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The Joker
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| Subject: Daosumi, Sora [Kumo Chuunin] Sat 20 Nov 2010, 2:40 am | |
| Basic Information: Name:Daosumi, Sora Secondary Title: ~The Walking Seal ~The Embodiment of Rage ~Hidden Puppeteer Age: 17 Gender: male Physical Appearance:
Sora's hair is not greatly long and is spiked up all into one point at the back of his head where the top meets the back of the head. He does however have some strands that hang of in several different places they go over his face and sometimes around the side. His hair is not over is ear as that would impede hearing which he doesn't want. His eyes are a piercing icy blue colour with no pupil. This is a genetic trait, though it does allow him to see clearly still. The eyes strike fear into others often as they seem to look into the core and send chills down your spine.
His eyebrows are rather thin and have barely any hair to them. they are shaped to a point at one end naturally. They are brown like his hair and add to the somewhat scary appearance of Sora. His nose is rather small and is a missed appearance in his face as no one notices it, not even himself. His lips are very stiff as he barely ever shows emotions on his face and it adds to the fact that he doesn't talk much. they are a very light pinky/peachy colour.
His skin is a very pale white, rather like a ghost. His skin is very toned all around his body as well. His skin can never change colour as for some reason he cannot get a tan, sunburn yes but tan no. this is very odd but true. Sora is a rather social freak due to this and often scares girls he is around. His pale skin is not a genetic trait as he is the only one in the family to have this skin colour.
Sora never wears a shirt. He is always bare chested, sometimes when not fighting he has been known to wear the akatsuki cloak, but he rarely does. If wearing the cloak and he engages in a fight he will either pull it off or unzip it halfway down so he is bare chested. It is unknown why but he just likes to have nothing holding back the force of his punches like a shirt might.
Ranmaru wears some pads that increase the force if a punch over his hand and forearm. They are also used to block incoming attacks if he can react quick enough. These pads are metal and silver colored. They do have the akatsuki cloud sign on the part that covers the back of the hand. He also wears a long red glove that foes up to the forearm but doesn't cover his fingers or thumbs. This is so that the pads don't irritate his arm.
His torso is very ripped and toned. His muscles are very clear through his arms and torso. This is from training some many years ago and gives him a lot of physical strength. He has a six-pack and very muscular abs. Ranmaru is proud of this as it means that punches do somewhat less damage, but still hurt a considerable lot.
Sora has several different pairs of the same baggy trouser bottoms. These are very light so as to not impede his leg speed when kicking they also are specially made to be very flexible so that they don't lessen his kicking power. They are black except for a fire pattern on the right leg that goes up to midway on his thigh. There is also more from flames flowing off it on the thigh in part on his left leg. The trousers do cover about 2 centimeters up on his torso because they are long and are held up by a belt that is thin but strong, it is black with a golden lining on the outsides of it.
Finally, Sora doesn't wear shoes. He wears more pads like the ones he wears on his arm on his shins and the top of his feet. He doesn't wear shoes because he prefers to walk around 'bare' footed to strengthen his feet and the damage his kicks do. The guards on his shins are not seen because they are covered by the bottom of his trousers.
Personality:
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When Sora was young he always had one personality which was timid and shy. This was obvious when he went into the academy. For he was always training alone and no one even knew his name until it was read out in class. Sora was lacking confidence when he was younger but has out grown that. Now he is very confident, always. He does lack slightly in that factor however his bravery has always been sky high. When Sora was younger due to this he was always trying to give his responsibility to the rest of his team. Despite this fact however he was very smart with an IQ of 150 he was easily a genius.
As Sora got older he grew a strategic mind as his IQ went up, he was always a quick thinker but was somehow 'dead last' in the academy. He was never ever willing to move beyond his house, which is something he learned over the years. As Sora grew so did his IQ eventually reaching a very respectable 200. This made Sora always to be called upon by the Mizukage at the time for strategical advice and help with the village plans on defense. When he was younger he was always defensive, this is something he lost as he got older for he came to realize a great offense is just as good of a defense. He is now a offensive power hungry beast.
