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Basic Information:


Name:
Sadie Kousaka
Secondary Title:
Hime
Age:
19
Gender:
female
Physical Appearance:
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Sadie has golden blond hair that she ties into a single ponytail and a matching set of eyes with golden iris’. Her clothes are a blue miniskirt with mesh underlay and a white belt going across her waste. She sports a black skintight shirt that leaves her midrift bare, covers her front and leaves her back and shoulder blades open to the air. Over that she has a light brown leather jacket again leaving her midsection both front and back bare that has white fur lining the edges of it. The shoulder portion of her jacket is nonexistent allowing the ends of her shoulders to show where she has a clan marking of a dragon.
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She stands around six feet tall and weighs only about 170lbs making her very fit, her skin is lightly tanned giving her a slightly exotic look. When not on missions she doesn’t wear her gloves but when worn they are pure black with the standard metal plate over the back of the wrist, but with no symbol. Along the fingers are more metal plates that interconnect if she flattens out her hands as with an open palm.
Personality:
Being the heir to the Kousaka clan Sadie has had a lot to live up to, she never fit in as a ninja but the family persisted creating a new style just for her. She had an afinity with swords when she was younger often besting children and adults at swordplay even when the opposing side was serious about winning.
Often seen as bubbly and indifferent to plights or responsibilities, she only shows her potential when absolutely necessary, often trying to find a calm quiet way out first. This however is only a trained response, she loves a challenge, often fighting her clan members just to test her strength against someone older, wiser, or better than she is. At a young age Sadie has always had a higher than average chakra count, allowing her to do things longer and in her own way, but she often uses those chakra reserves to laugh and play about instead of using them all for her fights or training, meaning she often holds back what she can really do unless needed or demanded.

Her likes and dislikes are varied, as she has been cooped up in the compound for most of her life, training day and night to be allowed to go out into the world. What she does know is that she loves to learn new techniques of how to make a sword better or stronger. She also loves soft things, often padding her room with fur, or stuffed animals. Her dislikes are rather simple for her, she dislikes secrets without a purpose, liars, cheats. She would hunt down boys that would cheat in games against her and make them regret it. Over all from the outside it would seem as if she was a stuck up heiress to the clan, but her mind being as complicated as it is makes that thought far from the truth. In her mind if you screw up, you don’t get a second chance, because that is the way life is and that’s how she was brought up. However she has been known to allow people more tries on whims just to see how it would work out.

Being very adept with her sword she takes pride in the fact that she is very fast, and very strong, even with her lithe frame. She often uses weights to slow herself down in order to fight her trainers and has been doing so since the age of sixteen when she felt she needed a new challenge. Sadie firmly believes that one should master the weapons first as an extention of the body, that if one relies to much on jutsu's, which use chakra, it will only weaken the person. As such she has dedicated more time than normal to mastering each weapon she carries, putting her jutsu training on hold often if she feels she could improve.

With all the power and abilities she amassed at a young age, she began to learn that even though ties to great villages are vital to her clan, that her clan came first above all else. Her stubbornness about this after having learned the lesson has often gotten her into trouble with the few jobs that have been delegated the clans way, often turning them down outright if it damaged the clans image. In her eyes, her clan deserves great respect for not only surviving as long as it had without any real support, but for the reason that they have kept as true to the old ninja ways as possible believing in the will of their ancestors being passed down.


Catch Phrase:
Is that it?
Blame canada! (Joke sorry had to put it in here)

Clan Information:


