Tenshi, Nana [Kiri Genin]

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Name:Nana Tenshi

Secondary Title:Angel of death

Age:14

Gender:Female

Physical Appearance:
Tenshi, Nana [Kiri Genin] Anime-10

Nana has long violet coloured hair, with dark blue, light blue and pink highlights. Dark violet eyes that are usually half covered by her hair. Though she is young shes allready developed a strong love for make up,and keeps her eyes with a dark mascara, and her lips with a shiny lip gloss. She wears the white silk robe of her family, or her academy skirt and blouse.She dresses as provacative as she can, and uses her appearence to finnese information from people.

Once voted prettiest in her village had led all the other little girls to despise her and so they began to make up rumors about her, She wears a black Heart necklace with a kunai through it to remind her to trust noone.Her arms are usually bandaged up to her elbows to make gripping her weapons of choice easier.She usually wears fishnet stockings to increase her appeal by even more, not to mention she finds them very comfortable and freeing.Her skirt is plaided and she wears a school girl tie.Her long flowing hair goes down to her back and in the front it splits and stops around her stomach, thogh shell often tie it up to get it out of the way.
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Personality:
• Nana is a ditsy valley girl. she forgets things alot of the time. However she is very observant and cunning. Her provacative manner and appearance makes it easy for her to finesse information from even the tightest lips. Which is perfect because she dreams of one day being a world class detective. Though she appears innocent she is anything but, she has no problem with killing anyone she sees fit to, She has no remorse hidden behind her beautifull violet eyes.

Nana is very sensitive and things people say really effect her, Shes not scared to cry in front of anyone. Though shes dying on the inside she fights back tears with jokes and takes peoples misconceptions with a grain of salt. She works very hard on her ninja skills as well as her detective dreams she hopes to one day be the head of the investigation unit of the ambu. Using the odd power that makes people seem to trust her and divuldge secret information she is able to further get what she wants out of men. Her techniques are sometimes confused as at a first glance it would seem that shes just a rambling idiot but if you listen long enough then your allready to far in.

Catch Phrase:
"I hate you all"
"not all emos cut"

Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
Village: Mist

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu and Ranged/Exotic Weapons
Elemental Affinity: Suiton and Raiton
Special Characteristics:
• Nana has mastered Weapon energy and can go into Angel mode(just raises her accuracy dexterity.. the name comes from the speed her weapons move at striking fast like a angel all enemys see is a flying blur) where she raises her accuracy/dexterity by 10% for 3 posts lmted once a topic
• Strange personality that makes people feel comfortable around her so they may tell her secrets
• Really observant-She notices things others probally wouldnt this is a natural ability mixed with her insane curiosity

But she is also very flawed

• Scared of dark and loud noises may cause her to freeze on her turn or make a bad move
• talkative may sometimes give up vital information which can get you killed as a ninja
*Really sesnsitive nana will cry when shes yelled at obsess over what people think of her and any words anyone says -could happen whenever even battle

Weapons:

Name: Exploding Windmill of death
Appearance:a windmill shuriken equipped with explosive tags and smokebombs
Rank: C
This windmill has 5 retractable blades that are a foot each, that can be ignited so the blades of it shoot out, on each blade are two exploding notes totalling 10 it can also be mae to drop smoke bombs or light bombs depending on what the ninja chooses to put in that slot, being a secret compartment in the bottom of it. holding 10 items
Origin:
Nana was given this beautifull weapon by her father on her 9th birthday for mastering the weapon summon technique

*50 needles
*100 ft ninja wire
*50 makibishi spikes
*20 smoke bombs
*20 light bombs

History:Nana lost her mother at a very young age to asassins clues were left but being a child she was not able to figure them out. This started her down the detective path as she had a little magnifying glass and questioned everyone in the village. The people found it cute but were tore up over the loss of their friend too much to induldge her. She was entered into the academy at the age of 6 where she found a new love, Boys Boys boys boys!!!! she could never get enough and so she was unable to concentrate on her jutsus and recieved horrible marks, Though her ninjutsu skills were excellent her genjutsu skills were average and her taijutsu skills were virtually non existant. She was able to cheat on her tests enough to pass the class, she graduated at the age of 10. It was then that her father went on the trial of the century, as it was spotted by a few local ninja that it was indeed Ryan Tenshi(her father) Who burned down the church along with the high priest and his family the new lines read.... High priest slain Trial by fire as the priest his 6 year old daughter 5 year old son, and young wife were burned to ireconizable puportions the dental records were the only thing that could tell their used to be identities. After Ryan heard of this he went on the run and one week later was found hung in their attic, with a suicide note confessing to the heinous murders reading

