Sadara Uchiha [Konoha Genin] (WIP)

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Basic Information:

Name: Sadara Uchiha Secondary Title: Dark Shadow Age: 16 Gender: Male Physical Appearance:

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Personality: Sadara is a mild tempered impatient male. he only uses energy when it is required one of the reasons he was able to become an Anbu Assassin. his skills of Ultilizing low level Genin through academy level jutsu's to defend himself without draining his chakra is a great asset to him. As well as his more Bigger chakra consuming jutsu's. He is skilled in the way of Assassination, he sometimes would be seen on rescue missions or just out and about. He's easy to make friends with but sometimes will not act as if he does. He hates liers and thiefs, he's some what cocky at times when he battles, because like I said earlier he most the time uses low level jutsu's to get out of alot of things which alot of times pisses his opponent off and causes them to lose focus and create and opening which in turn allows him to push his cockiness aside and go in for the higher level jutsu's. He is very protective of his fiends when it come's down to the people he cares about he is never too far from the action. He dislikes conflict but will kill in the matter of a second if tested, he also is the second brother of Madara being his twin so that make's three.

Catch Phrase: Those who Don't Respect their comrades can never learn to respect themselves!

Clan Information:

Clan Name: Uchiha

Clan Location: Konoha

Clan Traits: Uchiha natural affinity with the Fire element.

Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Uchiha are said to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and almost instantly memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including the needed chakra moldings and seals used. However the clan member cannot copy techniques that are unique to another bloodline and the clan member must have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical requirements to do the jutsu. This rarely stops the clan member though, as such stressful situations often push their limits farther and allow them to harness their full potential.The Uchiha clan member is not granted the Sharingan at birth; it is only activated later in life, typically during a time of emotional stress in the heat of battle. The Sharingan itself can be transferred to another non-Uchiha by a medical ninja, such as happened with Leaf ninja Uchiha Obito to his teammate Hatake Kakashi. Because his body was not born to carry the Sharingan, the eye is always activated and it burns Kakashi's chakra when used. To lessen the impact of the Sharingan on Kakashi's body, he normally keeps the eye hidden and out of use. Also of note, is the fact Kakashi, a non-Uchiha, was able to advance the Sharingan from two tomoe to three tomoe after gaining the eye.The Sharingan itself contains three tomoe (comma). A higher mastery of the Sharingan can be seen in the creation of a new tomoe in the eye, with three tomoe being the typical highest form of the eye. The rare Mangekyou form is a unique evolution of the Sharingan beyond the three tomoe form, please see its entry for more information. An eye possessing two tomoe can allow the Uchiha clan member to track the movement of an opponent and do some minor copying of an opponents attack. For avoiding incoming attacks, the Uchiha's speed and agility will greatly control whether they can move to avoid it. However, three tomoe will greatly help in this area.Two tomoe will also allow the ninja to pierce Genjutsu and see the surrounding reality for what it really is. It can also allow the member to pierce another’s body and see their chakra. While the eye is not refined enough to see the tenketsu and chakra circulatory system like the Byakugan, it can view the movement and flow of chakra. This can help them tell if a person is trapped in a Genjutsu, or if an attacker is a real threat or merely a bunshin.An eye containing three tomoe will allow the ninja to see the image of an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension in their body. This prevents wasteful movement and allows the Uchiha clan member to conserve much needed chakra in battle. It allows them to synchronize their movement to strike at an area moments before their opponent is even in that spot, essentially allowing them to strike out and hit their opponent before they're even there.Three tomoe also grants the Uchiha the ability to do Genjutsu and hypnosis after locking eyes with an enemy. This can be used to cause their opponent to do an attack of the Uchiha's choosing. This hypnosis can also be used as a Genjutsu counter, which is the ability to turn a Genjutsu spell back upon the original caster without the requirement of forming any hand seals.The Mangekyō Sharingan ( Literally meaning Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye) is a heightened form of Sharingan. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques. The Mangekyō Sharingan is distinguished from a normal Sharingan through its appearance, which changes the form of the tomoe seal. Unlike in the case of the Sharingan, the appearance of the Mangekyō Sharingan differs from user to user. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to several powerful techniques, and erodes the eyesight of its users, eventually causing blindness, which can be alleviated by obtaining another pair of Mangekyō Sharingan from a sibling. The new Sharingan is dubbed the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan. The techniques used by this eye vary from person to person and is limited to one technique per eye. It can be achieved by the killing of someone who is very close to the user as a display of being willing to sacrifice anything for power. This can not be fooled and be a fake friend. It must be a real and true strong connection so it takes a certain kind of individual to be able to get it. It can also be gotten by extremely brutal and long training, taking many years to obtain of constant hard work and dedication, though the person can not be aiming for it and it actually just happens at random. Even with the hardest work, it is possible for an Uchiha to never achieve this level of eye mastery.

Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Demonic Illusion - Mirror Heaven and Earth
ChangeType: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element: -Description: A Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the Uchiha clan member can stop the sensory spell cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent. This technique requires the user to have three tomoe in each eye to use it. This technique costs a A rank worths of chakra or twice the chakra cost of the technique it is reversing which ever is higher. It can not be used to reverse S Rank genjutsu

Name: Sharingan Windmill Triple BladeType:
WeaponryRank: C
Element: -Description: A Weaponry technique utilized by the Uchiha clan. Using the developed vision of the Sharingan eye, the clan member hurls three Windmill Shuriken which have wire attached. While in the air the clan member can manipulate wire to make the blades circle the target, which results in the attached wire binding them.

Name: Ephemeral
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element: -Description: A Genjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha clan members. They will start this technique by using only one finger on their hand or making eye contact. The target does not have to look into his eyes, a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, they can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see and hear those who they care about degrade them. Requires third tomoe to use.

History:

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The Uchiha clan was descended from the elder of the two boys entrusted by the Sage of the Six Paths with the power and will of the way of the ninja. The elder believed that might would bring peace. The Sage chose the younger as more fitting to be his successor, causing the elder to be vengeful. From the younger boy descended the Senju clan who would be the eternal rivals of the Uchiha. Before the founding of the ninja villages, the Uchiha were one of the many mercenary clans for hire. Because of their Sharingan, the Uchiha clan came to be known as one of the two strongest clans, the second being the Senju clan. Madara Uchiha was particularly powerful, and, upon attaining the Mangekyō Sharingan, he took control of the clan. Under his leadership the Uchiha grew stronger, conquering whatever clans they came upon, such that, whenever the Uchiha clan was hired for a job, the opposing side would hire the Senju.Hashirama Senju, the leader of the Senju clan, grew tired of the endless fighting, and approached the Uchiha clan with a peace treaty. Madara feared that an alliance would lead the Uchiha to ruin, but his clan disagreed, and he was forced to accept. The two clans came together to form Konoha, with Hashirama being selected as Hokage. Madara believed that this was proof that the Uchiha would be made subservient to the Senju, but his clan saw this only as his attempt to rekindle the flames of war. They turned their backs on him, and he defected. Following Madara's betrayal, the Second Hokage gave the Uchiha control of the Konoha Military Police Force as a sign of trust. According to Madara, this was really just a way of keeping the Uchiha in check and out of Konoha's governing affairs. Over the years, some Uchiha have figured out this motive's true meaning, and tried to rebel against the village as Madara did, but they found that it was too little, too late to make a difference, as the Senju had already completely suppressed the Uchiha. Eventually a revolt was attempted by a select few Uchiha members, but this was crushed quickly and they were thrown in jail or put to death based on their role in the uprising. The Uchiha who did not partake in it, were not held accountable and after that the relations between the Uchiha and the rest of the village grew stronger and trust was finally instilled.

