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葉 Ootenkai, Zero. 葉
"Just don't get on my bad side."


Name: Zero Ootenkai.
Alias: None.
Age: 17.
Gender: Male.
Appearance:

Zero has never considered himself to be truly handsome despite the many claims he'd encountered. In honestly he has that unique 'boy next door' look that isn't model quality but hones on a more natural and humble appearance. One of his most renown feature is his wavy midnight hair which sometimes can appear to be dark purple in certain lighting. It is of healthy volume and luster. He always sports his hair in a short and wavy free flowing style and prefers to have its length stay a few inches above the shoulders like his father. Like his hair, his eyes and eyebrows are also a lustrous dark violet color. His eyebrows are naturally full and groomed to perfection. When emotional however they can become rather animated and allows for him to perpetuate emotions such as anger or sadness, simply through them alone. His eyes are large and bright, showcasing his youth and vitality through their perfection. His lips are very small and are almost equal to his creamy skin complexion, which makes them sometimes unnoticeable when sealed. All his facial features however equates to the handsome young man that he is. A perfect combination of haunting looks and with a small hint of innocence.

Physically, Zero is rather short but extremely well built. Every muscle on his body could be considered in Olympic level condition. He stands at a height of 5'4 which is seemingly short in comparison to other boys his age but not bad enough to be picked on about. His skin is a natural cream color with minor shades of light pink around the cheek and other fleshy areas of his body. He has noticeable body hair predominantly in the chest area due to puberty, as well as on his forearms and legs. His voice is like the mixture of cake and wine, smooth and elegant yet young and sweet. There is only one marking that can be located on Zero's body, which is a small tribal moon symbol located on his upper back area.

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Zero has two dominant clothing attires within his wardrobe, one being his casual clothing outfit and the other being his shinobi uniform. Sometimes both can be used interchangeably depending on the situation. His casual attire, as the name applies, his is choice of clothing for everyday activities within the village. Such as attending meetings or local shopping. His combat uniform is a special garb given to him once he became chunin, and is worn when conducting issued missions. In his casual set, Zero sports and long a long sleeved blue pin-striped shirt and camouflage pattern pants that come mid calf length. He wears his forehead protector on the front of his dark blue holster which he uses to carry his sword. Also, has weapon holsters strapped onto each of his legs along with his ninja kit strapped on his hip. His combatant uniform is identical to a traditional anbu operative. Long sleeved black shirt and pants, with a navy blue flat jacket. Unique altercations that he implemented himself to the outfit is extending the neck of the shirt to his lower face. This hides his neck in the clothing as well as his chin. Instead of utilizing two weapon holsters on both legs like his casual attire, his combat uniform only has one on his right leg.

Personality:
Zero is the embodiment of nearly all aspects that would define oneself as a powerful prince. He is classy, intelligent, kind and often times quirky. He radiates authority through his soft spoken words like no other. Captivating the minds of his allies and striking fear into the hearts of those who challenge him. Every movement of his is motioned by otherworldly grace as though he knows everything and cares about nothing.  Because of his both positive and negative popularity in the other villages, he is very matriculate of his actions and occasional ruthlessness. He controls his team with an iron fist and speaks to them in a stern and powerful voice. However setting aside his ruling nature, Zero is very cordial towards his villagers and makes sure their needs are satisfied and their families are taken care of. However, he is very independent and quiet sometimes, putting his needs before any others.

At heart, Zero is truly a fighter to the very end. He was forged in the planes of war and will back down from no challenger who poses a threat whether its passive aggressive or aggressive. He can be snarly, rude, and blatant with his words and will find what gets under a person's skin. He is a courageous lad who will go to any length to protect himself and his family, even if it means putting his life on the line. However unlike many other shinobi, Zero doesn't claim to be the best at his game, even doubting himself sometimes. But it is because of his determination and heart that he overcomes his enemies and becomes victorious at the end.