Clan Name:
Kousaka clan
Clan Location: On the border area of the Fire and Wind countries
Clan Traits:
Unnatural long life. Each clan member, barring murder/death on battlefield is immune to disease/sickness and can live up to a maximum of 300-350 years old with the medicine at hand to date. However they mature at a normal rate having seen what humanity does to itself the dragons deemed it necessary. This is due to the fact that they made a pact with dragonkin. (this does not make them immune to poisoning) In return for long life and immunity to sickness, the clan promised one thing. They would serve the Dragons eternal goal to watch over humanity for as long as the clan survived, this meant allowing dragons to be able to 'read' their minds to get th emost acurate information possible in essence becoming drones for research and study.
Kekkei Genkai: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] Konachan_com20-204528120black_hair20bullet_butlers20gun20red_eyes20selma_fortenmayer20tattoo20weapon
Kenaigan: Doujutsu that makes all but rank B or higher Genjutsu ineffective. Rank B or higher will have varying effects on the user of the kenaigan depending on the affinity they have with their abilities as genjutsu users.
Each form has no visible changes in the eye except for the 5th form
Spoiler:
each new rank must be preceded by training for another jutsu of that rank.

Secret Clan Jutsu:
Combat Summoning Jutsu: Tiger Summon
Name: Tiger
Rank: E-S (Must train for each new lvl of summoning)
Appearance: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] RaiDemon Highlord of the tigers

regular tiger summons
https://2img.net/h/i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/Acidalium/animetigers.jpg (forgive the girl being in the picture)
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Tigers are proud of their appearance, often taking poses when someone wishes to capture their image, however theyare fierce in battle, both with their claws and their teeth. Other than the highlord who is said to have evolved from their original form, most tigers have 2 long fangs jutting from their upper mouth.
Contract Type: blood
Species: Cat
Elemental Affinity: Lightning
Special Abilities/Characteristics: Depends on the summons.
Background: as part of the bargan with dragons the clan was given a combat summoning, one that would be loyal only to them. Dragons imparted to the clan the scroll for summoning tigers, loyal companions to those they deem worthy. Unfortunately, the tiger summons didn't choose just anyone to allow summonings, they chose whom they thought would benefit the clan the most.

fortunately for the clan, the tigers seemed to understand that the dragons were trusting them, and so have vowed that any clan member that recieves the Kenaigon, will be allowed to summon then without going through the Rite of Honor, however, anyone without the kenaigon within the clan, must succeed at the rite or die trying.
Summons Jutsu: not sure how this works, will get back to it.

Name: Aura jutsu
Type:Ninjustu
Rank: E
Element: wind/lightning
Description: Created to be used as a defensive technique along with the God's barrier jutsu this jutsu was considered the first of its kind. As the world around all humans is made up of elements each element can be used to create this jutsu, yet few ever found out how. It uses the element affinity of the user and creates an aura around him or her, giving her insite into his or her surroundings, a sort of bubble that mimics the Coveted byakkugans sight, yet without the sight. This also allows the user to fight in complete darkness successfully if not safely. This bubble exsists 10 feet around any part of the users body using the elemental affinity to detect any intrusion into the bubble. The user can't anticipate anything outside the bubble, but can 'sense' any object within the bubble.
Chakra rank usage: 1 D rank chakra every 5 posts until chakra reserves are depleted or jutsu is cancelled.

Link: [When making new jutsus you must train them. Read the Training Page in rules. post the link here for admins to check]


History:
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The Kousaka clan was born before the first ninja war, the head of which was named Kousai. His first wife was named Sakane and they had several children together during the time of peace. They began practicing jutsu's learning new ways to make their lives a bit easier or more interesting. During this time of peace Kousai managed to summon the first dragon named Ergrah. he spoke of a world of dragons, mythical creaters, and large areas where information was kept. He told Kousai of their job as keepers, watchers of the world. After several weeks of talking to one another a pact was made, Ergrah gave the clan eyes that would see through illusion and help protect their clan, long life and vitality and another summons to help them on their journey, in return the clan would always be watching the world, helping the dragons with their quest for knowledge. Word spread of the large creature to man different lands gaining the clan fame beyond what any of them dreamed or wanted.

During this time while people wanted to see the dragons, the clan hid them away, honoring their agreement they began to watch the world. Helping where needed, staying silent when not, they began to get a feel for what the dragons wanted to do. It was only when the hidden villages were formed did the clan themselves feel threatened enough to leave their homes and create their own village away from everything. They still watched and listened, but they no longer tried to help as they saw events unfold into the first great ninja war.

