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Idaku
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 |  Subject: Akida, Idaku Tue 20 Apr 2010, 5:28 am | |
| Basic Information:
Name:
Idaku Akita
Secondary Title:
The Flame Alchamist
Age:
13
Gender:
male
Physical Appearance:
Idaku is about five eight and weighs about one hundred thirty-five pounds even. He has short black hair that is a little long for a boy, and a bit messy. He has amber brown eyes, almost gold that seem to know more then he lets on. He has a slight and lithe musculature that wouldn’t be noticed if he was wearing baggy clothing. He carries himself very confidently and is almost always smirking but is in no way cocky.
Idaku likes to dress up and, if he’s not in his shinobi uniform, you’ll always see him in a suit, with or without a vest underneath it. On cold days, he usually wears scarfs, overcoats and gloves.
Has a tendency to wear dark or neutral colors, like dark blue, brown and black in Civilian life and on the field though the styles differ. In civilian life he will wear sleek good looking Hakama and Yukata but on the field he will wear an armored black shirt with lose fitting pants and thick leather steel toed boots.
Personality:
On the surface Idaku seems rather lazy and nonchalant about things. He doesn’t like to do too much and won’t go out of his way to train physically preferring to focus on his alchemic studies. He is rather social and talkative though, making jokes at the expense of those around him even if he doesn’t know them.
But under the skin he is rather intelligent and calculating thinking ahead many steps in advance and looking at things from all angles. He spends most of his time thinking ‘how would this person react to this or that’ sometimes putting a hypothesis to the test at random times throughout his day. This analytical mind has served him well in his alchemy being able to discern how to find new formulae and circles.
At times he can also be a bit of a womanizer, using a combination of charm good looks and impressive alchemy to score the eyes of the female population of the village.
He is also a very loyal friend willing to put his life on the line for his friends no matter what. He will destroy anyone who tries to attack his home or friends. What really gets his gull is betrayal, you do that and you WILL feel the burn of his flames. He doesn’t like to repeat himself and is a natural inspiring leader when he puts effort into something. He likes to help people who are in need for some reason he can’t explain, though he guesses it has something to do with the part of his past he can’t remember.
Since he does have a severe case of amnesia he uses it to get out of doing something, but in all reality he is trying his hardest to access that part of his brain, it is not to uncommon to find him meditating trying to remember what his life was before he woke up in the desert outside of Suna.
Catch Phrase: “the damage to your body isn’t as bad as it feels right now but let it be a reminder to you, don’t mess with the flame alchemist!”-after his first attack
“You try that again and your dead!”
“please a little knife like that couldn’t touch me if you had even tried!”
Clan Information:
https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/approved-clans-f18/alchemy-clan-bring-on-the-hurt-t76.htm
Rank Information:
Rank:
genin
Village Affiliation:
Suna
Special Information:
Character Speciality:
Main: Alchemy (molecular manipulation)
Sub: taijutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: none
Sub: none
Special Characteristics:
Skill Information:
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.
Jutsu Template: (note all of this is at basic alchemic level limitations)
Name: Flame Alchemy
rank Basic
type molecular manipulation
Description: Idaku is capable of very specific form of alchemy with a set of gloves made of pyrotex cloth which spark when he snaps his fingers. Using these and a special transmutation circle printed on them he manipulates the concentration of oxygen in the surrounding air, raising its density to a level at which it becomes combustible and creating pathways of oxygen through which he can direct the ensuing flame birthed by the spark. The 'snap' sound is caused by the instantaneous speed at which the gases and sparks react together and pop (not his fingers actually 'snapping', to common belief.) the only down side to this form of alchemy and depending on the gloves is that in rain or intense humidity such as mist he cannot use them as it makes the cloth damp and unusable.
name[/b ]Object Repair
[b]rank basic
type repair
description an alchemist can repair Any small or medium sized object can be repaired at this level, no matter how complex. This could mean a radio, a clock, a weapon, etc. As long as the alchemist has all of the necessary parts, the repair can be done.
name weapon creation
rank basic
type creation
Weapon Creation- Most basic weapons can be created at this level. This includes swords, spears out of the earth, throwing knives, and other basic weaponry. No extra alchemic effects can be immediately applied to these weapons during creation, at this level.
name Environmental Manipulation
rank basic
type creation
description At the basic level, medium sized walls of earth can be created, or even spikes from the ground. This encompasses all basic manipulation of the area around you. There are far too many examples to list, but a few can include- Creating thin pillars of earth which wrap around your opponent, a metal cage around your opponent, things jutting from walls, floors, or ceilings. If faced with a wall, you could create a doorway in that wall.