One of Zero's favorite things to do would be going swimming in the lakes of Kirigakure. He has a deep love for nature and gardening and a extensive knowledge of nearly all species of plants and aquatic animals. He usually goes to the lakes during sunrise after a good morning breakfast. He sees the lakes as a important part of Kiri's society and even himself. They remind him that life can be beautiful at times and to cherish every moment with your loved ones. He also enjoys playing a good game of chess with the 'youngsters' in the village. Zero sees the young children of his village as the next generation and hope of Kirigakure.

Zero doesn't have many dislikes given his rather calm nature, but one would definably be those who threaten his family and his peace at home. There have been a few individuals in Zero's past that had done so, none of them survived more than a minute afterwards. He would go to great lengths to protect his love ones. What he also doesn't like is when his peers doubt themselves or their abilities. He has high faith in his teammates and hates when hearing "I can't."

Preservation is a trait Zero possesses which is how he keeps his village and himself alive no matter what hardship they come by. He has years of experience and knowledge which gives him the ability to see through and counter any threat with pure clarity and precision. He can create and mobilize tactics quicker than the enemy can counteract which makes him a great strategist and a quick thinker. He has one of the greatest intuitions of his time which he uses to make needed split seconds decisions if they should arise. In the art of keeping oneself alive, Zero is the greatest at this feat. Which is one of the key reasons why he is so powerful today.


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Nindō: "Where man faces duality, I have multiplicity. To have many intricate layers in your personality grants one diversity and adaptability, but renders their sanity."

Forehead Protector: Located in the front of his chest holster on his casual attire. In uniform it his village symbol can be seen behind his collar engraved in a small metal plate.
Clan: The Ootenkai Clan.
Origin: Water Country.
Affiliation: Village Hidden In Mist.
Rank: Chunin.
Classification/Profession: Shinobi.
Specialties: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu.
Elemental Affinities:
Basic:
|:Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] 100px-Nature_Icon_Firesvg-11_zps9750565b Katon Release.
|:Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Earth-2 Doton Release.
Advanced:
|:Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] 1ed99b5d-3753-41ae-9bbc-e61d9f6132c0_zps8ff564a6 Routon Release.

Combat Style: Zero is an extremely gifted combatant who has proven to be well diverse in multiple forms of combat given his intense training and natural gifts. Although classifying himself as a long ranged combatant, he is shown to be able to fair well against physical attacks of normal caliber. Possessing a Olympic level body and general knowledge of hand to hand combat, his body can prove to be a formidable weapon to others. Quite often he will equip a weapon to substitute his average Taijutsu with either a kunai or a ninjato. This makes his attacks more lethal than his normal punches and kicks. It can be said that we favors Bukijutsu instead of Taijutsu given his constant use of throwing weapons when forced into close ranged combat.  

Elementalism is Zeros strong point when it comes to dealing with enemies as efficiently and quickly as possible. He is a growing master in the art of ranged combat and has been training in the art since birth. His elemental attacks are highly dangerous and versatile. He is a wielder of two powerful basic elements, Doton and Katon, and utilizes them to their finest degree to either alter a landscape or kill. Aside from the basic elements, he is also an advanced element user. He wields the powerful element, Routon, a wax substance that can be super heated to melting like potency. It can be used both offensively and defensively and he has developed an arsenal of techniques utilizing said element. His typical style of execution is melting his enemies in wax in any form possible.

Aside from his Ninjutsu, Zero is proficient in the illusionary art of Genjutsu as well. He has become so familiar to this art to the point where he is comfortable enough to utilize it in direct battle. When deciding that illusions is more suitable than actual Ninjutsu, the situation is typically within close to mid range of a target. Seemingly he opts to switch between Ninjutsu and Genjutsu to confuse his target before delivering the execution. Or, when conducting missions that require absolute espionage and secrecy, he can manipulate his targets by placing them under illusions to mask his presence.  He favors illusions that are beautiful in nature, classifying them as "Angelic Illusions" due to their tranquility. The common theme of his illusions are white lotuses due to them being his favorite plant.

