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Basic Information:

Name: Shitsumei Ibuki

Secondary Title: Kaze

Age: 19

Gender: Male


Physical Appearance:
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Ibuki looks like your normal civilian, for the most part. Red hair, blue eyes, he stands at an average five foot ten. He is quite skinny, showing bone where his muscle cannot cover, such as his shoulders. His hair curls around his chin, long for most males, but still short in comparison to some.

He wears a black peacoat with a black long sleeve shirt under it, despite the fact he lives in Suna. One hypothesis towards this manner of dress is the clothes are made out of a unique fabric, and one would be correct in that assumption. The clothing fabric was specifically made for hot climates like Suna. WHile it looks like heavy wear, the clothes infact allow a lot of air to flow through, cooling off the person in question quite easily. Of course, these clothes wont fare very well in the cold areas of Yuki or Kumo.


Personality:

Ibuki is human. That being said, it is assumed that he has many emotions, and expresses them accordingly. While this would be an accurate description, Ibuki isn’t exactly normal with the way he expresses his emotions.

There are many different sides to be seen of Ibuki; a kind caring side, a sadistic cruel side, a sad side, and many more, just like most human beings. By putting himself in the wrong situations however, despite them being accidental, Ibuki has managed to see more hurt and pain than he would have liked too in his short life.

After realizing that he was a bastard son, Ibuki began to shut himself inside himself, locking away emotions and thoughts that he thought were unnecessary. By becoming a loner, he planned to take on the weight of the world, as that’s what he had been doing for the past few years. Trust no one, live alone, that’s how Ibuki survived once he left his town.

However, bottling up all his emotions wasn’t good for Ibuki, and he began to develop an explosive temper. It started with a sizzling boiling in his gut, and then explodes from there. However, after a year of practice and meditation, Ibuki managed to control this temper and seal it away. However, it still erupts on the occasion, worse than it ever was. Not many know what exactly happens to trigger such a reaction, but most agree that it is best to avoid Ibuki in this state.

To counter act the temper however, Ibuki has managed to develop a kind and calm personality, one that seems to ooze calm around others. He does truly care for people, whether he has met them or not, and feels a sort of kinship to most people he meets. He is very empathetic, which means that he can feel others pain, their sorrow, happiness and anger. While this is normally a good thing, the mood still affects Ibuki greatly, and should the feeling be large enough, his mood will change to match. Misery loves company after all.

Ibuki can also be sarcastic, very sarcastic in fact. Most people, he had learned, don’t understand sarcasm well, so when Ibuki IS sarcastic, his voice oozes the feeling, so much that it could suffocate some people. That being said, he is only sarcastic to idiots mostly, or people who ask dumb questions.

Another quirk about Ibuki, is despite his temper and calmness, he lacks the ability to let something go for a short while, constantly reminding the person in question about it and stabbing them with the idea or concept he has latched onto until they finally crack. This is the only way that Ibuki has found to get a point, a serious point at least, driven into people’s skulls. If being an ass doesn’t work, Ibuki switches to sarcasm, and then to like he is talking to a mentally retarded person if the situation calls for it.

He also has an affinity for finding things in his pockets that werent there before. It is a subconcious habit really, things get picked up and absentmindedly pocketed while Ibuki strolls around and looks through areas and markets. He also seems to have an insatiable craving for steak.


Catch Phrase: "Nothing lasts forever. I guess that means you die now."

”Be sober, be vigilant; because your adversary the devil, as a roaring lion, walketh about seeking whom he may devour.”



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Clan Information:

    Clan Name:
    Sookato
    Clan Location:
    Suna
    Clan Traits:
    Naturally High Chakra

    All shinobi with in the Sookato clan are naturally high chakra capacity types. This meaning that they all have a greater supply of chakra then That of the average shinobi of their rank. Typically this is up at 25% greater. A few percetange, the not as talented ones, have 10%% greater, and a few of the most skilled have 50% greater then average. This also grants for a greater amount of jutsu usage possible in battle.



    Kekkei Genkai:

    Pure Chakra Manipulation

    The members of the Sookato clan have the ability to convert chakra into a more raw and physical form of itself which rather then manipulating into something else similar fire can be used directly to harm or hinder there opponents.

    This secondary form is both more crude and unstable and takes the appearance of a part gaseous but liquid material, not dissimilar to plasma (only not heated). This cruder form is all the more striking since it is also coloured and comes in various hues of blue, purple and eventually black depending on the amount of concentrated chakra used.