After years had passed, they sent representatives to both Suna, Konoha, Kumo, and Kiri to find out what had happened, what the extent of the damage was. Inso doing they alerted everyone to the existance of the clan once again. And while the Hidden villages didn't know the power with which the clan held, they wanted the abilities that the old texts wrote of them having, so they began to hunt the Kousai clan. A year passed and the clan finally got fed up with what was happening to their members so they once again sent emmissaries to each of the 5 great nations requesting that they be left in peace after it was found out that they were desperately searching for them. However, the Hidden villages decided against it, and in an act of uprecidented cooperation during the 2nd great ninja war, they proceeded to hunt down and try to capture any Kousaka clan members they could find.

The only two members of the clan ever found and that were near capture were that of Kousai and his first wife, Sakane, for they and few others were ever allowed to leave the clan compound which remained selfsuficient all those years. During the fight between the armies of the hidden villages the kages demanded that the clan be broken up equally for each of the villages to have. Denied this from the head of the clan a fight broke out in which both Kousai and Sakane were both mortally injured. Using the last of what chakra they had left they used a technique forbidden by all villages to date. The two formed a sphere of chakra which they compressed significantly into a small bead the size of a pearl, then released all the stored energy in one single blast. The crater left from the blast was ½ mile in diameter and ¼ mile deep, and to this day only two trees grow in the center of the crater, surrounded by water. The crater is called Greed’s folly and all who know of the story behind the crater usually steer clear of anyone with the clan seal and the kekkei genkai.


Clan Details:
closed for now

Rank Information:

Rank:
Genin (chuunin at hughs approval)
Village Affiliation:
suna
Special Information:


Character Speciality:
Ninjutsu, Weaponry,
Main: Weaponry
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Lightning, Wind
Main: wind
Sub: lightning
Special Characteristics:
her weapons make her look more like a samurai than a ninja as she was trained, often throwing her opponents off guard.

Skill Information:

Jutsu:
jutsu's will be trained for when/if character is approved


Spoiler:



Weapon of choice:
List of weapons
Spoiler:

Item Template:

Item under scrutiny personally, may be to OP.

Name: Dragons heart (the pendant on the hilt of the sword)
Rank: D-A
Type:Enhancer
Natural Abilities: When used the item will increase all abilities, strength, speed, stamina, regeneration, sight, to an indicated level.

Rank D-x2 lasts 5 posts needs 1 post before using again
Rank C-x3 lasts 5 posts, needs 1 post before using again
Rank B-x4 lasts 3 posts needs 1 post before using again
Rank A-x5 lasts 2 posts needs 2 posts before using again

Name: Chakra metal wires (stored on 2 small wheels in her coat sleeves, can carry 2000yards of wire thats as thin as spiderwebs but stronger than steel)
Rank: E
Type:other
Natural Abilities: no natrual abilities other than the metal the wires are made of is chakra metal, allowing Sadie to set traps using wind or lightninig with devistating effects. Lasts until metal wires are cut or retrieved.



Background Information


History:
When sadie was born she was born under an unusual sign, she came into the world not crying a single tear, and with very little pain to her mother. Not thinking much of this at the time the council decided to go ahead with the ritual of finding out who the guardian would be, which dragon would watch over her. By random chance she was given the dragon of light, a strange creature even by dragon standards as it had pure white feathery wings, a small mouth with a short snout and two horns that swept up and away with this skull ridge line. there was a prophecy about any child that recieved this dragon as a guardian. One that said she or he would lead the clan down the path they were meant. When this was found out they trained her with the best instructors they had in the clan but to the dismay of everyone, she failed most of her tests.

