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| Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] | |
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John
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| Subject: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Thu 22 Apr 2010, 3:49 am | |
| Basic Information:
Name: Tensei Hougaku Secondary Title: Ten-san That kid Raiden Age: 20 Gender: Male Physical Appearance: Tensei is a striking young man. Though what he looks like doesn't bother him, he still tends to keep very in shape, and also has great personal hygiene. He keeps his blonde hair pushed back to keep it out of his face. His hair is a decent length, which can only be noticed when he doesn't push the hair back. Usually only one strand from his bangs hangs over his forehead. Due to the light blonde color of his hair, the sun has a tendency to shine on it, and this gives Tensei a certain warming/reassuring aura.
Overall, he has a naturally attractive face and body type. He weighs 55.5kg, which seems like a little low, but his build is above average compared to most his age, and not in the sense that he is big, but generally toned. Due to his constant Flash Force training at the temple, his body fat percentage is extremely low. He is about normal height, being 181 cm. His skin isn't tanned very much, in fact it is rather pale. That was simply the way he was born, his skin has been that color all his life and wouldn't be likely to change. His pupils are a shiny, often beautiful blue hue. He has a classic look not only like a Hougaku clan member but the general look of a Kumo ninja.
Tensei's attire changes given the situation. In most cases, he wears a simple black shirt with his clan symbol on the back in a gold/dark yellow shade. Sometimes he changes from an all black t-shirt to an all black undershirt depending on the weather conditions. The shirt is notably tight on him, but he doesn't mind. This is what he usually wears inside the village, and under his official Flash Force wear and gear. His pants are the normal black pants that most higher ranked nin wear. The pants end in the lower shin area, and for his feet he wears normal ninja sandals.
There isn't anything particularly flashy about this outfit. In fact, there isn't really anything at all. It is plain, because Tensei really has a hard time picking out things to wear. He often wears black gloves to cover his hands, in order to lessen the pain when striking, countering or blocking with them. The other accessory he has which stands out is his necklace which was given to him by his mother when he was very young. It has a yellowish gold crystal attached to the end of it, this obviously is because of Kumo's village color.
Tensei's battle/duty attire consists of the normal Flash Force uniform. Flash Force members are considered the most elite shinobi in Kumogakure, thus they their appearance is similiar to the ninja of Kumo as well. Instead of wearing the standard shinobi gear such as the vest and jacket, Flash Force members adopt a more traditional style of appearance. It is a mixture of modern shinobi clothing mixed with a traditional temple style. Flash Force members wear the traditional Kumogakure black three-quarter ninja pants with the ninja footwear as well. But as a top they wear a traditional Uwagi which is golden yellow with a darker gold trim. The arms of the Uwagi have a medium sided length which goes to the elbow, but it is very deep in width. On the back of the Uwagi is the symbol of the Flash Force which is a two golden wings in a circle/ring. They wear the typical Kumogakure headband to they also have a unique facial mask. The mask covers the top of the forehead where the forehead protector starts, down to the nose coving the eyes. The mask is the same colour as the trim of the Uwagi a golden colour.
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Personality: Tensei is a very odd individual. His personality is complex on so many levels. Most of the time, he tries to be an honorable shinobi to Kumo. He is very loyal, and he believes that betrayal to his village is the same thing as betraying him. If any of his friends were to betray the village, he would take responsibility in bringing them back dead or alive. He loves all the people in his life, but due to him growing up in royalty and taught all his life that the village was to come first no matter what, and as such that's the way he feels. Next to his family, it is the thing that he loves most. He also loves his clan, he is a proud member and holds it's name up with the highest dignity and respect.
That said, not only does he have a certain respect for his sister, Riku, The Raikage, he also wants nothing more than to surpass her in power, and that's why he works so hard. He figures that in doing so, he will get the recognition he deserves around the village and earn a mutual respect from Riku. This keeps him training, and even though he has yet to become as strong as his older sister, he is still quite powerful for someone his young age. He is completely loyal to the Raikage as well. He knows that his sister is a great leader and he has 0 doubt in her decision making.
The more odd side to Tensei's personality is his love for poetry. This obviously isn't odd, but Tensei has a tendency to turn the situations he happens to be in into a poem. If he finds a good moment to make a poem out of, he will. This is always considered just a silly tick that he has by the rest of the people that know him, and even though it actually annoys some people, Tensei doesn't really care at all. Most of his poetry revolves around romance, as Tensei has an interest in it even though he has never really had a girlfriend. He tends to be very polite when he first meets women, and this is because that's another thing that he was taught when he was a young boy, that it was always important to show respect to women.
Tensei is often a silly man. He has been known to not know when to take a situation seriously. This is because he really has 0 hate in his heart. That isn't to say that he doesn't dislike things, he quite does, but he is able to look passed hatred which is a good thing for a shinobi. His peaceful nature is often a beacon of hope for his comrades, as they see that he is never worried, and then they think that he has a reason for not being worried. That's not actually the case. Tensei could be facing certain death and he would still have a smile on his face, because that's just the kind of person that he is. This makes him a bit unpredictable in battle, as people that wouldn't know him wouldn't know of this, and would think that he would have something up his sleeve.
Tensei is a merciful person unless he is told to be otherwise. He believes that if someone is truly sorry, then they should be allowed life, but he still believes in justice. For instance, if he was going up against someone that has committed many crimes, but he believed that they were sorry about it, he would arrest them rather than kill. He tries to avoid killing whenever possible, because not only does he call it a nuisance, but he thinks that everyone deserves a chance to turn their lives around.
Tensei is also a strong leader, as he can deduce situations and come up with a plan quickly. Not only that, he is known to be fair and organized. He always believed that he would have made a good leader for Kumo, although his sister was the older and more powerful one at the time so he understands why he wouldn't be picked for it. When put in a decision where he would have to choose between completing a mission or saving his comrades, Tensei would pick his comrades every time. He believes that no matter how important a mission is, the life of a person that is serving Kumo is more important, unless the mission involved Kumo's security as a whole.
Catch Phrase: "Long live Kumogakure no Sato." "Understood." "Listen well! My impressive clarity and insight is about to blow you away."
Rank Information:
Rank:
Flash Force - S Rank Kumo Jounin - A rank Village Affiliation: Kumogakure
Special Information:
Character Speciality: Main: Ninjutsu --Sub: Eijutsu Elemental Affinity: Main: Raiton --Sub: Fuuton Special Characteristics:
--Hyper-Observance This was a trait that he has developed over time. Due to his photographic memory, and capable peripheral concentration, he is very observant of the things going on around him. He practically does this on instinct. He pays attention to human interactions and human dynamics to see how each person reacts or responds to others and to events and because of this he is able to predict the actions of people. This is quite useful in battle, because not only is he able to examine his opponent and come up with an accurate assumption of what they plan to do, but it works for techniques as well, even while fighting. He can sub-consciously break down an ability to find it's weakness. * An added note, I don't plan to use this to metagame against anyone. If there is no visible sign of a weakness, Tensei wouldn't know.
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| | | John
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| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 10:26 pm | |
| Clan Name: Hougaku Clan
Clan Location: Kumogakure no Sato
Clan Traits:
Pull Chakra: All members of the Hougaku clan possess what is simply known as 'Pull Chakra'. Their normal chakra has properties that allow them to alter the density/weight of any object when it comes in contact with their chakra. This allows them the ability to freely control the density/weight of their own body and surrounding objects, but it does not allow them to alter another living beings density/weight due to the corresponding chakra's involved. Thus, clan members are able to make themselves lighter, heavier, jump great distances, move at faster speeds and increase the pull of weight and power behind a punch, kick or otherwise. Due to their unique chakra and it's unique abilities, members have developed a 40% larger chakra reserve to manage the strain of the fluctuating weight of their chakra.
Kekkei Genkai:
Dominion: The members of the Hougaku clan all possess a special aura of augmented chakra in combination with their special 'Pull Chakra', in which they can extend their chakra system in a sphere around themselves. This essencially gives the members dominion or authority over this area, which allows them the ability to manipulation the space within the area in many different and unique ways. This technique is known as the Shoyuuken and once established comes with a variety of abilities that are determined as Secret Clan Jutsu. With the ability to extend their chakra system around themselves in combination with the natural abilities of their 'Pull Chakra', clan members in turn can produce a deadly array of techniques. The Shoyuuken itself is also included in the details of clan jutsu.
