Jutsu Addition and Flesh Golem

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Name: Freeze Frame
Type: Medical
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Freeze Frame is a jutsu Kakougan made so that he could stop his bodies normal flinching functions by paralyzing himself for a split second. This can be used instantly without hand signs and is usually used if Kakougan is trying to be hit by an attack instead of natural dodging it. This is also used if Kakougan needs to stop himself mid attack in order to dodge a defense. This jutsu can only be used three times per topic, if it used more then this amount of times the users body will freeze up and they will be unable to move without medical attention.

Name: Rapid Skin Repair
Type: Medical
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Rapid Skin Repair is a jutsu made by Kakougan that utilizes his external manipulation abilities. This requires no handsigns for use and starts to work instantly. When used, Kakougan’s skin begins to re grow at a rapid rate to covers spots where it has been stripped off. This jutsu covers the whole body in skin in places that have none, it however does not repair anything else but the skin. This is like a stronger version of Kakougan’s Chakra Flesh Bandage jutsu.

Name: Stationary Sight Detachment
Type: Medical
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Stationary Sight Detachment is a jutsu made by Kakougan that utilizes his eye manipulation abilities. This requires no handsigns, all Kakougan needs to do in order to activate it is pull his eye from its socket. When removed, another eye grows back and Kakougan can stick the third eye to a surface and use it as a third eye. The third eye can be seen through by closing on of Kakougan's two eyes, thus limiting the number of eyes being used to two. This jutsu is such a low rank because eye tissue repairs very fast already, making it easy to manipulate its growth rate.

Name: Cranium Style: Brain Scan
Type: Medical
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: Brain Scan is a jutsu made by Kakougan in which he puts his head on a target and scans their brain in an instant. This does require one handsign and to use it Kakougan’s hand must be in contact with the targets head. Once the brain is scanned, Kakougan knows the location of everything on the brain, allowing him to use other brain altering jutsu on the target. After Kakougan has scanned some ones brain once, it is imprinted into his memory and he is able to remember it. This jutsu does not give Kakougan any information that is in the brain, only where everything is located. An exception to this jutsus is sealed memory that has been sealed off. Kakougan can not use these memories at all, but this jutsu does tell him that they exist.

Name: Cranium Style: Mind Pulse
Type: Medical
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: Cranium Style: Mind Pulse is a jutsu made by Kakougan to cause a brain scanned target pain in order to silence them. When used, Kakougan sends medical chakra to the brain and tells it that it is in pain, making the brain activate the nerves which causes actually pain. This pain is extreme and can be held out as long as Kakougan wants to hold it. This jutsu does not cause any lasting effect, just momentary pain. To hold this jutsu out, Kakougan needs to use one of his hands to make a handsign or repeat a chant sign constantly.

Name: Gate of Charybdis
Type: Medical
Rank: C-S
Element: N/A
Description: Gate of Charybdis is a medical jutsu in which Kakougan uses his body scroll to summon up a multitude of mouths that form together into a defensive shape that is 50 feet long/wide. This gate has the unique ability of feeding on chakra in order to become stronger. Depending on what rank this jutsu is used at, the mouths are able to eat that level of chakra. If an attack that is a higher rank then the gate is eaten, the gate will not be able to swallow it and explodes. When the gate devours two jutsu, it ‘levels up’ and is treated as one rank higher. This gate is extremely vulnerable to physical attacks that target it’s tongue. If it’s tongue is broken, then the whole gate is destroyed. If the gate is destroyed and the tongue is in tact, the gate will re assemble in two posts.

Name: Shared Sight
Type: Medical
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Shared Sight is a jutsu that allows Kakougan to see through an opponent’s eyes by closing his own and activating the jutsu. When used, Kakougan can still move his body, but sees through his target’s eyes. This can be used on anything that has functioning eyes and is usually used to find out what the target is focusing on. Kakougan can not control where his target is looking and can only view what his target is viewing. If the target has a doujutsu that would change what he sees, then Kakougan's view would be blurry and hazy making it useless.

