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Dholmes
Age : 29 Posts : 62
| Subject: Kuro-shi (Sword) Sun 16 Jan 2011, 3:02 am | |
| Name: Kuro-shi Quantity: 1 Rank: A Appearance: The blade is completely black. The blade is based on the Falcion, sharp edge on one side, blunt on other. Except on the blunt side, it has small spikes that can come out with the press of a button on the handle. The handle is made of metal with a strong rubber cover. It has its name written in silver on the blade. Finally the blade handle is decorated with silver designs. Special Abilities/Characteristics: This weapon is made from a very special metal. Isama and his father developed this metal called Chakra metal. It takes months to make. It is made by mixing large amounts of chakra with tiny particles of metal. Then for the next 70 days you fill it with chakra, making it squeeze tighter and tighter. Until finally you get Chakra metal ore. Then the same process of making a sword is used. It is impossible to break this blade. And because it is made by Isama's chakra it has a major ability of being able to teleport to Isama wherever he is. Isama just needs to think of his blade and it teleports itself to Isama in a second. This can be done at any distance. It usually arrives 5 seconds after Isama thinks of it. On blunt side of sword their is 22 spikes 3 cm in length. By the press of a button on the blade they can be released, and by pressing again they can return into the sword. Origin: Isama started making this at the age of 11. He spent day after day sealing the chakra and metal. Isama sometimes collapsed from the stress. He spent 2 years perfecting his metal. Then another 2 years making his blade and making it to a point. During these 4 years of making Isama practiced with a makeshift sword and he soon became the best swordsmen in his clan. Until finally he finished making his sword, and was then classes a Master Swordsmen. |
| | | Adam
Age : 31 Posts : 8965
| Subject: Re: Kuro-shi (Sword) Sun 16 Jan 2011, 10:25 am | |
| You're a Genin, you cannot possess an A-ranked weapon. |
| | | Dholmes
Age : 29 Posts : 62
| Subject: Re: Kuro-shi (Sword) Sun 16 Jan 2011, 11:26 am | |
| Yeah, Ive been planning this for a while and I just wanted to post it up too see if it could be accepted. Then I could wait until my Charecter was a higher Rank than genin, and be able to use this weapon. |
| | | Elder Sage
Age : 31 Posts : 1118
| Subject: Re: Kuro-shi (Sword) Sun 16 Jan 2011, 3:55 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Yeah, Ive been planning this for a while and I just wanted to post it up too see if it could be accepted. Then I could wait until my Charecter was a higher Rank than genin, and be able to use this weapon.
Uhm Okay.
Since your not going to use this sword until your are atleast Special Jounin rank I suggest the following. Placed [Locked] At the bottom in bold. For the rest of the sword simply strike it. So your weapon should look like this:
Name: Kuro-shi Quantity: 1 Rank: A Appearance: The blade is completely black. The blade is based on the Falcion, sharp edge on one side, blunt on other. Except on the blunt side, it has small spikes that can come out with the press of a button on the handle. The handle is made of metal with a strong rubber cover. It has its name written in silver on the blade. Finally the blade handle is decorated with silver designs. Special Abilities/Characteristics: This weapon is made from a very special metal. Isama and his father developed this metal called Chakra metal. It takes months to make. It is made by mixing large amounts of chakra with tiny particles of metal. Then for the next 70 days you fill it with chakra, making it squeeze tighter and tighter. Until finally you get Chakra metal ore. Then the same process of making a sword is used. It is impossible to break this blade. And because it is made by Isama's chakra it has a major ability of being able to teleport to Isama wherever he is. Isama just needs to think of his blade and it teleports itself to Isama in a second. This can be done at any distance. It usually arrives 5 seconds after Isama thinks of it. On blunt side of sword their is 22 spikes 3 cm in length. By the press of a button on the blade they can be released, and by pressing again they can return into the sword. Origin: Isama started making this at the age of 11. He spent day after day sealing the chakra and metal. Isama sometimes collapsed from the stress. He spent 2 years perfecting his metal. Then another 2 years making his blade and making it to a point. During these 4 years of making Isama practiced with a makeshift sword and he soon became the best swordsmen in his clan. Until finally he finished making his sword, and was then classes a Master Swordsmen. [Locked]
For future reference simply place your work on some sort of word document if you are incapable of using it in your current ranking. This provides less confusion on our part and also allows you to edit something in case you come up with a better idea. |
| | | Dholmes
Age : 29 Posts : 62
| Subject: Re: Kuro-shi (Sword) Sun 16 Jan 2011, 5:03 pm | |
| Ok its saved in a word ducument so its ok to remove this or lock this topic now. |
| | | Elder Sage
Age : 31 Posts : 1118
| Subject: Re: Kuro-shi (Sword) Sun 16 Jan 2011, 6:41 pm | |
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