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PostSubject: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyMon 13 Dec 2010, 3:27 am

Basic Information:

Name: Aburame Fugi

Secondary Title: Magi

Age:13

Gender: Male

Physical Appearance:
Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Fugi11


Standing at an avarage 5"2 Fugi has a small body and only stands at the height that he does because of his long skinny legs, He has slender fingers that often rub against each other. His slightly untrimmed fingernails are usually hidden by his thick black gloves. He has thin arms with muscles that look as though they were drawn onto his forearms his legs share a similar look when they are not covered by his corall black sweat pants. Although Fugi's neck is usually covered by his trenchcoat beneath the oversized collar is a slender tan instrument of intellagence he uses his neck to crane over walls at least when needed.

His Deep Green eyes send most a drift in a sea of color before they're awakend by his voice. Always trying to look his best his stright black hair hangs low in his eyes, His green jacket mostly draped over his sholders is his only protection to the cold other than a white whisp of a shirt which bears the Aburame emblem on the back. His black hair was not naturally black and is died every week, If this tradition is not kept up his black will fade revealing his white hair. His coral pants are sitched with black coral reef scraps over the slik cloth they provide little but some protection to the elements and enemys. His leather blue boots Bear Great resemblance to those of the hidden leaf academy students, His boots however have a very light plate of iron between the material.

Personality:
Fugi loves to kick back and relax but is anything except lazy his will burns brighter then the starting flame at a triathalon. At times his mouth gets him in trouble because he voices his opinion whenever he has one, The intense gaze of his eyes is broken by his happy go lucky voice. Though this behavior is not typical of an aburame he is not considered and outsider among his people, Even though it will look impossible to some people he will do it because he is too stubborn to give up. The same goes with fights. There is no word such as giving up or running away from a fight in his vocabulary, Fugi has but one Ideal Carpe Deim he dislikes party poopers and People who kill for no reason. Although he is a lighthearted sprit Fugi can take his anger to an extreme when asked why he is so happy all the time he answers "Simple if i dont laugh i'd cry". This very phrase shows how strong Fugi is inside and out his mental state of mind is strong. He doesn't let people intemidate him. his dark past is somewhat shoruded in mystery as most of his records were lost with the downfall of Konoha, What is know is that he was uprooted which would scar most 4 year-olds
but Fugi wears a smile which stupifys even his parents.
Catch PhraseBe Childlike Not Childish

Clan:Aburame

Rank Information:
Rank :
Genin

Village Affiliation:
Kiri The Mist Village,

Special Information:

Character Speciality:]/b]
[b]Main:
Ninjutsu
Sub:Genjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Water
Sub: Fire

Special Characteristics:
His IQ Is slightly above those of other genin
Skill Information: N/A

Skill Information:

Spoiler:

[center]Background Information

History:
Birth Arc~~~
On January 21 in the land of fire a warrior was born, His Name Fugi Aburame being an aburame after being christened with his name the aburame bug ritual was initiated like the many before him Fugi wailed intensely when the bugs crawled over him. His mother looked away his father however looked into the tear filled eyes of his newborn son still in shock that he was a father, Lost in his own thoughts a clansmen shook him. "The ritual is done your son is officially an aburame" Back in the arms of his mother Fugi's crying had stoped the young boy yawned and drifted to sleep as his parents looked on filled with joy, happyness and suddenly dread within all the excitement the two young parents forgotten what they had done, The newborn was born into a village in shambles the parents looked at each other and excepted their mission. That night it was decided with the hokage the day fugi turned 4 years old they would move to Kiri the village hidden in the mist.


Childhood Arc~~~
All the young 4 year old could remember was bags
lots of bags, the boy was picked up by his mother and smiled at
with entusiasm the young boy screched with joy his mother pecked his cheek with her soft lips his father cam into view with two small napsacks under his arms they left out the empty house his father softly touched a tree outside which had overgrown onto there roof. A Year long journey to the hidden mist village had embarked along the way food at times were scarce yet the bugs that lived within the three protected them after 12 months on the road the three reached a Damp bridge which led to Kiri the hidden mist village. 3 years later at age 8 the boy was enrolled into the Mist village academy, as his age increased so did his Mind he finally cameto grips with why they moved here after the 8th hokage died the leaf village fell apart only base clans remained the aburame branched out to different villages trying to find somthing to revive the once great village
This boy was Fugi Aburame and this is his story.