When she turned three it was during one of her routine tests that the clan found the error of their teachings. They all assumed she would be one of the greatest Kunoichi out there, one of the few that could stand among the kages even without the title. As proud as that would have made them they saw the truth when she picked up a pole and took a kenjutsu stance, proceeding to beat the crap out of any instructor willing or daring enough to come within striking distance. Through Kenjutsu they found that she was a great fighter, able to use the her two element affinities along with the kenaigon easily, and with more than enough chakra to spare for other things. it was only when she was five and at the end of her endurance did they find out that she was more destructive than any had though.
As the years followed the clan adopted a learn young die young mentality, often training their infants of 2 years what they could. This allowed them to see which child excelled at what, and create files on how they should be trained for the rest of their lives. Sadie was no exception, as she excelled in weapons and ninjutsu, they trained her as such teaching her the clans abilities for the kenaigon at a young age to be proficient at them as a genin. However as there are in all clans, Sadie was an outlier, one that didn't conform to the normal standards that the clan had grown accustomed to, she had a natural gift to understand the basics of any jutsu she saw, even if she couldn't perform them. That being the case she forced herself to be as close to a master of close range combat as she could, learning a few coveted jutsu that many in the clan knew of, but could never really master. This included the Aura jutsu as well as the Heaven’s Fury and Cloud Walker jutsu.

Sadie had an understanding of what would be needed to build upon her already growing arsenal of physical abilities through training. While she regularly trained in both weaponry and ninjutsu she was often taught the art of diplomacy, something she was sorely lacking. The clan knew she was the future, and they were going to make sure that she was the best they could forge her to be.
At the age of sixteen, sadie decided to journey out into the world and came across konoha vibrant with life she admired the village greatly and as the heir to the clan she decided to reach out and open commerce with them bringing rare metals to the village and trading for supplies. She also did this with suna shortly there after when she found out they were trading things back and forth as well. As the years went by she heard that Konoha had literally destroyed itself and though she was saddened by the loss of the village she stopped trading with them vowing that one day she would return there herself, with her clan if need be, to return the village to its former glory.

Role-Play Sample:



Hunter watched from a good distance through binoculars while his Laevatein held him above most of the rubble and broken buildings near Fort Firehouse. He was a merc, plain and simple. He was on the fighting side that had taken over the area near the black sphere a little while ago and during that time had gotten attacked by the black matter as well, but that contract was up. At the time the money was good enough to ignore his conscience, But Levy, the soul of his ARX-8 Laevatein, had cautioned him saying that something was a miss. After he had finished he reloaded and set off towards his next contract, He already knew what it was, help the celdrons that were fighting here. he watched the scene with cold eyes as they did what they could.

"Guess i should help, even though im not under contract at the moment." Hunter said as he jumped in to the 'cockpit' of the mecha. "Levy, lets get goin."

"Understood"came the seductive female voice of Levy. "You're very impatient today, any reason why?"

"Yeah, my contractors might not be around if these guys lose the fight. Listen, i know you're a light unit, the largest light unit out there, but i need you to hold on for Three fractal shots if you dont mind." Hunter said as he manipulated the hand of the suit to pick up the Beam weapon laying on the ground next to him.

The Beam cannon made the ARX-8 look small, yet the ARX-8 was a prototype design with maxed out speed and agility, decent armor and strength, truely a one of a kind Mecha. Even so, the recoil from this beam gun made heavy units recoil a decent amount, which was why he had the butt of the gun placed against a sturdy structure.

"I'm carrying a full loadout of shotgun with class A special rounds latched on my back hip, And two modifiable close range/long range Particle infused magnetic accelerator cannon with class S fragmenting explosive rounds on my back, multiple laser blade knives that cut through almost anything, and an experimetnal drive which you have yet to tap the full potential of. And you say that we need the the help of this oversized battleship beam cannon. I'm insulted."

"Yeah, well, Lets get to it." Hunter said as the suit picked up the giant cannon. "Calling Goliath Mech group. Three Fractal shots from Class S Orbital cannon incoming, trajectories and impact points are being sent, eta to close proximity detonation. Ten seconds and counting."

After sending the Message Hunter started the charge, enough for 3 fractal shots, each of which would clear a very large area of targeted enemies. Each shot would unleash atleast thirty differently aimed beams of high velocity plasma from the detonation point and those beams would go through ally and enemy alike to strike their targets which was why he was sending targeting data to them all.

