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Saito Asuhara
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| Basic Information:
Name: Hyuuga, Tadashi
Secondary Title:
He is known as “Traitor” by Konoha Hyuuga Members
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Physical Appearance:
Tadashi is a short kid at 5 feet 1 inch and weights about 108 pounds. He has long, wild, dark brown hair and the same cold white Hyuga Eyes. He also has the cold pale white skin associated with the Hyuuga. He is basically the stereotypical Hyuuga in his looks; he has traditional colothing on and not normal ninja clothing. He is wearing a white long sleeved shirt, a brown vest like jacket that extends below his waist, and a red belt with white polka dots in a straight line on the fabric. He is wearing black nin-pants, a shuriken holster, and two kunai are hidden in his sleeves. The white dots on his clothing actually are general seals and store useful items. This more elegant an fancy dress often gets him confused with a woman cause he puts time into in his appearance. He is a Hyuuga after all. They are know for being large traditionalists.
Personality:
Tadashi was the ultimate form of an arrogant Main Branch Hyuga. He has a slight belief that those without Kekkei Genkai are worthless shinobi but that feeling has been mostly crushed by an event that happened before he left Konohagakure. He is also very charismatic, definitely has the tongue of the best politician, a very talented writer, and not too shabby of a scholar. He is also arrogant in that he thinks he deserves better treatment for his Kekkei Genkai. He doesn't vocalize his want of better treatment but he definitely acts smug towards others. He has a calm temperament and hardly shows his anger. The tell-tale sign he is pissed is when his eyebrow twitches He also has a very advanced vocabulary for his age, making him have to simplify what he is saying to other youngins. He enjoys a good book or scroll, especially if it is on Fuuinjutsu. His favorite foods are white rice, sushi, and chocolate pocky.
He also gets pissed when people confuse him as a female. Since he does wear long, more traditional clothes; and having long hair as well. He has to correct people all the time that he is not a woman. This is one subject that Tadashi will lose his cool and explode, beating up whomever said it. Being a Hyuuga he is apt to do weird traditional ceremonies. He will try to grow bonsai trees dispite the desert heat and knows his teas very well. He enjoys the fine arts of acting, dancing, and literature. He is a typical man of high society as he was breed to be by his family back in Konohagakure no Sato.
Clan Name:
The Hyuuga Clan
Clan Location:
Konohagakure no Sato
Clan Traits:
The Gentle Fist - The Gentle Fist style of combat is based on palm strikes and generally aims to damage the body's Chakra Pathway System, thus creating difficulty by inhibiting an opponent's use of chakra. To do this, the user will forcefully insert a small amount of their own chakra into an opponent's chakra pathway system. The chakra can then be used to rupture or divert chakra flow, preventing them from using jutsu. Any chakra based substance can be countered/destroyed by using the gentle fist style to force chakra into it. This is done by using the chakra openings in ones hands to shape their own chakra into needles which can cut through chakra itself. It can also be used to attack the opponent's internal organs, to which the chakra pathway system is closely tied. Even the slightest tap from this style can cause major damage, hence the name "gentle fist." Because the chakra pathway system is invisible, the Byakugan is required for this style to be used effectively. Since the Byakugan is unique to the Hyūga clan, it has become their signature style of combat.
*Must have Taijutsu as a specialty, preferably main.
Kekkei Genkai:
The Byakugan is a Dōjutsu Kekkei Genkai, a genetic trait, that is shared amongst the members of the Hyūga Clan. Those that inherit the blood of this clan have almost featureless white eyes. It has two different settings, dormant and activated, both of which take a slightly different appearance from the other form. The normal eye for a Hyuuga clan member differs from a normal human eye. The iris and pupil are barely discernable with both appearing a milky white in color. The pupil itself is larger than a typical humans and it is outlined by a black region. The sclera remains normal except the larger size of the pupil reduces ones ability to view it. Once the eye is fully activated, the hidden iris becomes more apparent. Also when providing blood and chakra for the eyes' bloodline vision, veins will bulge lateral to each eye.
The first ability of the Byakugan gives the user a near 360º field of vision, except for one blind spot at the back of the neck above the third thoracic vertebra. The second ability is having the ability to see through solid objects, and can use a degree of telescopic sight. The distance and the degree of telescopic sight varies from person to person. This is often determined by both rank and skill. At the genin level it can reach up to 100 meters. At Chunin this increases drastically reaching out to 400 meters. At jounin this goes up even more to 800 meters. A Kage level Hyuuga is capable of seeing up to 2km in all directions. However, the third and one of the greatest uses of the Byakugan is the ability to see chakra, as well as the chakra circulation system inside another's body. It is from this particular ability that they are able to employ their ultimate attack style: Gentle Fist. (see Clan Traits above).
