Adashi Clan [Bakuton]

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Clan Name: The Adashi Clan (爆発 Bakuhatsu)
Location: Any.
Signature Traits:
All Members have the mark of there clan some where around there body. Also have have two symbols of explosion in the palm.
Kekkei Genkai:
Explosion Release (爆遁, Bakuton) is an advanced chakra nature created by simultaneously mixing of both, Raiton (Lightning release) and Katon (Fire Release) nature elements. By combining the hazardous and unstable properties of both fire and lightning, the wielder is capable of spawning powerful explosions, that can range from micro-cellular, to macro-nuclear levels. Due to level of monstrosity that it can potentially bring, Bakuton has been noted as being one of the most powerful advanced natures in existence. The Explosion Corp. ranked the Adashi a top-tier clan due to their mastery in the use of the Bakuton nature type despite the few other clans that wielded it. Their uses for it include "charging" objects and people with explosive chakra, shaping their Bakuton chakra in a variety of fashions, and even absorbing the force of other explosions to prevent damage to oneself. Depending on the training of the Adashi clansmen, Bakuton can be applied to a number of specializations to amplify their lethality considerably, with the most common being Taijutsu or Weaponry. This can potentially give rise to an unmatched explosive fighting style that can literally annihilate an enemy with a single punch. Before explosion, the appearance of Bakuton chakra is usually stunning white color, which migrates itself to the surface of the charged object, whether it be a fist, or a weapon. Elite users of the Bakuton art were said to be so powerful, that they were capable of destroying entire villages with higher-end techniques.
History: The Adashi clan were known to be one of the oldest clans in the shinobi world, existing in the late times of the Uchiha and Senju. They were founded by two brothers, both whom possessed the kekkei genkai which allowed them to access the Bakuton element by mixing both their earth and fire chakra types. The brothers lived on Mt. Iyashi which was located near the great mountains of Iwagakure. They resided in a small temple inside the mountain area where they trained intensely to perfect their Ninjutsu. Eventually both boys matured, and left the mountains to embark in a long journey across the villagers to fulfill their thirst of adventure. When reaching the lands of Konoha, they discovered a large clan whom they found much in common with, the Echiha clan. The Adashi brothers grew along with the Echiha, forming the now larger Adashi clan. Both clans existing in a cordial relationship, and they helped each other in whatever battles they encountered. The Echiha aided the Adashi clan in their training, which is how the Adashi became such talented ninja that they are today. During a last battle, the Raishi clan smashed with the Mushiki clan who allied with the Zenju. It was an epic battle of two clans that both possessed advanced element Kekkei Genkai, which ended in many members of both sides being killed. After the war, the Raishi left the Uchiha and fled back to Iwagakure to stabilize their war engulfed life and find some peace in its stone walls. Many elders of the clan possess memories of the battles and prepare the young for the, "Day of Reckoning" which is a conspiracy theory that the Echiha and Benju will once again fight in a epic battle where they will aid the Echiha once again.

After the war, the founders of Iwagakure saw potential in the Adashi clan and devised an alliance with them in hopes of wielding their power. They formed an organization of ANBU operatives called the Explosion Corp., which specialized in explosions and mass destruction. It didn't take long for the Explosion Corp. to become highly feared throughout the neighboring countries. By this time, the Adashi clan had branched into a few other small clans that specialized in their own use of explosions, with the main branch still being the most elite. In recent years, upon the destruction of Konoha, and the recent war, some members of the Adashi clan have migrated to other villages for their own personal needs. Some being spies for Iwagakure, while others taking this opportunity to leave the village once and for all.
Clan Jutsu:

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Name:Bakuton: Denka [Explosion Release: Charge].
Rank: (D-S)
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: 15 M.
Element: Bakuton
Description:A fundamental technique used by members of the Adashi clan. It allows the user to charge an inorganic object with chakra and cause it to explode, This is normally done by physical contact. Once the object is charged, it will static with white chakra, until it detonates into an explosion corresponding to its size, also it explodes if the object feels near by heat. The amount of chakra used in this technique is scaled by the size of the charged object an the rank of the user. Smaller objects such as a throwing weapon, consumes less chakra and creates small explosions, but are still life threatening to the target such as an explosive tag. Likewise larger objects such as boulders consume more chakra and therefore create larger explosions. Given the nature of Bakuton chakra and the user, they are immune to the harmful shockwave effects of the explosion only in a range of 15 Meters after that the effects of the explosive can harmed then.

D - Kunais, Shurikens, Senbons.
C - Katanas, Blades, Rocks.
B - Trees, Boulders, Small House.
A - House, Hill, Truck.
S - Area of 10 Meters.

Chakra Cost: D=4, C= 9, B=15, A=20, S= 30.