"Sir you need to know, you will only get three shots, and thats it, the conductive coils that house the plasma in storage till you fire will be overheaded and fused together. Its fixable but not in the field. If you had a proper Mecha such as that giant one called aries you could use without damage because the cooling units would prohibit continuous fire, but we dont have it. Once you fire the three we need to leave because enemy forces will have pinpointed us."

"Uhuh, got it, Fire." I pulled my pointer finger and the suit followed, firing three Extremely large blasts around the perimeter of where the Goliath group was, decimating over 100 enemies in the carnage.

Hunter could actually make out the sizzing of the fused coils in the cannon as he dropped it to the ground and took off running towards the broken walls of the fort. There were still quite a few Mechs rampaging aroudn, and more than one had noticed that he came from the direction of the massive bombardment their comrades had just endured. Faced with the desision of wasting ammo or taking them out with blades he asked Levy for her thoughts.

"Blades or guns."

"Sir? if you are asking which you should use i would say the safest of the two."

"I think we should test the drive system, give me... oh say twenty percent power?"

"Understood, twenty percent power to all systems, limbs and weapons. Laser blades running at full rpms and waiting for use, shotgun loaded with partical phased anitmatter slugs MAC gun is charged and loaded, all systems green. Good hunting."

Hunter smiled as he made his suit grab for the two laser blades that were imbedded in the knee holsters of his legs while he ran at a break neck speed toward the first medium he saw. Flipping the blade up and over while he jumped he threw it at the medium cleanly impaling it into the main cockpit where the captain sat and latched onto the back of the medium grabbing the blade and yanking it upward while thousands of laser edged teeth revolved around the edge of the blade like a saw cutting cleanly through anything that got in their way. Yanking down hard he tore out the inards of the mecha leaving it without a drive unit nor a pilot.

"WARNING" was all Levy said as a large solid round from a heavy's weapon came barreling at the ARX-8. Hunter turned the mech around while fliping the blade in a defensive position and cut straight down slicing the slug cleanly in half and parting it enough for both halfs to pass by on either side of him. Setting his sights on the heavy that fired on him he ran as fast as he was able at it jumping at the last second and slicing up and over the entire body as his speed and mass propelled them both on to the ground, the ARX-8 on top. without waiting for them both to stop sliding Hunter made the mech stand and start running forward again draggin his knife along the entire length of the suit as the whine of the laser blades got loud with them trying to keep up. The heavy detonated a few minutes afterwards.


"Oops, hit the core. Oh well." Hunter said as he looked around for the one suit he knew was an ally. or would be when he accepted the new contract.

After a few seconds Hunter spotted Goliath carrying an elite he recognized. "Pheonix eh? Damn it, she still owes me money." Hunter said as he ran at both Goliath and Pheonix. Reaching behind his back he gripped a small UAV he had outfitted with a few unique weapons of its own. "Levy, give me pinpoint EMP bursts on any Mech that gets near those too please, ill leave the drone to you." He said as he tossed it into the air with his left hand while he sliced through another medium mech with his right.

"Understood. And you might want to watch out for those other mechs, you are getting to much on your mind and its slowing our reaction time, we are going to start taking hits here soon if you dont calm down and the secondary drive hasn't been tested under battlefield conditions yet so i dont know how well it would work under these circumstances."

"Right right, calm and steady" i replied as i dodged some beam fire and threw my knife with a wire attached to it, impaling the light mech and slicing it clean in two. My secondary monitor showed that the drone had taken up a defensive position above Goliath now and i was almost right next to him slicing a heavy to pieces as he passed by. I just watched him go as i made the V sign with my mechs hands. He had to be wondering who the hell i was. But he had better hurry up and leave, the drone would only have enough power for flight and its weapons for about a minute or two.