Secret Clan Jutsu:
- Spoiler:
Name: Chakra Needle Technique
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: After focusing chakra outside the body, the chakra is formed into needles and propelled at the user's target. By using Byakugan, this technique can be used to hit very small targets, such as bees etc. This is also how the user attacks the chakra systems of the body and can destroy substances made of chakra.
Name: Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack. If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack.
Name: Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a special technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 126 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32 and finally 64. This damage forcibly closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. This then limits their opponents ability to use jutsu.
Name: Eight Divination Signs, One-Hundred and Twenty-Eight Palms of the Hand
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a variation of Hakke Rokujuuyonshou, a technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to make nearly double the normal 126 strikes, striking 254 times against their individual foe or opponents. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32, 64 and finally 128 times.
Name: Guardian Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: The user will emit chakra from their palms and move her arms in sweeping pattern movements to provide a full 360 degree range of protection for her body. This chakra will be also be able to cut through most any target which dares penetrate the protective sphere. By expelling a sharper, stronger and more flexible amount of chakra, they can increase it's effectiveness against more massive incoming objects.
Name: Eight Divination Signs Air Palm
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: Ranged Taijutsu technique utilized by the Hyuuga. Extending chakra from his body, the user will thrust their palm at the target. This will send out an invisible wave of chakra that can knock the opponent back.
History:
The Hyuuga are one of the oldest and most powerful clans in Konoha, being one of its two great Dojutsu clans. They aided in the founding of the leaf village, though played a much smaller role in its founding then the Senju and Uchiha did. They quickly established a high ranking amongst the ninja squadrons and became well known to all, just the mention of the Byakugan or the name Hyuuga wining an instant air of respect. Their clan is based highly on nobility and even with in itself has its own social structure.
The clan is split into two different families. One is being known as the main and the other being the branch. This social division has always been their greatest flaw. The Main family often holds themselves to be higher up and more important than the branch family, and basically the branch is looked down upon like lesser individuals and sometimes even pawns which can be thrown away for the villages sake. To be looked at most appropriately, the Main are the Kings, and the Branch are the peasants. It even goes so far that a destructive seal is placed on the forehead of all Branch family members which can be used to instantly destroy a branch member if they do not follow the orders of the Main family.
In recent times, this wall has begun to get broken down, and the destructive seal is being used less and less. Cooperation is beginning to flourish between the two houses which is leading to prosperous outcomes. It is unknown if this will continue or if it is a momentary laspe of peace. It will all come down to the heads of the clan for each generation, and it will be up to them to dictate which path will be taken, segregation, or unity.
Clan Details:
Open
Rank Information:
[list]Rank: Genin
Village Affiliation:
Konohagakure no Sato
Sunagakure no Sato
Special Information:
[list]Character Speciality:
You may pick 2 skills:
Main: Taijutsu
Sub: Fuuinjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Raiton
Sub: Fuuton
Special Characteristics:
Able Bodied
The character is in excellent physical shape. He heals quickly and is seldom ill.
Ambidextrous
The character is equally adept at using either hand. Although ambidexterity is rare at birth, it can be learned. Most duelists spend their whole lives refining this talent.
Excellent Liar Trait
The character is extremely good at Lying, no one can read him even with the use of special mind probing jutsu or lie detectors. This unique trait is extremely useful. The only way to uproot a lie created is to prove it wrong; and even then the character may simply play the lie even more.
Lie Detector
The Character has an ability to read opponents, habits, quirks and other things will point the character out as a liar. This is useful in and out of battle, though it will sometimes drive men or women insane hearing their sweethearts lie to their faces.
Skill Information:
Basic Techniques:
- Spoiler:
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.
Clan Techniques:
- Spoiler:
Name: Chakra Needle Technique
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: After focusing chakra outside the body, the chakra is formed into needles and propelled at the user's target. By using Byakugan, this technique can be used to hit very small targets, such as bees etc. This is also how the user attacks the chakra systems of the body and can destroy substances made of chakra.
Name: Hakkeshou Kaiten - Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin
Rank: -
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Hakkeshou Kaiten is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack.
If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack.
