Shuheii, Urahara [Kumo Chuunin Update]

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With everything on minus Geta + having Benihime Cane mode

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Kaze Genkotsu [ Wind Fist ]

Kaihou Hirate [ Open Palm ]

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Basic Jutsu

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description:

Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
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Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Shuheii Chuunin Rank Kenjutsu (known):

Name:Quick Draw [Hayai Azukari]
Rank:D-S
Type:Kenjutsu
Element: None
Description:

Using the ability of shuushin on the arm, one is able to draw the sword at a quicker rate, or almost inhuman like process. This jutsu is a must be used in order to use any other secret technique that Shuheii Battojutsu has, when any technique is used the chakra depletion is added to it. Example: A technique has B ranked chakra level; it becomes A ranked due to this jutsu added on it. It is a double jutsu combination.

The quick draw can also be used on its own, without another technique, thus making the time at which the blade is drawn very fast, almost inhuman, however the stress of anything above C ranked causes problems in the arm, and is rarely used, if ever. The highest rank used in a combination is a C ranked quick Draw and a B ranked secret technique, making an S ranked jutsu.

Name:Double Battojutsu [Kaedama Battojutsu]
Rank:D-C
Type:Kenjutsu
Element:Wind

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Drawing out the sword from the saya (scabbard), after the sword has left the sheath, Urahara swings the sheath at his opponent as well in case the initial Battojutsu drawing technique has missed. Thus inflicting a weaker, but still powerful attack at the opponent, if the sword hits and the sheath it’s a C ranked (the sword having chakra in it as well as the sheath) but if it is only the sheath then its D ranked.

Name: Free Hand
Rank:D-B
Type:Kenjutsu
Element: None
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When a sword strike is parried or knocked away, this kenjutsu move is the act of switching hands in order to keep your distance. When you are blocked you would attack them with the same sword hand making the user open. (if blocked by weapon) or contact transfer (via blocking with greaves)

For example you swing and it gets blocked, the force of the block was stronger than expected and let’s says your sword deflects towards the left hand, to save time you can switch sword hands. This is applicable with deflecting other weapons; you can throw the sword over and around your body in a free, lithe movement.

Name Running Quick Draw [ Ranningu Hayai Azukari ]
Rank: D-S
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: None
Description:

This is the "running" form of the quick draw in which the user is able to move while using this jutsu, thus being able to jump/run/jump from tree/ et cetera.

Using the ability of shuushin on the arm, one is able to draw the sword at a quicker rate, or almost inhuman like process. This jutsu is a must be used in order to use any other secret technique that Shuheii Battojutsu has, when any technique is used the chakra depletion is added to it. Example: A technique has B ranked chakra level; it becomes A ranked due to this jutsu added on it. A double jutsu combination.

Name: Razor Blast [ Kamisori Bakufuu ]
Rank:B-A
Type:Kenjutsu
Element:Wind
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The blade is put into the sheath and is charged with wind chakra. Upon its release a large curved form of chakra explodes from the tip, moving very fast due to the quick draw technique. (the chakra looks similar to Ichigo’s Getsuga Tenshou (norm.)) It is very strong and is able to cut through an assortment of objects. It is a raw powered wind technique that is given a white color due to amount of Urahara’s chakra. It travels at about 35 mph a few seconds from the release of the sheath and then slows to 25 mph because the initial burst is lost.

Name: Samurai Spirit Swing [ Kobushi Shinzui Yurasu]
Rank: B-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Wind
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[say your charging and i shoot this, not in motion]
During this attack the sword is surrounded by chakra within the sheath just like any Battoujutsu attack, however by taking an extra step with the left foot the user adds more power to their swing. With the addition of using a C – ranked Quick draw the chakra and speed can disrupt the flow of chakra within an incoming ninjutsu attack, this attack can also cut any material object so clean that atoms aren’t damaged and the object can be re connected. The disruption of the Ninjutsu is relative to how much chakra is used in this jutsu, and what the specifications of the opposing jutsu are.]

