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Name: Don'Kee Kong
Rank: D
Appearance:
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A large Gorilla who excels in Taijutsu, he is often irritated and grumpy at being summoned and stands at roughly the height of 10ft this large summon is always testing the user and will only provide service when it feels like it or if the user has known the summon for sometime. The large Gorilla excels in taijutsu and combines them with it's defensive abilities to create larger-variety of techniques. He is the older brother of Wukong and is incredibly protective of him, when on the battlefeild Don'Kee Kong will usually show more enthusiasm to fight the opponent. He truly hates his summoner and so will often follow suit of Wukong helping in battle with him instead of the summoner.
Contract Type: Blood Donation
Species: Primate
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Special Abilities/Characteristics:
Raw Strength:
Research shows that Pimates are so strong because their nervous systems exert less control over their muscles making gorillas up to 12x stronger than an average human.

Thick Skin:
Primate are born mammal with slightly thicker skin than humans. The skin on a human averages about 2.5mm. However for a primates the thinnest skin on it's body is 1cm. Due to this skin thickness it provides primates a greater toughness making their durability 30% greater than human.

Background: https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/taigagakure-f190/my-first-summoning-go-chimps-t2037.htm#21678
Summons Jutsu:
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Basic Ninjutsu:
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at
the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The
transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked
techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally
maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely,interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

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Name: Nio Tosu [Herculean Toss]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user grabs the opponent's feet and spins around rapidly, twirling the target by there feet until the user sends them hurling.

Name: Tekikaku Tounyuu [Precise Throw]
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: The user takes a small object in his or her hand, such as a quarter or a pebble, and they flick it at the space between the eyes of their opponent. It doesn’t cause any damage of substance but is meant to distract an opponent.

Name: Pusshu [Push]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user simply strikes their opponent with both palms, concentrating enough strength to each palm, to push them up to 5 meters back. The use of both hands means the user is able to push away a block the opponent may have set up or deflect an attack with one hand, while the other hand strikes the opponent for damage.

Taiga- Su-purakkusu [Tiger Suplex]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Standing behind his opponent, the user hooks both of his opponent's arms from the sides, and places his hands palm down flat against the opponent's upper back. He then lifts the opponent up and falls backwards, arching his back and legs, slamming the opponent down to the ground shoulder and neck first

Name: Yaen Hanewaza [Monkey Flip]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: User pulls the opponent by the shirt or shoulders while falling back. During the fall the user pulls his knee up in between the pair . After contact with the ground is made the extends his leg completely throwing the opponent over them.

Name: Gekiha Houyou [Crushing Hug]
Rank: D
Requirements: None.
Description: The user wraps his arms around his opponent's body or both body and arms, and then crushes him. The air will escape the opponent's lungs and they won't be able to breath. Afterward, their body will be stiff for awhile. With impressive strength weak bones may even break. Full power hug cannot be maintained for long since it requires a lot of muscle strength. This technique also requires getting very close to the opponent. Only last 2 post. This jutsu is devestaing with great strength.

Name: Houshou [Crushing Fist]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A taijutsu technique where the ninja palm strikes their enemy, hurling them away. With impressive strength, this technique could be quite devastating. This move is capable of knocking an opponent approximately 30-40 feet back.

Name: Nitsu no Sutoraiki [Two Strikes]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Requirement: None.
Description: The user will take his index and middle finger on both hands and perform a quick and powerful jab into the jugular of the opponent causing much pain. With great strength this just is devestating.

Name: Opa- Ekusutendo [Over Extend]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: If a kick or punch is sent towards the user the user pushes the limb forward and ducks out of the way. Using the enemy's momentum this technique can be quite painful for an opponent if the limb is already quite extended

Name: Oshiromai no Taki [Backwards Waterfall]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user ducks under an attack and makes a powerful uppercut, with great strength this technique could be deadly.

Name: Shoushitsu [Knee Strike]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A Taijutsu technique where the ninja braces against the ground and drives a powerful knee into their enemy, hurling them away. With impressive strength, this technique can be devastating.