Name Oxygen de Gentleman Strategy
rank basic
type molecular manipulation
He sometimes uses this technique for the purpose of scoring a date. In his "Oxygen de Gentleman Strategy", he uses atmosphere manipulation symbol on his gloves to raise the oxygen density around a specific woman to the point that she becomes dizzy. He then, rushes to her side to prevent her from falling, asks her if she is all right and follows up with other sweet words and an invitation for tea. In battle he uses this technique to disorient his enemy for a quick kill.
weapon template
Item Template:
- Quote :
- Name: pyrotex/ignition cloth gloves
Rank: D
Type: other
Natural Abilities:the name is pretty self explanatory. By snapping his fingers Idaku can create a spark which he uses to make his flames. They also have the specific alchemic array for fire creation which he uses for his battle alchemy.
Name:pre-drawn alchemic circles
Rank: D
Type: other
Natural Abilities: depending on which he uses he can do any one of the other basic transmutation abilities repair, destruction, weapon creation or environmental manipulation. he has one for each of the diferent forms listed in his jutsu section and uses them still because he has lost his memory of what he learned in the gate of truth along with all of his other memories.
Background Information
[list]History:
Idaku was born in Armestris after the fall of the Homunculi and the evil that was father. He is the son of Roy Mustang and Riza Hawkeye. Mustang was the Gran Fuhrur when he was born. He lived in Central with his mother and father for most of his life training in alchemy under his father. He was a natural at it almost as much a genius as Edward Elric had been.
He began to take after his father in a lot of ways, both in style and his way of only doing something if there was a chance to rank up, although for him it was in school rather then military standing.
Since his father had been blinded in the fight against the Humonculi Idaku focused most of his time on trying to find a way to alchemically restore his father’s sight. But his one ambition was to help his father get his goal of returning Armestris back to a democracy as it had been before the fall. As such he would go around school trying to convince the other students that going back to a democracy was the best thing for the country. At first he had gotten into a lot of fights with the other students as a lot of them where the children of military officers and where proud of it but eventually people started to come around.
He used his power as the son of the Fuhrer to pull together the youth of the nation to help his father start the political reform. But before the reform could be finished His parents where assassinated. Major General Mira Armstrong took care of Idaku after that, though he decided to stay home form school and spent most of his time studying alchemy. Most thought it was just his way of grieving, throwing himself into his father’s art and learning it to the best of his ability but in reality he was researching the taboo. On his thirteenth birthday he locked himself in his room and would not come out. He drew the proper seal and gathered enough material to create two human bodies.
He thought he had everything down just right but he was wrong. After activating the circle everything was a blur. He remembers snatches of information, deep powerful secrets of alchemy, a giant purple eye, black hands grabbing him and throwing him into a deep abyss. In that abyss he was given all the knowledge of alchemy but since he is so young his mind suppressed most of it except that which he already knew. Other then that he remembers nothing of his life before appearing in the desert in the outskirts of Suna. A family with the name Akita adopted him and he joined the ninja academy.
He showed them his skills as a flame alchemist and they promoted him to genin with a brief knowledge of ninjutsu but he can only perform the most basic of moves, though he excels at taijutsu.
(bold is what he lost as a result of preforming human transmutation)
Role-Play Sample:
Caiden sat at the campfire stirring his pot of stew. I hate camping it always gets me on edge, he thought slapping a mosquito that tried to suck the blood from his neck. “damn bugs,” he cursed under his breath. He didn’t even know why he was out here in the first place. It was Darek’s turn to hunt any way. Sure caiden was better at tracking but it was boring as hell just sitting out in the night waiting for some damn animal to trundle along in your path like some fool.
He heard a stick break off in the distance. He was immediately on alert, if it’s a bear I swear I’ll get Derek for this he thought picking up his bow and arrow. He cocked the string back and watched the bushes in the direction the sound came from. The moment they started to rustle he fired off one and expertly notched another arrow in a few seconds later. He heard the satisfying thunk as the arrow hit, a second later a roar of displeaser. damn it, it is a bear! At least we’ll have good meat for a while….if I can kill it. he thought gulping at the last thougth and firing off another arrow.
The beast tore through the bushes and he saw where he had hit it, once right above the shoulder and another right in the paw. It raised up on it’s hind legs and gave a thunderous roar. It took all his will not to piss himself and run as he quickly notched another arrow and shot for the beasts open maw. The arrow flew right into the back of the throat and it fell down with a crash, spitting up blood.