Chuunin Wind Taijutsu (Known)

Name: Open Palm Technique 1 : Palm Defense
Rank: D-S
Type: Taijutsu/Sustained
Element: Wind

Description:

The act of creating the domes necessary in the Open palm: Wind Fist fighting style. They allow you to use the Open Palm style by standing with your 'palms open' and deflecting attacks based on (which are rated on a scale, see Open Palm: Wind Fist Style). Only deflect Taijutsu/Kenjutsu based on rank of the Palm defense Technique.

Name: Open Palm Technique 2 : Palm Offense
Rank: C-S
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Wind
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It is a defensive offense move, used after a counter and if the enemy is open the user thrusts the defense dome that is used to deflect/defend from things as an attack [causing the dome to 'explode' on the opponent] which is akin to being punched very hard by a strong taijutsu punch/kick.

Name: Open Palm Technique 3 : Palm Defesne: Shield
Rank: C-A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Wind
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The user puts their palms side by side and the domes connect, expanding and going past the edges of the users palm [creating a shield like form]. The main force of the Ninjutsu sweeps right by the user of this jutsu. It can also be used against really strong taijutsu moves or flying projectiles [rocks, et cetera] The shield becomes bigger the higher the rank.

C Rank = Small Round Shield
B Rank = Large Round Shield
A Rank = Large Triangle Shield

Name: Wind Fist Technique 1 : Bloody Knuckles
Rank:D-S
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Wind
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Wind chakra coats the top of the user's knuckles and rotates. When the user hits an opponent or an object [wood/steel, depending on rank of jutsu] it will cut into them, cutting them in four places.

D Rank = Small Scratch
C Rank = Medium Sized Cut
B Rank = Small Gash
A Rank = Large Gash
S Rank = Fatal wound

Name: Wind Fist Technique 2 : Wide Shot
Rank:C-A
Type:Taijutsu
Element:Wind

Description: The user makes his hands form into a claw shape, fingers pointing forwards. Those fingers are surrounded by cutting wind chakra. If an enemy is hit the fingers will pierce like individual blades. It can cut through different tissues/muscles at different levels.

C rank: Through Soft Tissues
B rank: Through Muscles
A rank: To the Vitals

Name: Open Palm Technique 4 : Dome Shards
Rank: B-A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Wind
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The dome's used for placed on the palms are shattered on purpose [rather than when they break][not loosing chakra as if they had broken] they shatter and turn into shards of wind chakra, which then the user 'pushes' them with the 'force' of the chakra causing the shards to go forward and cut into the enemy.

Lightning Kenjutsu (known)

Name: Sword Bullet [ Tsurugi ]
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Lightning
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The sword is surrounded with lighting chakra that swells to the top of the blade and forms a very small ball at the tip, the chakra is condensed all in one area and if stabbed or sliced and the ball hits the skin, it is equivalent to a gun shot. The small ball of lighting chakra acting like a bullet.[/spoiler]

Non Elemental Kenjutsu (known):

Name: Benihime Return
Rank: C-S
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: None
Description: With the flick of your wrist you are able to summon benihime back to your hand, with an effective range depending on chakra expenditure.

C rank = 25ft
B rank = 45ft
A rank = 65 ft
S rank = 125ft

Name Cane Disintegration
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: None
Rank: D
Description: Instead of removing the Benihime from the cane shaft the user is able to use a small application of chakra and make the bottom half disintegrate [exposing the blade.] This is usually used during fighting with the cane, the user is fighting and then finds an opportunity to cut his opponent, in which case he uses this jutsu and without having to unsheathe his weapon he is able to pierce/cut his/her opponent.

Name: Blunt Trauma
Rank: E-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: None
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By charging non elemental chakra into the cane form of Benihime one is able to make the cane become a formidable blunt object/able to hit and whack people with more pressure than a normal staff like object. The ability to put chakra around the cane is E ranked however the amount of pressure one exerts is determined by Rank. A jounin using this attack could be far more fatal than a Genin. A Genin could make small bruises while a Jounin or higher could break bones with single hits.

Name: Benihime Recreate
Rank:C
Type:Kenjutsu
Element: None
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By touching a broken piece of Benihime it creates a chakra bond between the other pieces and re connects the blade. This only works so long as the seal is not damaged [which is located in the hilt.] This jutsu also gathers any small fragments that are not found, so long as the handle is in tact.

