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Raidō
Age : 24 Posts : 8
| Subject: Raidō Yoruma Thu 07 Aug 2014, 4:15 am | |
| Yoruma, RaidoTHE INFO. Name: Yoruma, Raidō, Nickname: Rai or Shinigami to his Targets Age: 14 Gender:Male Appearance: Ice blue hair with matching eyes. Wears net armor under his clothes, along with arm-guards to conceal his weapons. His eyes are often described as calculating. His off duty attire consists of a blue short sleeved shirt, blue sandals and navy pants. He is around 5'3 and weighs about 114 pounds. He is small for his age, and not at all buff, his body is lightly toned like a swimmers. His battlefield uniform consists of a black flak jacket with his headband worn around his neck. His pants and sandals are also black so it is easier for him to carry out assassinations. His wrist blades are hidden under his metal arm guards. While his smoke bombs are kept in a canister at his waist. Due to the fact his clan has no set type of characteristics, his eyes and hair are from his mother. His personality, however is from his father. His gait when casually walking is described as relaxed. He appears to be simply indifferent to the suffering that goes on in the ninja world. His stance in battle is low to the ground in a crouched manner. He sways slightly from side to side in order to throw off enemy attacks. His swaying motion changes randomly to avoid a pattern. His overall bearing is one of, "if you mess with me, I will feed you your teeth". He has a very sadistic wolfish smile when caught in a battle rage. While enraged he laughs frequently, in a very mocking and chilling tone. His smile is said to be insane enough to freeze hell. His insanity is part of his isolation and only slips in battle. If someone can manage to comfort him, he may be able to reverse it. But if you enrage him..you better run.
Forehead Protector: Black in color, worn around his neck.
Personality: Raidō can be very negative and cynical at times. He dislikes most people and usually hates working in teams. He has a well known mean streak and often taunts or degrades his enemies. Sometimes Raidō is seen as arrogant due to the fact he despises those weaker than himself. Although he seems to care about nothing but himself, he will aid his team mates in battle...provided it helps him. He has a tendency to outsmart himself, and underestimate his opponents. In battle he is fairly quiet, only speaking to issue commands or taunt his enemy. Raidō has been observed "missing" his target causing pain and a slow death. Raidō is exceptional at Taijutsu and Weaponry skill. His favorite pastimes include playing a flute that his mother gave him and cleaning his "toys" (aka weapons). He is almost rarely seen outside his house and immediately dislikes strangers, he is even cold to his friends. He is extremely introverted but wont hesitate to break a few necks if you provoke him. He is often found hanging around alone in either graveyards or overgrown forest areas. He doesnt have very many friends, and those he does are far and few between. He likes the comfort of his flute and weapons better than most people. He hates ramen but has a very soft spot for sushi. Clan: Yoruma
Nindō: I will not bow.
THE NINJA. Origin: Near the border of The Land of Bears and The Land of Fire
Affiliation: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
Specialities: Taijutsu, Weaponry,(close range and Mid range)
Elemental Affinities: Raiton Fuuton
Combat Style: Acrobatic Taijutsu attacks enhanced with his clans secret blade techniques, emphasizing agility and split second timing. He also uses his clans inherent agility to pull off kicks and flips while lashing out with blades attached to his wrists . All the while his unarmed attacks are reinforced with raiton chakra to effectively stun and confuse. He uses hit and run attacks rarely ever attacking head on, but is at not disadvantage if he choses to do so. He is somewhat skilled in kendo as he has a katana. His reactions to elemental ninjutsu are fairly quick, only being Doton that causes him the most strife due to the uncertain nature of the ground. He does not know how to counter puppetry very well due to the fact that they can not be killed. When outnumbered he will attempt to confuse as many enemies as he can and then fade into the surrounding landscape to plan his next move. He will then attempt to pick off the enemy one by one from hidden locations. This tactic does not work as well in a barren landscape.