Name: Bakuton: Kyūshū [Explosion Release: Absorption].
Rank: A.
Type: Ninjustu.
Range: 3 M.
Element: Explosive Release.
Description: A hidden technique used by members of the Adashi clan. It allows the clansmen to absorb the shock wave force given off by an explosion. The technique is performed by the user extending their hands and channeling the force through their palms, sucking it in like a vortex. The amount of chakra necessary to perform this technique depends on the size of the explosion. The absorption process is fairly quick, however, larger explosions will take more time to absorb than smaller ones. Fire, or substances given off by the explosion other than the force itself, is incapable of being absorbed.
Chakra Cost: 20.

Name: Bakuton: Hiyaku [Explosion Release: Makibishi].
Rank: D.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: 10 M.
Element: Explosive Release.
Description: An explosive trap technique usually done in stealth. The user withdraws a handheld amount of makibishi (spikes) from their bag and charges them with explosive chakra. They then throw the spikes on the ground in hopes of the target stepping on them so they can explode. The detonation of the spikes are enough to cause significant pain to the person's feet, so much that they would find it difficult to walk. The spikes can stay charged for up to two posts by the user.
Chakra Cost: 3.

Name: Bakuton: Jiraiken [Explosion Release: Landmine Fist].
Rank: B.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: 10 M.
Element: Explosive Release.
Description: After establishing direct contact with their opponent through a expeditious jab, the user utilizes Explosion Release to subsequently generate an enormous explosion from the initial point of physical contact. This explosion is powerful enough to completely obliterate an opponent far larger than the user. Due to the directionality of the blast, the user minimizes any potential repercussions, such as being struck by resultant debris and even recoil appears small amount, pushing the user back with force. It is possible to aim this technique towards the ground and cause an explosion beneath the target as well, plopping them upwards while severely damaging the lower portion of their body.
Chakra Cost: 10.

Name: Bakuton: Hōden boruto [Explosion Release: Discharge Bolts].
Rank: C.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: 10 M.
Element: Explosive Release.
Description: The Adashi accumulates explosive chakra in both palms and propels them forward. Using shape transformation, they will shape the chakra as it propels from their hands and thin streams of energy as they fire in their direction in great speeds. Their thin shape makes it hard for others to see their presence, which makes them rather difficult to avoid. Once landed, the bullets explode with enough impact to break bones and fracture ribs. In variation, it is possible for the user to aim the two bullets in different directions if need be, to attack two targets at once.
Chakra Cost: 6.

Name: Bakuton: Giga Bōru [Explosion Release: Giga Ball].
Rank: C.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: 10 M.
Element: Explosive Release
Description: After performing a short sequence of hand seals, the Adashi launches a small sphere of explosive chakra from their mouth which detonates on impact. The aftermath of this technique creates a large cloud of cinder and ash that can obscure the vision of the enemy, assuming they survive. If hit by the technique it can break bones and break ribs burning there skin but not killing them.
Chakra Cost: 6.

Name: Bakuton: Senbon Sempuku [Explosion Release: Senbon Ambush].
Rank: B.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: 10 M.
Element: Explosive Release.
Description: One of the many variations of the Bakuton that uses shape transformation. The Adashi transforms their explosive chakra into a storm of senbon all aimed at the enemy. Ten senbon are made and launched by this technique will detonate upon impact, with the ultimate power of this technique capable of causing impressive devastation to an area. Given the overall performance of the technique, it is difficult to avoid. Still wouldn't kill a person each senbon is 3 inches.
Chakra Cost: 10.

Name: Bakuton: Nagare [Explosion Release: Explosion Stream].
Rank: A.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: 15 M.
Element: Explosive Release.
Description: A powerful ranged attack used by members of the Adashi clan. The user places a hand on the ground and channels explosive chakra through it in a stream like formation. The stream of statical chakra can swiftly move through the ground and change directions instantly. As an added effect of the Bakuton chakra nature, the stream causes an subsequent explosion on every spot that it covers. This gives the appearance of a trail of explosions leading up to a target. The user must remain stationed to channel the chakra needed to supply this technique. In addition, the rubble and dust created from this technique can be used to hinder the vision of the target until the dust settles.
Chakra Cost: 20.

Name: Bakuton: Bunshin no Bakudan [Explosion Release: Exploding Clones].
Rank: (C-A)
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: 20 M.
Element: Explosive Release
Description: The user creates shadow clones infused with explosive chakra. Upon contact or command, the clone(s) detonate into a large explosion. The clone looks like a normal shadow clone, which allows the user to get it close to the target without them expecting anything besides a normal attack, or the target might even close in willingly to try to attack the clone. Using multiple tricks and diversionary tactics to disguise the nature of the clone can make this technique more likely to be effective.
Chakra Cost:

C = 3 Clones (6 Chakra Cost Each Clone).
B = 5 Clones (10 Chakra Cost Each Clone).
A 7 Clone (15 Chakra Cost Each Clone).