Name: Shou-Geki-Shou [Rising Impact Palm]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A Taijutsu technique where the ninja lifts up their opponent with one arm, retracts, and then drives their palm upward into their opponent, hurling them into the air. With impressive strength, this technique could be quite devastating.

Name: Tokken [Tackle Charge]
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A Taijutsu technique where the ninja shoulder charges their enemy, driving them away or even into something stable. With impressive strength, this technique can be quite devastating.

Name: WuKong
Rank: D
Appearance:
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WuKong rarely speaks, or even changes his expression, he has a knack for sensing but never really shows it due to his young age and apathy, Wukong is a low-tier medical as he doesn't really do anything but look incredibly depressed and stare into the enemies eyes but always seems to have the right jutsu on him at the right time Wukong will often, when summoned, simply give the finger to the summoner and un-summon himself. Unless his brother is in some type of harms way.
Contract Type: Blood Donation
Species: Primate
Elemental Affinity: Medical
Special Abilities/Characteristics:
Good Reflexes:
Good sight, combined with fast thinking and a little training, equals good reflexes for dodging attacks. This is not a skill which could be used for offensive purposes, but it can be used to dodge attacks which could appear to be impossible to dodge otherwise.

Thick Skin:
Primate are born mammal with slightly thicker skin than humans. The skin on a human averages about 2.5mm. However for a primates the thinnest skin on it's body is 1cm. Due to this skin thickness it provides primates a greater toughness making their durability 30% greater than human.

Background: https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/taigagakure-f190/my-first-summoning-go-chimps-t2037.htm#21678
Summons Jutsu:
Quote :

Basic Ninjutsu
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at
the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The
transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked
techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally
maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely,interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

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Medical Art: Bone Setting
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu - Medical
Elemental Affinity: -
Description: After training, medical nins are able to diagnose and reset broken bones. This skills is limited as it is a physical repair, and is most effective on large bones such as leg or arm bones. This skill cannot treat fractures, and further treatment should be done. This is simply a quick fix to prevent further damage.

Medical Art: Stitching
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu - Medical
Elemental Affinity: -
Description: After training, medical-nins are able to sew closed open wounds using their field kit of needle and surgical thread. While most any shinobi might figure out how to sew a wound shut, this stitching art allows for proper, thorough stitches to be made in 2-7 seconds.

Medical Art: Scalpel
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu - Medical
Elemental Affinity: -
Description: After training, medical-nins are able to use their scalpels to perform rapid incisions to remove debris or relieve pressure. This skill not only lets them use their scalpels rapidly and accurately, it also allows them to use a kunai or shuriken in a pinch. Scalpel skill can also be used offensively.

Medical Art: Amputation
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu - Medical
Elemental Affinity:
Description: After intensive training, medical-nins are able to severe a limb in a manner that allows for easy reattachment back at the Konoha hospital and allows for proper bandaging, increasing the chances of survival. This art can be used if a limb has already been ravaged and the loss of blood must be controlled, or if a particularly dangerous poison has been injected or applied and the limb must be removed to save the life of the patient.

Name: Medical Art: Headache Relief Jutsu
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu - Medical
Elemental Affinity: -
Description: This is one of the first medical jutsu a medic learns. By emitting a pulse of green healing chakra through the finger tips, the medic is able to relieve the headaches of any person, regardless of cause (stress, migraine, other ailments, alcohol consumption, etc.) This jutsu has no further purpose, and is above all else a training jutsu for the medical arts

Name: Ketsuki Gyouko (Blood Coagulation)
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: -
Description: A simple healing technique. The user uses his chakra on his wound to make the blood cells there coagulate quickly. Unlike the more complicated healing jutsus which create new cells altogether, this one simply speeds up the natural healing process, stopping the bleeding quickly when normally it would take many hours, maybe even days depending on the wound. The wound still remains but the bleeding stops, though sometimes only partially for deeper and more difficult wounds. It goes quickly for small wounds but larger ones need a couple of minutes to finish the coagulation. It can also be used on wounded allies.