Clan Details: Open

Rank Information:

Rank: Genin
Village Affiliation: Konoha

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Kenjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Fire & Lightning
Main: FireSub: LightningSpecial Characteristics: Very Kind Hearted

Skill Information:

Jutsu Template:[quote]
Name: Raikyuu – Lightning Ball
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description: The user will form a ball of electricity, which they can hurl at their opponent.

[quote]Name: Rairyuu no Tatsumaki - Lightning Dragon Tornado
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: The user will draw lightning down upon their body. The current will be contained within and around the user’s form. The user will then begin to spin in place, forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon and strike out against an opponent. Even if the attack doesn’t directly connect with the foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

[quote]Name: Gian – False Darkness
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: : Lightning
Description: Gian is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After releasing lightning manipulated chakra from their body, the user will use it to release a strong bolt of electricity from their mouth.

[quote]Name: Karyuudan - Fire Dragon Projectile
Type: NinjutsuRank: A
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Karyuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create mud projectiles using the Doryuudan technique. The ninja will then blow a large flame to ignite the mud projectiles.

[quote]Name: Katon Goukakyuu – Grand Fire Ball
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: Katon Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.

[quote]Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: FireDescription: Katon Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

[quote]Name: Jou Tenbatsu (Imperial wrath of God)
Type: Mangekyou-Genjutsu
Rank: S
Element: All
Description: Sadara will do handseals (Tiger, Rat, Dog, Horse, Goat, Dragon, Tiger, Dragon) looking his opponent in the eyes making his opponent think they are trapped in another dimension where they will see Sadara 1000x bigger then them as dawn will do five Nature hazards on the opponent. The first hazard is making there opponent get hit by a tsunami, the second is making there opponent fall in a earthquake and get squashed to death, third hazard is making there opponent get hit by a massive tornado and hurricane at the same time, fourth is making there opponent think they are squashed to death by falling rocks the size of elephants and the fifth hazard is getting stabbed by 600 trees as sharp as Katana’s.

Quote :

Name: Kasungi Blades
Quantity: 2
Rank:S
Appearance: Diamond Crafted Blades, with black and carving along the base of the blade. The hilt of the sword would be white

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Special Abilities/Characteristics:

Considering the fact the blades were crafted from pure diamond, this means that the blades are unbreakable. They can slice and cut through anything, the blade will never go dull and upon usage they sharpen upon their own. The blades were soaked in a deadly acidic poison, as time went by the position became second nature to the blade. Upon contact of the blade to the skin or any surface, the impacted spot will began to burn as the poison seeps inside the targets skin and or armour.

Origin: : I made the sword, because sword that I have previously used continued to break and go dull, and they didn’t quite fit me. I made it because it would be something new that I would be trying and it would most likely give me an edge in battle, being unbreakable is a good asset if using it as a defensive weapon rather than an offensive weapon.

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Rank: N/a
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Background Information

History:Sadara is the twin brother of the late great Madara he is more of a calm and settle fellow though he acts cocky. He was born about the same time as madara but stayed in the shadow's alot. He was the one who refused to give Madara his eyes after he had went blind thus creating a feud between the two. His mother and father both died. When he was 11 he was a chunnin and at 14 he was a Jonin and when he turned 16 he was inducted into the Anbu Rankings. His brother knew him all too well and felt that he wouldn't even make it through basic training but to Madara's surprise he passed and made the top of his class. Being able to see the chakra trail of other was a great asset to him as well and which gave him the Anbu ranking of Assassion meaning being able to find you and track you down and kill you. In his sharingan's third state he has Two different Sharingans one which is white and the other which is blue. This is because His best friend was dying and he gave it to him upon a whim, but he took a common regular eye from a dying special jonin and converted it into a New Sharingan which was white. this gave him a surprised advantage against Madara when they fought. this fight was right before Itachi and Madara met which is why Itachi's first meeting with Madara Was in the shadows as to where Itachi couldn't see Madara because Madara was ashamed to be so badly bruised by his younger twin brother. His life now settle he returned back to the anbu force and that's where he stayed, Knowing one day his brother would return in search of his eyes. Sadara is not married nor does he have any kids and he believes that love is only common in those who seek it. Sadara seeks only to improve the skills of others and better everyone around him and make sure that Kohonoha will be Safe.

