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| Subject: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Sun 14 Feb 2010, 9:28 pm | |
| Basic Information:
Name: Yazura, Narus (Yah-Zuh-Rah, Nah-Ru-ss) Secondary Title: The Dark God. Darkus. Age: 17 Gender: Male Physical Appearance:
Narus is a slender male with an over the average amount of muscle. Every part of his body has muscles from every part of it. His chest, legs, arms, stomach, everywhere has a muscle he can flex. But, they're slender and can't be shown as much as most of his clan mates. Being of a lower rank, his face shows no marking of an upgraded one. Having white locks of hair on his head, which spike out on the sides of his head, and slightly forward on the front, is a rare coloration of hair within the clan. His face is perfectly sculpted to show many of his masculine features, such as his piercing blue eyes, his sculpted nose, and lips.
His main attire is a basic set of clothes, being of a black strapped shirt, a bluish over-jacket, the jacket has a few blackened marks on the lower part of it, along with the entire bottom being shredded and torn from previous encounters. His pants are tight jeans, shaded to that of black, along with his shoes being black, shoe laced. The basic structure of his clothing would either be of what was previously explained, or something dark.
Personality: His personality is a dark, black switched personality kind. He has three sets of emotions, basic ones, which are considered, "Normal" "Shy" and "Battle-Happy." His normal mood setting is based on the basic everyday life of his clan in Kumogakure no Sato. It consists of a tad bit of laziness around missions, daily life around the village, and so forth. His usual emotions shown are Boredom, Laziness, and Pity. He doesn't care much for missions that are too easy for him, he thinks himself as someone better than mainly other shinobi. Due to his increased strength, he thinks so.
On his Shy emotion, near the women category, he can get extremely shy around girls with just their looks. He's easily swayed by the bodies of women, due to his father being of such a perversion. He'll look towards a girl and think of a way to get her to get closer. But either way he's bad at making up lines for such occasions. Whether being shy or not, he'll try either way to get a girl in his bed. Even being underage.
Battle Happy emotions are easy to identify as insane emotions based on the lust for battle. Narus's lust can only be described as blood thirsty, insane amounts of want for shredding someone in two. With his skill with swords, he can accomplish this with ease. When he cuts someone down, he only wants the lust to do it again, and again, until his lust is satisfied with blood. His desire is mainly in the battlefield, where he can obtain such of substance.
Catch Phrases: "Wanna feel my blade, Bitch?" "Come on, come at me." "Try me." "The Yazura love to rape, Lets rape you next." "No where left to run, No where left to hide, Time to rape." "Come on, strip down bitch, I wanna see some ***s."
Clan Information:
Clan Name: Yazura. Clan Location: Kumogakure no Sato. - Village Hidden in the Clouds. Clan Traits: Immense Physical Strength/Chakra Empowerment. Kekkei Genkai: Leader in Training. (For Narus.) Secret Clan Jutsu: N/A History: At the beginning of the Yazura, it's being was mysterious. Was it just constantly bulking on muscle? No. Was it just using all the time in the world to strengthen the body? No. This was something unique. Strength was born, Yazura were born strong. During the first years of the discovery of the Bloodline, many strong ninja were found. Such physical and special power made the line unique. No other clan had the abilities to have optimized amounts of the stuff, they were considered gods. Every last one of them. During many of the following years and Generations, they learned more and more about the line as it went on. Medical Shinobi, Puppeteers, Fuuinjutsu was regarded as special chakra-based specialties for the ones steering towards those professions, the ones that held the power to use such.
But, during current years, an erupting force came about it's creation. A godly being that held both powers in his hand. One that held power to do anything he pleased. The clan leader was born and raised within it's clan walls. He is known as the God of Annihilation, the clan's most Revered person. During some many battles in the past, many ninja had fallen to the hands of this one man. The lust of war was immense. And so was the clan's.