Secret Clan Jutsu:
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- Name: Shoyuuken
Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The Shoyuuken is most like the signature move of any Hougaku clan member in that it is the precursor to many other techniques and attacks. The user will at an instant expand element chakra from their form to create a dome like aura that extends in a predetermined radius. It is seemingly in flux, and one can literally see the dome as it will be tinted a shallow pale blue color. This aura is always in flux, as chakra extends from the user and then returns on a vector, thus wasting very little chakra in doing so. Only one such sphere can be established at a time and once established it does not follow the user, but rather, occupies the space in which it is established. If the Shoyuuken is used when another Shoyuuken is active, the previous Shoyuuken will be dispelled. The radius of the technique extends based on rank. C Rank - 15meters B Rank - 25meters A Rank - 35meters S Rank - 50meters
Name: Shoyuuken: Sixth Sense Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu (Passive) Element: N/A Description: This is a passive technique that takes place inside of the area of the Shoyuuken technique itself. The user can sense any type of chakra's within the radius in conjuction with their rank, including external and internal chakra's. Unlike a senory ninja, it is limited to the area of the Shoyuuken, and even if they can sense it, they can't always react to it quickly enough without proper reflexes. But if a clan members trains in this art, the ability becomes very useful when navigating within the sphere.
Name: Shoyuuken: Shambles Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This is a technique based upon the substitution technique but adapted to form within the Shoyuuken. Once per turn, the user may substitute any two solid objects with each other, within the area of an established Shoyuuken without the need for hand signs. This technique does not count for a normal substitution, but it is limited to being used only three times per battle.
Name: Shoyuuken: Strangle Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu (Passive) Element: N/A Description: This is a passive technique that takes place inside of the area of the Shoyuuken. This technique is the pressure of ones own chakra in conjuction with the opponents. The pressure of the users chakra puts pressure on the chakra flow of the opponent, thus any techniques of the opponents used within the area of the shoyuuken cost twice as much chakra to use due to the forced nature in which they must be executed.
Name: Shoyuuken: Intimidation Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This is a technique that takes place inside of the area of the Shoyuuken. The user will produce the required handseals and with their chakra will send anyone who charges or enters that area to be caught of balance and lifted only four or five feet into the air. This technique only lasts a single post and is used to catch the opponent off guard, giving the user time to make a move of their own.
Name: Shoyuuken: Flux Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This is a technique that takes place inside of the area of the Shoyuuken utilizing the ability of 'Pull Chakra'. Using their unique chakra the user will fluctuate the weight/density of all inanimate objects within the area of Shoyuuken. How much the user can change this varies, either three times heavier or three times lighter. If this is an opponents weapon it makes it extremely difficult, if not nearly impossible to weild.
Name: Shoyuuken: Crawl Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This is an active technique that takes place inside of the area of the Shoyuuken. The user gains the ability to slow down things within the area of the Shoyuuken itself. The technique can supposabley slow down targeted objects to half their original speed within the limits of their rank. Due to the resistance of constant contact this technique does not effect the user. C-Rank: 0-20lbs - 50%, 20-40lbs - 25%, 50-60lbs - 10%, 61lbs+ - 0% C - 50%, B - 25%, A - 10%, S - 0%
B-Rank: 0-50lbs - 50%, 50-75lbs - 25%, 75-90lbs - 10%, 61lbs+ - 0% C - 75%, B - 60%, A - 45%, S - 0%
A-Rank: 0-75lbs - 75%, 75-115lbs - 60%, 115-135lbs - 30%, 120-135lbs+ - 0% C - 80%, B - 75%, A - 60%, S - 30%
Name: Shoyuuken: Focus Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu (Passive) Element: N/A Description: This is a passive technique that takes place inside of the area of the Shoyuuken. This technique provides immunity to genjutsu equal to the rank of the technique whilst inside the area of the shoyuuken, thus all genjutsu that are used within the area of the Shoyuuken that are B-Rank and below are not effective. This counts for all genjutsu users, including the user if they also use a genjutsu.
Name: Shoyuuken: Concussion Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This is a technique that takes place inside of the area of the Shoyuuken. The user will gather an already existing amount of chakra in the Shoyuuken in front of themselves. With the release of their hands a large blast of chakra will be shot towards in incoming enemy, causing a large amount of physical damage. If this enemy was caught off guard or in the air, the damage would be more extensive.
Name: Shoyuuken: Erase Rank: D-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This technique is used on any target that was summoned within the area of Shoyuuken. While a targeted item is under the effect of 'Shoyuuken' it becomes possible to 'unsummon' the summoned thing by expending an amount of chakra equal to the rank of the summoned target. E-ranked summons can be expelled automatically.
Name: Shoyuuken: Burden Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This is a technique that uses 'Pull Chakra' in combination with the area inside of the Shoyuuken. The user will slam their palms to the ground below them releasing their 'Pull Chakra' inside of the Shoyuuken, except for a small area around the user as they are not effected by this technique. Anything caught within this field of 'Pull Chakra' (i.e inside the Shoyuuken) will be pinned to the ground with extreme force. The strength of the pull can be increased by pouring more chakra into the Shoyuuken, however they cannot exert enough force to crush a person with this jutsu alone. Stronger shinobi have the ability to fight through and remain standing but the more chakra placed in the jutsu, the stronger the pull.
Name: Shoyuuken: Syphon Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This is a technique that takes place inside of the area of the Shoyuuken. This is a technique that uses the owners chakra within the Shoyuuken to leech small amounts of chakra from the opponent. Once a target is within the area of the Shoyuuken the user can activate the technqiue and that target will have their chakra slowly leech from them without their knowledge. Per post, a maximum quota of 10% of the targets total chakra can be drained and this technique stays active for as long as the orignial Shoyuuken is in place. The target wont even know that this is taking place, until it is too late and their chakra is drained completely.
Name: Shoyuuken: Fatigue Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This is a technique that takes place inside of the area of the Shoyuuken. This is a technique that is similar to the "Syphon" technique, but instead of leeching chakra from the target this technique uses the owners chakra within the Shoyuuken to drain small amounts of physical energy (i.e Stamina) from the opponent. Once a target is within the area of the Shoyuuken the user can activate the technqiue and that target will have their physical energy slowly drain from them without their knowledge. Per post, a maximum quota of 10% of the targets total stamina can be drained and this technique stays active for as long as the orignial Shoyuuken is in place. The more the targets moves with this technique in place the more they will become dramatically tired and unable to move thier body.
Name: Shoyuuken: Artificial Gravity Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This is a technique that uses 'Pull Chakra' in combination with the area inside of the Shoyuuken. The users chakra has properties that allow them to alter the density/weight of any object when it comes in contact with their chakra. This allows them the ability to freely control the density/weight of their own body and surrounding objects. Thus, clan members are able to make themselves lighter, heavier, jump great distances, move at faster speeds and increase the pull of weight and power behind a punch, kick or otherwise. This technique can be used outside of the area of Shoyuuken but is most effective, and most commonly used inside. The extend of this technique is based on the rank of the user. C-Rank: 200% weight increase or reduce to 1/6th the normal to a specific area or more. Can control the weight on objects about twice human size (small boulders, horse, etc). B-Rank: 300% weight increase or reduce to 1/10th the normal to a specific area or more. Can control the weight of large objects (Vehicle sized objects) A-Rank: 400% weight increase or reduce to 1/12 the normal to a specific area or more. Can control the weight of extremely large objects (huge areas of earth, small structures) S-Rank: 500% weight increase or reduce to 1/15th the normal to a specific area or more. Can control the weight of incredibly large/complex objects (Buildings, Ships, large crafts etc)
History: The Hougaku Clan is a long standing clan from Kumogakure which has produced some of the most talented ninja in the village. Due to the skills of their kekkei Genkai they are widely respected by ninja and citizens from the village and other villages alike. They have been a long standing clan in Kumo and have had many respectful leaders on the Kumo Ninja Council Board so they have a large about of ‘pull’ (Pun intended) in the village when it comes to what goes on. The Hougaku Clan are by far the most wealthy clan in the village, and maybe the country. The main family, whom the leader of the clan derives from are particulary rich and are incredibly wealthy. Their main clan compound is situated near the east side of the village on the mountain side, of course, is very large. The clan area is a combination of many very old, but beautiful and elegant buildings. The largest building is the leader of the clan's home, which is a large mansion, and rivals even the Raikage's compound.