Name: Juuho Soushiken - Gentle Step Twin Lion Fist
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Juuho Soushiken is a Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuuga Hinata. After gathering chakra to her fists, Hinata will skillfully spin towards her target to avoid attack and strike them. Spectral lion heads will then form around her fists.
Name: Hakke Sanjūni Shō - Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
Rank: -
Type: Taijutsu
Description: The Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms technique is a maneuver of the Gentle Fist fighting style. It is essentially a halved version of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms, but seems to be no less effective. This technique is used to close off the flow of chakra through thirty-two chakra points of an opponent's Chakra Pathway System. This eliminates their ability to use chakra for quite some time and makes it difficult for them to move.
Name: Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a special technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 126 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32 and finally 64. This damage forcibly closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. This then limits their opponents ability to use jutsu.
Name: Eight Divination Signs, One-Hundred and Twenty-Eight Palms of the Hand
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a variation of Hakke Rokujuuyonshou, a technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to make nearly double the normal 126 strikes, striking 254 times against their individual foe or opponents. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32, 64 and finally 128 times.
Fuuinjutsu:
- Spoiler:
Name: Generic Sealing Method
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: -
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu, typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Puppets can have these hidden inside various compartments as a means of increasing their own killing potential as well as hiding useful weapons from the opponent's sight.
Name: Basic Unsealing Method
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: -
Description: This technique is a basic means of unsealing a seal. It is done by forcing chakra into the seal causing it to disrupt with the overload. A well made seal (B-Rank and up) usually have a defense capability against this type of method built into them.
Name: Shikoku Fuuin
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: -
Description: Shikoku Fuuin is a Fuuinjutsu technique used by the Leaf Sannin Jiraiya. By forming the needed sealing chakra on his finger, Jiraiya can engrave a message or another seal into an object.
Name: Exploding Seal
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is the seal used for Exploding Tags and is inscribed with a special writing, centring around the kanji for "explode" (爆, baku). Infused with chakra, they will explode after a set amount of time, remotely, or after being ignited by flame. The tags can be attached to a surface or wrapped around a weapon to be thrown at an enemy.
Name: Fūbaku Hojin - Sealed Bomb Square Release
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: An array of exploding tags are placed around an area that can be detonated with a hand seal and should their opponent attempt to move, the tags explode. Others, however, can enter with no trouble, and the tags can be shut off by the controller.
Name: Five Seals Barrier
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: -
Description: This technique creates a barrier around a place by placing four forbidden tags around a fifth. The only way to remove the barrier is by removing all five tags simultaneously. Not only would this require a group of at least five people, it also requires an immense search, since the four tags can be scattered in any direction, as far as 800 meters from the fifth seal. This makes breaking through this barrier almost impossible.
Weapon Template:
Name: Kunai
Quantity: 10x per battle.
Rank: E
Appearance:
Kunai (クナイ) are one of the more basic weapons seen in Naruto. It is a black dagger designed to be thrown, and is about the length of one's hand. Many ninja attack by attaching an exploding tag to the blade. The kunai is usually thrown so that it lodges in an object near the target, and then the explosion from the attached tag destroys said target. Kunai can also be kept on spring-loaded wires in the user's sleeve. They can also be used for close combat, like a normal knife. Empowered with "chakra flow", kunai thrown into targets can cut through solid wood and even solid stone targets.
Name: Shuriken
Quantity: 10x per battle.
Rank: E
Appearance:
A shuriken (手裏剣), like kunai, is one of the more basic weapons seen in Naruto. They are sharpened, four-pronged metal stars, useful for throwing. Although small, they can be used to distract, or, if accurate enough, can be deadly. They have an open circle in the center, used for grabbing with a finger, to avoid cutting oneself, or to put thread through. The circle is also a benefit in aerodynamics, as it ensures more accurate trajectories.
Name: Exploding Tag
Quantity: 10x per battle.
Rank: D
Appearance:
Exploding tags are scraps of paper inscribed with a special writing, centring around the kanji for "explode" (爆, baku). Infused with chakra, they will explode after a set amount of time, remotely, or after being ignited by flame. The tags can be attached to a surface or wrapped around a weapon to be thrown at an enemy. They are very versatile and one of the basic ninja tools. Ninja can confuse their enemies by obtaining fake Exploding Tags.
Name: Flash Bombs
Quantity: 5x per battle.
Rank: C
Appearance: A usual flash bomb used by most ninja. Flash bombs are small round spheres that are attached to a kunai knife, similarly to an exploding tag. Once thrown, flash bombs explode on impact, creating blinding flashes, used as a diversion.