Special Characteristics:
Name: Chakra Aura Rank: C Type: Social Based Description: Many people have vibrant, stunning personalities. Others can be colder than a Yuki's heart. Whatever the case, these people have personalities of such extremes, it even influences their chakra. While giving it no particularly special features, morbid individuals may find their chakra to carry a blackened tinge, carefree and happy ones may be surprised to find they emit a yellow glow, and those who are quick to anger might find a red surprise reminiscent of a Bijuu host. Color: Black -
Name: Improved Perception Rank: C Type: Mental Based Physical Requirements: N/A Description: The ninja trains their skill in perception and analyzing their environment to more distinct levels. Most physical motions are identified and picked up by the ninja whether its a movement in a leaf or a change in temperature. This skill is handy when faced with Genjutsu as it allows the user to identify the fact they are in an illusion in less time and with less clues than one would otherwise need. However although they can sense the Genjutsu they must rely on other methods of breaking the spell. The ninja also becomes extremely perceptive and observant when it comes to people, being able to pick out mood changes or better understand character. In addition, this skill becomes useful in combat, where the Ninja grows to understand the patterns, habits and the 'rhythm' of the opponent over periods of time.
THE BACKGROUND. History: Arc 1
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Born around the border of Konohagakure and the Land of Bears, he is used to rugged landscape. Not much is known about his parents except that they were noted assassins and were killed during one of their contracts. Due to his clans inherent trait of assassination techniques, he is able to use some assassination ninja arts with ease. Although the more complicated techniques are beyond him. He was nicknamed Shinigami by his clan members because of his love of death. His early childhood was spent learning how to be a proper assassin, quick, quiet, clean, and efficient. Though during training he failed his efficient test several times. Until the time of his parents deaths,he spent most of his time with them, learning how to play the flute from his mother, and learning how to be a proper assassin from his father. After his parents had passed on, he left home and tried to survive in the wild, after many trial and error attempts and a run in with a bear, he managed to become self reliant. Arc 2
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Even though he is deemed a beginner assassin by most, he still has a lot to learn, and is a long ways from professional. He has yet to become part of a village or strike out as a rouge ninja. His chakra became a dark black color early in life due to his isolation and often misguided attempts to be recognized. He enjoys the suffering of others but only when it is convenient to him. Most of the others shunned him because of this very reason. Along with his clans nefarious nature, he found himself at a loss in the social scope of things and developed a chakra that ninja close to him describe as, malevolent. As for his training regiment, as he traveled across the land he became very good at intimidation and stealing. He would run kilometers from town to town and climb steep mountains. Even over rooftops to escape the local police force once or twice. He never has really used his Hijutsu yet as he has not had a reason to do so. But he always keeps the skills in reserve, hidden and as sharp as razors.
Arc 3
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Since his parents untimely death he left his homeland searching for a purpose in this confusing world. He has since traveled to the Land of Lightning to search for Kumogakure, but his search is turning out harder than he thought, maybe he can find a helpful Samaritan on the road who can point him in the right direction..
Arc 4
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Since becoming a Kumogakure Genin he has yet to be assigned to a team. Even though he dreads working with others he knows it is necessary in order to survive. He hopes his new teacher will be more understanding of his personality than the other ninja around him, but he seriously doubts this. He is most looking forward to taking a mission and proving how much better he is than his fellow students.
Roleplay Sample: A boy of about 14 stands under a tree in a secluded grove. Half of his form is hidden by shadows, he doesn't look all that impressive. He is short for his age topping out at 5'4, and weighs around 115 pounds. As he looks up, he has ice blue eyes that seem oddly detached from the world, and just for a second, it seems can see a sadistic light glints in their cool depths. But just as fast as it appears, its gone. He turns slowly to look at you with a defiant and questioning look in his eye. He looks you over slowly noting what armor or weapons you have on you. He just as slowly, almost lazily looks away as his attention is occupied by a butterfly flying around a nearby flower. Anyone would suddenly get a feeling of unease as he sits there observing you. Almost as if he has a black aura of doom around him. Then, suddenly it disappears and a gentler side of a tortured person is seen, almost as if he has a gentle and caring side. However, as he looks away from the butterfly, the feeling returns. The immediate area feels heavy with sadness it seems. Raido turns and heads away from the tree in his lazy gait. He continues along the road humming silently and tunelessly to himself as he continues on his way. He never once looked back to see if you were tailing him. It was almost as if he knew his presence unsettled the surrounding area...Odd right..? Or is it..