The Hougaku Clan has been known to produce very skilled and talented ninja and this is due to their Kekkei Genkai. Their bloodline ability is very powerful and is widely known around the Lightning Country. The clan has been around for a long time, and said to be one of the founding clans of Kumogakure, and with this they carry with them a large legacy and practice. In the clan itself, men are considered as the leaders of the clan, and the clan leader is always a man. This is due to their unique kekkei Genkai which is genetically passed down in majority always too the men of the clan, it is rare for a woman to inherite the ability. The clan holds a strong focus on reputation and doesn’t like it’s members putting it in disripute. But none-the-less the clan is more laid-back than that of say the Hyuuga. They were once a dominant clan not only due to their unique abilities but their size, but now the numbers in the clan are dwindling due to the lack of bloodline DNA passing onto new members. The bloodline which is passed down between clan members, seems to be decreasing and it is a worry that this unique bloodline might fade out of existance.
But clan members don't only become ninja. Some who are not inherited with the bloodline may still choose to become a ninja, or they may follow another path of interest. Even if one doesn't gain the bloodline they are still treated as family in the clan, as they aren't power hungry, or blindsided by it. The clan has a long heritage in community matters, and is more than apart of the village as a whole. Members are brought up to have a great compassion and respect for others. Their unique talents make them great breeders of taijutsu users who vary in style within the clan. Their talents are great for being ninja and they have produced many shinobi who have gone onto greater merits such as being apart of the "Flash Force" or Riku being Raikage. The clan decided to settle down in Kumogakure a long time ago, and hasn't changed since. The clan holds a great sense of national pride in the village, and doesn't take traitors to the clan or village lightly.
Clan Details: Open
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| | | John
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| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 10:33 pm | |
| Background Information
History: --Birth Arc The circumstances in which led to Tensei's birth are rather humorous, although not to Tensei. Because Tensei's parents had such a hard time conceiving their first child, Tensei's sister Riku, they figured that it wouldn't be likely to happen again and as such they did not use protection. Well, they were hit with a surprise months later when they found out that Tensei's mother was pregnant with him. They thought about adoption, as they were unsure they could handle raising another child however once they found out it was a boy, and after some contemplation, they decided that they wanted to keep the baby and raise him, and that was the start of Tensei's life. If they had decided they didn't want him, Tensei would have grown up to be a completely different person.
Tensei's father had a huge interest in raising a son. His mother always wanted a girl, and his father always wanted a boy. However, that isn't to say that his mother didn't want him, but she was still worried about raising yet another child as she remembered how hard it was with Riku, despite all the money they had. His father wanted a boy so that he could train him to become a strong shinobi and the ways to use the Hougaku Kekkei Genkai correctly. He wanted his spirit to live on in his son. His father was much like what Tensei grew up into, he was highly interested in poetry, and not only that, but Tensei would grow up to look much like his father.
Once Tensei was actually born, his parents were extremely happy. He was such a beautiful baby and they fell in love with him at first sight. His mother no longer had any doubts about the difficulty of raising him because she knew that her love would guide her. The only problem being quite cliche, with there being a new baby Riku was getting less attention, and the change would be very hard for her. That said, Riku was still very happy that she had a new little brother. She was 12 at the time, and quite the prodigy, so it interested her to think about what Tensei would be like when he grew older and eventually became a ninja.
--Childhood Arc From the very earliest age, Tensei was being trained to become a strong shinobi. Even though his father was busy, being a village official, he still made a point to spend at least 2 hours a day training Tensei from book knowledge to overall combat. This started at the age of 4, so he wasn't exactly able to use chakra, but the training of the body allowed for the young boy to have quite the agility and reflexes. When his father didn't have time to train him, he would have another higher up from the Hougaku clan to do it. He had a lot of plans for his son's future, whether his son wanted it or not, and whether or not his son should have been out playing.
Tensei was taught the traditional style of the village, honor, respect, and loyalty. His father wanted to make sure that he grew up to be an example for all other Kumo shinobi, and in doing so he would be picked to lead the village one day. That was the hope that Tensei's father had, despite the fact that Riku was already blossoming into one of the most powerful shinobi in the entire village. That was completely lost on him. Even though he loved Riku, he was more focused on turning Tensei into someone special, and as such he spent little time thinking about where Riku's future was really headed, which was for great places.
Because of the constant training, Tensei didn't really have time to interact with other children or even his own family other than his father. He hardly ever saw his mother, and that led to him never really having a strong bond with her. He didn't understand how important a mother was, instead all he could think about was impressing his father, because if he couldn't, then the training would simply become harder. That's how much his father pushed him to become strong, and that's why a deep resentment started for his father. A resentment that wouldn't surface for a long time, but would change the relationship between him and his father forever.
Tensei was beginning to get older, to the point where he could actually think for himself. Around this time, his mother passed away. Despite not having a relationship with her, Tensei was more devastated that he ever thought was possible. He was young, and he didn't understand why she had to die when she was such a good person. She never did anything wrong, in fact she was quite the caring mother, and the only one that would stick up for Tensei when his father was going too far. Riku decided to join the Academy again, and Tensei knew that in a few years he would do the same. His new goal in life was to become a Medical ninja, so that he could prevent further people from withering away into nothingness due to diseases no one could cure. He told his father this, and he happened to be quite happy. It was good field to get into.
Finally, it was time for Tensei to join the Academy, and he was very confident that he would do well. He had already learned everything that would be taught, but he didn't want to show all of his talent. No, he decided that he would stay in the Academy for the required amount of time, because he knew that it was part of the experience of becoming a ninja. One day he would get his headband and be able to serve his village for real, but for now, he would accept the fact that he was still young and he still probably had things that he could learn. He was much like his sister, he hadn't had much interaction with other children before, but the difference between them was he wasn't worried about it. It was actually exciting for him.
--Academy Arc The first day of the Academy was rather brutal for Tensei. He was expecting the other children to automatically be friendly with him, simply because he was a child, and that's the way he thought that it was. Instead, he ended up making no friends at all, in fact he didn't even say one word to anyone else but the teacher. The rest of the students actually looked down upon Tensei because of his wealth and royalty. They saw him as just some spoiled brat, and they wouldn't have anything to do with him. This bothered him, as he really wanted to make friends and yet he was too shy to say anything. It didn't help that every evaluation question the teacher would ask, no one else but Tensei would know.
The first year of the Academy was the same as the first day. He wasn't able to make any friends because all of the kids didn't like him, and he was looked at to be not only the teacher's pet, but just some rich trash. That said, his father was very happy about the progress he was making, especially because Tensei had the best grades in the class. He could have saved himself the trouble and showed the teacher that he already knew everything the Academy taught, and he was starting to think that not doing that was a mistake.
The second year however went quite differently. The first day, Tensei had already made several friends. Two kids that didn't seem to care that he was rich. They were able to look passed the nonsense their parents told them. Tensei was happy to have friends, but he still didn't really know how to deal with them. Over time, they taught him how to be social and he was then on his way to actually becoming the most popular kid in the class. He did this by showing off some of his Taijutsu moves, which the rest of the students hadn't really learned yet. Tensei was more advanced than most of his fellow students currently were, when he was about 5.
The rest of his time at the Academy was a lot of fun. It got Tensei away from grieving father. Things were worse after the death of his mother, his father was pushing Tensei even harder because he was forced to face his own mortality with the death of his wife, it made him want Tensei to become strong even more. By the end of the last year, Tensei was one of the most popular kids among the class. Not only that, the clan was starting to keep a close eye on him, for they saw the potential. Tensei graduated top of his class.
--Genin Arc Tensei was put into a squad of other very talented young ninja. Up until this point, he had thought that he was the strongest young ninja in the village, but these other Genin made him look like nothing. They could actually use many ninjutsu techniques, and Tensei was only able to use a couple. This made him feel bad about himself, and caused him to train twice as hard in his spare time. How could he become as strong as Riku and the top Medical ninja if he couldn't even keep up with his teammates?
