Just though it'd be fair to say this.

Age : 30 Posts : 267

I've been getting more and more into rap. I made a real rap and starting to make a demo cd. If i go missing i'll most likely be working on the cd/lyrics/beat/names. Or singing the song its self and putting it onto the cd.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Very intriguing! Good luck on your demo and hope it works out.

Age : 30 Posts : 1236

Yeah! Good luck dude. I love rap and put a hip-hop with the backing. ... I'll be honest and say I don't actually like rap, but go for it!

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

Dubstep. <3

Age : 30 Posts : 267

This is track three on the demo hope yall like it give me some feed back pm or on the topic its self don't care really xD

[track three don't choke by J-ism]

He walks in grabs the mic full of fright/He looks calm,cool and ready tonight/Underneath the skin he's chilled to the bone/Wants to call mama where's the phone?/The real G's walk up to him say 'don't choke'/He is so nervous he drops the mic and leaves takes a break to smoke/People start calling him a joke/He got his back to the rope/He aint shit with out his friend/He made him self a fool for a girl he would back bend/The text to his friend he send/Don't get a text back/He mad because of the skills he lack/He aint got nothin anymore/All because of some dumb whore.

Age : 32 Posts : 787

Needs some tweakin but good flow, seemed like it ended too abruptly to me but id have to actually hear it ya know. Was kind of playin it to a beat i made up in my head so IDK how it would actually sound. dyly@live.com. Send me an email with the track attached.

Age : 30 Posts : 267

Well most of them are drafts i'm still working on the hook ya know?

EDIT:One with a hook

[speaking]
Haha guess this is love. I never felt anything like it before so i guess its love.

[singing]
It started back freshmen year/I was the 'cool kid' hanging out behind the bleachers smoking and drinking beer/I didn't feel because half my life i lived with fear/I said i wouldn't love untill i found some one dear/When i saw you my heart picked up on speed/I heard you hated people who do drugs so i stopped smoking weed/When i saw you with that jock my heart dropped/I started to compete for your love only to be topped.

Did he send it from above/ Is this love/ this feeling deep inside my gut/ Never felt it before but/ it feels so good like butterflies inside/ dawg I feel so alive/ could it be? Is this love?

It wasent untill spohmore year/Still under the bleachs smoking and drinking beer/That you your self came filled with fear/The fool cheated on you with some blonde hoe/He tried to win you back with his dough/But he lost his chance/Other guys tried to get you to be theirs/Me and my crew was there to protect you though/You asked me if i would ever leave you alone and i said no/And now here we are at the end/And you i still fend.

Did he send it from above/ Is this love/ this feeling deep inside my gut/ Never felt it before but/ it feels so good like butterflies inside/ dawg I feel so alive/ could it be? Is this love?.

[speaking]
No one messes with my girl. Or i'ma kill 'em i'll protect her with my life man...