As he grew older after many hardships in his life he became a schizophrenic and has Dissociative Personality Disorder so now for every personality has its opposite. This began a fact when the lazy Sora became a chuunin. He became energetic. He also has great honor to his opponents as he believes that they have made it thus far so they deserve hat honour, however he believes that respect is something that has to be earned. Sora is also very forgiving and will instantly befriend anyone who has proved to be a 'hazard' in his life. He also believes in helping others those who have helped him. Sora also believes that with hard work any normal shinobi can surpass a 'genius' of the shinobi world which is why he believes in constant and severe training.
Sora presently has a rather fiery fierce nature. He always has been and always will be. Sora's personality often gets him into many fights; but he doesn't mind for he usually wins them. Sora is always upbeat and rather joyful, unlike most in the akatsuki. Sora is however quick tempered and is quick to judge others on power level and looks. Sora does love fire though and this is reflected in his personality, as he acts just like fire. He is calm and safe until you add a 'fuel' that angers him to make him angry, this is to do with fires getting bigger and hotter. Sora is also unpredictable and overwhelmingly random in attacks.
Sora does have a rather arrogant and celestial side to his personality though which is why he often thinks he is high and mighty and can defeat everyone. When Sora is like this he will rush into things with out analysis and is often punished for this. But yet again Sora is a schizophrenic. So every personality has an opposite so just like him being calm and quick tempered he is also reckless and a master strategist. When he is thinking like a strategist he often analyzes things rather swiftly and accurately and is always quick to think of his plan of action. Sora likes being in this mind frame for a fight as he is very hard to counter as he always has a back up waiting and always thinks through the attacks with hundreds of possibilities.
Sora's most common mind frame however is the unenthusiastic one: which is where he is lazy and is rather like a vegetable. In this state of mind he would rather watch clouds play board games than actually get up and do something productive with his time. Despite this Sora will never turn down a battle for he likes the site of bloodshed. Sora also always pretends to be doing something to drop responsibility. With this though comes the counter part which is the strong commitment sense of Sora that everyone likes to be with because although he lacks slight confidence his bravery is always there. He is very committed and most enthusiastic. This is when Sora must do something like catch infected people and such.
After becoming a member of the akatsuki he became mysterious and shows great self control. He also learned how to control his emotions at times to show that the opponent cannot stop him. He has constant composure as well. He often compliments fighters on their abilities and never explains his power without a fully justified way to show his opponents. He also shows great wisdom in times of panic and never lets his guard down. Sora often shows great intuition and is rarely caught deceived and when he is he is quick to realize the truth.
Sora is also rather much of an antagonist at times and often shows a sadistic way of dispatching his opponents. Often he is seen as sad for his childhood was not great at times but he doesn't become happy rather easily. Sora hates waiting and hates to keep others waiting as well. Sora is also sometimes cold-hearted and uncaring. He also cared little for human life as he sees that if they are weak there is no point in them living. He is often cruel to others and holds a down to earth look on everything and barely ever shows emotions when an obstacle is put in his way.
Sora is quite often calm and serious while in battle. He does however sometimes joke around and disrespects those around him, even his opponents when in this mind frame - this often leads to cruel deaths of his opponents often leading in the amputation on limbs and usually feeding them to something. Sora does however show respect to those who has something he wants, for example a powerful sword or something like a very powerful jutsu. Sora is rather power hungry and only shows respect at this time to those who have either defeated him or have put up a good fight.
Finally Sora often hears voices in his head telling him to do bad things and punish people for challenging him and such. Often these voices are easy to reject however sometimes they are difficult to ignore and often make Sora snap making him go crazy unleashing sheer power everywhere which depletes his chakra and often ends in his unconsciousness. The voices are always bad and never good, they often tell him to kill everyone and take over the world.
Catch Phrase: You will be punished by many Seals Fear my Rage.
Clan: Daosumi Clan
Rank Information: Rank:Chuunin (John said i could but he wants to check my app) Village Affiliation: Kumogakure
Special Information: Character Speciality: Main:Fuuinjutsu Sub:Puppetry Elemental Affinity: Main:Wind Sub:Lightning Special Characteristics:
Speed Seal: Sora is able to write down seals on anything he wishes at lightning quick speed. This is because of all the seals he has written down on her body for combat, also during combat so he can fight to his full potential. Sora can produce seals roughly three times faster than normal shinobi. Three seals a post.