Last edited by Menthil on Sun 31 Oct 2010, 7:18 am; edited 85 times in total (Reason for editing : Modified character to get rid of Light abilities. To OP in my opinion if you add it with the Kenaigon as well.)
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PostSubject: Re: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] EmptyTue 17 Aug 2010, 10:21 pm

Quote :
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I'm not sure what to put here, if anyone can help me out that would be great

You just have to show us some of you're previous rp's, so for example an extract of a post you'd done on another forum? If possible, if not, just making up a random rp will do fine ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] EmptyWed 18 Aug 2010, 4:25 am

Um i have a website here for what i do... but its under a differnt name, i messed up on my application originally for this website and i couldn't send email to anyone to fix it. My name over there is mithrodin. And as for the pictures, i dont normally put pictures in unless something is hard for me to describe or to make a point.

http://www.dhaven.org/showthread.php?t=4305&page=6
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PostSubject: Re: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] EmptySun 22 Aug 2010, 1:21 pm

Yeah ok, i took alook and that site is cluttered to say the least. I'm not too sure what you wanted me to look over but you're still required to post an rp sample. If you're unsure of what to do, click on my characters profile link. The links under everyone of my posts, Kouzetsu Saigo. Once you've taken a look over, edit your application then message me back and i'll do my best to help you ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] EmptyMon 23 Aug 2010, 2:38 am

lol yeah, never said it was pretty, ill just put something up instead.
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PostSubject: Re: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] EmptyWed 25 Aug 2010, 12:52 am

Holy baby jesus! your app got waaay bigger, ok if another mod hasnt taken alook over this by 2mz i'll make it my number one priority. I've been extremely busy in real, sorry. Nice rp sample btw :3
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PostSubject: Re: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] EmptyWed 25 Aug 2010, 2:36 am

lol thank you, im still tinkering with the chakra costs and anything you can tell me whenever would be great. Still waiting on the clan part though, but i think im fairly close to being done with that. Also, if the numbers dont look right, its because i still cant find the list of how much chakra at what rank each rank of character gets.. like at genin, chuunin, and jounin.
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PostSubject: Re: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] EmptyWed 25 Aug 2010, 3:13 am

That list is under the Roleplay Rules thread in Rules section. Genin gets 7 C-Rank or 14 D-Rank, CHuunin gets 7 B-Rank, 14 C-Rank, 28 D-Rank, or so I think. GO check that out to be sure.
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PostSubject: Re: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] EmptyWed 25 Aug 2010, 4:01 am

*Smacks head on keyboard*.... god i feel stupid Shocked thanks much, i can fix the stuff now.
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PostSubject: Re: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] EmptySat 11 Sep 2010, 3:52 pm

For anything not Genin level use the collowing code:

Code:

This was we know what you can and cant use in the application, since Genin cant use B-rank and Higher, and CHuunin cant use A-Rank and higher, etc.

Weaponry is allowed two sub specializations, refer to the weaponry rules in the Equipment/Item Section for more information.

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Name: Dragons heart (the pendant on the hilt of the sword)
Rank: E-S
Type:Enhancer
Natural Abilities: When used the item will increase all abilities, strength, speed, stamina, regeneration, sight, to an indicated level.

Rank E-x2
Rank D-x3
Rank C-x4
Rank B-x6
Rank A-x8
Rank S-x10

All ranks last 5 posts, after which 1 post is needed before it can be used again.

x2-10 speed, strength, stamina, etc? Especially S-Rank IS overpowering. SInce we dont have an E-Rank you can remove that, but still, the increase on this from a mere pendant are wayyyyyy to much. Let alone you can use it twice within 11 posts, making the fight extremely one sided.

Keep in mind that if you do not recieve Chuunin rank, all your weapons will be nullified as a Genin cannot useB-Rank weapons. I would personally just forget about making the weapons chakra conductive at this time and just make them normal weapons for the time being. You can always make and train chakra conductive weapons later.

This is all from a quick overview though, Im going to need another mod to go over the Jutsu since Im on a limited schedule
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PostSubject: Re: Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] Sadie kousaka [done and waiting for clan approval] EmptyTue 14 Sep 2010, 6:58 am

Changes are done.

I do thank you for the time you spent looking over it though.
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modified my character to get rid of Light abilities, reasons for editing on application
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