History Part 2:
The Getsura Ryoku is the rarest of all Kekkei Genkai in the world of Naruto. It's abilities are unique within the clan to have both Physical and Chakra-based power, beyond that of regular Shinobi. Godly beings with power beyond normal comprehension. One side of the clan were considered beings of pure strength, having nothing but Raw power in their muscle mass, using their small chakra pools for extreme powerful attack. But on the other end of the Spectrum, the clan members had little Physical prowess and had extreme amounts of chakra, but additional power in Chakra-based specialties. Conjuring Ninjutsu within the side of the with such was basic, every clan member with such had the specialty, along with some few made techniques.
In very rare occasions, a Yazura leader is born with both amounts of power, Physical and Mental abilities. But, at half power, the leader is skilled in both aspects of power. He or she may have the ability to conjure Ninjutsu and Slash down enemies with strength of gods. Power, Stamina, Chakra Pools, Intellect. All traits of a leader, even as a Leader, there was a drawback of having so much power in one being, The devastation of releasing it. Although other clan members are based on one side of power, either Physical power or Chakra Power, It was never clear on how both sides would have such a leader. Being gods of power, they were unmatched by any clan. No clan would match them. Clan Details: Closed.
Rank Information:
Rank: Chuunin. Village Affiliation: Kumogakure no Sato.
Special Information:
Character Speciality: Main: Weaponry. Sub: Ninjutsu. Elemental Affinity: Main: Raiton. Sub: Doton. Special Characteristics: -
Jutsu: The 3 Basic Academy Jutsu
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Other commonly known Techniques
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique Rank: D Element: N/A Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Background Information
History:
Birth Arc
After being born in the Kumogakure no Sato hospital. His mother was happy at his birth, being of one of more softer sides of the Yazura clan, gentle nudges of the cheek, playful jumps and so forth while still in the same hospital. She was happy that her baby was so healthy, and was all so strong to withstand that dormant power inside him. She knew at the moment her baby would be strong, very. The hospital didn't know it at the time, nor did his mother, but he had a small leak of power, that let him hold or move things only a little earlier. His eyes were a soft tint of crimson, with a small streak of white around the edges. It was rare, for any Yazura to actually possess such eyes, but for now, the clan would accept him the way it was. And he had one trait, that hadn't been revealed, not just yet.
Childhood:
Narus was the quiet-type when he was about 2 years old. In his previous year, he had been treated well for his strength. His hair had only begun to grow over his head. It was a shade of gray and crimson, it was a perfectly shifting color. It shifted with his moods, but the only mood he had at age 2 was happy. He had been treated very well, and he hoped to of been a good student in the academy when he reached of age, but for now, he would wait for the moment of greatness. But most of it is pure mystery to even his own memories, not one part beyond two to five would be known to him.
Pre-academy:
By the time he reached the age of 5, he had been practicing the art of his clan, moving around with a blade at hand, swinging it around. Narus was playing around with that, slashing targets he placed on trees, and moved along with the wind, practicing the way of the sword. It was nice, being able to practice on his own. But he really wanted his father to teach him. Yet that wouldn't happen, his father was dead, and now, he had to use his own tactical alliance to take matters in his own hands. His mother always helped him with meals and training, cooking him healthy meals with the utmost perfect ingredients, it was perfect. He had a mother who cared for him, and a sister and brother who also did. Friends of his, Saruno, Kairi, and Kuroyami Kazura were also like family to him, helping out with training. But for now, he would simply help them all out with whatever he could do.
Class:
At the first part of the first year at the academy, he met his siblings in the class as well. It was good to have family along side of him. Yet most of them were at their last year, so Narus would have to do his best in tactical kinds of ways to get up to them before they graduate. Utilizing his chakra in place, his skill in weaponry at hand, he was awesome at it.
