She tended to have a boy toy or something of the like fight for her instead of fighting herself, her excuse "Why Fight a battle when you can have someone else do it for you?" She continued to prove herself in battle whenever required though. Most genin could not compete with her in terms of skill. It helps to have 3 separate trainers all helping you along with your genin 'team'mates.

    After her family paid a large sum of money to the Raikage, she was promoted to Chuunin, this was done for a couple of reasons, first off the Parents wanted her out of the house. Second off it would make her learn things on her own, a sort of punishment for all they had had to put up with her.

    Under the Bridge
    You can not always control circumstances, but you can control your own thoughts.

    As a Chuunin Leanne quickly bought her own home and hired a multitude of assistants. These are mainly servants and maids who do whatever she asks them to. The only reason she has any money is because she used the guilty card on her parents to gain a large surplus of wealth before being forcibly kicked out from their care.

    She has been chuunin for a month or so and has done pretty much nothing besides learn a couple techniques in her chuunin days.



    Role-Play Sample:
    Balmung walked up to an Inn door and pushed it open, A man moved up and stopped Balmung. "Sorry Sir there isn't any more room here tonight!" Balmung rose a brow as the Innkeeper moved towards him with a smile, pushing the boy out of the way.

    "No need Dese. He's a known guest." The Inn keeper said, "Haven't seen you in a while Balmung. You're not looking so good, come in I'll have a room and a hot bath set up for you right away. Times have been hard here so it might be a minute, the whole long winter has brought a ton of farmers in from the fields and are staying here- why look at me, rambling while you stand out in the cold, Come in come in!" The Inn keeper said motioning Balmung in, the two entered through the door and Balmung's armored foot stepped heavily on the wooden floor. The same sullen look was held on his face.

    A few seconds later a man appeared and began to lead him down a hallway attempting to get some news out of him Balmung asked several questions but the man couldn't put two words together other then "Your accent is funny." All questions were gone as he entered the bath, several copper tubs sat around a tiled floor tilted towards the middle where a drain was and around the pots were large towels, a bar of soap and a fire with a black kettle full of hot water. Ara, the guide, began to fill a tub and Balmung shooed him off with a hand gesture saying he could take it from here. Despite Ara's protests he left the room and Balmung closed the door behind him, shedding his armor and clothing and filling a tub. The water was hot and he slipped into the tub, steamy water encircling him. No noise was heard from the room other then the occasional sigh from joints relaxing and what seemed a everlasting chill to Balmung's bones dispersed from his body.

    After an hour or so of soaking Balmung dried off and adorned new clothing that was left on a stool when he wasn't looking. He buttoned up the shirt and stretched his arms stepping out of the misty room into the hallway, the cold hit him pretty quick but the smell of food and sake filled the air as he stepped into the common room, a large crowd of people sat inside laughing and quietly chattering about themselves. He rolled up his sleeves to his forearms. He wears a simple blue coat which reaches down to about thigh length, it splits at his waist to cover each leg. Its collar is usually popped and has many holes and buckles in the collar in case its cold, allowing him to button it up so it covers most of his lower face. It also has a hood which is simple a blue. He also wore long cargo pants that are tan, also full of pockets and a belt that is also tan. He wears simple black socks and white sneakers with three blue stripes along the side, which match his coat's color. He has two plain silver rings on his left ear and no other jewelry.


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PostSubject: Re: Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char EmptyThu 22 Apr 2010, 2:03 am

Pending Chuunin Approval.

If i get it don't approve right away cuz I need to add Jutsu and History
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PostSubject: Re: Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char EmptySat 24 Apr 2010, 9:24 pm

Todd wrote:
You have my permission for chuunin, make her kickass ok!! campaign missions for kumo will be starting soon as I am officially back from my holiday ^^

Permission for Chuunin Granted.

All Aspects of Character Complete.

Pending Approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char EmptySun 25 Apr 2010, 3:27 am

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Wanted
The character is a wanted criminal on the run. Whether or not he has committed a crime is incidental, something for the courts to decide once he is apprehended. What is important is that the Ninja Police, CIO, and perhaps a small number of consulting detectives are looking to drag him into custody. If the character is captured, he will be held for some time, perhaps permanently, depending on the nature of the crime he is believed to have committed. The Character is wanted by the Members of Konoha ANBU for crimes against the Government, the Person ANBU is looking for is named Mierin Eronaile, which is one of Leanne's Aliases.
I don't see how you can have this and be a active part of the village? If your a criminal then you would be known and caught and be a rogue nin. Is there a need to have this on your app?