After much training, Tensei could fight on equal terms with the other two Genin in his team, but it didn't stop there. Tensei trained so much, that even the Raikage was surprised with his progression. That was exactly what he wanted, to be in the spotlight so that one day he could become someone significant in the village. He knew that he wanted to get into the Medical field, but he was unsure what else he wanted to do. The thought crossed his mind to go for Raikage. He loved his village, and he loved all of the stories about the previous Raikages and their courage, cunning, and overall advanced skill. His sensei was very proud of him, and taught Tensei several Medical techniques to help him on his way.
Tensei was given several missions to evaluate his skill, requested by his father. Every single one thrown at him, he accomplished and now he was able to use the Hougaku 'pull chakra', although to a less extent than his sister unfortunately, because Tensei was only intermediate at Taijutsu. Still, he was making constant advancements in his Medical arts, it seemed like he was meant for it. He would cure all the diseases that plagued the earth if it was the last thing that he did.
Around this time, Riku was given the Raikage title. Tensei wasn't really too upset about this, he was happy for his sister. He did want to be Raikage himself, but he knew that his sister was probably the most powerful shinobi in the village and so he was content with the council's decision. To his surprise, Tensei was offered a special rank too. Riku would train him further to make sure he was ready, and then he would put into the most elite of elite factions in the village, the Flash Force.
--Flash Force Arc This was around the time Tensei started to earn an interest in writing poetry. He was about 15, and known to be quite the odd ball. This said, he taken a couple years to exclusively train with his sister and even train by himself and come up with new techniques, and therefore he was ready for Flash Force. Tensei had grown to be known around the entire village as "That kid" Given his unusual skill for such a young age. His sister and the clan were quite happy with the shinobi Tensei was becoming.
Tensei has been with Flash Force ever since his training with Riku finished. He is given extremely special missions given his ability and has grown a strong bond with his sister. He also grew a love for his village, and due to that, it means the most to him out of anything in his life. When he is not doing missions, he is in the village either teaching, working at the hospital, or just hanging around. His current residence is the Kumo temple, where he does all of his training with the other Flash Force members. Tensei is often given a hint of special treatment due to being the sibling of the Raikage, something that the other Flash Force members resent, however they do love Tensei as their leader.
RP Sample: "HEY YOU!" Hateshi yelled out, pointing to another young Medical Ninja. An extremely injured boy layed there under him on the ground. "Grab a gurney now, we have to get this kid to the ER!" He yelled yet again. There wasn't many people around that area for some reason. It was up to them to help. The other medical ninja was simply a novice, therefore he began to shake a bit. "We don't have time for your cowardice this boy is going to die!" Hateshi was beginning to get angry. Even though he said that, his hands were shaking a little as well.
It was hard when someone got a patient like this.. a kid. The still trembling man grabbed the gurney quickly and brought it over to Hateshi. If they were going to save him they needed to move fast. They race down the hallways headed straight for the emergency room. Once they reached it they entered and saw several surgeons already suited up and sterile. "What do we got?" One of the surgeons asked. Hateshi wanted to curse at them for seeming so inhuman but now definitely wasn't the time for that. He could see the kid bleeding and gulped.
"Male, age 14-15. Several severe puncture wounds, three in the right arm, two in the left, one in the chest around the lung area and one in the kneecap." Hateshi said and took a deep breath. If it was only a few wounds, he would have been able to heal the kid himself, but this was far too complicated. "We don't want him to bleed out." One of the surgeons said and ran over to him quickly. A green aura began to form around his hands. The man needed to first get all of the kunai out without damaging anything. He quickly began to remove them one by one.
The surgeon was extremely skilled, he was able to remove and heal most of the wounds in a matter of minutes, however there was one that seemed to be particularly tricky. The kunai that was lodged into the boy's chest seemed to have punctured and/or collapsed his lung. This wasn't good, it needed to be fixed fast otherwise the boy had a possibilty of brain damage due to getting less oxygen to the brain. "This area needs to be pressurized." The surgeon said looking over to another. The man immediately ran over to help, beginning to put pressure on the area of the chest.
"The lung is semi-filled with blood and lymphatic fluid, I need the glue and a chest tube stat." He said and another surgeon brought him it. He treated the lung properly and inserted the chest tube. It began to suck out the blood and fluid. This continued for a while, when it was finally done, the surgeon closed up the wound accordingly. The boy was hopefully going to be fine if everything was done in the exact right order. He had certainly hurt himself.
"He should be okay, but he needs a blood transfusion, get him to a room and put him on a pulse oximeter." The surgeon said looking over at Hateshi. Hateshi nodded and immediately began to take the boy back to a room. He set the boy up with the pulse oximeter with an oxygen mask and an IV. He needed to wait a little bit before he could do the transfusion but until then if the boy was to wake up he wouldn't be feeling to great. Probably too weak to move even slightly. Hateshi sighed, he knew that there was one person that could make sure the kid's recovery went as smoothly as possible, but that was the person that he least wanted to deal with.
Despite a normal instinct to send a person away, Tetsu exited his office immediately after he was called down. Entering a room, his face went blank as he saw the young shinobi injured. He wasn't going to complain, all he had to do was make sure the kid got out okay, all internal injuries were taken care already so the hard part was already over. Tetsu sat in the room waiting for the kid to wake up. This process could and probably would take a long time, as it is expected that a patient recovering from a collapsed lung could remain unconcious for days.
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| Skill Information: FLASH FORCE TECHNIQUES/EQUIPMENT
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Name: Flash Force: Jitte Quantity: x1 Rank: C Appearance: Special Abilities/Characteristics: Members of the Flash Force hold and use the basic tools that a normal ninja uses, kunai, shuriken etc. But each Flash Force member carries and uses a unique weapon known as a Jitte. The modern Jitte or (Jutte) is about 45 cm (18 inches) long with no cutting edge and a one-pronged tine, about 5 cm long starting just above the handle and pointing toward the tip. The tine is used to hook swords and effectively trap and snap them in the right hands. The tine's proximity to the hand would make it rather dangerous. When faced with a swordsman, a likely use for the tine would be to capture and arrest the blade having evaded it. The tine's more common use is to hook into clothing or parts of the body like the nose or mouth, or to push into joints or other weak points on the body. The Jitte can also be used in much the same manner as other short sticks or batons, to strike large muscle groups and aid in joint manipulation. Origin: Tensei was given this blade a few months after he joined Flash Force. The design is exactly the same as other Jittes, however there is one special thing about Tensei's, and that is the Hougaku clan symbol on the hilt. He had this put on the blade after he had received it so he could honor his clan every time he went into battle. Even though he is not a Weaponry user, and as such cannot use Kenjutsu to it's full extent, he has still grown skilled using this over a few years. He normally uses it for immobilizing an opponent, and is quite good at doing it.
Name: Flash Force: Empty Mind Technique Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu (Passive) Element: N/A Description: The 'Flash Force' are said to be some of the most clever and clear-headed shinobi known to man. Those with this ability take it one step further, and are so in tune with their surroundings that they can far more easily detect illusions and ignore their unnatural nature. Basically, for every none S-rank genjutsu cast on the user, his mind is alerted of the illusion and automatically reduces the duration of the Genjutsu affecting him by one post. However, this effect can only work against two Genjutsu per thread, and even then cannot break the minimum duration.
Name: Flash Force: Chakra Sabotage Technique Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: An incredibly frustrating technique, the user must gather their chakra in their mouth, suck it up, and then blow it into a machine. The chakra in the mouth is formed into sand-like particles of chakra. No matter how simple the machine, or elaborate, the chakra particles will somehow foul it up, preventing lock tumblers from moving, gears from properly turning, etc. While any mechanic can fix affected devices, this can nevertheless be frustrating and can be used to temporarily clog-up anything machine based.
Name: Flash Force: Chakra Coat Technique Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Chakra Coat Technique is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used by 'Flash Force' members to cloak the movements of the user. The user of this technique performs the needed handseals and will release chakra so it makes a coat made of chakra around their body. This Chakra Coat is the ultimate stealth coat as a tiny layer of chakra spread around their entier body even on the soles of one's feet which acts as a cushion between the feet and the ground, making footsteps silent and any movements the user may have. Also due to the chakra coat around the user it supresses the chakra scent so chakra sensing ninja will not be able to find the user while the coat is in effect. This technique lasts for as long as the user is willing to pump the chakra.
Name: Flash Force: Flash Orb Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This is a simple technique used by members of the 'Flash Force' for an easy escape for getaway. The user with gather chakra in their hands and then release it in the form of a simple clap. The clap will explode in a flash of light in the surrouding area, making it near on impossible for the target to see. This can be used as a distraction or an escape tool. The flash lasts for a single post.
