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Kaguya Kyoukan [Kiri Genin]

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Basic Information:

Name:
Kaguya,Kyoukan
Secondary Title:

Age:
15
Gender:
Male
Physical Appearance:
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Kaguya Kyoukan  [Kiri Genin] Suigetsu

Kyoukan 's hair is grey green-ish , that reaches to about his shoulders and he bares teal-ish eyes. Thin black eyebrows with both his K-9s sticking out of his mouth. He has his ears priced with diamonds and his bridge priced with a rod. He wears a black tight tank top that has white strings that go up the middle. His shorts are white capri's that cut off at his shins, these are skin tight. He wears purple standard shinobi footwear with white socks that go up to his calf. He wears his headband as his belt around his waist, it is usually pointing to the left. Where the spot of the headband is the 2 red dots on his forehead, they sit right in the middle, on top of the eyebrows.
He has a black robe that goes over his body and it connected by a hook at the top of it located at the collarbone.

He is about 5'9, standard size for any other 16 year old. 128 pounds. His muscles are toned, because of his intensive training and workout routine. He has very little fat on him, and is all toned.
There isn't much when someones eye is caught on him, walking very light. On his right shoulder he has the Kaguya dots and on his left shoulder he has the Kiri village symbol. Back down on his wrists on both sides he has the Kaguya dots proudly. Kyoukan doesn't need to wear much defense, so he travels light and runs fast.
Personality:
Extremely cocky, and rude. He usually makes fun of people, but gets used to them. He never judges someone by looks, that has happened to him so many times. He has a passion in the shinobi world for war. Being a Kaguya it is very natural for him, he usually will play with his prey but he never lets it get out of hand. He always tries to finish a battle before leaving, trying to never retreat unless strictly ordered too. He does have a heart of a warrior, a very proud one. He is very obedient to his superiors when it comes to orders and attacks, he usually is the first off the break to attack. He always tries to put on a good show.

He doesn't really believe in all the whole 'god' thing, he thinks its a waste of time. He only likes things for battle, food and thats it. He doesn't like to read so sit around, or drawing or waiting. He is very hasty, anything that has to do with battle he is in it, he'll take any training over anything. He isn't very fond of girls either. He takes every sort of training he can get, which makes him so good at some many things, he has a natural ability to be a good learner and he catches onto things easily. He isn't afraid to say what he has to say, 3 words to describe him-Brave,Proud, Stupid. He does so many gutless moves that could either destroy him, or make him the best. He always takes risks with his body.
Catch Phrase:
Ha, your so silly.
Shut your trap you geezer!!
Clan:
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Rank:
Genin
Village Affiliation:
Kiri

Special Information:

Character Speciality:

Main:Taijustu
Sub:Medical
Elemental Affinity:

Main:Wind
Sub:Lighting
Special Characteristics:
Name:Lightning Quick:
Rank:C
Range:
Description:
Kija can move very quickly compared to other shinobi in the village, his movements are said to be as fast a lightning, but they aren't. His moves are hard to trace without a special doujutsu. He is easily one of the fastest members of the Sand Village. Part of this is because his natural affinity with wind, but even without that, he is quick as he has done a lot of leg weight training, making his kicks powerful as well. He is 30% faster than any other genin. Kija is able to do flips and jump off things very quickly in very odd angles as well. His ability to maneuver himself out of harms way is incredibly and is deemed it is impossible to hit him. Kija has incredible reflexes due to used to fighting as a taijutsu ninja and not being hit.This also gives him enough speed to block against some of the fastest shinobi in the world. He trains with reflexes and is extremely conditioned


Skill Information:
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.



Jutsu Template:

Quote :
Name: [Name of jutsu]
Type: [Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Puppetry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu]
Rank: [E,D,C,B,A,S]
Element: [Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire]
Description: [A well detailed description of your jutsu. Remember to add in such fetures as it's range, chakra cost, drawbacks, etc to give an overall view of the technique.]
Link: [When making new jutsus you must train them. Read the Training Page in rules. post the link here for admins to check]
Medical use/Bastardized use: [Only add this if the technique is a Medical jutsu. Describe what qualifies this jutsu as medical. What is it's medical use or how was it bastardized from its original medical use, as in the case of poisons, etc.]

Weapon Template:


Item Template:

Name: Medical Pills
Rank: D
Type:
Black-When this black pill is swallowed the target will feel very faint the same post it was taken. His body will become very hot and sweat. The target will feel very nauseous and dizzy. Their next post the target passes out and seem like they are dead. This is a fake death pill, after 5 posts the user will regain cautiousness but will feel hungover.

Green-When the green pill is swallowed the target will feel full of energy. This is essentially the power pill. The user will soon feel very tired after about 5 posts of eating the pill


Name: Anti Dotie
Rank: D
Type: Medicine
Natural Abilities:in a vial pouch our on belt. Glass air tight vials that wont break. Has 7 vials.

Protection from Poison.
This bitter tasting antidote protects others from poison. Being a type of medicine specifically made to negate the effects of C ranked and below poison. It wears off until it negates the effect of poison and only blocks off 1 C ranked or lower poison and wears off or after 4 posts and not used, it wears off



Quote :
Name: Shots
Rank: C
Type: Medicine
Natural Abilities: A normal looking needle, whats inside it is different. There are different forms of the liquid inside. There is numbing, sleeping, burning, freezing, and itchy. Numbing=Yellow, Sleeping=Green, Burning=Red Freezing=Blue and Itchy=Purple. They are hung around his belt. Having 2 of each at all times.