    The chakra is particularly unstable and highly corrosive and while largely impossible to use for subtle manipulation or genjutsu its rare form can be weaponised through various crude feats of manipulation. Due to its dark and unstable nature, the result of imbalance between spiritual and physical energy used in its creation, it can cause untold physical damage to anything it touches. Its corrosive force is so great that it can with enough chakra reduce almost any material object to slag. Physical barriers pose little problems to it and are weak against direct attacks. Chakra based attacks and defences however remain as effective against this raw form as they are against true chakra.

    Oniryouken - Demon Hound Eye

    The eyes of the Sookato, as illustrated below, are completely black, so telling them apart from other ninja is not difficult at all unless they have their eyes covered. Many of them where strips of cloth or tinted glasses to hide this distinguishing feature. Some, with out care, choose to sport their eyes for all to see and recognize, not particularly caring who knows their clan before a battle begins, believing that it does not matter. The princible of the doujutsu is not exactly unique, and neither is the way it does it, however, the way it is presented, is. The eye is a sensory type eye, and is one of the most powerful of its kind. This is the only part of the clan that really changes with a ninjas rank. It has the ability to sense all types of chakra instinctively, being able to distinguish different types with out having to focus in order to sense anything. To a sookato this skill is just like seeing or hearing. It can help the sookato determine the nature of an attack by reading the chakra in terms of amount, type of chakra, chakra density, etc. All this does is provide subtle knowledge which could ultimately help counter it. However, the sookato would still need a fairly high IQ to piece together these bits of information in order for it to be useful in any way. Also it can obviously alert the ninja that they are in a genjutsu fairly quickly, as genjutsu is caused by chakra in the brain. It does nothing to prevent it but serves as a warning alarm. The shinobi must still have the skill to break free from it in order to break out. This can help a shinobi greatly by allowing him to 'see' what his eyes can not actually capture through images. The sensing of chakra is not seeing it, but is more like simply knowing its there, feeling its pressence. The basic skill is a universal one, but the Demon Hound Eye takes it to a whole different level unheard of amongst shinobi outside their clan.

    C rank: 5 Meters
    B rank: 15 Meters
    A Rank: 40 meters
    S rank: 75 meters

    - Visual Appearance:
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    Secret Clan Jutsu:

    Name: Supernova
    Rank: A
    Element: Fire
    Requirements: Sookato Clan & Fire Element
    Description: This is a technique developed by and known only too and usable only by Taku. The main reason is that this jutsu not only utilizes not only the fire element, but also the potent Sookato chakra. This is essential an upgrade of the chakra bomber attack. In a nut shell, Taku brings both his fire and clan's chakra into his hand(s) creating a swirling ball of both chakras which mix into a brand new chakra of pure plasma. As soon as the ball gets to the desired sized, it must be released to hover in the air, as it mixes and turns into the new form due to its intense heat. It must sustain itself for a few moments before it suddenly grows to heavy and crashes down into the ground. As it crashes into the ground, its mass spreads outwards in a circular direction for 35m radius (70m diameter). As it hits, it heats the ground to such a point that it liquidizes into a burning hot substance similar to that of magma. It also creates a blast of intensely heated wind whose temperatures are half that of solar winds. They extend as far as the shock-wave. The ground splits in crags in various directions, making an even footing impossible.

    Name: Chakra Shuriken
    Rank: C
    Element: N/A
    Requirements: Sookato Clan
    Description: Taku fires a small balst of chakra from his hand, and though the technique is called "shuriken" the resemblance is better placed with a kunai. it is made only of chakra and nearly impossible to block with out the use of jutsu because it is made of the highly destructive sookato chakra.

    Name: Chakra Blade
    Rank: B
    Element: N/A
    Requirements: Sookato Clan
    Description: This is an extremely diverse and powerful technique, inspired by the wind blade jutsu that some wind users like to use. It can be used in two different ways. The first is when it is used to cover a bladed weapon for extra piercing ability which exceeds that which is given by wind. The weapon does not need to be chakra conductive as Taku simply wraps the veil around the weapon. Using this he can also levitate the weapon by manipulating his chakra and control them through the air via hand motions. The second way he can use it is by simply creating a single blade out of chakra not around another blade which is good for a one time attack but he can create many in rapid succession. In this way they look just like a 4 foot arc of chakra, and like the wind blade, can not be blocked except by a ninjutsu or similar technique.