Name: Flash Force: Prince of Shadows Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This is a simple technique used by members of the 'Flash Force'. If standing in a shadow, even a fairly dull one, the 'Flash Force' member can, at this point, carefully use their chakra to darken their body and make it totally invisible to all but the most careful scrutiny. However, they may not move while they do this, as it does take quite a bit of concentration. MEDICAL TECHNIQUES/EQUIPMENT - Quote :
- Name: Power of the Healer
Rank: C-A Type: Medical Element: None Description: A technique directly created by Tensei used in order to heal himself when he is wounded. Tensei will first perform handseals, he will then send a flow of chakra to the area where he is wounded at. The blue/green aura will begin to form around the wound, and with that it will start to heal. He uses this technique when he does not have use of his hands for very long, whether he be in battle or in a similar situation. Since there are only a few handseals to use, this technique can be done fairly fast. The bigger the wound, the more chakra it will take for him to heal. The bigger the wound, the longer it takes. At C rank, typically does not take much chakra. This is a simple cut usually not very deep. At B rank, it enables him to heal larger and deeper wounds such as slashes and other semi-severe injuries. This takes up more chakra, however not a lot. At A rank, it enables him to heal rather large stab wounds, for instance if he has been stabbed with a sword, or other severe injuries such as that. It also enables him to heal broken bones. This takes much longer and takes more chakra.
Name: Death for the Weak Rank: A Type: Medical Element: None Description: A technique created by Tensei in order to make his victim very feeble and brittle. First, he will do handseals and spit out special bacteria from his mouth (Due to years of experimentation in the medical field and on his own body, he is able to store certain organisms, chemicals, etc without being effected by them.). Tensei can shoot the bacteria quite far, however he still must make it land in his opponents mouth. He usually does this when his opponent is boasting, or taunting him, or simply in any way opening their mouths.The bacteria will invade the bloodstream once injested, and soon will begin to eat away at the calcium of the opponent, to the point of death. Because there are so many of them, death happens to come fast and this is a very painful experience. The victim will first be very weak, soon they will be unable to even stand, and eventually it will be fatal. At 1 post, the victim will start to be weakened severly, giving the user the opportunity for attack. At 2 posts, the victim will be extremely weak, to the people where they will almost be unable to defend themselves at all. At 3 posts, the victim will be too weak to move at all. At 4 posts, the bacteria will have eaten away at them completely, they will be dead.
Name: The 3 Deadly Strikes Rank: A Type: Medical Element: Raiton Description: This is an extremely powerful offensive technique utilized by top Medical Ninja. The ninja will first get to hand-to-hand combat range with their opponent. This technique is based partially out of Taijutsu, as it uses a ninja's medical knowledge as well as their physical attributes. The ninja will first gather up Raiton chakra in their fist to give them an extra boost of physical strength. Then, they will strike several pressure points on their opponent's body, releasing the chakra upon impact for each hit. The ninja will first strike the temple with the full force of their chakra. Then, they will continue with striking the Solar Plexus, located near the ribcage area. They will finish with a punch to the Jugular Notch, utlimately leading to fatality. In order for the proper results, the ninja must be extremely precise with their strikes, as if they are even slightly off for one, the opponent may not die however it is still possible. If only the Solar Plexus strike lands, the opponent may have a pierced or damaged heart as well as internal bleeding. If only the temple strike lands, the opponent may have a broken skull, suffer from brain damage, or even hemorrhage and in which case, die. A strike to the Jugular Notch is the hardest to land, if only it does, the opponent may suffer from internal bleeding and eventually bleed out to death.
Name: Healing Strings Rank: B Type: Medical Element: None Description: This is a somewhat simple technique Tensei created which allows him to heal people at a longer range. Tensei will first begin to send chakra into the tips of his fingers, all 10. The chakra will take a few seconds to charge up to the proper size. Tensei will then push his hand(s) forward toward the person he needs to heal, and the chakra will form into strings from each finger and shoot straight for the person in question. Using one of his hands, he can manipulate each of the 'strings' to heal the wounds. This way he still has good range and a free hand to defend himself and his comrades while he heals them. Each string, being able to use up to 10 for each finger, can reach up to about 30m away from the user. The strings also have a good amount of healing capability, being able to heal anything from burns, bruising, to deep stab wounds.
Name: Finger Scalpel Rank: B Type: Medical Element: None Description: This is the technique, or act, of using one's finger as a scalpel when without the necessary tools. The medical ninja will first send chakra directly to their index finger. It will begin to glow a green aura. After that, the user will make the chakra dense and concentrated. This will allow them to make sharp incisions for surgical procedures when in desperate need to do so. The procedure would still be dangerous, as the battlefield this technique would be used on would not be sterile, however managable if done by the right person. This technique is also well used in removing shrapnel, kunai and such from a patient's body, as they can use it to pull them out without damaging outside organs or tissue.
Name: Muscle Disfunction Rank: B Type: Medical Element: None Description: A deadly technique using the knowledge of a Medical Ninja and precision in order to cause severe pain to their victim. They will first send chakra to their hands. Their hands will begin to glow of a blue/green aura. After that, they will concentrate the chakra around their hand and form their hand into a shape resembling a knife, or other stabbing weapon. Using their knowledge of human anatomy, the medical ninja will strike their opponent at the tendons typically causing them to rupture and otherwise causing not only extreme pain but extreme muscle disfunction as well. Depending on the area hit, the victim will temporarily lose use of the limb with the tendon that the user ruptured, which must be healed.
Name: Digestive Deterioration Rank: B Type: Medical Element: None Description: A very humourous technique for the user and also very advanced. A medical ninja will first get to extremely close hand-to-hand combat range with their opponent. Then the user will thrust their palm onto the victims stomach, gripping it with full force. Their hand must be completely on it. After that, they will shoot a surge of chakra into their stomach, essentially hitting the Villi in their intestines. This will cause severe disfunction in the digestive system, as the victim will no longer be able to digest food, thus making anything they eat pass directly through them giving them no satsifaction from the food itself. If not treated, the victim can actually starve because of this. Without the villi, their body will also not be able to take in the nutrients that is needed to survive. While it takes a long time for this to become fatal medical attention is still very much needed for the victim. (It could possibly take a week or more for the victim to starve to death, however being deprived of the food it's probable that they'll wish they were dead.)
Name: Arteriole Anti-Pressure Rank: B Type: Medical Element: None Description: This technique is a rather simple one, using the resources of a Medical Ninja to accomplish it. This can be used in emergancy to relax a patients muscles, or used against an opponent to relax their muscles and make said opponent weaker. The medical ninja must first treat the patient or victim with highly advanced and developed drugs, whether it be through tablets or a syringe. The muscular contraction of arterioles is targeted by drugs that lower blood pressure (antihypertensives), for example the dihydropyridines (nifedipine and nicardipine), which block the calcium conductance in the muscular layer of the arterioles, causing relaxation. This decreases the resistance to flow into peripheral vascular beds, lowering overall systemic pressure.
Name: Chakra Sedation Rank: B Type: Medical Element: None Description: This is a technique used by Medical ninja to sedate a patient without actually having a sedative. The user will first get into a position usually standing over the patient. Once they have done this, they will begin to send chakra to their hands which will begin to glow a green aura. Immediately upon doing that, they will softly put their palm on the patient;s forehead and their chakra will begin to transfer to the patient's mind. The chakra will travel to the brain and cut out the patient's consciousness. It is really a simple technique, the only problem being that the patient must be absolutely still during the process of this, making it nearly impossible to achieve during battle, or even simply under tense circumstances.
Name: Raiton: Heartshock Rank: B Type: Medical Element: Raiton Description: This is a technique used by Medical ninja in conjunction with the Lightning element. This technique allows the Medic to revive patient after their heart has stopped. The Medic will first perform a few handseals, and Raiton will begin to surge around their palms, this process can be done at an extremely fast pace for more advanced Medics with the Raiton element. The Medic will then put their palms on the patient's chest and release it, essentially shocking them and kick-starting their heart. The problem with this technique being that the user can only do this 2 posts after the person has died, otherwise it will be too late.
