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Lark
Age : 31 Posts : 107
| Subject: Lark's Bow Mon 05 Jul 2010, 10:06 am | |
| Name: Bone Bow Quantity: 1 Rank: D Appearance: This bow is made out of Bone from a Bear that Lark had killed many years ago it is just the base of bow with no string/wire for the arrows. There are no Arrows with this bow as they are created by Larks Chakra with an explosive kick when they hit there destination. Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin: This bow was created by lark when he was 10 years of age after he killed a Bear with his explosive chakra. After he killed the bear he pulled out a Kunai and started to cut fur and skin away from the bones of the bear where he then cut them and started to carve them into the shape of a bow.
Last edited by Łαѓκ Καzūѓα on Thu 08 Jul 2010, 9:57 am; edited 3 times in total |
| | | Rail
Age : 33 Posts : 428
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Mon 05 Jul 2010, 1:44 pm | |
| Chakra conductive weapons are at least B-Rank, so you need to bump its rank. Not only that, you need to add measurements to your bow, together with a little bit better description of it.
Question: Do you have weaponry skill required to use a weapon such as this bow? |
| | | Adam
Age : 31 Posts : 8965
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Mon 05 Jul 2010, 4:00 pm | |
| Instead of asking you should have checked the link via his signature, no he doesn't. Also, as you stated chakra conductive weapons are B-rank and even with the required speciality you aren't permitted to have a B-ranked weapon as a Genin. |
| | | Lark
Age : 31 Posts : 107
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Tue 06 Jul 2010, 9:12 am | |
| i loled at this
considering its my kkg that i use my chakra to form things i dont see why i need a B ranked weapon for it. |
| | | Wind
Posts : 730
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Wed 07 Jul 2010, 1:25 am | |
| Okay, I see how this works. Lark does not have Weaponry.. Lark can not have anything above a D ranked bow..... So..
Change this to D rank. It has no special features, and is really just a long curved peice of bone. D rank is fine for this. *nodnod*
My problem is.. Lark, can your chakra actually form enough to make a string capable of wrapping around the bone and causing it to flex, so that it can actually propel the chakra arrows you plan on making? If not, I think it needs a string. However, a longbow with a string, is still just a long bow.. and can easily be D rank.
Now, the second problem I have with this is accuracy. Without weaponry training, you're just a guy shooting a longbow.. Because you cause big booms it might not be a problem, and I'm not saying you have terrible aim. I'm just saying, you aren't a marksmen. You're pretty average with a bow. |
| | | Lark
Age : 31 Posts : 107
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Wed 07 Jul 2010, 9:08 am | |
| There edited
D rank and i took out where it says Chakra Conductive cause i can already do that. |
| | | Wind
Posts : 730
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Wed 07 Jul 2010, 7:11 pm | |
| Ok, I like, I think it's good, looks as it should.. but you still didn't answer my primary concern. Your chakra is explosive, so if wrapped around the bow wouldn't it make the bow explode? My only worry is that this bow needs it's own string. Could you explain how the Kazura clan allows them to turn their chakra into a bow string?
Either explain it, or add a string, and this bow is ready to be approved. |
| | | Lark
Age : 31 Posts : 107
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Thu 08 Jul 2010, 9:58 am | |
| there added string |
| | | Kris
Posts : 372
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Thu 08 Jul 2010, 11:23 am | |
| It'd be very difficult for a genin to solidify chakra. |
| | | Brad
Posts : 509
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Thu 08 Jul 2010, 2:46 pm | |
| - Rizzy wrote:
- It'd be very difficult for a genin to solidify chakra.
Any sort of chakra manipulation is difficult for a genin, possible but difficult. I can only think of Naruto who was able to complete such a task. He had a sannin teaching him o.O so, maybe you could be abit more indepth about how you learnt to manipulate/solidify chakra? |
| | | Wind
Posts : 730
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Thu 08 Jul 2010, 9:09 pm | |
| I'm sorry, Lark. Having spoken with Saru about the Kazura clan, he informs me that the Kazura do not possess their chakra manipulation skills on US, as they do elsewhere. Because of this, this item will have to be denied. You have no clan based chakra manipulation skills, only explosions and wings. If you want to develop some chakra control on you own that is fine, but it will need to be added before you can get a bow like this. You are, of course, more than welcome to make up some custom jutsu to enable you to do so. |
| | | Lark
Age : 31 Posts : 107
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Fri 09 Jul 2010, 10:36 am | |
| fuck it delete this then |
| | | Aaron
Age : 28 Posts : 2538
| Subject: Re: Lark's Bow Fri 09 Jul 2010, 10:41 am | |
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