Background Information History:
Birth arc Long ago in a small village on the outskirts of the lightning country, there was a large number of Daosumi memebers, well actually the whole clan was there, and it was their village. They were there to Build an organisation of the clansmen and women on orders of the Raikage. It was to infiltrate the clans and make sure no rebellion or war was being planned so that the country remained peaceful, for doing this they were paid a healthy sum of money. However, nothing was happening and all was peaceful so as told the daosumi constantly reported it was peaceful. The Raikage grew impatient with this as he felt that something must of been happening. After 10 years of this they were eventually banished. Some left but others stayed under alias'.
One group of Daosumi had to be poor beggars, they eventually begged and begged and after some years rose to the height of the social ladder. They went by the last name of Tarok and ended living in a huge mansion living peacefully. When the new Raikage came to power he lifted the ban on the clansmen and women and allowed them to live peacefully as they were once allowed to do. The Tarok family thanked him but still kept the name and be normal citizens. They had many kids 3 boys, then a girl then two more boys. The family was proud of their five 5 sons and their daughter aswell. The third child was Sora Daosumi.
When he was born he had to follow the same daily routine of training and learning just as the others did. He was brought home and had the seal placed onto his toungue, its was a quick and painless ritual of the Daosumi. Sora grew up in the magical world of luxury.
Academy arc
At the ripe old age of 10 Sora joined the academy. He already knew a few of his clan jutsu which were all really defensive as he was taught fuuinjutsu is the greatest defense in this world, and he strongly believed in that. So he made his way through the academy written papers and their fighting tasks rather easily as he didn't get touched due to his fuuinjutsu masterclass. Sora was not the strongest considering he only had defensive jutsu and had to get up close and personal with people to win and fight it out. He wasn't very gifted with weapons either like every other member in the clan.
Soras life was rather difficult as he couldn't use weaponry like everyone else in the clan so he could only use fuuinjutu, for this he was considered a disgrace. Someone who wasn't worthy to even be in the clan, someone not gifted at all as they only had one specialty. He found it rather hard to win fights with no offensive jutsu but he managed. Sora was the smartest by far but the fighting he lacked, he was bullied for a year and then he just gave the bullies a good hiding as he got annoyed with it.
About one month before the genin exams Sora still couldn't do anything offensive so he would fail the exams, his team was also pissed as it made missions much harder when they had to defeat a weak bandit or something similar. Sora picked up a puppet and began to move it, the puppet wasn't his but it was his sensei's. His sensei let him borrow it for a day to practice as he saw this would be his offense. Sora ran home that day to show his parents he wasn't useless, but they found it worse of that he could use puppets instead of the clans fabled weaponary skills paired with their fuuinjutsu dominance.
His sensei allowed him to use the puppet for the exams, with using the puppet coupled with his fuuinjutsu skills Soar flew through the exams with ease and made it to a genin on top of the class. Sora was pleased with his own achievements but his parents wasn't. He was now a genin.
Genin arc A few days after the exams Sora heard his parents talking about something, he couldn't quite make out the works but he figured it was serious as his parents didn't normally seclude themselves to chat to each other, last time it was a baby coming and the two times before that, something very serious indeed. The next day Sora came home to an empty house, he was confused by saw there was a reason.
A few hours later his parents, bothers and sister cam home carrying a huge bag. He figured it wasn't his as he wasn't there and that was because they saw him as a disgrace, however his father took out the bag and there was a big rectangular box his father presented it to him and told him to open it. Sora did as he was told and inside was a puppet, Soras very own. He was so pleased with it, and his parents told him it was alright he was a puppeteer they were still pleased with him. Sora named the puppet rage, it was awesome and he loved it, if it ever broke he immediately stopped the fight and repaired it. It had only ever broke once however in a fight with his puppeteer sensei who was showing him what it was like to be a puppeteer with jutsu and also teaching him some, Sora got more skills and eventually was able to control it with jutsu the one finger, but he prefered unsing his ten as it was more control.