Utilizing his chakra in many ways, passing the art of Transformation in only weeks of practice, with help from his distant friend, Saruno Kazura. Saruno had helped him into the ways of using his chakra with the greatest of ease, showing him how to channel it and everything. He was a Kazura, yet Narus was an Yazura. A different clan with different Bloodline traits, but for now, he was taught everything by his family. His mother showed him how to use the Bunshin no jutsu, and use it to perfection, since she was half-kazura, on her father's side. Yes, even his great grandfather showed him techniques from his times, over 500 years ago. Yeah, the Yazura is amazing in some specks, but also some drawback.
Graduation:
At the graduation of the Academy, he was ready, ready to pull out a good technique from scratch. Pushing his chakra from every corner of his being, he summoned up at least 5 clones, Bunshin no jutsu. His teachers placed them at passed, since they were identical at the least. Every last speck was made into perfection.
Ninja Arc
Genin:
At the time of his Genin carrier, he was moved to the Kumogakure no Sato area, where he would be appointed a perfect Sensei for him. His sensei's name was something, but he couldn't remember much. Not at all. He was simply a newly formed genin, passing his Bunshin no Jutsu test and going into the Genin state. He was truly something to pass the academy at the age of 9, and now he would begin his life as a true shinobi to the day of his death.
Nature Kicks, Hard:
At first, none of his teammates liked him, not one bit. He was something to behold, his hair was multicolored when he changed mood, and his nature finally showed itself. At one time of his Genin carrier, he was rushed to the hospital after on a mission to protect a bridge builder from death from an A ranked missing ninja. The battle was hard, fighting for his life with every last Kunai knife, Shurican blade, a huge blade, massive power, insane strength, and weapons beyond. Boom. The missing ninja fell with great power being struck through him, and from that moment on, he was a true shinobi to behold. His teammates finally grew to like Narus, in some ways, more than others.
Chuunin: Coming soon.
Role-Play Sample: (Yes, this is from US 1, a Traveling topic post. =3 ) The walkways were filthy with dirt and grime, the metal buildings around him making him feel devilishly uncomfortable. He was in a town where Metal was a common substance, but, within the area, his chakra sense bounced off everything, and couldn't pinpoint where to stand, or anywhere. He couldn't sense anyone's chakra which made him feel far too much uncomfortable. His wings were folded silently against his back, his hair swaying with each footstep he took on the ground below him. It was far too quiet for his tastes, making him look back and forth between left and right.
A few silent footsteps were heard behind his form, his head twirling towards the noise within just a flinching motion of his body. His sword was drawn, in an offensive stance. He was jumped up to the edge right now, even the smallest thing could tick him off. But from his view, only a shadow of something had appeared in the metal area, his dark aura beginning to lift itself. He didn't know what to do, he couldn't sense anything at all, until a small sense of someone else's chakra appeared behind him.
Shifting his waist only so much, his footwork stepping only to the ground so softly, his giant blade blocking the kunai coming towards him, being wielded by a very large Shinobi. The man before him was taller than he was, but only so much more built by his stature. Someone like that would seem to be strong enough to knock a normal sword down, but Yuui wasn't like that, she was strong, the Second strongest Blade of Chaos out there. Simply twisting it's motions only so much, a small blaze on it's right side, down the red markings on it, pushed the man back a bit far on the melted ground. He never liked this place, too metallicy for his taste.
Simply looking down towards his shadow, then up towards the sun, he noticed what time it was. Damnit. He thought, knowing he was going to be late for his little 'Accidental' run in with a few Missing ninja he got information about. Taking out 2 missing ninja was something to do, but maybe he had a chance to join them, maybe have some kicks killing people. Hmph.
Simply flickering behind the man, his battle cry being loud and fierce, his blade raised to the sky and pounded downwards, he showed no mercy. Massive flames came upwards from Yuui as it slammed against the kunai of the man, watching as it snapped it in half with just one push of the blade in his hand, made the man simply shiver in a split second. The expression was priceless to see from his opinion, his grin showing down to the man before the blade struck through the center of his body. Gruesome.
Blood flew everywhere as the sword cut through the center of the man and down till it cut through the middle of where his legs were connected, sending the two halves of the man to slide outwards and spray blood on the small area around them. But as his blade touched the ground just once, a small pant came from him, seeing as Yuui took a good amount of his chakra from that attack.