Special Characteristics:

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Brief History:

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Shinobi Equipment:

Elementary / Advanced Ninjutsu:

Kirigakure:

Routon Ninjutsu:

Doton Ninjutsu:

Katon Ninjutsu:

Genjutsu:


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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptySat 02 Aug 2014, 9:16 am

    Before you get too far ahead, given that Enzo is still vaguely around you would need his permission to join his clan, which given that he's requested it to be archive, seems unlikely for you to get.
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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptySat 02 Aug 2014, 9:41 am

So the same day I post my character, it gets denied because miraculously the creator of the clan wants to archive it after its been sitting there since January of last year? That's crazy.

Whatever. I can remake it better anyway. Or I'll use one of my own clans. Whichever I decide I'll give you an update notice.
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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptyFri 08 Aug 2014, 1:58 am

Completion Bump.
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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptyFri 08 Aug 2014, 2:59 am

The creator of the clan which needed either creator or Admin permission to join, wanted his clan removed so that people would stop attempting to use it without either of those permissions being obtained. He's still semi-around the site and it is his clan so it was his perogitive for it to be archived.

In regards to your current edits, given the nature of the Haretsu Clan and it's abilities it does require Admin permission and as you have already obtained one 'limited' slot in regards to your rank, I am going to have to ask you to make a choice between one or the other as to give two of said slots to the same person seems rather unfair.
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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptyFri 08 Aug 2014, 4:47 am

I appreciate all the help you've given me LaD, buts your request is ridiculous. And I say that with all do love and respect. I've been getting B.S. ever since coming back here and if its not one things its another at this point.

The Chunin spot I requested for was to compensate for the fact that I couldn't retrieve my Jinchuriki character because someone else had the spot. That's totally fine. But I spent months writing and performing missions on a B-rank spot that I "earned". I haven't read anywhere that the Heretsu need admin approval, If I missed it I'm sorry to be mistaken. As far as I know you're telling me through word or mouth. Lastly, it is quite elitist to sit there and say you can only give admin approval to one of my requests, cause you have deemed it would be unfair for some odd reason. U.S. Administration is now too high and mighty to grant two requests now?

And again, I apologies if I come off as rude. But its ridiculous to come back as lesser than B-rank when I worked for it before I left just because. Any other case I would have just brought back my old character if he wasn't a Host.
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I appreciate all the help you've given me LaD, buts your request is ridiculous. And I say that with all do love and respect. I've been getting B.S. ever since coming back here and if its not one things its another at this point.

Hold the train. You did not get approved for the Gobi because you went inactive and it was given to someone else only a short while ago. You then when and applied for a custom clan without seeking either the creator's or the Admin's permission as noted within the rules (and quoted below). To which you made a clan. The only B.S here that you've gotten that was not a result of your actions was the admin permission for Haretsu not being noted where it should be on the clan application and as Cross stated last night it was removed by accident by Darius, but it doesnt make the requirement any less true.

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The Chunin spot I requested for was to compensate for the fact that I couldn't retrieve my Jinchuriki character because someone else had the spot.
No I gave you the Chūnin out of some measure of knowledge and respect for your writing ability, not as compensation for your character which by all appearances was archived due to inactivity.

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Lastly, it is quite elitist to sit there and say you can only give admin approval to one of my requests, cause you have deemed it would be unfair for some odd reason. U.S. Administration is now too high and mighty to grant two requests now?
Elitist would be me refusing your request on a basis of your skill or lack there of as the case may be, such as reserving all limited spots for only the most advanced of RP-ers as it stands the clan requires Admin permission and given the power of said clan, much like the Uchiha and giving someone two limited spots without extenuating circumstances is not something I will abide by. It is not elitist to make sure that limited slots are spread between the member base.

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And again, I apologies if I come off as rude. But its ridiculous to come back as lesser than B-rank when I worked for it before I left just because. Any other case I would have just brought back my old character if he wasn't a Host.

