Ultimate Shinobi - A Naruto RPG
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PostSubject: Collapse Collapse EmptySun 12 Dec 2010, 11:31 am
Name: Collapse
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a simple taijutsu move where you require the Byakugan. The user first activates their byakugan and finds a pressure point in the neck. Once done then will hit that point with little strength, this will cause the person to collapse for 1 second.
Link: [When making new jutsus you must train them. Read the Training Page in rules. post the link here for admins to check]

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PostSubject: Re: Collapse Collapse EmptySun 12 Dec 2010, 12:50 pm
Problems with this jutsu, firstly its an E-rank?!?! Secondly, it can ultimately end in an opponents death, why is this? To have somebody collapse for ten seconds and at close range it would be easy to then finish the job. Thirdly, in battle ten seconds can be extended across two or three posts between both opponents.
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PostSubject: Re: Collapse Collapse EmptySun 12 Dec 2010, 12:55 pm
Hmm true, I was thinking it would be D-Rank? Also I was pondering to put it at 1 second, it is just a simple defensive jutsu just to help the user flee or something.
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PostSubject: Re: Collapse Collapse EmptyMon 13 Dec 2010, 4:43 pm
It seems good. But remember that 1 second won't even allow the person to collapse completely before they can get up again. Razz

Either way, approved for training.
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PostSubject: Re: Collapse Collapse EmptySat 18 Dec 2010, 12:12 pm
Training Done-Second Post
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PostSubject: Re: Collapse Collapse EmptySat 18 Dec 2010, 12:23 pm
Approved.
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