Sora and his sensei grew close as they were one in the same, both were outcasts in their family for not being able to do what everyone else could but both had an extraordinary power in what they could do. And again both puppets they held were gifts. Sora enjoyed the company of his sensei and was pleased he found someone to help him out on his journey as a true puppeteer.
Role-Play Sample:
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Klown was at his friends house for the night as he was having a sleep over with a few people his age, Klown hoped girls would be there so maybe he can finally get a girl friend but you never know. Zetsumei realized the time was nearly 6 o'clock and that it would be getting dark so he put on his light lavender, loose-fitting, long-sleeved, zip-up shirt, black pants cut off around mid-calf, bandages wrapped around his ankles, traditional shinobi sandals, and a purple, rope-like belt tied in an inverted bow around his waist, he put this on as it was light for training and fighting in. Klown swiftly left his friends apartment leaving a note saying gone to train be back at 21:15.
Klown knew exactly where the best spot for training was and he knew he had 3 hours of good long training to get through, Klown was at his calmest as he was about to do the thing he loves to do, train! Klown took a shortcut around the ramen shop to get to the park. No one should be in the part as it was dark so the conditions were perfect. Klown then started to listen and focus his mind to everything around him so he could be mentally and physically attuned for his training session. Klown started to close his eyes as he was on the outside of the park and focus his mind else where.
Klown could hear the whistle of the wind scrapping through the trees that would make some cringe for it was not a pleasant sound, however Zetsumei seemed to like it alot. He hear the birds tweet as they told there children to go sleep or eat other then that there was a bitter and eerie silence that was usually on horror films right before a character dies.
Zetsumei could feel the wind brush through his over gelled spiky hair and through the gaps in his fingers, it was soothing. He feld the warm yet cool wind whip his face softly. This was the kind of conditions Zetsumei wanted but hardly ever happened as it was usually boiling hot. Zetsumei continued to walk towards his destination in the perfect frame of mind he was in, he then opened his eyes.
Zetsumei saw the deep, crimson sky through the gaps in the trees as the number of trees grew as he went deeper into the park. The grass was a luscious green and obviously well looked after. The trees had every single leaf on them and were massive. Zetsumei liked the park the setting was beautiful and definitely had great targets to train with. Zetsumei swiftly grabbed for a kunai and threw it through the tree branches to kill an annoying bird, which he hit. He then turned to look natural as if it wasn't him and when he looked up he saw his chuunin exam buddy knock into a stronger looking shinobi and begin to fall.
Suddenly, Zetsumei began to taste this shinobis masses amount of chakra which made him rapidly turn from a slow walk to a sprint to see if Aaron was alright and if the other shinobi would bother him. As Klown was running he yelled "Akimaru!" he quickly arrived beside Akimaru and was relieved to hear the shinobi say sorry and didn't want to harm him, and at that instant Aaron was helped up by a hand from the ground and Akimaru was upright again. Klown then began to speak "Hey Akimaru, ain't seen seen you since the chuunin exams a while back how have you progressed?"
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| | | The Joker
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| Subject: Re: Daosumi, Sora [Kumo Chuunin] Sat 20 Nov 2010, 2:41 am | |
| Skill Information: Academy Jutsu- Spoiler:
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Name: Genjutsu Kai Rank: E-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu Rank: D-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Fuuinjutsu
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Name: Shock Trap Rank: B Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: Lightning Description: Sora writes a seal on the ground. Anyone who goes within 10 meters of the seal will automatically be trapped for a post, the jutsu also slightly shocks the user for that one post doing minimal damage but enough to cause annoyance
Name: Explosive Seal Rank: B-S Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: none Description: using one of the Jutsu of the Daosumi clan Sora writes a invisible seal on the air. The seal is then activated by saying 'Katsu' or 'Victory'. The seal explodes with the force of: B-rank:four exploding tags A-rank:five exploding tags S-rank:six exploding tags
Name: Magic Cylinder Rank: C-S Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: none Description:The user writes two seals on the air with about 2 feet apart. When the opponent shoots a jutsu at Sora and the ninjutsu goes within 50 centimeters within one of the seals it activates and is caught in a cylinder shaped cup. The second seal then activates and another cup appears and shoots the jutsu back at the opponent. C-rank:D rank jutsu B-rank:C rank jutsu A-rank:B-rank jutsu S-rank:A-rank jutsu
Name: Tenketsu seal Rank: B-S Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: none Description: Sora is able to write a seal on the victim causing a number of effects. It attacks all tenketsu points on the limb thats sealed. B-rank:it becomes harder to channel chakra to that specific limb, if its an arm then the jutsu cost is treated as a rank higher eg. a C-rank would cost B ranks worth. A-rank:the tenketsu point is shut down for 3 posts allowing no chakra to be channeled down the set area eg. the arm. S-rank: it is shut off and needs medical attention a.s.a.p if no medical attention within 5 rl days that point is cut off permanently.