Sword: Benihime

Name: Benihime [Red Princess]
Quantity: 1
Rank: E-S
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*contains the cane form and released form.

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Benihime is a sword developed only for the purpose of use by the Shuheii clan, developed by Shuheii, Urahara’s father and is designed as an heirloom to be passed down through the clan’s head council members. While not old enough to rule the clan, the future holder of the chairman is given Benihime to practice with it until it is time to ascertain the seat. That in mind, it was based off of the Shuheii Battoujutsu style and specializes in this style, however it can be used just like any other sword implement. To prevent death of young users, this sword seals itself off depending on the user’s chakra rank [Academy Student, Genin, Chuunin, Jounin, ANBU, S rank, Sannin, Kage] and upon obtaining new ranks the user must train(adhering to the rules of training for a ranked weapon depending on the next rank being obtained] to unlock certain stages. Benihime is activated on the phrase “Awaken, Benihime”

Also, the sheath of Benihime is worn at the user’s waist, and no sword is in it. It is an empty sheath strapped to the user’s waist, so after the cane is awakened the bottom part in which it came out of can be used as a blunt object/weapon. Despite the recent claims that Benihime was created by Shuheii’s Urahara’s father is constantly doubted, reports of the blade or mentioned throughout clan history. It is said that a ‘soul’ resides within this blade and speaks to whoever uses it, however what it says is vague and non descript, only destined users or people that the ‘sprit’ (summon) thinks will ascertain greatness hear her true thoughts.

Though the real, true history states and explains that while not created by Shuheii Urahara’s father, Tanaka, Shuheii, it was re designed, given its current look/style. Benihime is not a ‘soul’ but rather a summon that was sealed away within the sword and is able to speak with the wielder of in essence ‘herself’. Benihime is a one sided sword, the front is very sharp while the back side is blunt and can be used to cause non fatal damage, or blunt trauma (which may be fatal) Benihime is hidden within a cane that is protected by an S ranked Fuuinjutsu seal and can only be activated by the touch of whomever’s blood has been put on the summoning scroll [the activation of the sword works like the activation of a summon.

Once the user’s blood has been put into the scroll and the awakening test passed the user is not required blood to activate the sword but is always required to make the payment of D ranked Chakra. The seal works as a sensory scanner using the ability to tell the difference between a person’s chakra levels. Benihime activates upon a D ranked burst of chakra through the cane handle and transforms into its ‘released form’. Benihime has chakra veins through the entire sword, hilt and blade. Upon the hilt being grabbed it takes your chakra and circulates it chakra from your hand to the blade and sends it back to the body, never using chakra and only having a connection with the user and the sword.

Though when attacking (if the user wishes) you may exert force equivalent to desired jutsu rank. [You could hit at an A ranked chakra level, expending chakra for an A ranked attack. Benihime in its non released cane form can be used as a blunt object to whack people [much like a staff weapon], the same rule applies about exerting chakra force. The chakra within the sword makes it resistant against being broken by chakra attacks and most other implements. (This means I could attack a ninjutsu with the blade of the sword.)

If the blade is broken, which rarely happens it can reconnect by the user connected each piece back together and putting his chakra through the veins, the seal, which acts like a heart.(it cannot be put back together during battle) As long as the user has the hilt he can wave it across an area and collect the very small pieces, though this costs B ranked chakra to find the pieces. Because of the bond with the sword [referring to summon scroll] it can be summoned [if it was knocked out of user’s hand] back to the person’s hand [effective range up to 50ft, which costs C ranked chakra]

Benihime has a mind of her own and is also protected by the very seal that keeps her locked away. Therefore she is not affected by Genjutsu and can therefore help the user of herself escape from a Genjutsu [however in order not to be op the character must first realize he/she is in a Genjutsu in order to be set free of the genjutsu via Benihime’s chakra and shinobi knowledge][it is similar to a Genjutsu Kai technique however it is more dependable considering that the technique is not performed by the user][Also note that this is applicable to any doujutsu/genjutsu and any doujutsu/genjutsu can be released based on rp circumstances and the abilities of doujutsu/genjutsu] Benihime can only inform her user if she inflicts pain higher than the pain the user is feeling and by draining the amount of chakra equal to or higher than the genjutsu/doujutsu imposed on the user. If the user does not have enough chakra then user is still trapped and loses whatever chakra is left to him/her and becomes helpless. The only way after loosing all their chakra would be to self inflict pain.

