New Fuuin

Age : 30 Posts : 1236

Name: Seal of the Tombed
Rank: A [D-ranked chakra per turn]
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A specialized technique where the user creates a 50m in radius barrier-based fuuinjutsu seal. Upon forming the necessary handseals required for this technique, a circle forms around where the user is and from a 50m radius of black irremovable ink. This ink has an extremely unique characteristic that it forms an aerial and underground barrier that anything from the inside cannot go out and anything from the outside cannot go in. The major downside to this technique is that it takes one post to prepare and utilize the technique. The barrier can only be destroyed if the creator is destroyed, if the technique is released or if an S-ranked attack is utilized on it.
Link: Will train when approved for training.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

Name: Cheetah's Respite
Rank: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A seal-based technique where the user activates a seal placed on their right wrist of the number "1000". This in turn sacrifices the ability to perform Jutsu's of A and S rank for the ability to reach sprinting speeds of up to 0.08sec/m or 8sec/100m making the user extremely fast and able to maintain that top speed for as long as the user wishes. The user doesn't tire nor can their top speed exceed 0.8s/m, due to the chakra being pumped into their skeletal, muscular, respiratory and circulatory systems. This technique can only last a maximum of three posts, can only be used twice during a topic and cannot be used in conjunction with Schwarzenegger's Respite.
Link: Will train when approved for training.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

Name: Schwarzenegger's Respite
Rank: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A seal-based technique where the user activates a seal placed on their left wrist of the number of "100". This in turn sacrifices the ability to perform Jutsu's of A and S rank for the ability to lift the equivalent of 500kg if bench-pressed, or create craters-worth of impact when struck. The chakra pumps the muscular and skeletal systems to their limits, forcing them to exert unnatural strength. This technique can only last a maximum of three posts, can only be used twice during a topic and cannot be used in conjunction with Cheetah's Respite.
Link: Will train when approved for training.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

Name: Tome of Knowledge
Rank: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A seal-based technique where the user activates a seal placed on their sternum of the number "1trillion" This seal requires the user to prepare prior to releasing the seal. The user stores one/half of their total chakra into this particular seal for future use. From this seal, when the reserves of chakra are utilized, the user cannot tap back into the seal to gain more chakra. This seal works as a "reserve tank" like that of a car, nothing more and nothing less.
Link: Will train when approved for training.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

Name: Hive of Wasps
Rank: S
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A seal-based technique where the user places a seal on one of the user's shuriken. This seal creates an exact clone of the shuriken for over a hundred times, creating exactly 101 shuriken. These shuriken each have a basic seal on them and can be controlled at the user's discretion for a maximum of two posts. These shurikens can be used in conjunction with other techniques for a combo. This technique is named because of the sound it makes when a hive of wasps are angered, and it should be noted that a hive of wasps are known to pack a punch.
Link: Will train when approved for training.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

I'd also like to remove the following technique in almost replacement for this one:

Name:1000 bees
Type: Ninpo
Element: Seal
Rank: A
Effects: The evolution of shuriken control, instead of one basic shuriken, this allows the user to control a massive 10 shurikens at once. After piling them up, the user places their hands on the bottom and on the top of the stack. Inserting chakra into them, the seals necessary for the jutsu are created on the shuriken (4 per shuriken). After that he is free to control all of the shuriken. This jutsu is named for the sound that the shuriken make when spinning rapidly together.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Quote :: Name: Seal of the Tombed
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A specialized technique where the user creates a 50m in radius barrier-based fuuinjutsu seal. Upon forming the necessary handseals required for this technique, a circle forms around where the user is and from a 50m radius of black irremovable ink. This ink has an extremely unique characteristic that it forms an aerial and underground barrier that anything from the inside cannot go out and anything from the outside cannot go in. The major downside to this technique is that it takes one post to prepare and utilize the technique. The barrier can only be destroyed if the creator is destroyed or the technique is released.
Link: Will train when approved for training.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

For such a powerful technique I am going to ask you to increase its drawbacks and throughput. Even though this technique takes preparation I feel uncomfortable with allowing you to put up a unstoppable barrier around 50m and calling it a day, with no considerable way to break it besides when 'you feel like it'. So I would like you to either do two things. 1.) Add chakra cost to the technique. Lets say C rank amount of chakra p/p. 2.) Or you can take away the underground effect of the barrier which would give it a sufficient weakness.

