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Yazu
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PostSubject: Beez - Second Mission Completed Beez - Second Mission Completed EmptyMon 13 Dec 2010, 8:02 pm
Character Name: Kaguya Beez
Rank: Genin
Village: Kiri
Mission Bulletin: Kiri Bulletin
Mission Link: https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/the-village-hidden-in-the-mist-kirigakure-no-sato-f155/barking-mad-mission-p-t2556.htm#26805
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PostSubject: Re: Beez - Second Mission Completed Beez - Second Mission Completed EmptyTue 14 Dec 2010, 1:47 am
Official Grading: 3/5 + 2/5 = 5/10.
Unofficial Grading: 14/20.
Comments: This may have looked better as two larger posts as opposed to the four smaller ones. Your grammar and spelling seemed pretty good, I can't recall finding any mistakes. As Aaron stated on the evaluation of your first mission, pushing your boundaries will earn you more points; especially from me. Detail helps both quality and quantity. Keep that in mind.

5 Mission Points awarded.
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