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Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin]

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PostSubject: Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 10 Mar 2010, 5:59 pm

Basic Information:

    Name:
    Keitaro Inuzaka
    Secondary Title:
    N/A
    Age:
    15
    Gender:
    male
    Physical Appearance:
    Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] Cap03616
    (Facail) Keitaro's skin is tan colored. His eyes are of the color of blue like the sky. His hair is of dark black in the same style of sasuke's from naruto.
    (Torso prt 1-Stomach and back) Keitaro wares a blue rope draped over his black vest that he wares to be like the rest of his famliy. On his back {under the nodochi {long sword used by skilled swordsmen} lies his clan symbol known as the Ni Buki (two weapons). On the front part of his stomach he has two silver straps one on each shoulder. At his lower stomach area he wares a blue belt which has symbols of circles going around it. The belt is tied around his waist.
    (Torso prt 2-Arms and wrists)Keitaro wares a blue rope draped over his black vest that he wares to blend in with his famliy. Under the robes he has a wrist gaurd wraped in a white wrap with the symbol of the village he left marked out in red.
    (Bottoms)Keitaro wares a blue rope draped over his black vest that he wares to blend in with the rest of his famliy. under the robe he wares ninja pants that are baggy and the color of black. At the side of his right leg he has a small straight blade tied to his waist.
    (Shoes)Keitaro wares black shoes cut out like sandles with a white strip going from the heel to the ankle

    Catch Phrase:
    Does your character have any catch phrases? Optional.


Clan Information:

Clan Name: Inuzaka

Clan Location: Konoha

Clan Traits: This clan has a large infatuation with the dog species. Rarely will a clan member be seen with out their canine companion which all of them have. All of their clan jutsu incorporate the usage of their dogs and could almost be considered another ninja with the level they are utilized at, quite often using the same jutsu as their human master. The dogs are often regular sized puppies, nothing to large from the beginning, and are usually in this stage for the duriation of the time the ninja is a genin, and part of their chunin. When the ninja is about 15, the puppy will go through a giant growth spurt, at least quadrupling in size. These dogs are bred specially and do not age in normal dog years and can live as long as a human. This was done so that a clansmen would not have to constantly replace companions because they often grow very attached to their dogs.

Inuzaka clan members also take on some very dog like characteristics in their body and also in their personality. Typically they are very brash and up front, being very animalistic and instinctual. This can cause them to come off as confrontational. Their canines are sharper then most, resembling that of dogs, and they have increased senses of smell, being able to track like a dog with little effort. They also always have red face paint on, which is the symbol of their clan.

* Must have Taijutsu and Ninjutsu as specialties

Kekkei Genkai: -

Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Man Beast Clone
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: A modified version/mix of a Transformation Technique and a clone technique, this jutsu, unique to the Inuzuka clan, allows a canine-user to transform their animal companion into a perfect copy of themselves. When combined with the Four Legs Technique, the user and the animal become virtually impossible to tell apart, since both act equally animalistic. Like any transformation, the jutsu can be broken by identifying and attacking the animal, thus dispelling the transformation

Name: Four Legs Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: This technique grants animal-like accelerated fighting instinct and reflexes. By stretching chakra around one's entire body and moving on all fours, one obtains super-high speed, like that of a wild animal. Taught only to the members of the Inuzuka clan, this technique forms the basis of a Inuzuka clan member's Taijutsu fighting style, and will add even more to their feral-like appearances; their canine teeth and their finger-and-toenails grow to claw-like length, their eyes become more wild. When under the effects of this jutsu, an Inuzuka will display feats of physical strength, speed, and endurance when they are in this state. The form is best suited for using and supporting the ferocious hit-and-run tactics that the Inuzuka clan are known well for.

Name: Tunneling Fang
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: The user spins at a ferocious speed and delivers many powerful beast-like attacks when contact is made with the target. This attack is done alone but it can be done with a partner, making it more effective.

Name: Fang Over Fang
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: The user and his partner spin at a ferocious speed and deliver many powerful beast-like attacks when contact is made with the target. The force of this attack is strong enough to drill through stone. This attack can be done alone, although it is less effective.

Name: Man Beast Combination: Two Headed Wolf
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: Using a modified form of a Combination Transformation, the Inuzaka and their companion transform themselves into a large, two-headed wolf.

Name: Wolf Fang Over Fang
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: A way to be able to track the target with out using site has to be in place for this to work. After this t, both the User and his companion use Man Beast Combination : Double-Headed Wolf to become a large, two-headed wolf. The two then perform a much more powerful Dual Piercing Fang attack. Like the lesser version, they spin rapidly to attack their target. Unlike the previous version, however, they move so rapidly that they can't see where they're going, hence the reason for the earlier for tracking with out sight, which allows them to track their opponents usually by scent. This attack is powerful enough to cut a person in two, and even tear through steel. Even if the attack misses, its speed is so great that the surrounding air can slice like a blade. Such power is not without its drawbacks, however. Not only does this attack effectively blind both users for its duration, but it tires them such that they can only perform it three times at chunin rank.