The user needs to be able to inject the liquid inside a target or it to be in use. The numbing liquid is yellow and numbs a certain body part depending on how much is dosed. 1/4 well numb 1 limb. 1/2 well numb half the body, and all well numb the whole body. The body part(s) well stay numb for 2 posts. Sleeping which is green needs to be injected half way for the target to sleep for 1 posts and the whole thing for 3 posts. Burning is red and it warms up the body. The whole thing well warm up the body for 3 posts. Freezing is blue and well cool down the body, the whole thing well leave the body cool and hydrated for 3 posts. Itchy is purple which has the same rules has numbing, 1/4 well itch 1 limb. 1/2 well numb itch the body, and all well itch the whole body. The body well feel incredibly itchy for 2 posts and well not go away unless medical attention or until it wears off.

Background Information

History:
Before Birth
Kyoukan was born in the Hidden Mist village. He was born into the deadly Kaguya clan. His parents were extremely violent towards anyone other than Kaguya. The Kaguya often had war with many other village man and in between never really liked them. An Incident called the Kaguya Massacre happened 3 nights after Kyoukan was born. His parents were involved. The council men of the Kaguya demanded more land for their headquarters. The Mizukage refused and a skirmish happened, 4 Kaguya were killed and 7 Mist ninja were killed. 2 of the 4 Kaguyans were Kyoukans parents. Kyoukan would grow up believing his adopted parents were his real parents.

Academy.
Kyoukan would enter the Academy under brief supervision from the Kaguya leader. He would check in on Kyoukan and make sure he is doing fine. Kyoukan could often take care of himself while in the Academy but he often didn't in his own home by himself. He would often go to the hospital for some medical training. He often talked to alot of different doctors and took many tips from all of them. He had some friends, but they weren't ever best friends. He only had one other person that was serious enough in medical research like him, Dr.Lono. Dr.Lono was Kyoukan's main teacher while in the academy. He had his Academy teacher but Dr.Lono had a passion that Kyoukan did. They really connected in many ways.

While Kyoukan was only 11 only knowing Dr.Lono for 2 years, he died from a mysterious disease. Kyoukan vowed to research and find a cure for this disease. Kyoukan easily passed the Academy and is now becoming a full fleged shinobi.

Role-Play Sample:
Being walked to the door, the opened for Akira having her walk out first then quickly following. He had grasped of her hand. The weather remained the same. The clouds were starting to override the suns powerful rays, protecting the citizens of the village. They walked down the street, passing a couple of food markets and cooking supplies shop. While walking through Ochiba noticed that she never wore any of shinobi gear. "So...your no a shinobi anymore?" Ochiba said as they continued walking.

They found a clothing store and that was first on the list. The clothing store was more formal and right next to it had a small building for jewelry. Still holding Akira's hand they drifted directions into the store. Taking quick looks, Ochiba seemed like a girl. Taking everything single thing in his hands that would fit him. Having tuxedo jackets, to shoes, to the pants. He knew what he wanted though. "What would suit me?" he asked Akira. Without letting her answer he waltzed up to a formal worker. "I need a tailor.". Walking around to quickly losing Akira in the store, he felt bad. "Find something nice!" Ochiba yelled in the store hoping she'd hear him as he walked to the tailor. The whole store looked at him.

After being measured they could get the tuxedo done in a matter of minutes.The tailor offered black skinny tuexdo bottoms, with several other colors. His pants would fit him so tight. He would get several different color button up shirts. He bought the tuxedo jacket in different colors that would fit him so tight. He didn't like it but he was going to get them anyways. After being tightened up He decided to only get 1 pair. Looking around the cash register to find any accessories. Finding a pair of goggles, loop earrings and a belt. Being called back over to the tailor in the store. He was given his clothes.

The tailor was also a small time hairdresser and helped him style his hair like that. His lowers were skinnier than most other suit pants. After his findings he also found a pair of tight close fitting sunglasses putting them on right under his goggles. He quickly paid with all his clothes on went to find Akira, in the massive store. "Hope she ain't mad" he said with a light chuckle.


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Jutsu
Academy
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Clan
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Taijutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya Kyoukan [Kiri Genin] Kaguya Kyoukan  [Kiri Genin] EmptySat 27 Nov 2010, 4:22 am

SC: No need for the jutsu template ( or whatever that is) for SC, all you need is the name and description. Chakra Sensory isn't a SC, it's more of a KKG thing. Please remove that. Fix lightning quick, you have things like mist village references in it

History: Needs to be longer

Attractive Charm: Isn't a jutsu, more like a SC. Also, I don't see your character having this going by his appearance...

Shadow Stealth: Remove

Puppetry Technique: Remove

I'll get the rest once this stuff is done.

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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya Kyoukan [Kiri Genin] Kaguya Kyoukan  [Kiri Genin] EmptySat 27 Nov 2010, 4:32 am

Bone Protection: C-rank physical attacks?

Bone Clone: Would be B-rank.

Bone Trap/Fuuton Blow/Fuuton Prison: Elaborate.

Tenkuu Hando/Fuuton Tornado: Not C-rank

Tenkuu Shotto: Elaborate on rank differences

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Bone Protection: The thing about just saying normal shield is that there really isn't a normal shield in the naruverse =P

Bone Trap: Duration?

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Please use the code for this. They are provided for you as the (green lettering) from the templates. Once coded, it will be looked at again.
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