Asakura, Temi [Suna Genin]

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Basic Information:

Name:
Temi Asakura.
Secondary Title:
None as of yet.
Age:
Fourteen (14).
Gender:
Male.
Physical Appearance:

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Temi has a dark complexion and has black branched hair. His eyes are purple which is rare in his bloodline and has a birth mark on his left arm that many say looks similar to certain ninja village's symbols. Temi is 5"11, the tallest person in his families recorded history and weight a precise 147lb, is weight enables him to train harder with heavier weights, improving his taijutsu.

Temi normally wears a cotton vest as a first layer then a rubber 1.5cm thick protective vest, that is specially made to be white and let air in to his body. On top of the protective vest he wears a white flak type vest which is outstandingly good at adapting to different climates, hot or cold. Temi wears protective long johns and on top, he boosts red jogger type bottoms. As for shoes he styles red sandals. Temi always carries twin blades, one on each of his sides.

Personality:
Temi is varied in reactions, if fueled by anger and revenge he will often act quickly without putting too much thought into his moves, however he is sometimes brash. But normally he will be cool, calm and collected on the battle field and will plan before making major moves.

Temi likes foods such as ramen, grilled meats and fruits, but is not too big on certain vegetables like carrots. He also likes people that think like him or are not stuck up and arrogant, people who are sociable and good to have fun with or good to battle with.

He believes that the mission at hand is more important than his own life but not than his comrades and will die for the mission or his friends. He believes those who abandon their friends are scum and deserve to be punished for doing so.

Catch Phrase:
None, if Temi says any remarks they will normally vary and depend on the situation at hand.

Clan Information:

Clan Name:
The Asakura Clan
Clan Location:
Temi's family live in Suna and places surrounding, but the main bulk of the Asakura family live on an island in the Wind Country to the west of the Tea Country.
Clan Traits:
Many members of the Asakura clan have a darker complexion and can tolerate really hot temperatures.
Kekkei Genkai:
None.
Secret Clan Jutsu:
See jutsu section.
History:

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The Asakura clan a samurai type people that originated on an island in the Sand Country to the west of the Tea Country. They took part in many large and small scale wars and were infamous for only using weapons and clan jutsu in battles and resorting to other jutsu only when their weapons/secret clan jutsu would not be adequate.

The clan has a very specific structure, a wise elder is the head of the clan and then a council of elders advise and oversee clan goings on. During a war time the clan is split into 4, one for mining, one for turning the ore and other raw materials into workable materials, one for creating the weapons and another for polishing and adding the finishing touches.

Until modern times clan members did not normally become official shinobi, they did know jutsu and other things normal ninjas know, however they did not specifically do it for a hidden village, although they were allied with Suna. However in the modern times many have migrated to Suna and became shinobi and as with the modern days do not really need to venture out of Suna, unless they're on missions or need to visit the Asakura mainland for family meetings.
Clan Details:
Open - Requires permission from Temi.

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Skill Information:

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Elemental Jutsu: (Earth)

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Equipment:

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Name: The Asakura Twin Blades
Quantity: 2
Rank: C/B Rank
Appearance:

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Each blade is about 60 centimeters in length, is tipped at the top and has a silver complexion. The handles are made out of wood and are covered in a black metal that has over ten diamond-like studs in it. The sheath is made out of a light metal alloy that is very shiny and it bears the chosen mark of the owner.

Special Abilities/Characteristics:
The Asakura Twin Blades are extremely sturdy, sharp swords and are hard to break, they cut down enemies easily and are very light, however when the user is of a B rank standard they can create an individual jutsu that allows themselves to channel chakra threw it, making it superbly sharp, even more dangerous and ridiculously light. However the jutsu-creation process is tough and may not necessarily work first time round.

Origin:
As an Asakura it is Temi's right to have a weapon forged by himself and another member of the clan. Temi and his father forged the blades as a rite of Temi becoming a shinobi, and for one year Temi spent many nights in the Asakura forge, slaving away in hot conditions.

When the original blades were finished Temi's father handed it to him and Temi spent another 6 months polishing the blade to perfection, putting the right wood and metal handle on and then shaping the sheaths. However Temi could only use the sword once he became a Genin and graduated from the Academy.

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History

Birth Arc:
In a traditional hospital on the Asakura mainland, inside the clan’s HQ Temi’s mother Shishi Asakura suffered the perilous contractions that accompanied child birth. His father, Mitoyusi stood by her side, holding Shishi’s hand and comforting her as she squeezed even harder, as if she had something to prove.

Eight hours into labour, something left Shishi’s womb, it of course was a baby, in fact it was no one else than, Temi Asakura, the second born child of the 8th Dynasty of the Asakura Clan. Temi cried for hours until finally he was proven to be a healthy, new-born.