Benihime, being is a summon trapped in her own weapon can be summoned by a very strong shinobi. When this happens the seal is temporarily broken and she is set free to fight or do whatever. In order to begin this summon the user must grip the blade in his palm and slice the entire length of the blade down his palm, the sword then absorbs the blood and chakra offering, enabling Benihime to come free. You can think of it as a tax fee for a short break, however when the 'offering' of chakra and blood dries up, Benihime is forced back into her weapon.

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Bankai Name: Akuhei: Benihime [Evil Red Princess]

This is the ultimate form that Benihime possesses, the sword becomes a smaller, black katana, granting the user a bonus of a 5% increase on Battoujutsu drawing, which is about an E ranked jutsu increase to the quick drawing technique [use D ranked drawing technique in Bankai and its actually C ranked] This form is only achieved through tough training and obtaining the chakra level of an S –Ranked Shinobi or higher. This mode lasts for up to a limit of 3 posts, to prevent vague attacks and extension of overall time, the user must be very descriptive upon each attack as to not abuse this power.] It is called Akuhei because in Bankai all of Benihime’s evil intentions are brought out to light as if they were her constant thoughts. This makes her lustful, hateful, revengeful, and most of all powerful.

Jutsu [only able to be used with Benihime]:

Name Cane Disintegration
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: None
Rank: D
Description:

Instead of removing the Benihime from the cane shaft the user is able to use a small application of chakra and make the bottom half disintegrate [exposing the blade.] This is usually used during fighting with the cane, the user is fighting and then finds an opportunity to cut his opponent, in which case he uses this jutsu and without having to unsheathe his weapon he is able to pierce/cut his/her opponent.

Name: Benihime Return
Rank: C-S
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: None
Description:

With the flick of your wrist you are able to summon benihime back to your hand, with an effective range depending on chakra expenditure.

C rank = 25ft
B rank = 45ft
A rank = 65 ft
S rank = 125ft

Name: Benihime Recreate
Rank:C
Type:Kenjutsu
Element: None
Description:

By touching a broken piece of Benihime it creates a chakra bond between the other pieces and re connects the blade. This only works so long as the seal is not damaged [which is located in the hilt.] This jutsu also gathers any small fragments that are not found, so long as the handle is in tact.

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Academy Student Rank:

During this rank Benihime’s thoughts are mere suggestions of the sub conscious, whispers in the back of your mind and you have no clue what or who is talking to you, though you are sure that it is something very important. You are wondering why you were given a silly cane and cannot even unlock its release form. You are allowed to flow chakra around the cane and use it as a blunt object and staff. However you do not really have any actual power or control over the actions or thoughts of Benihime.

You strive to understand and yet your rank stops you from doing so. At this rank you can tap into small amounts of Benihime’s chakra and are allowed very small [E ranked] bursts of power [which may or may not make you win academy spars/genin spars] . You have very little chance of escaping from Genjutsu and if you do its only because your panicked and afraid and Benihime reacts for you [however because you lack power you can only escape D ranked Genjutsu, Takes away D ranked chakra.]

Genin Rank:

At this rank you are able to (with a lot of constraint) to release Benihime into her 'unreleased' form, which means you can now draw the blade from the cane. You are a novice at listening to her thoughts, and her voice is all new to your ears. You have a hard time understanding how this “person” got in your weapon and come to understand that she was the voice speaking to you in your dreams and in your sub conscious. Now, you are connected once you grab the handle and your chakra flows within Benihime, however you are only limited to C –Ranked abilities. Now though, Benihime is forever able to withstand a lot of Genin/Academy Student Jutsu[possibly chuunin D ranked jutsu] [Always at the cost of equivalent chakra].