I cannot live in this war torn world any longer I beg on the kindness of my friends and village take care of my daughter she is all i have, I have taken the currupt high priest into the flames with me hell will not be kind... And noone deserves it more.
.Ryan tenshi

Well crying over his body she seen that the hand writing didnt match up to that of her fathers and with much deliberation she convince the Kage to investigate, no results were changed and she went on to live in foster homes bouncing from place to place, being called the daughter of a murderer The name tenshi which once meaned angel was now associated with a dark undertone of death and evil. When they got sick of the little emotional brat they'd pack her bags and shed be off to the next house. Now 14 she is with her new team they said this will be the last one she gets if this dosen't work out shell be dropped from the program. which is not an option for her as she must clear her fathers name and will violently fly off the handle at anyone who speaks ill of him.

Role Play Sample:

"Oh i like totally get it now, it wasnt the maid this murder could only be done by the one man with oppertunity and motive" She said looking over the evidence she gathered. "If you consider that that the manager was only in the room for 10 minutes it makes it highly like unlikely that she would have time to kill the victem, drag his body away and have time to clean up most of the room. I say most of the room because there is one place she forgot to clean and that was like the bed i'm sure that the ultra violet light thingy will show the blood left by the murderer, which would explain the blood on the victem's nails, He must have like totally scratched the killer while he was being violently choked to death, Which would explain why theres a bandaid wrapper in the garbage pail. Now the only problem is theres 4 suspects and each have a bandaid on. Theres only one explanation.... it was all of you you all killed her. Nana screamed with conviction. "Take them away boys." "Another swing and a miss Nana" Turi commented it seems her training may have not been as successfull as once believed he thought rubbing his forehead.Turi had taken her under his wing at the request of the mizukage, This girl is completly hopeless theres no way shell ever be in the investigation unit, what is the lord thinking. He must be caught up in her appeal, dirty old man. Then again maybe shes not all bad, Turi looked over to find Nana playing with a mousetrap, SNAP.... "Ow ow ow ow" she sobbed. "dont you know mouse traps hurt you stupid girl" uh this is going to be a long couple months

Items

1.Name: Exploding windmill scroll
Rank:E
Type:summoning scroll
Natural Abilities: This scroll allows nana to store and summon her weapon exploding windmill
*This is the only scroll that she has thats big it stays on her back

2.Name: Multiple weapons scroll
Rank:E
Type:summoning scroll
Natural Abilities: This scroll allows nana to store and summon all the weapons of a kunai or smaller base

3.Name: Iron dome scroll
Rank:E
Type:summoning scroll
Natural Abilities: This scroll allows nana to store and summon her Iron dome

4.Name: melle weapons scroll
Rank:E
Type:summoning scroll
Natural Abilities: This scroll allows nana to store and summon her melee weapons

5.Name: Exploding weapons scroll
Rank:E
Type:summoning scroll
Natural Abilities: This scroll allows nana to store and summon her exploding weapons such as tags

Weapon Jutsus

Name:Weapon Gun
Rank:C
type:Weapon
Range: 20 feet
Description:summons several weapons connected together by strings and jumps into the air, reeling them together to stack on top of each other. She then stands on the top weapon on one foot, and twirls backwards, shooting the string-wealed ninja tools at the opponent like a machine gun.

Name:Twin rising dragon controll
Rank:C
Type:Weapon
Range:20 feet
Decription:an upgraded version. She doesn't have to hold onto the weapons; she can just send them flying only with a movement of her hand, which makes the weapons a lot faster. Also, with this new version, she includes exploding tags in the spread in order to make the technique more effective.

Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.
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Name:Twin Rising dragons
Rank:C
Description:places two small scrolls in the floor. When activated, the two scrolls release smoke while also flying and spining into the air in the shape of two dragons made of smoke. then jumps between the two scrolls, and starts to rapidly summon and throw all sort of weapons as a powerful barrage. If the initial attack were to fail, she can control the discarded weapons with wires attached to her fingertips for a surprise attack

Name:Heavenly chain of destruction
rank:C
Type:Weapon
description: tosses her large scroll into the air above her opponent and summons hundreds of different weapons from it, which then rain down, impaling the opponent and anything in their path. The weapons move so fast that they appear as white streaks

Name:Heavenly steel disaster
Rank:C
Type:Weapon
Descrition:unrolls and throws her large scroll over the enemy. She summons countless kunai from the scroll to rain down on the enemy before releasing four large chains to force the enemy to the ground as the chains collapse on them

Name:Iron protection
Rank:C
Type:Weapon
Decription: summons a large iron dome from one of her scrolls that covers her and her team-mates from enemies' attacks can fit up to 5 members(20 feet around circular). its made of iron and disapears after its met with an attack equal or greater than the c ranked wall. can also be eliminated at will

Name:Manipulating Windmill Triple Blades
Rank:C
Type:Weapon
Description:The user first attaches strings beforehand onto the tossed shuriken and the kunai thrown after it, then one shuriken is pulled back using a tree as an axis, based on the yo-yo's principle. The other shuriken and kunai are decoys, and the true attack is the shuriken that is pulled back

Name:Shadow Shuriken
Rank:d
Type:Weapon
Decription:It's an extremely simple technique where two shuriken, like the Fuma Shuriken, are piled one onto another and thrown simultaneously. However, depending on the way it's used, it can prove its absolute efficiency

Name:Manipulated Shuriken
Rank:D
Type:Weapon
Decription:With this technique a translucent string, both elastic and highly durable, is attached to a shuriken, making it possible to alter its path after having thrown it. An expert will have the ability to freely glide the shuriken in any direction with just a single movement of their fingertip

Academy jutsu

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name:Generic sealing jutsu
Rank:D
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items that have been stored using fūinjutsu. Scrolls are the most common choice for item storage. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use.[1] The items themselves are unaffected by time

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.

Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Water jutsus

Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.

Name:Tornado water wall
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
element:suiton
Description:technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the user. The water vortex acts both as a barrier and an attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious
Range 5 feet

Name: Teppoudama - Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Teppoudama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, the user manifests a large amount of water in his mouth which he can then spit at his opponent as a large spherical projectile.

Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Name: Hahonryuu - Destruction Torrent
Rank: C - S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Hahonryuu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To use this technique will generate water to use against his opponent. Depending on the amount of chakra put into the technique is how much water will be generated.

Name: Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.

Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however; it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

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Please copy the actual template as it has the bolded portions, italicized, and underlined portions already in the code.

Also:
-please explain your special characteristics,
-refer to the weaponry guide in the equipment/item section for the rules about weaponry,
-your RP sample is too small to be a Genin,
-your history is also too small.
-Please separate your jutsu by their element and use the correct coding (bolded portions, etc). -Any jutsu from leafninja need to be placed in our tempalte and any reference of canon characters needs to me removed.
-Personality and Appearance could be longer as well.
-Remove the clan reference if you have no clan.

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Post only when you have done what the mods/admin request. Posting just an okay makes us think you have done what we have asked but you did not do that during this time. Just letting you know ^__^

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ok
i made everything longer and i made the justsus in the right template way

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one thing you forgot about Cara's advice is the bold points.

Its going to be a pain now that you done your jutsu the way it was but, this is how your going to need to do this.

With every jutsu you have your going to have to bold the sections for example

Quote :: Name: Ryuzaki Style: Healing Ember
Type: Medical
Rank: D
Element: Fire
Description: This is not something that is used in combat. This jutsu is main to explain why Kyo uses a different color medical chakra. While medical chakra is green, kyo could only form his medical chakra with white flames. The white flames, in this aspect, are his green chakra. While normal; medics glow with green chakra, Kyo’s chakra is a white flame. The Medical chakra is the same except the chakra give off a little bit of warm sensation to the patient its healing. Other then that no other differences the jutsu holds then the change of color and the very subtle warmth.

This one has no bold points on each section but this does

Quote :: Name: Ryuzaki Style: Healing Ember
Type: Medical
Rank: D
Element: Fire
Description: This is not something that is used in combat. This jutsu is main to explain why Kyo uses a different color medical chakra. While medical chakra is green, kyo could only form his medical chakra with white flames. The white flames, in this aspect, are his green chakra. While normal; medics glow with green chakra, Kyo’s chakra is a white flame. The Medical chakra is the same except the chakra give off a little bit of warm sensation to the patient its healing. Other then that no other differences the jutsu holds then the change of color and the very subtle warmth.