    Name: Chakra Cage
    Rank: A
    Element: N/A
    Requirements: Sookato Clan
    Description: To use this jutsu, the user must make several hand/signs and then slam their hands on the ground. Instantly a pulsation of energy will spread out which does not cause any damage or have any effects to any individual. However, when it reaches twenty meters across from the other side of the pulsation, it will shoot up and create a dome shaped cage of chakra. Taku can use this so that he is with in or on the outside of the cage to use it. However, he has to keep his hands on the ground the entire time. While Taku's hands are on the ground, he can heal any damage done to the cage by surging more chakra into it ( a C rank amount per area equaling a 1 meter hole. In this way, even if the cage is breached, the user can keep them uncaged, but the chakra cost can be devastating to the user. A floor will be created about six inches under the ground, to make it look like underground escape is possible, but is not actually. The chakra for this technique is solid and not destructive, becoming calmer and more controlled via concentration. To escape from the technique, the user will have to use chakra attacks of their own. For nin it will have to be C rank to damage it, and for taijutsu, it will have to be B ranked to crash through it. Normal ninja tools or weapons will be simply turned away, while special weapons (those imbibed with some sort of unique ability aka influenced in some way by chakra, need be only C rank to pierce through and create openings.

    Name: Chakra Veil
    Rank: B
    Element: N/A
    Requirements: Sookato Clan
    Description: This is an advanced Sookato technique and is easily one of their most valuable. When the user uses this jutsu, a veil of chakra will wrap around them, however, it will float on them, not actually touching them for that would kill them. As the veil is made of the destructive Sookato chakra, most taijutsu is ineffective against the user when he uses this jutsu. The only way to get through is by destroying it with ninjutsu or taijutsu which utilize chakra in some way. However, like the chakra cage, Taku is able to repair the damage to his armor by surging more chakra to the point of entry. He can also change the density of bits by weakening the other. The chakra armor does not cover the soles of his feet as it would deteriorate the earth he walks upon. However, he can have it cover his soles should he wish it, but it is not an automatic thing and costs more chakra. A D rank ninjutsu will weaken it cosiderably, and a C rank will destroy it but in turn be canceled, leaving a gaping hole at the point of impact. B rank and above will leave the gaping hole and do damage equal to a rank lower then the actual attack, meaning that the attack was weakened slightly. With simple Taijutsu (attacks not utilizing chakra) it will simply turn such attacks away as well as with basic weapons. However with advanced taijutsu (any technique using chakra, it will have the same effect as with ninjutsu and the effects existing at the equal ranks. concerning weapons it is quite simple. It will turn away weapons that are not contained with chakra aka have any special attributes. However, those that do are completely immune to the veils protective capability and are capable of piercing through it albeit the attack will be slowed slightly and the force of each blow will be lessened a tad bit. It takes a C rank amount of chakra to keep this jutsu activated for every post after it is used.

    Name: Reverse Chakra Veil
    Rank: B
    Element: N/A
    Requirements: Sookato Clan
    Description: This is just like the Chakra Veil in principal, except it is applied to another person. It can be used on ally's for added protection, however, it can not be healed unless Taku is in direct contact with it so it generally is only good to take a few extra attacks unphased. If effectively used on an enemy then Taku can then lock their body down with the chakra by manipulating it and restricting or controlling their movement by controlling the chakra. It takes a C rank amount of chakra to keep this jutsu activated for every post after it is used.

    Name: Pillar of Generations
    Rank: B
    Element: N/A
    Requirements: Sookato Clan
    Description: Using this jutsu, Taku will surge chakra through his feet and along the ground towards an opponent. This is one of the few non-destructive sookato techniques. When it reaches the feet of the target, a shimmering circle will light up around them and then shoot a veil of chakra straight up about 5 meters, (roughly 15 feet), high. Anything cot in it will have its tenketsu points (chakra points), clogged with sookato chakra quickly removing any ability to utilize chakra for jutsu in the first two posts. After that it will have disipated enough to where jutsu of C rank jutsu can be used on the third post after being hit. On the fifth post it disipates more allowing them to use enough chakra for a B ranked attack. After the Seventh post, the clogging is completely gone and any jutsu can be used normally. The chakra can be remove through certain jutsu such as the Rotation technique of the Hyuuga clan by surging pure chakra through it to push it out.