You are learning the basics of the Shuheii Battoujutsu sword drawing technique and Benihime now protects you from D-C ranked genjutsu [always equivalent chakra exchanges]. You cannot unlock the released form until Chuunin, but you are now able to draw the unreleased blade from the cane itself. [The effect of being released from a genjutsu depends on the rping situation and the circumstances that the genjutsu puts you under]

Chuunin Rank:

Now you are able to unlock the released form. The thoughts of Benihime are now heard at full throttle. You can even hear her speak to you in full sentences, her emotions start to seep through and the stronger you think you are the more she takes over your conscious, she cannot shut up, she's in your head and despite any attempt to get rid of her she is constantly there. Attacks that were available to you at Genin are now amplified to your current rank. [E-S jutsu for example work based on your rank or discretion of use, now that you’re a chuunin you can use B ranked force on any Benihime attack (that is able too)] This also apllies to genjutsu or doujutsu (that cause Genjutsu) you can now attempt to break free from Genjutsu at a High C rank or B rank.]

Jounin Rank:

Now at the rank of Jounin you are able to achieve bankai however you cannot use any jutsu while in Bankai. You struggle to understand why Benihime was stuck in that sword, realizing the truth that Benihime is not a sword with a soul but actually a person or summon trapped within her own weapon, the power you feel is not a swords power but her own. If she is broken you can make her whole again [using b ranked chakra]. Each power is now amplified and you are so close to materilization, or her summoning from the sword.

S-Rank:

Now you can talk to Benihime all the time, a vivid mental image is in your head. It appears as if she is sitting right next to you in your waking stages of life, your awake or asleep she is there. Your deeply commited to her and would do almost anything for her. You can summon her from her blade for a short time and now you can use Bankai with jutsu. You have learned the ultimate attack and are able to perform it with ample aptitude. You are proficent at all forms of skill with this weapon and use her wisely.

Origin:

Benihime was once a princess famous for wearing the color red. She was a powerful warrior and long sought after because of her immense power with the mysterious weapon she carried. During the great shinobi wars many clans beseeched her and her fellow summoning friends however they all denied them, not wishing to partake in the affairs of the ninja. However, a very spiteful and hateful ninja who was adept at Fuuinjutsu and Ninjutsu defeated Benihime, sealing her within the very sword she cherised, locking her away within the weapon forever.

It was a long time after that Masaharu Morimoto, the leader of the Shuheii clan found her. She was long ill after waiting for such a long time, desperate to get out of her cage, however she new that this man would not be able to free her, she knew however that if she followed this man that he could lead her to own whom could set her free, even if only for a moment. So, she called out to Masaharu, luring him in with the taint of her power. However she was surprised by this man, it was not power he lusted for but he only wished to set her free. Masaharu knew that if he passed her down threw his clan then perhaps her wish would come true. So, a scroll that was left on the stone tablet in the mountain in which she was enshrimed was signed by Masaharu, making it possible for him to wield her. After many generations the blade finally was passed down to the man who would set her free, even if only for a few moments, even if only to fight.

Age : 31 Posts : 92

Summon: Benihime (Explination)

Name: Benihime [Red Princess]
Rank: S
Appearance:

Contract Type: Blood/Chakra offering
Species: Human (ish)
Elemental Affinity: Wind
Special Abilities/Characteristics: all in the sword jutsu area
Background: all in the sword origin area. Note: She is a summon trapped within her weapon (see sword origin)
Summons Jutsu: all in the sword jutsu area

Background Information

History:

Childhood:

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Genin Arc:

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Age : 31 Posts : 92

Ready for examination!

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- Your clan Style Wind Fist should be ranked D-S not just S. This means that it is a style that only a S-rank ninja can utilize. But if you want only S-ranked clan members to be able to use it then that is fine.

- Palm Offense. Please detail the added strength/damage it causes as it is ranked C-S. It should increase as each rank increases, and this needs to be detailed.

- Palm Defense Shield. You would need to describe the size of each shield per rank not just that it gets bigger, and in comparison to its size what it can protect the user from i.e rocks, at each stage.

- Wind Fist Bloody Knuckles. Change this to D-A rank, and get rid of the fatal wounds and S-rank.

- Your Kenjutsu style should also be ranked D-S if you want lower ranks to be able to utilize it, like your Wind Fist style above.