GENERIC MEDICAL TECHNIQUES
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Name: Headache Relief Rank: D Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: This is one of the first medical jutsu a medic learns. By emitting a pulse of green healing chakra through the finger tips, the medic is able to relieve the headaches of any person, regardless of cause (stress, migraine, other ailments, alcohol consumption, etc.) by touching the head of the patient. This jutsu has no further purpose, and is above all else a training jutsu for the medical arts.
Name: Bone Setting Rank: D Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: After training, medical nins are able to diagnose and reset broken bones. This skills is limited as it is a physical repair, and is most effective on large bones such as leg or arm bones. This skill cannot treat fractures, and further treatment should be done. This is simply a quick fix to prevent further damage.
Name: Rapid Bandaging Rank: D Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: After training, medical-nins are able to quickly apply bandages to a patient. This can be for injuries as small as a kunai cut to stopping the bleeding of a severed limb or to prevent spillage from a split abdomen. While most any ninja is capable of bandaging a wound, Rapid Bandaging allows for a thorough, complete bandaging in 2-7 seconds.
Name: Stitching Skill Rank: D Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: After training, medical-nins are able to sew closed open wounds using their field kit of needle and surgical thread. While most any shinobi might figure out how to sew a wound shut, this stitching art allows for proper, thorough stitches to be made in 2-7 seconds.
Name: Splint and Sling Creation Rank: D Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: After training, medical-nins are able to create emergency splints or slings either from the equipment they carry or from the environment around them (ex: sticks). While this might be considered a standard survival skill, intensive training allows the med-nin to create proper splints or slings that will not cause further damage out of very difficult materials.
Name: Blood Coagulation Rank: D Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: A simple healing technique. The user uses his chakra on his wound to make the blood cells there coagulate quickly. Unlike the more complicated healing jutsus which create new cells altogether, this one simply speeds up the natural healing process, stopping the bleeding quickly when normally it would take many hours, maybe even days depending on the wound. The wound still remains but the bleeding stops, though sometimes only partially for deeper and more difficult wounds. It goes quickly for small wounds but larger ones need a couple of minutes to finish the coagulation. It can also be used on wounded allies.
Name: Heat Seeker Rank: D Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: A simple Jutsu in which the Medical Ninja focuses the chakra in his body by placing it along the persons chest creating heat within them. It basically works the way one would if they were doing a destructive fire jutsu; heat-based is created from the hand, though much, much less than if it were indeed a destructive ninjutsu.(That's why you have to be careful-the user has to create just the right amount. Any less would be ineffective, any more would be too much.) This is so then the person would not be in danger of Hypothermia, a condition in which the body starts dropping its temperature at a quick pace, and if goes untreated it might cause paralysis and even death. One must be careful for if used to long then it may warm up a part of the body which may cause fever.
Name: Cold Wave Skill Rank: D Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: A jutsu that is pretty much the opposite of heat seeker, this one instead of treating a state of hypothermia, which is heat loss, is treating a state of heat wave where the body overheats. By using chakra, the cold fusion jutsu opens up pores, pumps up blood to the skin and widens the blood vessels nearest to the skin and also increases sweat production. All these effects cool the body and make it return to normal temperatures, although careless use of the cold fusion might lead to an undesired effect such as overcooling of the body and eventually hypothermia.
Name: Amputation Rank: C Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: After intensive training, medical-nins are able to severe a limb in a manner that allows for easy reattachment back at the hospital and allows for proper bandaging, increasing the chances of survival. This art can be used if a limb has already been ravaged and the loss of blood must be controlled, or if a particularly dangerous poison has been injected or applied and the limb must be removed to save the life of the patient.
Name: Herb Identification Rank: C Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: After intensive training, medical nins are able to find and locate medicinal herbs out in the field. This is a very comprehensive knowledge skill, and thus requires extra training to master. It can be quite useful if proper medical supplies are not available; unfortunately the chances of finding proper herbs is also limited by terrain and are difficult to locate in some environments (i.e. Suna).
Name: Thermal Homeostatic Sustenance Rank: C Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: By focusing healing chakra into the blood stream, the medic is able to accelerate the rate of blood flow in the human body, raising and maintaining the body temperature of an individual when their normal biological functions can no longer support homeostasis. Physical contact of both hands onto the patient's body is required at all times, and as a result the length of time this jutsu can be used is limited by the user's chakra supply.
Name: Cauterization Rank: C Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: By focusing healing chakra into her fingertips, the medic is able to create a cauterizing burn. When applied to small cuts or broken veins, the burn can seal blood leakage, possibly preventing death from bleed out. This has possible combative applications: taijutsu blows using the fingertips can burn skin, but it is not a very effective method of harming an opponent.
Name: Diagnosis Pulse Rank: C Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: After performing handseals, the medical ninja releases a pulse of chakra through the patient’s body. The pulse then returns through their chakra network back into the medic-nin’s palms, giving them a mental image of where the chakra network seems to be flaring or lowering. This can give the medical ninja a better idea of where or what the injuries are.
Name: Blood Toxin Decontamination Rank: B Type: Medical Element: N/A Description: After performing handseals and gathering chakra, the medic is able to use this jutsu to break down dangerous poison radicals into harmless proteins that the body will naturally dispose of. This jutsu is functional on most common poisons. The jutsu is most effective at time and point of infection, when the poison is localized. If the poison has spread through the body, the jutsu can still be effective but must be sustained for a long period as it takes time for the entire blood quantity to pass through the area of healing chakra being used. It is possible patients could die during this time.
TODD'S/RAITON TECHNIQUES
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Name: Raiton: Lightning Flash Orb Rank: D Element: Raiton Description: This is a simple lightning technique which is very useful. The user will gather lightning chakra in their hand into a small orb. They will then release it into the air above the opponent. When it explodes it creates a flash of intense light, making it near on impossible for the target to see. This can be used as a distraction or an escape tool. The flash lasts for a single post.
Name: Raiton: Charge Volt Technique Rank: D Element: Raiton Description: This is a very simple but handy raiton based technique. After a single handseal the user will charge-up raiton chakra within their body. This charge-up takes a single post and when the time requirement is complete this technique can be performed. The following turn, if a raiton based technique is used due to the charged raiton chakra within the users body, that raiton technique will do twice the damage then it normally would.
Name: Raiton: Overload Rank: C Element: Raiton Description: Through the use of this technique, the user radiates their chakra through the air around them, overloading and disrupting any electronic equipment around them. With enough focused chakra output, the user can also make electronic devices explode. The technique can be focused or spread over an area in order to block out communication lines, radio frequencies, etc.
Name: Raiton: Lightning Clone Technique Rank: C Element: Raiton Description: This is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Kaminari Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out attacks on its target. Also, elemental clones can think, but only on the rudimentary level, and the concentration for their jutsu needs to be maintained by the user. When this clone disperses, it reverts into a spark of electricity.
Name: Raiton: Static Rain Technique Rank: C Element: Raiton Description: A simple technique that, if used while the target is directly exposed to rain, significantly wet, or immersed in water, will cause all lightning jutsu to zero in on the target. This is instant and also offers a 25% increase in damage if combined with any water. Name: Raiton: Electric Wave Rank: C Element: Raiton Description: The user prepares for this technique with a set of handseals before attempting to send a circular planer faintly-yellow electric wave from their midsection expanding in all directions. The wave of electricity expands is a sphere around the user, since it's painful to touch, anyone caught in the blast radius will be knocked back and stunned for a single post. The wave only extends in a radius 10m.
Name: Raiton: Lightning Bolt Technique Rank: C Element: Raiton Description: After performing several hand-signs, the user will collect Raiton chakra into one or both of their fists that will then possess a visible display of lightning with the palm, lightning that becomes clinched within the user’s closed fist. Upon throwing a fist, usually into the open air though not necessarily, the user will send a bolt of lightning straight out in the direction they punched. If a direct hit is landed this technique will surge the target’s body with electricity, stunning them for several seconds and potentially paralyzing them. This technique also creates blunt force and heat damage as the exact point of impact, which is all the more damaged if the technique is delivered through a direct punching to the opponent. The size of this bolt is roughly the side of the user’s closed fist in diameter.
Name: Raiton: Lightning Finger Bullet Rank: C Element: Raiton Description: Raiton: Lightning Finger Bullet is a technique creates a lightning bullet which can be fired from the users finger. Once launched it can travel up to 50m, and if charged for a single post, can travel up to 100 m. The shot has great peircing potencial, and if it strikes the opponent, will most likely pass through them. The ability to pierce their body means that it will also paralyse the target for a single post.
