Lysander
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 |  Subject: Demonic Discipline Thu 05 Aug 2010, 10:14 pm | |
| Poison Name: Demonic Discipline
Rank: D
Poison Description:
Solid State: A black/green gel that is found on the rare “Witch’s Moss” after it rains. This gel is very akin to mucus or slime, and it actually delays the absorbing ability of the skin. This delay pushes all the effects back by 2 full posts.
Liquid State: As a liquid, it resembles a dark green that is nearly black. Despite it being a liquid, it actually acts more like a syrup since it comes from a solid state that is more like a gel than anything solid. Unlike the solid state, the liquid (And the gaseous state) can immediately take effect without having to be absorbed by the skin and blood.
Gaseous State: The only time the green of substance truly shines, as a gas this poison takes the form of a thick billowing cloud of green smoke that obscures the vision as well as almost immediately effects the persons enveloped in the cloud without the antidote circling in their system.
Poison Effect(s):
[ Post 0: Turn of Infection/Injection: Absolutely nothing, the poison doesn’t start to take effect until the infected uses a jutsu.]
[ Post 1: Assuming the infected uses a jutsu, the poison begins to take control of the nervous system, specifically targeting the vision. The first post after they use a jutsu should cause teary eyes and irritation around the eyes.]
[ Post 2: The further use of Chakra increases the effects of the poison on the 2nd post, blurred vision and a slight burning behind the eyes replacing the tears originally produced by the poison.
[ Post 3: As more chakra is assumedly used, the poison continues coursing through the veins of the infected and causing darkened vision to add to the blur. The slight burning has increased to a moderately painful itch as the tears begin escaping the corners of the eyes… tinted a greenish color.]
[ Post 4: If the shinobi hasn’t figured it out yet that the poison is activated on the use of chakra, at this point their vision leaves them entirely and fills their eyes entirely with a black film that is opaque. From this point until it is cured, the poison resides in the bloodstream to keep the temporary blindness in effect.]
Cure: Either a plant based cure (Rating: D) can be used to relieve the infected of blindness, or they can refrain from using chakra in any manner for 24 hours. (Leaving the topic.)
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Lysander
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| | Subject: Re: Demonic Discipline Sun 08 Aug 2010, 12:00 pm | |
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Aaron
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| | Subject: Re: Demonic Discipline Sun 08 Aug 2010, 1:39 pm | |
| This looks good in my opinion.
Aapproved.  |
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