Name: Grasping Maw
Type: Medical
Rank: C-A
Element: N/A
Description: When Grasping Maw is used, Kakougan pulls the body scroll from his back and slams it on the ground. After the scroll slams the ground, hands start to emerge from the ground and attempt to grab anyone they can reach. If these hands grab a target, they will not let go until they are either dispelled or destroyed; which is very easy considering they are only normal hands. At C-Rank, this maw is only 10 feet diameter around Kakougan. B-Rank, 25 feet. A-rank 50 feet.

Name: Vibration Strike
Type: Medical
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Vibration Strike is a very simple yet effective jutsu that causes Kakougan’s hand to vibrate quickly just before he strikes a target. When Kakougan makes contact with the target, the limb that came into contact with his starts to vibrate very fast due to the vibrations transferring from Kakougan’s hand to the target. This vibrations makes the vibrating limb un able to hold any object or move to hit anything because of the violent vibrations; this makes the limb un able to be used for one post.

Name: Nightmare Medic: Coffin of the Cross
Type: N/A
Rank: C-S
Element: N/A
Description: Nightmare Medic: Coffin of the Cross is the jutsu Kakougan must use to summon his flesh golem to the battle field. When used, a giant black coffin with a large cross on it emerges from the ground with a counter on it. This counter tells how many posts are left before the monster emerges from the coffin. Depending on what rank this jutsu is used, the monster will emerge faster due to the extra chakra put into it. At C-rank, this takes four posts and for every rank higher it used the delay is lowered by one post. ( B-rank: 3, A-Rank 2, S-Rank: 1). The coffin that the monster is in is not unbreakable. If it is broken, the monster dies and must use one of its lives or face oblivion. The coffin is made of strong titanium, making it much stronger then regular ninja weaponry that don’t use chakra however.

Name: Flesh Golem [ Crucifix]
Rank: -
Appearance:
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Crucifix is a very gruesome creatures made of a multitude of dead bodies grafted together into a humanoid form. He has a shape, but no over layer of skin; there are multiple limbs or bones that stick out all over his body. Crucifix stands 10 feet tall even in his slouched posture making him very tall compared to normal ninja. Just seeing Crucifix should be enough to sicken any ninja who isn't use to the smell of death and the reek of rotting flesh.

Crucifix may be a monster, but he does have a 'mind'. The thing about this mind is that it was made so that it had no free will. No matter of jutsu can even change his thought because his brain isn't even capable of thinking different thoughts. This makes him a loyal monster.

Elemental Affinity: -

Special Abilities/Characteristics:

Weak Point: Heart
Crucifix has one very obvious weak point, the heart. It’s heart is as big as a humans heart would be if they were its size and it is in the same place as well. If the heart is stabbed, Crucifix dies for good unless he uses the ability ‘ Life Restoration’. The thing that makes Crucifix’s heart more venerable then a normal humans heart is that it is half out of his body. This makes it very visible as a weak point and not very hard to reach.

Flesh Absorbing
If there is a dead enemy present, Crucifix the flesh golem is able to absorb their flesh and muscle leaving only bone and organs behind on the body. If Crucifix absorbs a ninja, it gains the ability to use their non KKG jutsu and is able to transform to look like the ninja. Before Crucifix can gain this ability, Kakougan must make a 500 word training topic in which it learns the ninjas abilities. Also, Crucifix can only hold 5 bodies at a time, when a body is used it can be replaced however. This can be used on NPCs but does not grant jutsu from NPCs. When Crucifix is summoned, he picks one body to use as his ability giving body and can use jutsu from that body only.

Regeneration
Crucifix can regenerate minor damage done to him in a two post period. This includes any limbs that may have been lost and body parts that have been damaged. The only exception to this is his heart, which is covered in the ability ‘ Life Restoration’.

Life Restoration
Life Restoration is one of Crucifix’s most powerful abilities. If it is every stabbed in the heart, its weak point, Crucifix would die for good. That is unless he uses one of the bodies he has absorbed to block his death and revive himself. When this is done, Crucifix’s wounds and limbs are immediately healed but he loses all of the jutsu and abilities from whichever body he gave up. This makes Crucifix become a threat if he has had time to gather a multitude of bodies.