Item Template:
[quote]Name: Seal Paper
Rank: E
Type: Supplement
Natural Abilities: This Seal Paper is useful for writing seals down on if one happens to run out of pre-written ones
[quote]Name: Small Brush and Ink
Rank: E
Type: Enhancer
Natural Abilities: This ink is used to enhance the abilities of Seal Paper and other objects so that seals may be applied to them.
Background Information
[list]History:
Pre-Academy Arc: (Born – 9)
Tadashi was the average snot-nosed Hyuga as a kid. He was taught the value of being a Main Branch member by his parents and that others who weren’t in a clan or had a Kekkei Genkai were beneath him. His father instilled this belief into Tadashi when he was little and reinforced it with various teachings. He had the linguistic skills of a nine year-old at age five and was a very charismatic speaker, finding holes in common arguments. If he wasn’t training his language skills he was at the Konohagakure Library reading to increase his knowledge. His father had high hopes for him to become the next Hyuga Clan Leader.
Academy Arc: (9 -13)
These years were very eventful, both negatively and positively for the young Hyuga. In the Academy he was isolated because he was such a snot and know-it-all. Despite this he was one of the cream of the crop. He trained during the day at the academy and with his father at night in the Gentle Fist Style. He worked his arse off to be the best he could be, to show honor to the clan. Unfortunately, his father died on a mission when he was 12. This scarred him for a long time. His father lost, and died to a shinobi without a Kekkei Genkai. It was incomprehensible to the young kid. How could his father lose to a weakling? Tadashi then decided to prove his father right by becoming the most powerful ninja ever. He graduated the academy with high rankings, although he decided to take a year off and train.
Training Arc (13-14):
During this time of discovery and renewal for Tadashi he delved into the scrolls of the Hyuga and Konoha Libraries, learning as much as he could. He would train at the training grounds during the day to work on his Fuuinjutsu. He worked day in and day out to perfect the techniques he had gathered from the library. During the night he worked with his mother on Hyuga Taijutsu which seemed to come to Tadashi very naturally. He learned many new techniques over the year he took off from missions.
The most profound moment was when he saw with his own eyes a branch ninja killed by his uncle, the head of the clan in Konohagakure. This shocked him to the core because that branch member was none other than his mother. Yes, his mother was a branch Hyuuga but definitely did not deserve to die for speaking against his uncle. This is when he made his decision to leave this tyrannical system that the Hyuuga’s in Konoha have and run away. He also learned that having a Kekkei Genkai makes you invulnerable, as was shown by his mother.
Escape Arc (14):
Tadashi, after seeing his mother pass in such a violent manner, decided to run away from Konohagakure and he inacted his plan. He packed his bags and seals with necessarily provisions. Then he went to the Hyuuga Clan Library and took one of the multiple training scrolls and put it in his bag. After that he then left the Hyuuga compound to go train, but instead went to a Granary Depot and hid in the Hay of an outgoing cart. When inside he activated his Byakugan to see if anything was happening. When he reached the gate he immediately slowed his chakra system down to such a low level that it was not detected by the guards. He waited 5 miles and then ditched the cart then headed west. He entered the Wind Country about 4 days later where he got stuck in a sandstorm. He walked around aimlessly for about 2 days until he just sat in the sand, waiting to die. Then a squadron of Chuunin from Sunagakure came across him and brought him to the grand city, which was actually not that far away. There he was warmly greeted by the Kazekage and was accepted as a Sunagakure ninja. Tadashi still wants revenge on the Konoha Hyuuga for the death of his mother.
Role-Play Sample:
This is an older RP Sample of mine...
The Assasination of Momoe Kyuka
It was a sweltering hot day in Tea Country. Saito really needed to cool down and relax. He brushed his hair out of his eyes while he kept on walking, the dirt road crunching under each of his feet, when he saw a shabby looking tea shack on the side of the road. It was made of wood but had a large water tank on the roof. Saito thought to himself "Why not? I could use a cup of tea." He entered the tea shop only to see Momoe Kyuka, the women who killed his team and caused him so much pain. He thought it unusual that none of her clan member were around but quickly dived into the back room of the shop. Being resourceful he put on the uniform and went outside to give her some tea. He poured an excess amount of the Advanced Poison from Kusagakure into her drink. He then walked out and said, [color=blue]"Miss! I have your tea ready and pipe-ing hot!"[blue] as he approached her with her impending death.