Three days later, Temi was being brought home back to his abode in the Asakura HQ, as a member of the eighth Dynasty, he was part of the ruling family in the clan and subsequently his grand father was the Head elder.

4 years later Shishi and Mitoyusi started to train Temi in the art of being a shinobi, and Temi progressed well, very well. In fact he mastered all clan jutsus in the space of a year; however the bow and arrow jutsu put him into intensive care as his chakra system was not developed enough.

One night a rouge ninja broke into Temi’s house, the rouge was a male ninja who had been hired by a rival clan to assassinate the Head elder of the Asakura clan. However Temi’s parents had heard the noise and confronted the shinobi who seemed to be one tough cookie, and sadly he mortally wounded Temi’s brave mother; the entire eighth dynasty mourned for days.

Academy Arc:
When Temi had reached the tender age of eight, it seemed he was a very good fighter was weapons, however he only knew clan jutsu and Mitoyusi believed that in the modern day world, it would not be enough, he also saw the old Asakura ways as too frigid and stubborn. The eighth dynasty had recovered from the loss of Shishi, however every Asakura still silently mourned, she was a mother, a teacher and the official Asakura record keeper.

Suna was a blossoming city and Mitoyusi could see that the current Kazekage made use of shinobi very well. He wanted his son to be a tool for greatness and not just some boy stranded on an island. It was decided Mitoyusi, Temi and a few other families would migrate to the great city of Sunagakure no Sato.
The father and son duo set off, they had packed all their possessions and were on a boat to the main part of the Wind country and to Suna. On the way the winds were extremely violent and became a major obstruction, almost killing a few people.

Several hours passed and finally, like a miracle they arrived at the mighty village, Mitoyusi was quick to buy a group of houses in the village specifically for the migrated clan members and after introducing them to their new homes, he took Temi to the Sunagakure Academy and enrolled him.

Just a few months later, Temi had settled in to the Academy and was doing well while making friends. He had learnt all academy jutsu and a few others. He was looking forward to passing the academy in a few years and becoming a Genin.

Years past, Temi mastered his natural element, Earth and learn other jutsu, and it now was the year of his final exam. In this exam it would determine whether he would stay as a weak academy student or become a mighty Genin. Only time would tell...

It turned out that he had in fact passed his exam and was now officially a Genin, however now his father would train him even harder and officially handed the Asakura Twin Blades to Temi.

The start of a new era had arrived...

Genin Arc:
Temi had been a Genin for a couple and months and looked forward to going on missions, learning new abilities, meeting new people and just improving all round. His story has much more to hold and has a lot of room to expand.

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Complete - Ready for improving/approving! Smile

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Hey Temi : )

There are a few things wrong with your app.

Erm.. where to start.................

1.)

Quote :: Name: Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat. The range of the jutsu is from 0m - 10m+.

Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target. The range of the jutsu is the surrounding area.

Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals and objects to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows them to summon different size and skill levels of creature. Signing this contract also allows the animal to reverse summon the human ninja to their location. The range of the jutsu the ninja's immediate location.

Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Remove those techniques from your app. Body Paralysis is banned; Hidden Mist is for Mist Ninja; You don't have any summons so your summoning tech is not applicable; and you don't have water as an element so you can't have a water clone technique.

2.) Remove all specialties that you don't have. So the Gen, Tai etc get rid of. If you have Nin and Ken(which I'll talk about in a min) as your specialties those are the only ones you are able to have at your rank. Even if the templates are blank its a lot cleaner to remove them. Now for Kenjutsu, there is not such thing on this site. We have a weaponry system that involves different kinds of weapons and specializations. Pick two of the following;

Swords - All forms of Sword
Axes - All forms of Axe
Polearms - All forms of polarms, from spears to halberds
Blunt - All blunt weaponry, such as hammers, maces, ninchucks etc
Ranged - All ranged weaponry such as bows and advanced forms of shuriken/kunai
Exotic - Any weapons that don't fall into the norm such as whips and chains. Really odd shaped weapons of whatever variety count as exotic

I suggest you pick Sword and Range seeing as how thats what your clan techniques primarily revolves around : )

For more information, please refer to this link: https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/equipment-applications-f14/weaponry-guide-t804.htm

3.) Chakra conducting weapons are considered B rank and thus as a Genin you are not permitted to have one.

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Thanks for the quick reply! Smile

All done, but on the terms of the chakra sword, it does say that until I am of a B rank and develop the jutsu it chakra cannot be conducted threw it, or does it still need to be removed?

I also changed my second speciality to Genjutsu!

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Okay : )

Quote :: Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. The range of the jutsu is 0m - 10m.

I don't understand why this technique has a range.

Quote :: Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall. The range of the jutsu is from 0m - 5m.

How big is the rock shield?

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Ok done, thanks! Smile

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Alright then. Approved.

Welcome to Suna

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