Last edited by Idaku on Tue 27 Apr 2010, 7:27 am; edited 8 times in total |
|   | | John
Age : 31
Posts : 2547
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Tue 20 Apr 2010, 6:13 am | |
| | Application denied. Don't directly copy characters from other anime. |
| | | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Tue 20 Apr 2010, 6:31 am | |
| | this is what patty told me to do |
| | | | Pattycakes
Age : 30
Posts : 1701
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Tue 20 Apr 2010, 6:34 am | |
| It's okay Johnny, as long as he writes everything up himself, it's kosher
Just remeber Idaku, you cannot copy and paste history, personality, looks, etc, I'll know if you do 
and given the nature of this, it has to be longer then the average application.
John, I can give you a PM if you'd like =) |
| | | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Tue 20 Apr 2010, 6:45 am | |
| | then let me edit a moment |
| | | | Pattycakes
Age : 30
Posts : 1701
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Tue 20 Apr 2010, 6:52 am | |
| | Idaku, you'll have to make a custom character. |
| | | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Tue 20 Apr 2010, 6:57 am | |
| | meaning? |
| | | | Pattycakes
Age : 30
Posts : 1701
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Tue 20 Apr 2010, 6:58 am | |
| | Meaning you'll have to make him from scratch |
| | | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Tue 20 Apr 2010, 7:00 am | |
| | oh alright' |
| | | | CYANIDE CANDY
Posts : 1084
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Thu 22 Apr 2010, 1:19 am | |
| | What happened with your other character 'Idaku Kenpan'? Does he need to be archived? |
| | | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Thu 22 Apr 2010, 7:50 am | |
| | yeah he didn't work out the clan was a bit to complicated for me to get down on words, i only just got back into rping after a year of not doing it so yeah |
| | | | CYANIDE CANDY
Posts : 1084
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Fri 23 Apr 2010, 5:05 am | |
| | Just making sure, is this ready to go over now? |
| | | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Fri 23 Apr 2010, 7:36 am | |
| | yes ma'am |
| | | | Idaku
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| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Sat 24 Apr 2010, 8:03 pm | |
| | hello is any one going to look this over? |
| | | | Travis
Posts : 414
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Sat 24 Apr 2010, 8:08 pm | |
| Your gonna need more looks.
Also can you specify somewhere what Alchemy skills you possess cause I cannot find it anywhere.
Also I'd like Pat to look over it seeing as he created the clan. |
| | | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Sat 24 Apr 2010, 8:14 pm | |
| | its in the jutsu section and it's the same as roy's, what do you mean more looks |
| | | | Travis
Posts : 414
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Sat 24 Apr 2010, 9:25 pm | |
| More details on your looks.
Who's Roy? |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 35
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Sat 24 Apr 2010, 10:39 pm | |
| Not everyone knows who Roy Mustang is or FMA in general, dont assume that.
konoha has been closed, why that hasnt been announced yet, im not sure. However final approval will be up to Pat due to the fact that he will be checking genin activity.
Grammar needs to be fixed. Capitalization, etc.
What travis is asking for is an actual technique in the correct format, not a copy and paste explination of the abilities you can use. Ask Pat for help on that as he had the general idea going when he created Ling.
Custom items need atleast 3 sentences of descriptions.
Personality also needs to be longer.
Edit also what travis told you too. |
| | | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Sun 25 Apr 2010, 3:36 am | |
| | alright then that will all be fixed, what villages are open so i can but down the right place |
| | | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Tue 27 Apr 2010, 7:28 am | |
| | edited what was requested |
| | | | Vegapunk
Posts : 2032
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Tue 27 Apr 2010, 8:44 am | |
| - Sort out your appearance image its all wacked out.
- Dont just link the clan, show the complete clan on your application please.
- Redo all your jutsu, they have to be in site format. Even though they aren't technally jutsu they still need to be neat and correct.
- Sort the item out. Half is in the quote and half is out of it.
- Sort out some spacing in your appearance, personality and history.
- Your history will need to be more extensive, atleast a couple of paragraphs more.
- Quote :
- and given the nature of this, it has to be longer then the average application.
Quote from Pat. And by what I am looking at it isnt above average. There are many mistakes which need to be looked at. Its Pats clan so I will give him the over all approval on this. |
| | | | ₡amisado
Age : 30
Posts : 1256
| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Fri 21 May 2010, 5:34 am | |
| Your picture coding on your appearance is messed up, just a heads up on that
For everything else I feel that Pat would be the most capable of checking it, it is his clan after all.
Pat bump |
| | | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| | Subject: Re: Akida, Idaku Fri 25 Jun 2010, 10:29 pm | |
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