Momoe was impatient. She was tapping her finger repeatedly on the wood of the table. She then heard a familiar voice [color=blue]"Miss! I have your tea ready and pipe-ing hot!"[blue] She turned to see an average looking man with an average uniform. She didn't sense a Clone Technique but she felt like she had seen this guy before but she just couldn't put her finger on it. Momoe then said, "It's about time!" Taking the cup out of the man's hands and gulping it down quickly. She then remembered, "No, you couldn't be that Jounin!"
She then said, "It's about time!" Taking the cup out of the man's hands and gulping it down quickly. She then remembered, "No, you couldn't be that Jounin!" Saito then smirked, "So you've finally recognized me! Time to meet your death" Saito quickly made handseals and screamed, "Suiton: Suiben - Water Release: Water Whip Technique" If it is successful, Momoe will be wrapped in Saito's whip, if not Saito would probably miss the target.
Momoe then heard, "So you've finally recognized me! Time to meet your death" She then saw the whip of water head straight toward her, thought quickly, and made the handsigns for her Kawarimi no Jutsu - Replacement Technique. She was successful, Saito getting a chair rather than herself. She quickly made handsigns, Katon: Karyuu Endan - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Projectile. If this hits, Saito will be severely burned, if not he will escape somehow.
Saito, the instant he saw he gripped a chair, dispelled his whip and started making the handsigns for Suiton: Suijinheki - Water Release: Water Encampment Wall. Saito defended himself from the attack successfully by using the water from the tank on the roof for his defense. Saito then decided to used this water in an attack, making handsigns he screamed, Suiton: Daibakufu no Jutsu – Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique sending a powerful jet of water at Momoe. If it hit's it will severely weaken Momoe, if not it will do no damage.
Momoe was shocked that the Jounin was able to block her attack so well. She got prepared for the next attack, all she heard was the opponent scream Suiton: Daibakufu no Jutsu – Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique, She went to move but felt a deep pain in her chest causing her to stop. [i]"Crap, I've been poisoned!"[i] she then was hit with a torrent of water, sending her clear out of the tea shop and into a strong oak tree. She sat there motionless with her heart starting to beat harder and a bit irregular. She knew she was going to die soon since their were no medical ninja in the area she knew not to mention she broke three ribs and her shoulder when she hit the tree. She screamed, "Finish me of in a grandiose style Ninja of Konoha for I shall speak great tales of you in the afterlife!"
Saito then made handseals and said, Chakra Ken: Daikōshō - Chakra Swords: Great Cross Slash. He need no distraction in this situation. He headed toward her with the two chakra swords hoping they'd hit home in as painless of a fashion as possible. He may hate the woman but torturing her any longer is just criminal. He then charged at her, chakra swords ready to strike.
Momoe then felt the Chakra Swords enter her form. She passed away quickly and painlessly from the attack considering the poison basically numbed her body.
Saito then looked over the body only finding a ninjutsu scroll. He hoped to look over this at a different time. He then dug a grave for her in the soft soil of the Tea Country and left with out saying a word. He got back on the path and opened up the scroll, saying to himself, "Earth Release: Terracotta Army... Sounds Interesting..."
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|   | | Travis
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| | Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Tadashi Fri 23 Apr 2010, 8:55 pm | |
| Fix your coding, some parts are terrible.
Rank all jutsu.
More looks, like a few more lines.
A few more lines for Personality.
For Fuuinjutsu I'm not entirely positive, but I'm sure you have to be Chuunin. Let me double check on that. |
| | | | Saito Asuhara
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| | Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Tadashi Mon 26 Apr 2010, 8:41 pm | |
| | I think that is all the edits I have had to do... so... BUMPITY BUMP BUMP! |
| | | | CYANIDE CANDY
Posts : 1084
| | Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Tadashi Thu 29 Apr 2010, 1:17 am | |
| | Sorry, Suna Genin is now closed. Kumo and Kiri are still open, though. |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 35
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| | Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Tadashi Mon 03 May 2010, 6:10 pm | |
| | All the villages are now open again. Ill get to looking at this in a bit. |
| | | | ₡amisado
Age : 30
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| | Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Tadashi Fri 21 May 2010, 5:23 am | |
| Appearance needs some more content
Shikoku Fuuin: Remove cannon references
Each arc needs two paragraphs
Clean up this app, tis messy
We hold you to your RP sample, just a note |
| | | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| | Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Tadashi Fri 25 Jun 2010, 10:28 pm | |
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