History:
Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] 200px-Inuzuka_Symbol.svg


The Inuzuka clan (犬塚一族, Inuzuka Ichizoku) or Inuzuka family (犬塚家, Inuzuka-ke) is known for their use of dogs (some clan members prefer wolves) as fighting companions. Clan members are apparently given their own canine partner or partners when they reach a certain age. Thereafter, the shinobi and his/her dog(s) are practically inseparable. Clan members have distinctive red fang markings on their cheeks, animalistic eyes, and enlarged canine teeth. It would seem that due to the bond between a Inuzuka clan member and their canine partner(s), their chakra is allowed to mix and is shared between them, adding a feral appearance to the human partners, and makes a bond between then that affords them the use of the clan's collaboration-style techniques, such as the Dual Piercing Fang technique

Rank Information:

    Rank:
    genin
    Village Affiliation:
    konoha


Special Information:

    Character Speciality:
    You may pick 2 skills: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Weaponry, Medical, Puppetry, Fuuinjutsu
    Main:ninjutsu
    Sub:taijutsu
    Elemental Affinity:
    What element(s) your character possesses, no more than two
    Main: lightning
    Sub:
    Special Characteristics:
    A tatto of an X on the back of his neck and a jashin symbol scared on his chest.


Skill Information:
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.

Equipment:

Name: Sand Gourd
Rank: D
Type: Personal Equipment
Natural Abilities: Just used to hold sand. Can hold 100 lbs of sand. It is rather light how ever being 50 lbs its self. Keitaro keeps it strapped to his back for easy use. And the gourd is just a gourd enjoy

[list]Jutsu Template:

basic
Spoiler:

clan jutsu
Spoiler:

Link: [When making new jutsus you must train them. Read the Training Page in rules. post the link here for admins to check]
Medical use/Bastardized use: [Only add this if the technique is a Medical jutsu. Describe what qualifies this jutsu as medical. What is it's medical use or how was it bastardized from its original medical use, as in the case of poisons, etc.][/quote]



Spoiler:


Background Information

    History:
    birth arc
    Keitaro was born he was born in the middle of the thrid great shinobi war what he saw made him want to stay out of the shinobi world but his parents urged him to become a shinobi to kill so he enterd the academy younger then most at the age of four in witch he learned the basics he stayed away from most but lashed out at the pepole who came near him he graduated at 7 and was put on a team with two boy his sensai kept him away from his brother and sister.Through the academy keitaro was had his faithful dog inuyasha -i know i know but i'mma to lazy to think of a name- who was givein to him by his father.

    genin arc
    There sensai gave them the bell test Keitaro came up with the plan after seeing one of his teammates speed and knowing of the hyuuga's infamous doujutsu and with his own clan jutsu they got the bell's after a plan of having the fast one use his speed to trick sensai into falling into a trap Keitaro had built where sensai was stuck then witch the hyuuga would trigram sensai to where he couldent move to then witch when he finally got unstuck Keitaro ran and grabed the bell's kakashi passed them and they went home for the next year they completed 50 D-rank missions and 4 C-rank.But his team died on a C rank that turned out to be a SS rank with a missing ninja that was jounin lvl he killed Keitaros team mates quickly but his sensai killed him self and the missing ninja. He is now waiting for a new team while he trains in his famliy's clan jutsu

    Role-Play Sample:
    OOC:This is what i normally do but my post will most likely be wips

    Shadow was sitting in his office doing paperwork as he sighed as he put some more paper in the approved section he looked out the window the moon was out he smiled he loved looking at the moon it calmed him down when he was angry made him happy when he was sad as he looked back to the pile of work infront of him he sighed once more and saw something "Oh damn." he said as he saw the peace treaty between sun and moon was still here where the old paper for more war between them that the old kage had made was at "OH DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN I SENT THE WRONG PAPER TO SUN VILLAGE!" he yelled getting up and getting his kage rob's off ran out the door to the village gate to be stoped by the chuunin "I dont have time for this." he said knocking the chuunin out and running towards sun village the peace treaty in his pocket as he was stoped by a few bandit's he quicky knocked them all out and killed them as he again started to run again it hit night time the air was cold he stoped in a bar and got a drink to help him continue to run.


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PostSubject: Re: Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] EmptyThu 11 Mar 2010, 8:50 pm

can some one check this when they get the chance?
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PostSubject: Re: Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 12 Mar 2010, 1:47 am

RP sample is Genin at most.

Capitalization is needed for everything.

Place all your jutsu in respective spoilers, one for fire, one for lightning, ne for basic, and one for Taijutsu.

Go under the canon clan thread and refind the Nara clan. Open the spoiler and copy the green writing in there. Repaste that under your clan section, as it will give you the correct bolding and picture.

Remove anything you are not using, suc as the weapons and items template.

Personally, I would edit this application to Genin level, and it would be approved much faster.
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PostSubject: Re: Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 12 Mar 2010, 3:27 am

Double post, but I just noticed this.

Your looks need to be another paragraph longer, and you need a personality.
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PostSubject: Re: Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 12 Mar 2010, 7:00 pm

Each history arc needs atleast another paaragraph.

Your jutsu need to be atleast 3 lines, atleast for the lightning ones.

Also, since your Inuzuka, you might want to put your companion in your profile as well (Something like Akamaru).
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PostSubject: Re: Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 12 Mar 2010, 11:02 pm

bump
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PostSubject: Re: Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] Inuzaka, Keitaro [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 12 Mar 2010, 11:09 pm

Not sure entirely on how much personality or appearance is required for your dog, but beyond that, Im gonna say approved.
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