Name: Kanpa no Jutsu (Cold wave skill)
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Description: A jutsu that is pretty much the opposite of heat seeker, this one instead of treating a state of hypothermia, which is heat loss, is treating a state of heat wave where the body overheats. By using chakra, the cold fusion jutsu opens up pores, pumps up blood to the skin and widens the blood vessels nearest to the skin and also increases sweat production. All these effects cool the body and make it return to normal temperatures, although careless use of the cold fusion might lead to an undesired effect such as overcooling of the body and eventually hypothermia.

Name: Kanetsu no Gyou (Heat seeker)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: -
Description: A simple Jutsu in which the Medical Ninja focuses the chakra in his body by placing it along the persons chest creating heat within them. It basically works the way one would if they were doing a destructive fire jutsu; heat-based is created from the hand, though much, much less than if it were indeed a destructive ninjutsu.(That's why you have to be careful-the user has to create just the right amount. Any less would be ineffective, any more would be too much.) This is so then the person would not be in danger of Hypothermia, a condition in which the body starts dropping its temperature at a quick pace, and if goes untreated it might cause paralysis and even death. One must be careful for if used to long then it may warm up a part of the body which may cause fever.


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PostSubject: Re: Summonings (Finished) Summonings (Finished) EmptyWed 25 Aug 2010, 6:46 pm

Genin can only have one C-Ranked summon or two D-Ranked summon. You can't mix and match.

Aries wrote:
A large Gorilla who excels in Taijutsu, he is often irritated and grumpy at being summoned and stands at roughly the height of 10ft this large summon is always testing the user and will only provide service when it feels like it or if the user has known the summon for sometime. The large Gorilla excels in taijutsu and combines them with it's defensive abilities to create larger-variety of techniques. He is the older brother of Wukong and is incredibly protective of him, when on the battlefeild King will usually show more enthusiasm to fight the opponent. He truly hates his summoner and so will often follow suit of Wukong helping in battle with him instead of the summoner.

The names of your summons is inconsistent, please fix this along with spelling mistakes.

Aries wrote:
Primate are born mammal with sligtly thicker skin tha humans. The skin on a huma averages about 2.5mm. Hower for a primates the thinnest skin on it's body is 1cm. Due to this skin thickness it provides primates a greater toughness making their durability 30% greater than human.

There are many spelling mistakes in this paragraph, so much so that it becomes difficult to understand. Please fix this, I suggest you use a spellchecker in future.


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PostSubject: Re: Summonings (Finished) Summonings (Finished) EmptyThu 26 Aug 2010, 7:08 am

ok edited
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PostSubject: Re: Summonings (Finished) Summonings (Finished) EmptyThu 26 Aug 2010, 11:02 am

You still need to remove one of your summons. Only 1 C-Rank or 2 D-Ranks.
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PostSubject: Re: Summonings (Finished) Summonings (Finished) EmptyThu 26 Aug 2010, 1:33 pm

What do u mean they both are D-Ranked
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PostSubject: Re: Summonings (Finished) Summonings (Finished) EmptyFri 27 Aug 2010, 7:35 am

These two are aweful strong for D ranked summons. Keeping in mind these are D rank, and therefore below even C ranked Genin levels of skill, they have way way to many jutsu. These things look like fully trained taijutsu experts with a full array of combat abilities, plus 12 times strength. Seems a little overpowered. What makes these D rank, other than the fact that you marked them D rank?

Keep in mind that a D rank summon should be weaker than a genin shinobi.

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Actually, as it seems new rules for summons have gone into effect. As it stands your summons have more jutsu than a B ranked summon, and need to be toned down greatly. Take a few moments to read the updated rules, then repost this summon with the updated template and new rules. You will likely want a C ranked summon, because it looks like D ranked summons don't get jutsu at all. Which makes sense to me.
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archived yo.
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