    Name: Sensory Void
    Rank: B
    Element: N/A
    Requirements: Sookato Clan
    Description: This jutsu utilizes the Sookato Chakra in a thinner manner so as to make it non destructive. This is used much the same like pillar of generations except it is even thinner and cannot even be seen because it is so thin. When used it will flare up around the target. They will notice a slight increase in temperature, even though this is really not the case, it just makes it seem to them almost like it is more humid, actually just containing a bit more heat trapped into their body then normally in the open air. This thin chakra void around the person will disrupt all chakra sensory or sight skills so that the person affected will not be able to see or sense chakra for the next two posts.

    History:
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    The sookato clan is one of the most ancient in the ninja world. It is also said to be one of the most powerful and fit for battle. Their founder was Hiei Sookato, a man of great nobility, wealth, and respect. He was well known through out the whole world during his own generations time. Before the villages were amassed, they acted as gypsy's traveling where they saw fit and randomly choosing causes to support, free of charge. All they asked for was shelter, supplies, and food. They were always welcome by all and were a fear to see on the battle field. There stipulatons for taking a cause were only two in number, and very simple and plain. 1. They had to have some kind of fighting involved somewhere down the line and also, it had to be a good noble cause only fit for the betterment of man kind. Typically they took up jobs which would in the end bring groups closer together and unify man into a singular understanding and whole. They did not work for dictators or evil men or cause, and they were very good judges of character.

    When the idea of the villages were brought forth, they again, were happy to help. They worked endlessly, but did nothing to aid in the construction itself. Instead that sat idley by untill terrorist factions who were against the villages made threatening gestures and the Sookato would proceed to wipe them out, often in a single night. It was quite clear that the villages were going to happen, and the only result of trying to stop it would be death. The threats stopped and the villages were completed as originally planned. However, in return, they refused to join anyone village, setting them self up as a group that worked in the shadows, no longer known to the villages even, protecting them from threats which would appear, eliminating them often before the villages themselves knew about them. They were forgotten in time, and they were pleased with this, as it was not in a Sookato's nature to take credit for their deeds. What they did was in their nature, and deemed it unnecessary to have any high praise for what came to them instinctually.

    Then the wars between nations began to break out. What once was seen as an act to unify man even further began to divide them in new and more profound ways. As the wars broke out, the Sookato turned their backs in disgust, not wanting to intervene and make themselves known again, and removed themselves, setting up a permanent village of their own that had no dealings with the other countries on the other side of the mountains. Here they lived for many years in peace, though they continued to train themselves as warriors always, because fighting was there love, and a matter of security was needed. For them though, mostly, fighting was little more then a sport, for not many threats arose. This did not cause them to get comfortable, for they knew that would be their biggest mistake, but in the end, it didnt matter. By secluding themselves, they had know way of knowing the threat that came for them, and they were ill prepared for this kind of attack. 10 S rank missing nin infiltrated them, the methods unknown, and systematically began the attack, targeting their most important buildings first, destroying many of their most powerful warriors with out even a struggle, and the rest was childs play.

    They used it for a training exercise for their faction, though they were later defeated by an unknown hand. They had had an inside man who wanted to reconnect with the rest of the world, but they did not spare his life either, so his wishes were for naught. Only one survived. Taku Sookato. The boy made his way and joined up in the ranks of the Sand village. There whole entire clan is now only one. Any hopes of them reviving, are on his shoulders.

    Clan Details:
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"Thou art weighed in the balances, and art found wanting."


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"Whoso sheddeth man's blood, by man shall his blood be shed."

Rank Information:

Rank:

Jounin

Village Affiliation:

Sunagakure

Special Information:

Character Speciality:


Main: Fuuinjutsu

Sub: Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:

Main: Wind
Sub: Fire

Special Characteristics:

Name: Mental Comprehension
Rank: N/A
Type: Mental
Description: This character has increased mental capacity, being able to utilize the entirety of their brain. This allows for near instantaneous processing of information, along with complete and total recall of all information, much like a photographic memory.

Name: High Pulse Rate
Rank: N/A
Type: Physical
Description: This allows the character to keep their muscles more soaked with constant blood and oxygen allowing them to work at peak efficiency for longer periods of times essentially prolonging their muscles endurance and keep them from getting tired as fast.

Name: High Metabolism
Rank: N/A
Type: Physical
Description: This character has a high metabolism. This allows the character to eat large amounts of food and make a hasty recovery after being in the hospital or being worn out from a mission. However, they also have a large appetite and spend more money on food. They are normally always seen eating.