Personality Sample: ...What're you looking at? I'm honestly that interesting to you? Ya know, I thought only Academy students could be dumb, I guess I was wrong...Yea, that was meant for you, got a problem with it or something?
THE ARSENAL.
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Name: Retractable Wrist Blade Rank: C Type: Close Range - Gauntlet Quantity: 2 Description: As its name implies, the user equips these retractable wrist blades so that the attach to their forearm without risking exposure. These blades can spring forth when needed to surprise any opponent fought in hand to hand combat.
Name: Katana Rank: C Type: Close Range - Long Blade Quantity: 1 Description: Commonly refereed to as a 'Samurai sword', the katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance. It has a curved, slender, single edged blade up to three feet in length, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. As such, it has become renowned for its sharpness and cutting ability.
Name: Knife Boots Rank: D Type: Weapon Appearance: A simple size 10 set of boots, made of polished black... whatever it is boots are made of, with a combination of laces and a bucklable strap across the neck, with thick, well insulated rubber soles. Oddly thick soles, at that. The secret of these boots however, lies within theses soles. Buried within them is a mechanism which, with the proper manipulation of the toes while in the boot, cause a short, 3 inch long blade to pop out at the toe-end of the shoe, parallel with the sole. While not particularly dangerous, it can add a nasty surprise to what at first appeared to be only a glancing blow. Quantity: 2 Storage: Worn on feet. Special Abilities: Only the element of surprise. Jutsu
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Name: Yugana Shi no Hitosashi (Dance Of The Graceful Death) Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close Element: N/A Description: He starts using his/her weapon in a free-flow system of movements, making no stops for rest. The movements are of a spinning fashion, utilizing dance-like acrobacy, such as flips, jumps, rolls to inflict highly damaging cuts. The longer the jutsu continues, the more momentum the weapons gain, cutting stronger and faster. At this rank all he can do is cause heavy bleeding.
Name: Yoru no Hitosashi (Dance of the Night) Rank: Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The technique begins with Him slashing repeatedly at the opponent with his weapon. Rather than focus on a single strike, the movement of the weapon and Raido; he advances towards their target, lashing out repeatedly and unceasingly, as if in some intricate dance. With each consecutive slash Raido and his weapons gain momentum and consequently, this causes the power of the slashes to increase. Once the he finds an opening, a finishing thrust will be performed to end the dance and accumulate all that momentum and power into a single attack.
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Name: Ikinari Sentou (Sucker Punch) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close to Mid (0 to 0,5 metres) Element: N/A Description: After using a smoke bomb, his clone charges out of the smoke, with intention of being struck down, while the opponent is distracted, he then sneaks up behind and punches a with a small amount of lightning chakra that numbs the opponent for one post, making it harder for him/her to move and dodge. The punch itself is only slightly stronger then a normal punch.
Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder Rank:[/b] C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description:[/b] This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock.
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range N/A Element N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread.
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
FACE CLAIM. Character Claim: Kuroko Tetsuya
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| Subject: Re: Raidō Yoruma Thu 07 Aug 2014, 7:19 am | |
| Welcome to the Site! Allow me to help walk you through this character application.
- First of in your title we need your village and rank after your name? i.e. [Konoha, Genin].
- On the top if your app please place a picture of your character. To do this find the image URL copay and paste it. Next use the image code which is
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[img][/img]
- If you notice right under where the image goes it says Last name, First name. Please type your name there as well.
- Please explain why his nickname is Shinigami.