Background:
One night, Kakougan had a bolt of inspiration strike him, the idea to create a monster. Not a ’monster’ like a demon or an advanced summoning; a real monster, the kind of monster that children check under their beds for and adults have nightmares about. He was about to create a golem made of flesh, human flesh. After about a week of sleepless nights, Kakougan had successfully grafted a multitude of dead bodies together and had created his monster. The monster was weak, not much to brag about. It didn’t have many abilities beyond regeneration, but Kakougan saw that some day after a lot of work, it may become the monster of his dreams.

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all of these are done EXCEPT the last jutsu/flesh golem. You can however feel free to comment on them Razz

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completion bump

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Rapid Skin Repair: Please describe how much skin can be repaired and how quickly with this jutsu.

Sight Detachment: How does this effect the field of vision? Does this make the current range more advanced or extend it? If so how?

Brain Scan: This jutsu could only know certain things, like general areas and the brain changes quite quickly since everything you perceive, every instant, is being stored somewhere. Every tap on the keyboard, inhale and exhale, blink of the eye, churn of the stomach, your brain has it all so most of the brain is changing storages though since the information there is pretty trivial it might not effect the technique.

Also make a note that repressed memories or jutsu sealed memories, or parts of the brain, cannot be located through the use of this jutsu since the chakra would conflict and thus damage the search results in the first place besides being slightly OP.

Mind Pulse: Can you target specific areas? How fine is your control? How does your chakra cause this effect? Do you have to maintain a handsign, range, eye contact, etc.? Can this effect be resisted? If so, how?

Gate of Charbydis: When it regenerates does it loss any 'level's? Also, you make it sound like the gate only has one tongue when, as you've described it, every mouth that compromises it has a tongue so what exactly are you trying to explain?

Shared Sight: Would require contact to set-up, or an ability to recognize the jutsu is in use by the opponent. Can you see the same things through the opponent's eyes if they have a Doujutsu? Do you control their vision in any manner? Do you lose your own vision?

Flesh Hounds: The chakra cost makes no sense, it consumes more chakra to make more changes, thats just common sense. A static cost wouldn't be logically possible.

Flesh Golem: You could provide a bit more detail for each ability, not like it hurts you any, I don't see a problem with it though it does need a cap on how many bodies it can have absorbed into itself at once because even Kakuzu could only hold a limit.

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A limit is needed on Flesh Golem. My thought is he can contain of upto 3 imprints at once but may only ever use one every time he is summoned which is picked upon summoning it and doesn't benefit from their kkg or special characteristics. The reason that the golem will never be approved as it is, is that to allow to use all the jutsu it takes in this manner would be giving you golem consent to have all necessary elements and specs to do so. Unrestricted it might possible to give it all the specs and all 5 elemental affinities which is as you might expect unbalancing. By allowing you the possibility of 3 it allows you summoning some options and forces you to unsummon and resummon it if you want to switch it expanding chakra for the priviledge. Also more importantly it means at no point will your summon ever have more then two elements and specs

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Rapid Skin Repair: Fleshed out, get it? Jutsu Addition and Flesh Golem 287405

Sight Detachment: See above pun.

Brain Scan: Editted

Mind Pulse: The first few of your questions seem kinda irrelevant to the jutsu, but I fix'd what I could.

Gate of Charbydis: No, and I was trying to give it a weakness but now I can't think of one, suggestions?

Shared Sight: Making it require contact or making it really noticable would ruin the point of the jutsu. Edited

Flesh Hounds: Just removed this one all together, I'll never use it either way Razz

Flesh Golem: Added body cap and activated body for Hugh... the party whale?

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Freeze Frame - Limit of how many, because this can be abused, I trust you, just for people that can use your jutsu later on.

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Edited to three uses per topic Razz

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Should be approved for training unless Hugh still has some issues with the golem.

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2100 words, joy xD

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Eh just get off your bum and do it.

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-Kris

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I've trained 2 of these already, I'm not sure when I'll do the rest:

https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/noxmaxk-the-city-of-dead-f71/illusion-of-progress-private-training-topic-t667.htm#5303

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Training approved.

Do the rest of them when you get the time.

Till then, I will add the ones which you trained for to your profile.

This topic will stay in this section till you finish rest of the training.

EDIT: I noticed that you added them by yourself....