Teen arc~~~~~
Fugi sky-rocketed to the head of his class he was well like by those younger then him and well respected by his classmates, he mostly kept to himself which at times led to being asked a question to see if Fugi was even paying attention.
And in truth he wasn't by this age (13) he had a strong partnership with the bugs inside himself, they listened and told him what they needed to know. On the date of his birth
January 21 as fireworks went off in the quiet background he called home he opened a letter he had gotten early that day, It stated that he had been approved and was waiting for a team
Fugi Dropped the letter and jumped happily "I did it I did it!!!"
A bettle crawled from under his light green jacket Fugi looked at it a calmness in his eyes "No We did it". Fugi ran to rejoin his mother to his suprise they already knew and had bought him a a present, His very own baby blue all purpose backpack for missions With tears of joy in his eyes Fugi went out to practice his jutsu

RP Sample
(From my old now shutdown site P.O.T.S)
When Kruno heard who's team he was on he fell stright out of the tree "OH Hell no No way be i'm not going to be with those loser's team" But the Sensei had already gone "Damn" He say's quietly And Rushed off He arrived before either of them so He slowly dozed off. His Mother's Deafing scream's His father Yelling at his mother to get him and run.
His mother said to a 4 year old Kruno "You must Survive Run!! Run!!".

The sound's of his father Cursing As he died in his last breath then his mother Grabbed the Kunai, The criminal Smacked the kunai Into the wall a chip of it broke off. He Killed his mother As she Breathed her final Breath She said "Kruno We Lov.....".

She had died Kruno Backed away in fear Then the crimnal Said " Your turn little man". Kruno Began to Weep " No plese i'll do anything just don't-" "sorry kid" The criminal Said " But i suggest that you take your mother's advice Run." Run and never return......".

Kruno Fled The crimnal's words ringing in his head Run and Never Return then he continued to run untill he had reached the leaf village. There he did work saving up for a house untill then he lived on the street's 3 year's later in winter a man gave him 10,000 Yro he uesed 5000 of it to buy a house then 4000 for the academy.
Then he Awoke with a start He blinked as he swore he saw his parents


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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyMon 13 Dec 2010, 10:09 am

- You have a bit of coding issues that need to be fixed.

- Your jutsu are too small and have sizing issues, please fix.

- Need another paragraph for personality and physical appearance

- Use Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Insert image for your appearance instead of a link.

- Space your history out neater and extend the paragraphs slightly.

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YuskeFudo
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyFri 31 Dec 2010, 9:02 am

Got it and thks 4 app check
DONE
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptySun 02 Jan 2011, 11:48 pm

YuskeFudo wrote:

Character Speciality:]/b]
[b]Main:
Genjutsu
Sub:Medical

• Because you have a Genjutsu and Medical combination; you would not be able to have any Ninjutsu techniques with the exception of the Academy Ninjutsu techniques. So, that means no Aburame techniques.


YuskeFudo wrote:
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent.


• This is an incomplete Jutsu.




• You seem to have a lot of duplicates in your Jutsu area; listing some techniques you already have. Please go through them and pluck out the spares.

• It'd also be quite helpful if you fixed a few things in your roleplay sample. Like proper punctuation and spelling. Maybe not use as many spaces so it appears as a nicer looking paragraph instead of just a bunch of stray sentences.

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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyMon 03 Jan 2011, 4:13 am

Yes Mam thank u 4 checking and i will get on that
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyMon 03 Jan 2011, 4:22 am

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyMon 03 Jan 2011, 4:45 am

- Still have some coding issues that need to be fixed throughout the application.

- One more paragraph for appearance and personality.

- Some of though's Aburame technique's are custom to Adam, do you have his permission to use them?
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyMon 03 Jan 2011, 11:20 am

No i do not so could you point those out so i can remove them
And i will get on that TY 4 app check Tood
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyMon 03 Jan 2011, 11:38 am

Bug Paralysis, Bug Wall, Bug Spear I think. But you would have to clarify with Adam. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyMon 03 Jan 2011, 11:39 am

Gotcha hold on almost finished with coding
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Done
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyFri 07 Jan 2011, 5:03 am

Several Jutsu are still not coded correctly
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyFri 07 Jan 2011, 5:10 am

Ok Ty For the check Ree
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RDY and waiting
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyFri 07 Jan 2011, 6:05 am

- Still need another paragraph for personality (could break up your appearance paragraph into two to solve that also Smile)

- Still coding issue with your character speciality section with ninjutsu, genjutsu

- With those aburame technique's you didn't have to necessarily remove them. If you ask Adam for permission to use them I am sure he would be more than happy too. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] Aburame, Fugi [Kiri Genin] EmptyFri 07 Jan 2011, 6:08 am

Ty i Smell an Approval coming up
Thanks 4 app check Tood
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DOne]
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Still coding issues but mehhhh Approved.
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