Name: Raiton: Heaven's Bullets Rank: B Element: Raiton Description: This is a technique created and used by Tensei Hougaku. It is a technique which involves the user first making a few necessary handsigns and then charging Raiton chakra to the tips of four of their fingers. The index, middle, ring, and pinkie. They will place the fingers under their thumb. Then the user will flick their four fingers, shooting out four small balls of condensed Raiton at an extremely fast speed. The Raiton is very strong as well, being able to break through metals and other hard solid objects. The user can also use this technique as a medium for throwing shuriken, kunai and other weapons by surging the chakra through it, giving it a boost in speed and power that is very hard to block and dodge.
Name: Raiton: Cannon Shockwave Rank: B Element: Raiton Description: This is a cannon like projectile technique that uses a wide burst of lightning over a wide circular area. Though it is slow, it takes up a large area, thus making it hard to dodge at closer ranges. From far away, one can move far away enough to dodge the attack, but normally it takes a great effort from any range to completely avoid the attack. The technique has a range of 20m, and to be hit by the attack isn't considered fatal, only enough to repel the target backwards, it has burning and a single post paralysing effects that make taking a direct hit critical in a battle.
Name: Raiton: One Thousand Thunder Claps Technique Rank: B Element: Raiton Description: This technique involves a physical lightning component, and also a secondary sonic component. The user channels a large amount of lightning into their palms and then claps them together. The lightning is compressed and then forced out in a shockwave around the ninja that radiates for about twenty feet in every direction. While not deadly, the shock can be incapacitating. As a secondary effect, the clapping of the palms and discharge of lightning creates an abnormally large sound. This sonic component is much like a sonic boom and is able to shatter glass, rupture eardrums, and even knock people off their feet.
Name: Raiton: Chain Lightning Rank: B Element: Raiton Description: This technique is used to create networks of lightning chakra between objects. By sending lightning chakra through multiple objects, one can create a net of lightning. This can be done through items such as shuriken, kunai etc and when the opponent steps within the area of the linked lightning, they will be shocked by the lightning in the circuit, and they will be paralysed for a single post.
Name: Raiton: Rotating Shock Wave Rank: B Element: Raiton Description: The user of this technique will gather raiton chakra in their body and then release it while they rotate in a 360 degree fashion. On release, the chakra will surge into an electrical current, forming a wave in a circular motion around the user. This technique can be used as both a defensive and offensive attack as it is also a for of counter. The lightning currents have a defensive ability surrounding the user, but if the user keeps rotating the waves will spread out in a 20m radius around the user, shocking and stunning any target that may inhabit the range.
Name: Raiton: False Darkness Rank: B Element: Raiton Description: This is a technique which requires no handseals. After gathering a large amount of chakra into ones mouth, they open it and exhale to release a strong bolt of electricity from their mouth. This strong bolt of electricity can be defended against by a powerful attack or defense.
Name: Raiton: Tornado Lightning Whip Rank: B Element: Raiton Description: After the required handseals the user will channel lightning-chakra in both of their hand. Once the technique is completed, the lightning chakra will be condensed and when released they form a long whip of lightning which is can range from 10-15m. The whips of lightning can be controlled from the users hands and are very fast and powerful able to pierce through metal defenses. The surge of electricity within the whips means that on contact it causing burning damage plus the opponent will be paralysed for a single post. But they do take concentration to maintain but used in the right way are incredibly deadly.
Name: Raiton: Live-Wire Flash Rank: A Element: Raiton Description: Raiton: Live-Wire Flash is an advanced lightning based technique which does not cost much chakra to perform. After the required handseals the user slams their palms to the ground and sends a visible line of electricity that travels along the ground from the user to an opponent. This surge of electricity is controlled by the user at a very significant speed. This gush of electricity can travel to as far as twenty meters and can move is different directions not having to stay in a single line, making it very hard to dodge due to its accuracy and speed. On contact the target will become completly paralysed unable to move a muscle for a single post as the surge from the ground pulses up their body. They also gain extensive burn damage from this technique as it literally fries their body.
Name: Raiton: Thunder Saber Rank: A Element: Raiton Description: This jutsu channels lightning-chakra to the user's hand. Once the technique is completed, the user will release the chakra towards the target. On contact this condensed chakra causes a great explosion of lightning. This produces heavy amounts of damage that is usually to the target if it is a direct hit.
Name: Raiton: Electric Circuit Technique Rank: A Element: Raiton Description: An extremely useful, but equally deadly technique, this technique is, at its core, a defensive technique. It was created as a method for Kumogakure shinobi to defend against opponents who also wielded raiton. However, what better way to defend against an opposing lightning attack but to turn it back on them. The only 'seal' used in this technique is the "Ram" seal extended outwards (pointers face outwards). The enemy jutsu is caught upon the tips of the fingers and is then guided down the left arm by the fingers of the right, along the chakra pathways of the arm and into those of the lower abdomen, being careful to keep the electricity away from the chakra coils around the heart. The right arm is then extended and the jutsu fired back at its original user with twice the power in the technique. While useful, this technique has many potentially fatal drawbacks. For one, the user must be grounded in some way shape of form during this jutsu's use. Should they be removed from the earth, the electricity will simply disperse within their body and electrocute them. Second, they must be stationary as the jutsu requires too much concentration to be performed while moving. Thirdly, the captured electricity must be released quickly as it will shock the user should it not be. Fourth and most importantly, the user MUST guide it away from the heart. Many inexperienced users of this technique have fallen due to their carelessness, their hearts literally fried within their chests. It is for that reason only that this technique is only used by experienced ninja.
Name: Raiton: Raiden's Wrath Rank: S Element: Raiton Description: This is a technique created and used by Tensei Hougaku for pure and utter destruction. The user will first do a somewhat long string of handseals. Then the user will begin to spin as chakra begins to form and circulate around their body. This chakra begins to expand to a wider distance around the user. The more chakra and time that is put into this technique the bigger the area that is effected will be. Once they are satisfied with the size, the user will continue with one handseal, that will turn what was once pure chakra into Raiton, and one more handseal which finally activates the technique. The Raiton will begin to come together at speeds practically unavoidable by those under the Jounin rank. As the Lightning comes together, it destroys anything an everything in it's path. Tensei can use his Kekkei Genkai to block himself from the attack while it destroys his enemies. This technique is very useful for village assaults, as it could turn an entire village into rubble with the right amount of chakra. After 1 post, the area of effect would be 10m from the user in all directions, with no physical toll after usage besides lower chakra. After 2 posts, the area of effect would be 20m from the user in all directions, with small fatigue and massive chakra loss. After 3 posts, the area of effect would be 40m from the user in all directions, the user's chakra has not become dangerously low, but fighting after using the technique would be foolish. After 4 posts, the area of effect would be 70m from the user in all directions, the technique will have drained their chakra, to the point where without strong willpower, the user would lose consciousness. After 5 posts, the area of effect would be 100m from the user in all directions, ultimately draining the user's chakra down to nothing resulting in fatality. NON-ELEMENTAL TECHNIQUES - Quote :
- Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Name: Genjutsu Kai Rank: E-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu Rank: D-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Tree Climbing Jutsu Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The Tree Climbing Jutsu serves a dual purpose. Taking part in the Tree Climbing Training helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.
Name: Water Surface Walking Jutsu Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A variation of the Tree Climbing Jutsu, the Water Surface Walking Jutsu allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. There are many ways in which the ninja can sign a contract with a summon but it is usually done with the ninja signing a blood contract with the animal species. This allows the user to summon different size and skilled animals to fight along side them, or on their behalf.
Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique Rank: B Element: N/A Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.
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| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Sun 15 Aug 2010, 5:33 am | |
| - Quote :
- Tensei was gifted with a chakra amount that is about double the amount of most S rank shinobi.
This is a little over the top as you are already an S-ranked ninja, thus, you have an S-ranked source of chakra which is very large as it is. Your overwhelming 'ability' with chakra is fine, something that all strong ninja have you will just not have that much extra chakra. Edit it to 25%.
- Flash Step and it's accompaning techniques have to be taught directly by the Raikage through RP if you wish to learn them. You also do not have taijutsu spec.