- Please add more to the appearance, aim for between 300-400
words. Describe your characters physical appearance which includes such thing as weight, height, muscular definition, facial features, any distinct markings, eye and hair colors, skin completion, etc. Move onto your attires, surely you would have the basic ninja attire for your village or organization unless you were a Nukenin, if this is the case, elaborate on the basics but add a unique little tweak to your official uniform. What kind of other attires do you wear, surely you are not always dressed in ninja wear, what do you where at home, during a day off? Any accessories?
- When it comes to personality. Again aim for between 300-400 words. Include things like what your character likes and dislikes, what their hobbies are, what they enjoy doing and what they don't. What foods they like? How do they think and act in battle? This should be easy for most of you, we just ask for you to be creative.
- For Origin I would ask for you to put which country exactly you were born in, I assume you were born in HI NO KUN (The fire Country) I ask because multiple lands border the Land of Bears.
- You can have two Elements.
- Specialties are the following:Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Weaponry, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Medical, Weaponry and/or Puppetry. For a tad bit more detail then please click this link.
- Combat should be around 250 words. How does your character like to fight? Hit and run tactics, a fearless tank on the battlefield or do you lurk in the shadows and kill silently. There are many different tactics and here is where you can write a brief description of the combat style in which encapsulates your character. This in some regards can be seen as a characters 'Combat Nindō'. Include such things as your strengths/weaknesses, the range in which your character likes to fight, any martial or other styles they have learn't, and your 'trump card' or otherwise known as 'Signature Jutsu'.
Special Characteristics can be found here. You can have one plus one Social. They both have to be C-ranked.
- When it come to history please add more detail.
- Rp sample for Genin must as least be 250 words, also try not to control what another player thinks about your or control another player's reaction.
- For starting jutsu you can have 15 (not counting Academy) One Kit and (depending on your Specs) weapons. If you have Weaponry as a spec you may have two C-ranked weapons. Other wise for now D ranked is the highest you can go. The jutsu list is here
- . The kits. And of course weapons. Male sure you put the jutsu and equipment in their proper format
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[b]Name:[/b] Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique [b]Rank:[/b] E [b]Type:[/b] Genjutsu [b]Range:[/b] N/A [b]Medium:[/b] Optical [b]Element:[/b] N/A [b]Description:[/b] This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. [b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1CP per 5 clones
- For face claim what we mean by Source is where is the character from. It is an original piece of work please state as well as the artist.
- This may seem over whelming but have no fear I am here to help. If you have any questions what so ever please ask me or any of the staff. Also the chat box is a good place to go as well.
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| | | Raidō
Age : 24 Posts : 8
| Subject: Re: Raidō Yoruma Fri 08 Aug 2014, 1:16 am | |
| Ok, I tweaked it a large amount, is there anything I'm still missing? |
| | | Monk
Age : 31 Posts : 177
| Subject: Re: Raidō Yoruma Fri 08 Aug 2014, 2:53 am | |
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- Please put your character image at the top of the App, remember it's the URL in between
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[img][/img]
- Add more in Personality, Appearance, Combat style, and History
- Rp sample for genin must be 250 words.
- Your specialities are still Taijutsu and "assassin techniques". The speciaities are Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Weaponry, Puppetry, and Medical Justu. If you choose Weaponry then you must choose two range types (Close 0-5 meters) (Medium 5-10 meters) (Long 10+ meters.)
- When it comes to the weapons you may two of your primary at your current rank(C) and for your secondary you may have them at one rank below your current rank. (D)
- Please look here at special characteristics. Choose one social and one chakra/mental/physical. If you would like to make one up then please use the proper template here.
- You can have (And I recommend) 15 starting jutsu plus the Academy at no charge. What other members do is categorize them into spoilers.
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[spoiler][/spoiler] I.E. Taijutsu- Spoiler:
You would put all your Taijutsu in this tab. Makes the app look better over all and take up less space. This will also help you look for the jutsu when on a mission or spar. I will also recommend sorting them by rank.
- I would also do this with weapons.
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| Is this application still being worked on? |
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