Role-Play Sample:-His form then shot of the male Mizuri now with great force as he appeared off into the distance, he then bared his fangs now showing his claws and both of his tails now flowing with chakra he unlocked the dark kuro-tenchigan as he smirked now dashing towards the male Mizuri now appearing in his range now as he was close enough to whisper into his ear "do not fear for i will solve it all" he closed his eyes as he then vanished now. his form now appeared several feet away from him in the distance as he dashed onward into the deep forest now headed for the mountain where the deadly four reside as he land on a tree branch in front of the cave to the mountain h took off his head band and threw it into the air and he drew a kunai and slung it at the head band. The kunai then connected to the head band thus pinning it to the outer cave wall as it dangled now. He clinched his fist as he dashed in the cave his eyes fully opened now as he headed in head first forming hand signs which sealed the others from getting in now as he said to himself" i am sorry silver, Satsuki, and most of all Mizuri i....i must do this alone!"

He headed in the long tunnel of the cave as he cave to one of the 4 deadly shinobi as he slid to a stop slamming his claws into the ground now. he smirked at the shinobi as he yelled " i will take that scroll and kill all of your kind if i die in the process!" he then dashed in as he extended his right knee into the gut of the male shinobi now with great speed--The shinobi grabbed the leg of the male Sadara now as he used his tail to slam him into the wall now with every slam the cave interior would then began to shake as blood trickled from the face of Sadara now. laughing as he did so he then released the male in the direction of the wall as he sent him flying face forward into the wall. he watched the male slam into the wall now, he appeared in the form of Sadara once more pressing his hand against the back of Sadara's head now burying his face deeper into the wall now. He then said to the male " Why do you do this barging into my domain and for a scroll which doesn’t concern you and now that you have drawn first attack i will kill you and your ninja and your entire village!"Sadara then spun around slamming his right elbow into the chin of the male now as he sent him flying across the room landing on his back as he slide to a stop and dust began to fill the air, all that could be seen is his new found eyes as they glowed in the distance now. images of Mizuri, silver, Satsuki, and all of the other ninja and villagers flashed inside of his head.

He parted his lips to say to the male " you want to know why i do it? i do it for them they are my family and family protects their family no matter what and that's what i intend to do.....i will get that scroll and i will kill you at any cost because that is my duty as the Hokage! and you even speaking of hurting my family i will kill you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" his form then dashed at the male as a purple chakra emerged from his body lashing out at the male shinobi now as the new embodiment reached for the figure in the distance the male shinobi moved with quickness and without hesitation. the shinobi then spoke to him from the shadows " well i think it is only right you know your killers name my name is Yamatori." Yamatori then appeared out of the shadows as he dashed towards Sadara now extending his right fist toward the head of his form now.

The purple embodiment around his form then extending two hands as they grasped whole of the male Yamatori’s hand and slammed him through the wall now.--the male Sadara now glanced off into the distance as he then began to think of Mizuri as a smiled filled his scuffed up face as blood dripped down from his lips he still continued to smile disavowing all knowledge to the pain he was now starting to experience. his focus then turned to Satsuki now as it made him smile more and he said to himself " so young and full of passion to become better and she will do what ever it takes to for fill her dream.... i will not let her dream be crushed!!!!!" his final focus turned to silver now as his eyes then soon filled with tears now as he said to himself " my true brother and best friend i will protect you!" clinching his fist he right his right hand to his waist as he now said " I Will Protect You All!!!" he then looked at Yamatori awaiting for him to crawl out of the crater in the wall he then yelled " i know your not dead get up!"-

Age : 32 Posts : 11

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Appearance needs to be 2 paragraphs minimum.