So your going to need to bold Name,Rank,Element, and Description. And the way to do that is by doing this

Code:: [b]Name:[/b]
[b]Type:[/b]
[b]Rank:[/b]
[b]Element:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b]

*Note: The bold coding should end before the name of jutsu, type of jutsu etc. Like this

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Ryuzaki Style: Healing Ember
[b]Type:[/b] Medical
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Description:[/b] This is not something that is used in combat. This jutsu is main to explain why Kyo uses a different color medical chakra. While medical chakra is green, kyo could only form his medical chakra with white flames. The white flames, in this aspect, are his green chakra. While normal; medics glow with green chakra, Kyo’s chakra is a white flame. The Medical chakra is the same except the chakra give off a little bit of warm sensation to the patient its healing. Other then that no other differences the jutsu holds then the change of color and the very subtle warmth.

Hope it helps ^__^

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lol well that sucked but its done

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Again, all of your jutsu from leafninja (water torrent, rising dragon scrolls, etc) have canon references. They need to be removed.

For iron dome, how will the members survive under the dome if its completely sealed? Air will run out shortly. Also, what weapons are used to make it. An iron dome just doesnt exist in a scroll.

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ok i think i did it now.. and i assume its like summoning rashonda orochimarus giant wall thingy

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The following still have canon references

Quote :: Name: Hahonryuu - Destruction Torrent
Rank: C - S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Hahonryuu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To use this technique Yamato will generate water to use against his opponent. Depending on the amount of chakra put into the technique is how much water will be generated.

Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.

Also this is small but you have an error on bold codes found here

Quote :: Name: [Exploding Windmill
Appearance:a windmill shuriken equipped with explosive tags and smokebombs
Rank: C
This windmill has 5 blades that are a foot each, that can be ignited so the blades of it shoot out, on each blade are two exploding notes totalling 10 as the weapon moves it drops smoke bombs or light bombs depending on what the ninja chooses to put in that slot, being a secret compartment in the bottom of it.
Origin:
Nana was given this beautifull weapon by her father on her 9th birthday for mastering the weapon summon technique

Also

Quote :: Name:Iron protection
Rank:C
Type:Weapon
Decription: summons a large iron dome from one of her scrolls that covers her and her team-mates from enemies' attacks its made of iron and disapears after its met with a attack

Can you explain how large the dome is. Also if the dome is not met with an attack how does it disappear? Also what is the limit amount of people that can fit into this dome? Also does it disappear with any rank of attack? Or does it need to be its rank and higher for the dome to disappear? Once you answer those questions add them to fit your description
Also

Quote :: Special Characteristics:
• Nana has mastered Weapon energy and can go into Angel mode where she raises her accuracy/dexterity stat by 5 for 3 posts lmted once a topic
• Strange power that makes people feel comfortable around her so they will may tell her secrets
• Really observant-She notices things others probally wouldn’t

We don’t have stats on US. So if you are to raise your ability it needs to be in percents. For example a Rank of Konin has 10% more speed and power then a normal genin.
Also I don’t see an input of where you have “Angel mode” If you have the description of that can you tell me where it is? If not can you add a more descriptive detail on Angel mode. Unless all it does is just give you added accuracy.
Explain her “Strange power” Is it her personality that gets people to feel comfortable around her? Like Naruto does when he trys to find the good in people?
The observant part just needs to add more detail. How did she become really observant? Was it out of habit? Was she trained to be more observant? Just things like that

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Groovy

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I am fine with it now. If Cara has no objections then i Say Approve!

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Name:Flying swallow
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Decription:Using Chakra Flow, this technique requires a bladed weapon; by feeding chakra into the weapon, the ninja will increase the length and density of his blade to strike an enemy from several feet out of the physical blade's range

While this technique is C-Rank, it requires a B-Rank item as C-Rank weapons are not chakra conductive. Please remove this technique.

Under items, put in the scrolls you wish to use via the item template, same for any other weapons. In the scroll template list which items are stored in there, because given your weaponry specialties, you wouldnt be able to adequately use swords or polearms, etc.

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If items you have are all in Scrolls I take it as an Ok. Although i want you to do the following.

1) Listen your items your going to carry with you excluding the ones within the scrolls.
2) Also how many Scrolls will you carry. Are the scrolls the size of regular scroll I.E tenten twin rising dragon scrolls. Or are they Kakauro (shippuden) size scrolls?

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k and 5 scrolls the only one shippuden sized is the windmill

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Alright I say once again Approve, unless Cara has something else ^__^

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