Name: Pitfall trap Rank: B Type: fuuinjutsu Element: none Description: It works exactly the same as the shock trap only the Opponent falls waist deep underground meaning they cannot use their hands and legs.
Name: Shock Barrier Rank: B-S Type: fuuinjutsu Element: none Description: Sora creates a seal around himself to counter taijutsu. It is a barrier and no one Sora doesn't want can enter the barrier and anyone who tries will be shocked, the power of the shock and how big the barrier is depends on the rank. the pain lasts 3 posts.It is invisible until struck once. B-rank: 5 meters diameter a medium strength shock that will cause sharp pain. A-rank:10 meters diameter a strong shock causing a lot of pain S-rank: 15 meters diameter A very strong shock causing severe pain, the area electrocuted will need medical attention and will hurt to even move
Name: From Place to Place Rank: B-S Type: fuuinjutsu Element: none Description: Sora can write a seal on the air using one of the Daosumi's special clan jutsu and is able to activate it to be replaced by where the seal is. The range when activated depends on the rank. The seal is activated when Sora says bye. B-rank: 10 feet. can be used 3 times per topic A-rank: 15 feet. can be used 2 times per topic S-rank: 20 feet. can be used 1 per topic. Note: this does not stack meaning. S-rank one used no more uses, and a A-rank and 2 B-rank ones can be used
Name: Draining shield Rank: B-S Type:Fuuinjutsu Element: none Description: Sora writes a seal on the air again using the daosumi jutsu which spans a 5 foot radius. it only covers one direction however any ninjutsu that hits the barrier is changed into chakra and is added to Soras chakra eg a b-rank jutsu would add a b-rank supply up to Sora. activates when a jutsu goes within a 5 foot radius of the seal. B-rank:stops and absorbs C-rank and down A-rank:stops and absorbs B-rank and down S-rank:stops and absorbs A-rank and down
Name: Sealed Scribing Rank: D Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: None Description: A Daosumite who uses their special clan ink can write out Fuuinjutsu in symbol or glyph form, rather than legible Kanji, on whatever surface is available, including the air. This jutsu causes another Fuuinjutsu technique to become sealed invisible onto the surface after the scribing is finished. The seal then activates when designated. This is mostly used to place seals on body parts, though it has other obvious uses for defense.
Name: Sealed Speed Rank: D Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: None Description: A Daosumi jutsu that enables the user to create seals, through written glyphs, at a much quicker speed than others. A jutsu that would take days to perform would only take a Daosumite a few minutes through the use of this jutsu, this also increases the speed in combat, increasing the usefulness of Fuuinjutsu to the user.
Name: Sealed Technique Rank: C-A Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: None Description: A Daosumi jutsu that is one of the more powerful clan techniques. When a Daosumite is struck by a jutsu, they jutsu's handsigns then appear as glyphs, with or without the consent of the Daosumite, on his/her forehead. This then slowly seeps in into their brain, over the course of three posts, and once soaked can be written down as Fuuinjutsu in a sealed form. Multiple jutsu can be stored like this, if the forehead is occupied the glyphs move to other visible body parts until none are left and then move on to non-visible ones until the whole body is full. A Daosumite can house up to a number of jutsu equal to the number of spots presently available on the body, following the size rules provided in the following jutsu. These tattoos are temporary however, and fade once absorbed into the skin. This jutsu's rank is based on the jutsu it is copying, but does not consume that level of chakra since it is a passive ability.
Jutsu learned in this manner are often tattoo'd onto the user's body at a later date, allowing for the use of elements and jutsu that would normally be outside their range. This cannot affect S Rank jutsu. This also effects Genjutsu, with the aided benefit that the user is aware of the Genjutsu due to scribing on their body when it affects them.