Name: High Speed
Rank: N/A
Type: Physical
Description: This trait does not only account for movement speed, but attack speed with swords as well, no matter their size. Due to this, Ibuki is able to swing around their swords 50% faster than expected, easily able to surprise an opponent who ventured to close by causing them to misjudge the swing time.

The reasoning why Ibuki has this unique speed characteristic is due to the extensive training he were put through from the time he could carry a sword.

Name: High Chakra
Rank: N/A
Type: Physical
Description: Due to the unique side effects of the Sookato clan, Ibuki has 50% more chakra than an average shinobi of his own rank. While unknown, he believes the amount of chakra he has, and the pitch black color it resembles is effectively due to his bastard father, Taku.

Name: Curse Seal: Black Oath
Rank: S
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Seal’s Creator: Lord Ichushiro
Description: Lord Ichushiro may seem just to many but in truth he is as pitiless and ruthless as the worst men when need by. The loyalty of men is fickle at best and sometimes things are too important to leave to fate. To this affect his learned many dark and forbidden secrets that should destroyed upon inception. One such is the Curse Seal: Black Oath. This seal is evil and wretched thing that can forcibly bind the life force of one to another’s bidding. Even though the applicant must be willing its affects and significance are no less diabolical or profound. This Seal drawn in chakra enriched blood makes real a black oath of loyalty. In accepting this seal the bearer’s chakra system is linked to a parallel seal on the creator which at any time can be used in the following ways:

  • To force the bearer to tell the user the truth (must have LOS on bearer at time)
  • To compel them to follow an order (must have LOS on bearer at time)
  • To detonate the chakra coursing through the bearer destroying their corporeal form within seconds killing them


These affects/abilities are one way and cannot be reverse. This seal can only be removed by its creator and lasts till the creator/users death, whichever comes first.



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"Do not envy a sinner; you don't know what disaster awaits him"

Skill Information:

Non-Elemental
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"Give, and it shall be given to you. For whatever measure you deal out to others, it will be dealt to you in return.”


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Background Information

History:

Birth Arc:
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Childhood Arc:
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Travelling Arc:
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Suna Arc:
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Role-Play Sample:

“Sensei… sensei…” an annoyed Leon said, shifting through the crowded market looking for the white hair that signified his teacher. Normally they wouldn’t even be in a town, but since they had recently run out of food at their little camp nearby, they needed to find more food.

Leon threw the bag that he was carrying over his shoulder and stood on his toes, looking for Riku. Not as easy task but the… ah. There he was. Leon let out a shrill whistle, something that they had developed for communicating with each other in crowded places and growled slightly as no head was turned.

“Probably flirting again… Ero-baka sensei…” Leon muttered as he bent over and grabbed a pebble from the ground. While he didn’t mind the flirting as much, today was the day that Riku had said that he would start teaching Leon about the Ninja Arts. That made any amount of flirting or distraction today unallowable. It was time for Leon to learn.

Striding towards his sensei, Leon’s hand brushed over his right pocket, and the bulge inside of the pocket made him stop for a second. Reaching his hand in, Leon pulled out not only Riku’s wallet, but another random wallet, a pocket watch, a multi-purpose knife, someones belt, and a candy bar. How the candy bar ended up in his pocket was a mystery, but the bigger problem was the belt. How did he even get a hold of a belt that someone was wearing? Leon turned his head to the side.

“Jimmy?” Picking up a rock, Leon began to have a complete conversation with it while he finished walking towards Riku. During the 5 minutes it took to walk that far, Leon had come up with the perfect plan to separate his sensei from the girl he was hitting on.

Another 5 minutes later, a figure suddenly latched on to the females leg, mud and leaves sticking out of his brown hair. Looking at Riku, Leon smirked inside and drooled. “Dahhhh dum dah dooooooo…” with that, Leon let out a howl and starting to slightly hump the females leg until she decided it would be a very good idea to leave, and bade Riku a farewell, and patted Leon on the head uncertaintly.

Making sure she was no longer in site, Leon stood up normally and ran his head through his hair, throwing bits of mud and leaves down on the ground while wiping his mouth off of excess drool.

“Serves you right. I went and did allllll the shopping, and I come back to find you flirting on the day you said you would train me. Cmon now, whats wrong with that picture? Oh, and here.”

With that last comment Leon flipped all the possessions he had found in his pocket at Riku and waited for a response.

"Walk while ye have the light, lest darkness come upon you."