Edit your application to put the uchiha information in. There is a code in the bottom of the Canon Clan topic in character application for the uchiha clan.

Shadow Village is not a village. Kumo, Kiri, Konoha, and Suna are the villages.

Anbu assassin is not a rank. jounin, Chuunin, and Genin are. Jounin is Kage approval only, chuunin is full.

Lightning armor is banned.

All jutsu you plan on utilizing at the start of your character need to be posted on this application. Otherwise they must be applied for and trained before they can be used.

Your ash technique would be part of the Ash clan.

Custom Jutsu need atleast 3 sentences of description.

Your special characteristics would be tracking/senses, not pissing people off using low ranking jutsu. That is a personality trait.

Your application is missing all of the coding. We provide a coded part of the template with you could copy to include all the bolding parts. It is recommended you utilize that.

Age : 32 Posts : 11

I edited liek you guys said thats the best i can do i'm going to sleep

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Your rp sample is one massive chunk, please edit it into at least 2 paragraphs. Also It is 900 words, does this mean your average post is that long?

You are genin, your max jutsu rank is C-rank.

Also please edit the clan information in. The app looks pretty disgusting, clustered and poorly organized. Get it formatted to a more readable form, and I'll take another look.

Age : 32 Posts : 11

Well you don't have to look cause i changed it the first time to this and no one said anything so what ever, and as far as you saying about my jutsu 's that i use the guide lines said list all of them that i am able to use so i did if you have some type of problem with that and think i can't execute them then i would be happy to battle you

Age : 32 Posts : 11

And as for the Clan information i already changed it i just can't delete the second post that i made so i would appreciate you not talking down to me as if you are seemingly better

Age : 31 Posts : 1036

Sorry but i got to point this out. It says in your history you met Madara? There aren't cannon characters here

Age : 32 Posts : 11

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Okay...

Genin can't use jutsu above C Rank on the right, as in physically incapable of doing so. Most Genin only have a few C Rank as game changers anyhow, so the site reflects that by barring any jutsu or weapons of ranks higher than C. Its not a matter of whether or not you can execute said move, because your character cannot on this site according to site rules.

You need Weaponry [Kenjutsu] to use a sword, so you can't have a sword anyhow without that.

Uchiha is closed so you cannot be a Uchiha. You also can't start with Mangekyou Sharingan anyhow, all Uchiha start with either one or two tomoe depending on what the rules say on the subject.

Your History is shorter than your RP Sample, it should be substantially larger.

And your 'Huh?' means that you didn't understand the above post I assume. There are no Canon characters in existence on this site, as in the storyline you know never happened, none of the characters you know exist in the forum universe, therefore you cannot mention them in your history because they don't exist here. You have to remove all Canon names and references from your application.

Jsalos is right, this is very cluttered and poorly organized. Break things down into paragraphs, remove excess coding, and generally clean it up.

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

You also CAN edit clan information in. You click edit, and edit the clan tempalte we have provided in the Canon clan thread into your application. Your second post, which has the information a second time, can be used to hold your jutsu, or anything else. its an easy fix.

Age : 32 Posts : 11

@ Y i have edited the thing about my weaponary you mentioned but this other stuff is hard so your going to have to help me out please because i want this done seriously i satyed un to like 1 in the morning do this crap and i really need help more then criticism

Age : 32 Posts : 11

Also in my Rp Sample this was somethign from way back. and as a result the people i know back then were considered in the Above Post. So there fore they are not cannon character's they are simply friends that were part of the Post.

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Sadara Uchiha wrote:: @ Y i have edited the thing about my weaponary you mentioned but this other stuff is hard so your going to have to help me out please because i want this done seriously i satyed un to like 1 in the morning do this crap and i really need help more then criticism

You can't be a Uchiha, pick something else.

You can't have jutsu above C Rank, remove all higher ranking jutsu.

Age : 32 Posts : 11

They said a Uchiha spot is open for Kiri Village
So i might try to join them

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