Name: Sealed Jutsu Rank: C-S Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: None Description: A Daosumi jutsu that allows a Daosumite to tattoo their body with glyphs that seal in jutsu that can be activated at later points in time for minimal chakra. A Daosumite is able to tattoo a number of places on their body, scribing a jutsu on their body requires a training topic at a number of words according to the user's rank (C Rank: Full Amount, B Rank: 3/4, A Rank: 1/2, S Rank: 1/4) For each word count fulfilled, the jutsu sealed is usable three times before the tattoo loses power and erases itself. There are a total of 26 locations in which a tattoo may be placed, however, more powerful jutsu take up more space, C Rank take 1 spot, B Rank take 2, A Rank take 3, and S Rank take 5. In addition, only 1 S Rank may be sealed at anytime. E or D Rank cannot be scribed unless they are not Academy Jutsu, they each take up 1/2 of a spot.
Certain groups of areas allow for a bonus decrease on the number of spots taken, for example, if you wanted to scribe an A Rank jutsu, but you lacked 5 spots, you could instead use the bonus provided by scribing on the Left and Right Breast, which is -1. 3 - 1 = 2, meaning you could scribe the jutsu there on those two spots. Any bonus spots not used cannot be regained, you cannot scribe a B Rank on those two spots and gain the bonus spot.
The appearance of the tattoo has no bearing on what is sealed, though images are often part of the glyph library of the user. No other Daosumi has the same kind of glyphs, so they cannot read each other's seals. Some use animals, others symbols, and still others use what look like scars or claw marks. Further jutsu that enable special tattoos, unlike jutsu tattoos, are permanent.
Name: Sealed Servant Rank: C-S Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: None Description: A Daosumi jutsu that allows the user to create a signature tattoo of an object or animal that is able to be summoned at-will, tearing itself off of the user, the wound instantly healing, and then shifting into the depicted thing. It gains all the physical properties of the thing it imitates, including hardness or mechanical special abilities. This jutsu must be designated on the character application of a Daosumi, using this jutsu does not allow for a summoning contract. Each tattoo takes up only 1 spot, regardless of rank or power, but instead takes a number of posts to manifest. C Rank, instant, B Rank, At the end of the post in which it is summoned, A Rank, 1 post, S Rank, 3 posts.
Name: Sealed Wings Rank: B Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: None Description: A Daosumite gains the ability to etch a tattoo of a pair of wings on their back, taking up no spots, and instead adding 2 spots on each wing which provide a -1 bonus if both used for the same tattoo. The wings can resemble whatever is desired, within logical limits, and the tattoo scribed on them is not a jutsu. It is instead, an ability similar to those found in weapons, with the same spot rules as jutsu. The wings cannot fly unless all three spots are used to inscribe a flight tattoo.
Name: Sealed Talons Rank: B Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: None Description: A Daosumite gains the ability to etch a tattoo of an animal face or skull on their exterior hand, opening up 5 new spots for each hand, which cannot be used to house jutsu above C Rank. E or D Rank jutsu housed there take 1 spot, rather than 1/2. The user may tattoo on each finger a tattoo enabling the Daosumite to grow large claws that are treated as B Rank weapons and can channel chakra to deal elemental damage to a target when struck, gaining the bonuses and weakness of one of the element's the Daosumite uses.
Puppetry Jutsu
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Name: Chakra Strings Type: puppetry Rank: D? Element: none Description: Chakra strings is a technique usually used by puppet users to allow them to control their puppets in battle. Interestingly, as well as pulling objects towards them with the strings, the user can also "push" objects away from them as well, and even get moving objects like buzzsaws.[2] Chakra can also be transfered via the strings, such as to activate some abilities in puppets.[3] These means that the chakra strings can also be attached to other objects, allowing the user to control, or at the very least disrupt, other things. The strings can be turned invisible.
Name: manipulating attack blades Type: puppetry Rank: C Element: none Description: This technique allows the user to hover multiple kunai in the air with their chakra, and direct them to an opponent. Using this technique, the user can unleash a torrent of kunai much more quickly than if each one was thrown individually.