- With the example of the Jutsu ranking system of the style, it can become very powerful for minimum cost. I would like a major drawback to this style whether it be physical, mental or chakra based.

- Regarding your Skills Information, change your main from Kenjutsu to Weaponary, as we class kenjutsu under weaponary on this site. There is a guide on this if you would like further information.

- Remove all jutsu under your (not Learned) section. They can be added to your profile once you rank up. Please remove them.

- Your sword is very interesting and I like it a lot. The conversion of a bleach sword into Naruto can be hard, but this is done quite well. But the part about Rendoku Sennin and the beast, that will have to be remove. It woudl have to comply with the site storyline.

Quote :: Benihime, being a summon trapped within a sword has a mind/chakra of her own, upon obtaining levels of skill [rank/chakra/training] the user is able to tap into some of her abilities[such as Urahara Kisuke’s Benihime red blast] or chakra. A red explosion of chakra can be extruded or launched from the blade Benihime/ this red blast is Benihime’s personal chakra which is superior to lighting chakra [most, likely not superior to the Raikage’s and on equivalent levels with S – Ranked Kumo shinobi].

Please remove this section, as it is over-powered and not necessary for a the sword which already as a array of abilities. This would also apply to sections following ie. her chakra usage of that etc.

- The only way that your sword could alert you of a genjutsu would be through pain, and chakra. edit it so that every time it alerts you of a genjutsu you form some kind of physical damage, and you can only be alerted to genjutsu of your rank and lower.

- Remove the Red Chakra Blast of your Bankai, for reasons above.

- Heavens Flight Dragon's Inspiration. There is no S+ justu so please edit accordingly. You would have to state the increase in speed that the user gains also.

- All these jutsu that are above your rank which are connected to your sword need to be removed from your application, as you cannot use them. When you obtain that rank they can be added.

Age : 31 Posts : 92

I don't understand why you cannot have jutsu you have not learned yet, however I fixed it. I also appreciate you liking my 'narutoization' of a bleach zanpaktou, thats what mattered most to me. I fixed what you asked and added limits to the Shuheii Battoujutsu style and I fixed it so that the user would feel pain and get a drain in chakra when put under a genjutsu [please read for specific details]. I appreciate you taking the time to look at my profile.

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Not a problem it is a nice application. ^^

Quote :: With the example of the Jutsu ranking system of the style, it can become very powerful for minimum cost. I would like a major drawback to this style whether it be physical, mental or chakra based.

This is what I said. Can you link me to the drawback to using your sword and this style, I cant find it. thanks.

- Also regarding your sword having chakra veins running through it, how much chakra has to be pumped into the sword for use? is it constant, does it need to be supplied all the time, and how much etc. Also if the sword was damaged it would leak your chakra, correct?

Age : 31 Posts : 92

Once the user grips the handle the chakra circulates from his arm to the sword, not loosing any chakra, it just circulates from the sword thorught the body, like blood thorugh the body. If the sword is cracked then it can be fixed via the "recreate" jutsu which is a B ranked jutsu. Though, I guess chakra fills the crack up, recreating the sword via that jutsu. The drawbacks are under Clan information and are in the Shuheii battojutsu style. It is tilted Drawbacks in Bold.

Spoiler:

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Well chakra conducting weapons are B-rank, but considering its connected to a clan I will allow it.

Approved for genin. Nice application.

Welcome to Kumo!

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Unlocked and Moved for upgrade to Kumo Chuunin.

Age : 31 Posts : 92

updated for chuunin...
new jutsu
personality update
age update

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

All New jutsu have to be trained =)

Age : 31 Posts : 92

then why am I allowed to update? ><
why should I have to train for a time arc that was skipped? ><

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Ura-san wrote:: He is muscular for a Genin (having failed once and then he joined the academy late) and typically is seen with his sword/cane Benihime [see weapon template], which was given to him by his father, who was a representative of the Shuheii clan’s council.

You might wanna change that small bit now that your a Chuunin and all...

Age : 31 Posts : 92

god...just an overlook.. ><

edited

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Approved.

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Application Archived due to User Request.