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Name: Corruption of the Mind
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: The User's body changes significantly. They become a shadowy figure. Only their actual body changes in color or tone, their clothing does not change. Long claw/talon like extension protrude from the fingers allowing for cutting action, Their face becomes distorted like a strange beasts with large teeth capable of ripping flesh. Many mental problems arise with the use of this technique, rage becomes unbearable and any small amount of light can burn the user. This has an extreme weakness to Fire and Earth property attacks.
So your physical appearance changes and you become a kind of beast? What advantages does this have? it would have to be minimal for a C-rank technique. It sounds more like a genjutsu than a ninjutsu, I don't see how you could do that with your charka if not from a clan with an ability like that.

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Name: Collapsing Violent Ice Wave
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-B
Element: Fire/Water
Description: The user creates launches water out of a 10x10 (or 20x20 meter area if B-ranked) area of water already produced at the opponent, Half-through the wave of water it becomes Ice using Heat to Fire technqiue, and fires Ice out in an Arc in small needle like shapes. The Ice launches for up to 30 meters at about 25 mph. This will damage anything within the arc. (Like an expanding cone)
I will allow the D-rank become of its simplicity but this is just a cheap way to get an ice-based attack which is strickly KKG. Please remove.

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Name: Brísingamen
Rank: E
Type: Medallion
Natural Abilities: Mythical Abilities that would allow the user to have complete control over humans, however, this is just a myth. Leanne doesn't even know it. It is simply a valuable piece of Jewelry... for now.
Lol. You can keep this but no shananigans with it please. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char EmptySun 25 Apr 2010, 3:42 am

The History Explains the Wanted portion of the App, I suggest Reading it.

Avarice wrote:
Long claw/talon like extension protrude from the fingers allowing for cutting action, Their face becomes distorted like a strange beasts with large teeth capable of ripping flesh.

Those are the Advantages. Its Naruto for explanation.

I will allow the D-rank become of its simplicity but this is just a cheap way to get an ice-based attack which is strickly KKG. Please remove.
-You Copied the wrong Jutsu I believe.

Lol. You can keep this but no shananigans with it please. ^^
-When I make it legit, it will have to be re-approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char EmptySun 25 Apr 2010, 7:03 am

Avarice. wrote:
The History Explains the Wanted portion of the App, I suggest Reading it.
Well as long as being 'wanted' was for a crime outside of the village then I am fine with it (i.e in konoha your birthplace or inbetween) but if in kumo then it will need to be edited. It is just unrealistic that I would have someone who was a criminal to my own people, you know?

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Long claw/talon like extension protrude from the fingers allowing for cutting action, Their face becomes distorted like a strange beasts with large teeth capable of ripping flesh.

Those are the Advantages. Its Naruto for explanation.
Its naruto for explanation? that doesnt explain much, I havent seen anything in naruto that would have that, that is just a common C-rank ninjutsu. Link me if you have.

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I will allow the D-rank become of its simplicity but this is just a cheap way to get an ice-based attack which is strickly KKG. Please remove.
-You Copied the wrong Jutsu I believe.
No I didnt actually. I will allow your D-rank ice jutsu the whip one, but the C-B rank one I will not for reasons explained in the c-box. So please just remove.
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PostSubject: Re: Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char EmptySun 25 Apr 2010, 7:11 pm

She's Wanted in Konoha, She looks different and has a different name.

Its naruto for explanation? that doesnt explain much, I havent seen anything in naruto that would have that, that is just a common C-rank ninjutsu. Link me if you have.
-If i made it B-rank would it be more Acceptable?

No I didnt actually. I will allow your D-rank ice jutsu the whip one, but the C-B rank one I will not for reasons explained in the c-box. So please just remove.
-Removed.
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PostSubject: Re: Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char EmptyMon 26 Apr 2010, 10:24 am

Being wanted in Konoha is fine then, as long as its not our village and a new start is beginning. ^^

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Its naruto for explanation? that doesnt explain much, I havent seen anything in naruto that would have that, that is just a common C-rank ninjutsu. Link me if you have.
-If i made it B-rank would it be more Acceptable?
No I don't think so. I know what your trying to do but it isn't something that you can get from a simple ninjutsu technique. It would more arise from either fuuinjutsu, medical ninjutsu or a hybrid clan like ability.
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PostSubject: Re: Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char EmptyMon 26 Apr 2010, 10:02 pm

Hmm. Not really. I'm just extending chakra like Appendages to increase the length of my melee attacks and make them slightly more powerful.

Perhaps with just simple chakra, and then the addition of genjutsu to this chakra it would look as i would like instead of just random chakra shooting out from my body, It seems unnecessary to list though since the Genjutsu would affect my character as well.

If found necessary i will add.
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PostSubject: Re: Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char Lanfear Cauthon - Replacement Char EmptyTue 27 Apr 2010, 6:28 am

The chakra extension for the effects is ninjutsu, but please add a genjutsu for the visual effects as it is more accurate that way. If edited then it will be approved and so will your app. ^^
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Done
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Would also like you to increase the rank of that technique to B-rank. Then you shall be approved. Thanks ^^
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Approved.
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