Name: Puppet technique Type: puppetry Rank: C-rank Element: none Description: The Puppet Technique is a unique ninjutsu fighting style; this jutsu uses strings of chakra to control puppets like marionettes. Any number of chakra strings can be used to control a puppet, but users with more skill can use fewer strings per puppet.
Name: Black secret technique machine one shot Type: puppetry Rank: B Element: none Description: First the opponent must be trapped After this is accomplished, A puppet separates into eight components. The torso is left behind while the arms, legs, and head are positioned around the trapped victim, each with a sharp blade. the user guides the separate pieces into the opponent, impaling the victim inside.
Name: Black secret technique machine two shot Type: Puppetry Rank: B Element: none Description: The enhanced version of Black Secret Technique Machine One Shot which doesn't require a puppet to split into eight pieces. After making a distraction, the user maneuvers his trapping puppet behind the victim, which then opens up its chest and fires out chakra controlled strings that wrap around its intended target. It then winds these strings back in to trap the target in its chest. With the victim trapped, two scythe like blades appear and reap through one side of the puppet to the other, killing the victim inside.
Name: Black secret technique machine triple shot Type: puppetry Rank: B Element: none Description:the user uses three puppets to capture several enemies and pierce their bodies with several blades
Name: black secret technique salamander Type: puppetry Rank: B Element: none Description:the user hides a puppet under ground, then when positioned under the opponent, it emerges and captures the enemy inside of it.
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| | | The Joker
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| Subject: Re: Daosumi, Sora [Kumo Chuunin] Sat 20 Nov 2010, 2:41 am | |
| Name:Rage Rank:B Description: The puppet is made of wood. It has spiky hair in all directions that is uncontrolled. It has one huge eye in the middle and a large mouth. The puppet has 4 arms. It wears the same clothing as Sora.The eye is a red colour and the colour of the wood is a dark black. The hair is yellow, Body Slots: Slot 1: Katana x 2 (explained V) Slot 2: kunai x10 Slot 3: Three bladed Scythe x 2 Slot 4: poison smoke gas (explained V) Slot 5: poison smoke gas Slot 6: flashbomb x 2 (explaned V) Slot 7: Kama x 4 Slot 8: kusarigama x2 Slot 9: 'bullets' (explained V) Slot 10: Axe x 2 (explained) History: Sora was given this puppet when his family finally got over the fact he could not use weapons just like everyone else in the family and that he was gifted with puppets, not weapons. It was mainly to show Sora that they realised this and didn't mind it, they still loved him for who he was and did not think he was a disgrace. Sora cherishes this puppet with his life, if it were to ever break he would be overly raged.
Name: Katana Rank:B Element:can have elements channeled through them Description: The Katanas has only one abilitiy, it cannot break.
Name:Poison smoke gas Rank: B Element: None Description:It is inhaled. The puppets hand folds out showing a hole which is able to shoot out a poison gas, the poison gas has three stages, the first is fits of coughing (if the poison connects for a post, lasts 2 post then the second stage starts), the second stage a mild pain throughout the body(if the poison connects for 4 posts, it stacks, lasts 3 posts then next). The final stage is death if the poison has connected for 9 posts then they die instantly.
Name: Flashbombs Rank: C Element:none Description:Blinds the foe for a post.
Name: Bullets Rank: B Element: none Description:The bullets are shot out of the puppets mouth. Can pierce rock.
Name:Axe, Scythe Rank: C Element: none Description:The axe/Scythe is a very heavy weapon requiring great strength to wield it, it can deliver powerful strikes that are lethal. Can cut off limbs cleanly.
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| | | The Joker
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| Subject: Re: Daosumi, Sora [Kumo Chuunin] Sat 27 Nov 2010, 9:20 pm | |
| Sealed Scribing my 2 uses
Fear anger |
| | | The Joker
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| Subject: Re: Daosumi, Sora [Kumo Chuunin] Mon 29 Nov 2010, 5:37 pm | |
| Completion bump
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| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Daosumi, Sora [Kumo Chuunin] Wed 01 Dec 2010, 6:59 am | |
| First of all the image is clealy a man who is 80+ in age and you are 14. Please edit and find a sufficient picture. (Unless there is a physical condition that I am aware of that makes him look crazy old?)