- You will need to give a rough estimation of the speed of your dart gun and the range it has to fire. Also, with your "Flesh-Eating Disease" virus that you can shoot from your gun you need to state another way in which the spreading of it can be reduced or ceased. Seeing as you can fire 4 of these per thread at minimal cost it is quite powerful. Perhaps a certain levelled medical ninja would be able to stop the spreading with a certain about of post length required. Thus, not making it battle ready having to be in a non-combat situation to destroy the disease.
- Give a range for your Healing Strings Technique. And more accuracy on the type of wounds it can heal e.g simple swelling, bruising etc.
Other than that it seems good. ^^
A character mod will also want to look over it.
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| | | John
Age : 31 Posts : 2547
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Sun 15 Aug 2010, 8:40 pm | |
| - Quote :
- This is a little over the top as you are already an S-ranked ninja, thus, you have an S-ranked source of chakra which is very large as it is. Your overwhelming 'ability' with chakra is fine, something that all strong ninja have you will just not have that much extra chakra. Edit it to 25%.
- Removed completely.
- Quote :
- Flash Step and it's accompaning techniques have to be taught directly by the Raikage through RP if you wish to learn them. You also do not have taijutsu spec.
- Removed. Sorry about that. I kinda thought that since I'm going to be Flash Force, and they're Flash Force techniques, I'd just be allowed to know them xD
- Quote :
- You will need to give a rough estimation of the speed of your dart gun and the range it has to fire. Also, with your "Flesh-Eating Disease" virus that you can shoot from your gun you need to state another way in which the spreading of it can be reduced or ceased. Seeing as you can fire 4 of these per thread at minimal cost it is quite powerful. Perhaps a certain levelled medical ninja would be able to stop the spreading with a certain about of post length required. Thus, not making it battle ready having to be in a non-combat situation to destroy the disease.
- Removed. It was a little too over-powered anyway.
- Quote :
- Give a range for your Healing Strings Technique. And more accuracy on the type of wounds it can heal e.g simple swelling, bruising etc.
- Edited range to 30m, and included that it can heal anything from burns, bruising, to somewhat deep wounds. Is this fine, or maybe I should up the rank? I'm not sure.
It's fine if someone else wants to give it a look-over, but I'm pretty sure you're still the only one that can give it approval.
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| | | Lysander
Age : 34 Posts : 591
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Mon 16 Aug 2010, 12:27 am | |
| All elemental techniques MUST be C ranked and up. |
| | | Rail
Age : 33 Posts : 428
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Mon 16 Aug 2010, 3:10 am | |
| - Wanizame wrote:
- All elemental techniques MUST be C ranked and up.
Sorry for interrupting, but that rules is a Ingoo only rule. Here, elemental techniques can be lower than C Rank.
As for the rest of the application, unless someone else takes a look, ill check it tomorrow morning. Atm its 2 in the morning where I am. |
| | | Lysander
Age : 34 Posts : 591
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Mon 16 Aug 2010, 3:14 am | |
| That.... is ridiculous. But okay...... |
| | | Rail
Age : 33 Posts : 428
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Mon 16 Aug 2010, 12:52 pm | |
| Anyways, I looked over this a few times and there does not seem to be anything wrong with it.
But, I noticed that under your skill information, you do not have any Wind or Clan techniques. Are you sure about that? |
| | | John
Age : 31 Posts : 2547
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Mon 16 Aug 2010, 7:49 pm | |
| Yeah, I'm going with one element for now, I plan to train more techniques IC post approval. I do intend to use the Clan techs, I just thought it redundant to list them twice.
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| | | Rail
Age : 33 Posts : 428
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Mon 16 Aug 2010, 8:25 pm | |
| Ahh alright.
Umm....yeah, I think you have to list them under Clan information and Skill information, that is at least how everyone else did it.
So, could you please add them somewhere to your list of Jutsus, then everything will be set for approval. |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 7:13 am | |
| I didn't relist my clan jutsu for them same reason. I think it is only necessary of they are a lower rank then the range of clan jutsu available e.g C-rank, clan jutsu go up to S-rank. Seeing as he is S-rank and can use all the clan jutsu that are available i think that it is just granted.
You have my overall approval John. When Light gives his you shall be approved. ^^ |
| | | Rail
Age : 33 Posts : 428
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 12:22 pm | |
| I guess your right, so I say Approved as well. |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 4:43 pm | |
| Im gonna have to unapprove this for a few. Not because its wrong or anything, but as it stands, there are no special ops available in the villages, nor are S-Ranked characters besides the kages allowed. When that changes, this will be moved back.
Or, everything relating to S-Rank put in red for the moment, as you will need to edit to A-Rank so you can attend the summit, if it ever gets going. When everything is allowed/the summit is over, you can change everything back |
| | | Aaron
Age : 28 Posts : 2538
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 5:02 pm | |
| - Caranore wrote:
- Im gonna have to unapprove this for a few. Not because its wrong or anything, but as it stands, there are no special ops available in the villages, nor are S-Ranked characters besides the kages allowed. When that changes, this will be moved back.
Or, everything relating to S-Rank put in red for the moment, as you will need to edit to A-Rank so you can attend the summit, if it ever gets going. When everything is allowed/the summit is over, you can change everything back Cara, I do believe John has special permission for an S-Ranked character. |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 5:17 pm | |
| S-Ranks are still closed regardless. As are Special Forces. |
| | | John
Age : 31 Posts : 2547
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Wed 18 Aug 2010, 2:01 am | |
| I've had Administrative permission for both S-Rank, and Special Ops, for quite some time now. The only stipulation being that I count as one of Kumo's Jounin.
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| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Wed 18 Aug 2010, 3:35 am | |
| AGain, you cannot be a S-Rank or Spec ops til they open. Thats why you originally didnt make the first character ages ago, and moved to Kumo and didnt get this character done quicker, as far as my knowledge extends. Being an admin does not exempt you from the rules in place already. |
| | | John
Age : 31 Posts : 2547
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Wed 18 Aug 2010, 5:33 am | |
| For starters, you are in no position to overrule the Admins which have already given me permission for this character. I was given permission because I still remain the only Admin that has yet to have the opportunity to be a Kage, and I shouldn't even have to explain this to you, because to be frank, its none of your business.
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| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Wed 18 Aug 2010, 6:45 am | |
| While I was a away overseas John stepped in as temporary kage for me while I was gone. It was then that he had been approved for an S-rank character, and even though I have back now it still stands. Regarding Kumo, I am the kage and it is my village so I can control what ranking goes on within it. John has taken up a jounin position in place of this. It has the approval of the staff so there is no further issue here. But thank you for looking into.
Approved. |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Thu 19 Aug 2010, 1:59 am | |
| John was approved for a S-Rank position when they became available, not when S-Ranks still were unavailable to the site as a whole. Therefore it still should be unapproved until edited accordingly, since S-Ranks are still unavailable to the site as a whole. |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Mon 23 Aug 2010, 1:39 am | |
| Of course its my business, as a staff member Im requried to bring up something thats wrong and get it fixed. SO what if youre the only staff member who hasnt gotten a chance at Kage? Like Ive said before. S-Ranks are closed, as are special forces. To allow someone to make one while they are not allowed is a mere case of favortism and shouldnt be allowed. Admin, mod, member, if somethings closed, its closed.
Like I stated above. You were given permission to make one when they opened. You were temp Kage while Todd was overseas, and your app still didnt get finished then, so I see no real reason why that decision still stands anymore due to the fact that everything is still closed, and Kages are full. |
| | | John
Age : 31 Posts : 2547
| Subject: Re: Hougaku, Tensei [Kumo Jounin] Mon 23 Aug 2010, 2:05 am | |
| Sometimes you favor someone to have a position you know you can trust them in. Just like you were given a Moderator position. That spot could have easily gone to a newer member on a trial period, like Kinu(who hasn't insulted the staff numerous times), but it didn't, because your ability to do the job is trusted and you wanted it. It wasn't voted on by the entire staff prior, it was the decision of an Admin.
You also bring up the fact that I didn't have my application finished while I was the temporary Raikage, and I was only given permission for S rank for that. This is false. During that time period, I was told to Roleplay with Todd's character as the Raikage, not my own. You say "You were given permission to make one when they opened" but where are you getting that information from? Are you assuming it? Because Todd's post was pretty straight forward.
In any case, please stop posting on my application. |
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