Quote :: Name: Cheetah's Respite
Rank: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A seal-based technique where the user sacrifices the ability to perform Jutsu's of A and S rank for the ability to reach sprinting speeds of up to 0.08sec/m or 8sec/100m making the user extremely fast and able to maintain that top speed for as long as the user wishes. The user doesn't tire nor can their top speed exceed 0.8s/m, due to the chakra being pumped into their skeletal, muscular, respiratory and circulatory systems. Once this technique is stopped, the user feels fatigued depending upon how much exertion the user has had to do. At the expense of high ranking jutsu and fatigue, the user can literally bolt.
Link: Will train when approved for training.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

Name: Schwarzenegger's Respite
Rank: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A seal-based technique where the user sacrifices the ability to perform Jutsu's of A and S rank for the ability to lift the equivalent of 500kg if bench-pressed, or create craters-worth of impact when struck. The chakra pumps the muscular and skeletal systems to their limits, forcing them to exert unnatural strength. Once this technique is stopped, the user's muscles and limbs utilized will feel extremely fatigued, sore and in some aspects may be torn. At the expense of high ranking jutsu and pain, the user can literally be strong.
Link: Will train when approved for training.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

Can you add a 'short' post duration for these techniques because they would be quite OP if they lasted indefinite. Quite honestly the sacrificing of A-S rank techniques when in these states are silly because when would you need to use those with that much strength and speed? I would be more comfortable if you made it so you won't be able to utilize 'any' techniques because one; your chakra would be working 'overtime' supplying your body with that much energy to do anything else, and two; we don't want you doing more jutsu over top of the already powerful state you're in. Also I would like it if you made it so you can only use one of these techniques at the same time for obvious reasons. And how are these techniques fuuinjutsu? What seal are you activating? Is it something on your body?

Age : 30 Posts : 1236

Well, edited those three as you requested to something hopefully we can both agree on, added another technique for you to review and wish to remove the 1000bees as I do not have any "big shuriken" or "fuuma shuriken"..

Age : 30 Posts : 1236

BUMP for sexiness. ;3

Age : 26 Posts : 239

Quote :: Name: Seal of the Tombed
Rank: A [D-ranked chakra per turn]
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A specialized technique where the user creates a 50m in radius barrier-based fuuinjutsu seal. Upon forming the necessary handseals required for this technique, a circle forms around where the user is and from a 50m radius of black irremovable ink. This ink has an extremely unique characteristic that it forms an aerial and underground barrier that anything from the inside cannot go out and anything from the outside cannot go in. The major downside to this technique is that it takes one post to prepare and utilize the technique. The barrier can only be destroyed if the creator is destroyed or the technique is released.
Link: Will train when approved for training.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

This kinda sounds as if it works like Shishi Enjin, which is a banned technique.

Quote :: Name: Schwarzenegger's Respite
Rank: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A seal-based technique where the user activates a seal placed on their left wrist of the number of "100". This in turn sacrifices the ability to perform Jutsu's of A and S rank for the ability to lift the equivalent of 500kg if bench-pressed, or create craters-worth of impact when struck. The chakra pumps the muscular and skeletal systems to their limits, forcing them to exert unnatural strength. This technique can only last a maximum of three posts and cannot be used in conjunction with Cheetah's Respite.
Link: Will train when approved for training.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

Name: Cheetah's Respite
Rank: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A seal-based technique where the user activates a seal placed on their right wrist of the number "1000". This in turn sacrifices the ability to perform Jutsu's of A and S rank for the ability to reach sprinting speeds of up to 0.08sec/m or 8sec/100m making the user extremely fast and able to maintain that top speed for as long as the user wishes. The user doesn't tire nor can their top speed exceed 0.8s/m, due to the chakra being pumped into their skeletal, muscular, respiratory and circulatory systems. This technique can only last a maximum of three posts and cannot be used in conjunction with Schwarzenegger's Respite.
Link: Will train when approved for training.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

Make a limit to how many times this can be used per battle.

Age : 30 Posts : 1236

Edited those two Respite's and Shishi Enjin and my technique is quite different; my technique constantly drains my chakra horribly and eventually. Not too fun of a technique in the long run.

Age : 26 Posts : 239

Mkay, looks good.

Quote :: my technique constantly drains my chakra horribly

That seems fair enough

Quote :: The barrier can only be destroyed if the creator is destroyed or the technique is released.

but say that an S-Rank should at least be able to break it.

Age : 30 Posts : 1236

Done.

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

This looks good to me, approved for training.