- Chuunin are at least 17+. Please edit.
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- Speed Seal: Sora is able to write down seals on anything she wishes at lightning quick speed. This is because of all the seals he has written down on her body for combat, also during combat so he can fight to his full potential.
There are some gender changes in here that need to be fixed. Also, detail how fast he is compared to a normal ninja e.g how many seals can he produce per post.
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- Name: Sealing Pot
Rank: B-S Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: none Description: Using the seal Sora carries around with him at all times he takes it off his back and is able to capture a jutsu the same rank as however much chakra is needed, for example if a S-rank jutsu is shot a S-ranks amount of chakra is needed to capture it. Once captured the jutsu is nullified. The pot is also able to capture people costing an A-ranks amount of chakra for Chuunin and down and an S-rank for above chuunins. To do this the pot must be placed on the targets head and dragged down his body. Remove this.
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- Name: Painful sealing
Rank: B-S Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: lightning Description: Sora writes a seal on the limb of an opponent much like tenketsu sealing only this is different. It attacks the nervous system of the limb and causes major pain until medical attention is gained or Sora stops the seal. B-rank:the area does the opposite of whats meant to happen. eg if meant to go left it goes right. sharp pain. A-rank:hard to move on a whole a lot of pain S-rank:no movement at all. Severe pain
There are a couple of confusions within this jutsu also some grammar. There is no occurance of signal distruption in the description but then there is on B-rank. It is really messy.
- A B-ranked puppet would not be completely made of steel please edit it to be made of wood.
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- Name: Katana
Rank:B Element:can have elements channeled through them Description: The Katanas has only 2 abilities, one it can have chakra channeled through it and two it cannot break.
I don't think so, they will be plain basic katana.
- With your poison smoke gas a B-rank poison would not create severe pain, please give a more detailed description of the pain and make it less, to a confined area.
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- Name: Bullets
Rank: B Element: none Description:The bullets are shot out of the puppets mouth. They can have chakra channeled through them and can pierce rock.
Name:Axe, Scythe Rank: B Element: none Description:The axe/Scythe is a very heavy weapon requiring great strength to wield, it can deliver powerful strikes that are lethal, can cut off limbs cleanly, the abilities are it can have chakra channeled through it and can easily slice through steel NO chakra channelling and no cutting through steel!
Conclusion: To be honest this doesn't look like a chuunin ranked application to me. There are some obvious mistakes and mishaps throughout. Also, the grammar and spelling is particularly bad. Have you heard of using a capital letter? |
| | | The Joker
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| Subject: Re: Daosumi, Sora [Kumo Chuunin] Thu 02 Dec 2010, 4:03 am | |
| edited.
Truth be told i didn't think it would be great, I've been out of rping for 3-5 months.
Todd please don't be 'rude'/offensive by saying things like: Have you heard of a capital letter? I find it offensive and no im not trying to piss you off
(Did this on Wii was so annoying) |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Daosumi, Sora [Kumo Chuunin] Thu 02 Dec 2010, 4:29 am | |
| - Quote :
- edited.
Truth be told i didn't think it would be great, I've been out of rping for 3-5 months.
Todd please don't be 'rude'/offensive by saying things like: Have you heard of a capital letter? I find it offensive and no im not trying to piss you off Well I wasn't trying to be offensive, I was just merely asking a question.
There are still things you did not edit e.g
- the image/picture - katana's (they are not unbreakable) - B-rank poison would not kill a person (edit) - bullet strength (piercing rock?)
- Also, what are the two images "fear" and "anger" supposed to mean? please describe this some more instead of just placing the pictures.
- Can you please edit this application down to a genin leveled character also. Sorry, but it wasn't quite to the standard of chuunin. |
| | | The Joker
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| Subject: Re: Daosumi, Sora [Kumo Chuunin] Thu 02 Dec 2010, 7:59 pm | |
| if its genin i have to make a new char -.- so might aswell archive this... |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Daosumi, Sora [Kumo Chuunin] Sat 04 Dec 2010, 2:18 am | |
| No you don't. All you have to do is edit your history and get rid of B-rank jutsu? |
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