Name: Bakuton: Doragon Kobushi [Explosion Release: Dragon Fists].
Rank: S.
Type: Nin-Taijutsu.
Range: 5 M.
Element: Explosive Release.
Description: An extraordinary technique developed by one of the founders of the Adashi clan. It gave name to the Adashi as the, "Dragons of Destruction" during their era. After forming a sequence of hand seals, the Adashi forms two large fiery dragon-shaped shrouds around their fists that animate on their own. They then attack their target with them like a pair of boxing gloves. Every strike from this technique is capable of creating a herculean explosion upon impact, that can not only destroy a target, but decimate others in the vicinities as well. Users will experience great fatigue after the duration of the technique, despite their remaining chakra reserves.
Chakra Cost: 10 Per Post (30).

Name: Bakuton: Genzai [Explosion Release: Explosion Current].
Rank: S.
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 15 M.
Element: Explosive Release.
Description: A devastating technique used by adept members of the Adashi clan. The clansmen channels a substantial amount of explosive chakra through their body, and literally charges themselves with explosive chakra, turning them into a human bomb. They then subsequently force the energy outwards in every direction outside themselves, causing a massive explosion in focal point of themselves that can decimate a large land mass and nearly destroy anyone caught within the explosion. The farther one is from the explosion, the more likely they are to survive, however unconsciousness and severe wounds are a following outcome. This attack leaves the user nearly alive and nearly walking.
Chakra Cost: 35.

Age : 31 Posts : 1637

First off, please do not bump your app. If there are no replies to an application after 48 hours, you can post here, but otherwise, you need to be patient.

General: Due to the nature of this clan, if it is to be approved, it will be up to administration to approve people (and deny) people for this clan.

Additionally, after reading over the jutsu, Trey and I have agreed that the Bakuton techniques should be limited to straightforward explosions: from the body, or through charging objects. For this reason, techniques like Discharge Bolts and Giga Ball cannot be approved as they are.

Also, we do have damage ratings for explosions that scale according to the damage of exploding tags. Thus, it would be appreciated if you could reflect the damage done by the techniques in these terms. You do need to be more mindful of the damage for each rank of the technique, as though explosion release is meant to be strong, some of the things I've seen here should be bumped up in rank.

Signature Traits: Everything you have here should be listed under kekkei Genkai. The signature traits section is for things like the Uchiha's black hair, the Inuzuka fangs, etc.

Kekkei Genkai: See above.

Denka [Explosion Release: Charge]: First, I'd have to require touch to be used for this technique. Ranged charging is too much. Second, you mention requiring more chakra for this depending on the objects charged. I'd recommend turning it into a scaling technique and dictating which types of objects can be used at each rank, thus the chakra cost would vary for each level or use. Also specify how long the charge lasts / how long it takes for the object to detonate.

Kyūshū [Explosion Release: Absorption]: This should have a reduced range. More along the lines of contact range.

Jiraiken [Explosion Release: Landmine Fist]: Since an explosion inplies that force goes in all directions, you cannot single out one direction for this. While it would be acceptable to focus the force of the explosion in a single direction, there would still be force moving outward. Thus a small recoil

Hōden boruto [Explosion Release: Discharge Bolts]: See General.

Giga Bōru [Explosion Release: Giga Ball]: See General.

Senbon Sempuku [Explosion Release: Senbon Ambush]: See General.

Bakuton: Nagare [Explosion Release: Explosion Stream]: The explosion requires some sort of noticeable build up, and 15m seems to be a rather large range for something of this magnitude. It should rightfully be A-rank.

Bunshin no Bakudan [Explosion Release: Exploding Clones]: There's an encyclopedia tech for exploding clones, and though it would be fine to have a Bakuton version, which would ultimately have a stronger explosive force, the amount of clones for this technique is much too excessive. For all clone techniques, aside from the encyclopedia version, the costs are per clone, and this technique will not be an exception. Additionally, if you're going to give it different ranks, the jutsu's rank itself should be listed as scaling (C-A).

Doragon Kobushi [Explosion Release: Dragon Fists]: The range on this technique should be immediate, have a cost per post, and due to the power of it, should be S-rank.

Genzai [Explosion Release: Explosion Current]: This should be an S-rank technique, and even though you could probably get away with being immune to the smaller explosions, something on this large of a scale would have an effect on the user. This should really be a last resort technique, and the after-effects should affect that.

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Whenever you make changes, please specify the changes you make, and your reasoning if you want to keep anything. This will help to clarify things and lets me know you've looked at everything I've listed.

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K everything fixed and read

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