That self entitlement does not do much for your case. As it stands you are applying for two 'limited' positions, it has nothing to do with bast achievement.

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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptyFri 15 Aug 2014, 9:39 am

Alrighty Completed ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptyMon 18 Aug 2014, 3:01 am

  • Custom Special Characteristic: As it stands you cannot give a static buff to all ranged attacks given that all techniques by description have a dynamic speed in that it varies with each technique.

  • Routon: Snake Skin Armor Technique: You should describe what rank of damage would break the armor. Mind you, the standard scale is equal to the rank of the technique will destroy it and/or equal or higher to the chakra cost. Further, hardening the wax to the same level as something akin to stone is entirely unrealistic. Wax in general is a very malleable substance even in a hardened state, the only way to remove that quality would be to super freeze it.

    Routon: Flawless Wax Emergence: How big are these pockets at each rank. See above about the hardness and solidification in relation to utilizing stone as a descriptor.

  • Routon: Wax Oni Armor: Reduce the range of the possible burns to a maximum of 30cm from the surface of the armor. How severe are the burns ?

  • Routon: Black Widow Web: The stream would hit the ground the moment it expanded larger than 3m given that the air resistance would drag it down right quick, thus rendering its 20m range null unless used from an aerial strike. Regardless, in either usage the stream would solidify really quick give n that wax does not retain heat well, especially given that one must assume that if the wax is expanding it is not super thick. Further there is no way the wax is going to be able to melt 'anything it touches' for both obvious reasons and the same as I mentioned above. At most it could set fire to low burning level un-doused objects like clothing or dry grass/wood. If it expands in in mid flight right, how could it cover 10m if the center point of the attack is less than 2m? If it expands 5m in each direction it will hit the ground at 2m.

  • Angelic Illusion: Ghost Dancing: As it stands unless you have some form of approved focus (see the Genjutsu Guide) you cannot preform the technique without hand seals, further you also need some form of trigger for the technique.

  • Angelic Illusion: Lotus Dancing: Given that it's a multi target Genjutsu and as such it would require more focus and be more mentally strenuous on the user, your movement should be limited.


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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptyMon 18 Aug 2014, 10:30 pm

Custom Special Characteristic:
Replaced.

Routon: Snake Skin Armor Technique:
Added further technicality. Hardening to doton quality is an ability of the Routon element. Which is, in narutouniverse, powered by Chakra. There are several clans on here with simple things such as paper or glass can be hardened to steel-like quality with chakra, so mine isn't too far fetched.

Routon: Flawless Wax Emergence:
Well the pockets are ever expanding and multiplying until it covers its maximum range within a two post span. Since it continuously grows into a pool I don't see the sense of adding a size to the pockets since they're not static.

Routon: Wax Oni Armor:
Okay. Added.

Routon: Black Widow Web:
If you wanted to utilize the technique in its full effect you would of course aim it into the air so it will have time to fully expand. But of course until it hits a surface its size will scale with its distance. For every 2m it expands 1m.

Angelic Illusion: Ghost Dancing:
Replaced.

Angelic Illusion: Lotus Dancing:
Changed to Single Target.
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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptySat 23 Aug 2014, 2:50 am

Someone check this.
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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptySat 23 Aug 2014, 7:33 pm

As you should be well aware, there is a thread dedicated to bumping your application, thus there is no need to double post. That being said, I apologize for the delay.

  • Routon: Wax Oni Armor: Reduce to 2nd Degree Burns.

  • Routon: Black Widow Web: Once again describe the damage that the hot wax inflicts, in a more accurate depiction, much like with the Oni Armor Technique.

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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptySun 24 Aug 2014, 7:45 am

Completed.
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PostSubject: Re: Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] Ootenkai, Zero [Kiri Chunin] EmptyThu 28 Aug 2014, 2:00 am

Sorry again for the delay: 1/2Approved.


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Approved 2/2 and don't forget to make and accourn here.
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Archived due to failure to respond to activity check. Please message staff to have your character unarchived.
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