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I know the history isnt done, but you guys can start reviewing this if you want.
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Id start revieiwing this now. THe history is nearly finished, so it will be up for complete approval shortly anyways.
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Name: Katon: Kasai no Ame [Fire Release: Rain of Fire Technique]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This is a jutsu utilizing the fire element. The user performs a few seals and begins concentrating chakra into his hands. Eventually he will manipulate it into a ball of fire completely surrounding both hands, and then fired into the air. The two fireballs will collide and then split into 10-20 separate fireballs which will proceed to rain down on the area as commanded by the user.

How large can the separate fireballs become and how far can they go?

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Name: Katon: Houka [Fire Release: Rocket]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: After performing the needed handseals, the user would open their mouth a ball of fire will shoot out their mouth with great speed and will burst into a bigger flame when it hits the target

How large is the fireball and how large is the burst?

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Name: Katon: Karyuu Endan [Flame Release: Fire Wall Attack]
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: A Katon ninjutsu technique where the ninja inhales deeply, drawing in a full chest of air. They then exhale, producing a very wide stream of flames that approach their target as a huge wall. This technique however uses an extremely large amount of the user's chakra and cannot be used frequently.

How large is the wall of fire?

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Name: Katon: Yougan Fi-rudo no Sousaku [Fire Release: Lava Field Creation]
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user performs a series of hand seals than places their hands on the ground. The earth then slowly heats up and changes into molten rock. After execution, the user must immediately remove their hands and back up so as not to be burned. This not only limits where their target can move, but can also burn them if they are standing on it. The amount of area covered depends on the amount of chakra used.

Seeing as this jutsu depends on the amount of chakra being used, I believe you need to state the highest amount coverage possible.

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Name of Jutsu: Taijutsu Style: Kung Fu
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element Affinity: N/A
Description: This style dates back centuries ago, created by monks in temples far in the southeast between the boundaries of fire country and lightning country. The style main focus varies from school to school but the focus on this style combines each teaching and principles. One style focus solely on hands and arms while another style may focus heavily on legs. This style does involve swift movements and focus on balance. There is no heavy weakness. It is more like a game of chess. Each style has it's strength's and weaknesses and if one where to fight another person in the art and they were to mess up in that one style, that other p

It appears some of the description was cut off.
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Updated info on jutsu, and finished history.
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PostSubject: Re: Shitsumei, Ibuki [Suna Jounin] Shitsumei, Ibuki [Suna Jounin] EmptyMon 30 Aug 2010, 12:17 am

Meimei Seal needs to be raised to b rank

Spiritual Disturbance should vary in cost in accordance with its power rather then have a flat rate of two c ranks

How is the gen lust applied? The technique also could do with subtstantial editing since currently it is unlikely to prove very effective. I can imagine a lot of people just saying they have a hard on and leaving at that till they kai. Also since kai is generally a sure thing attempts most people wont need more then one attempt to break it
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Editted spiritual disturbance, that was what Ithought it said.

Meimei seal

The Meimei seal was approved as a C-Rank there, but I can edit it as necessary.

Lust is applied as any Genjutsu would be, however it is extremely hard to notice past the first three posts unless Genjutsu is a specialty. This also takes into consideration the opponent reading the Genjutsu and not god modding or metagaming it, essentially coinciding with the rules. By the time the screaming and the tornado appears, the user would generally be to confused, and then frightened, to actually remember they are ninja and that this is a Genjutsu, by association messing up the first Kai or failing to use it.
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PostSubject: Re: Shitsumei, Ibuki [Suna Jounin] Shitsumei, Ibuki [Suna Jounin] EmptyTue 31 Aug 2010, 1:18 am

Meimei needs upping. Its akin to invisibility ninjutsu which are all b rank at minimum

With regard to luck the amount of skill and power needed to convince someone successfully that they are a member of the opposite sex, despite memories to date being contrary is rather beyond C Rank since its not merely distorting perception or reality but impacting on mental recall and convincing that what they hold to be true is wrong. If I were to put you in a world were illusions were commonly used as weapon sand then took you from a fight as a man and placed you in a state where you believed a woman, you would be hard pressed to not to notice something was up unless I deliberately took great efforts to suppress your mental recall. This not to say it couldnt be done but not by a c rank tech that also does number of other things to boot. It would be fine however if the unnecessary sex changing element were not inter-grated with the illusion creating a figure of the opposite sex. Edit it and I will approve since most of my comments were largely to avoid the inevitable joy meta-gaming that might result from it. I find gen need to be clear cut on the whole to avoid people being silly buggers.
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