God she was so annoying when he was trying to just make a simple kill, not make a giant version of his Kenjutsu. He let himself sigh a bit before standing back up, his hands on his back as he crackled it some. Fighting weak Jounin level ninja never woke him up right, it was too much of a hassle to try and get fully awakened. His alertness and stamina was out of the normal S ranked standards, way out, and even half-asleep he would be able to act normally. Though he preferred sleeping on days like these. He turned a bit towards the forest before him now, the senses of his chakra sensory coming back as the metal area was off of his aura.
He only sensed a couple figures in the distance, their chakra signatures being of a high rank, and some low ranked. Maybe he was late for something? He never knew, he never paid much attention, even when on his own information mission.
A light sigh came from his pale lips as he began to move his way towards the forest, Yuui being set back into the large sheath on his back, the blood being absorbed into the blade as if by some weird magic. It wasn't, it was Yuui, she craved for blood. And Blood was what she was going to get, one way or another.
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| | | Vegapunk
Posts : 2032
| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Wed 17 Feb 2010, 7:50 am | |
| Edit this to a chuunin rank Zane. ^^ |
| | | .Pride
Age : 32 Posts : 276
| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Tue 23 Feb 2010, 3:53 am | |
| Edited. << |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Tue 23 Feb 2010, 6:11 am | |
| Note that you are only a B-ranked chuunin like everyone else so edit that. You will only be able to use B-rank jutsu and below, for now. |
| | | .Pride
Age : 32 Posts : 276
| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Sun 07 Mar 2010, 5:50 pm | |
| THERE
Finally friggin' done. -.-
I used a history from one of my other characters, short as f*ck. But eh, deal with it. |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Sun 07 Mar 2010, 10:12 pm | |
| Kenjutsu is considered part of Weaponry.
Therefore main specialty will be Weaponry (Kenjutsu/something else), and your sub specialty will Ninjutsu, or something like that. |
| | | .Pride
Age : 32 Posts : 276
| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Sun 07 Mar 2010, 10:13 pm | |
| Fixed? |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Mon 08 Mar 2010, 8:55 am | |
| - You will have to fill out your clan section with the complete clan profile please. i.e the one that was accepted.
- Quote :
- Special Characteristics: Abnormal Speed.[ 50%.]
This will need at least a paragraph of description like everyone else has. Why do you have this level of speed? compared to what? etc. 50% increase is quite large, I will make you edit it accordingly to how well done your description is.
- Is it part of your clan to not have any jutsu? If so, you must have at least the academy jutsu for chuunin rank. |
| | | .Pride
Age : 32 Posts : 276
| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Mon 08 Mar 2010, 10:43 pm | |
| Finished? And Removed the Speed thing. |
| | | Uchiha Osore
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Mon 08 Mar 2010, 11:01 pm | |
| You need at least three paragraphs per history arc to be a Chunnin, in your paragraph size. The site expects alot of its pre-promoted Chunnin. You've tried to circumvent this by splitting up the arcs but thats still not sufficient. You should have a three paragraph pre-academy arc, academy arc, Genin arc, and something in your Chunnin. Or make it so that your history totals at least 10 paragraphs.
Also, you don't post 700 words per post on average, we've all seen you post, so unless you intend to never drop below 500 on your posts I would highly suggest modifying this a more realistic RP Sample. Its not good to lie when people are watching for your posts to match your sample.
Your catch phrases are also highly inappropriate, rape isn't very likely to be considered funny by everyone so I would highly suggest removing that. |
| | | .Pride
Age : 32 Posts : 276
| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Tue 09 Mar 2010, 12:11 am | |
| - Hage wrote:
- You need at least three paragraphs per history arc to be a Chunnin, in your paragraph size. The site expects alot of its pre-promoted Chunnin. You've tried to circumvent this by splitting up the arcs but thats still not sufficient. You should have a three paragraph pre-academy arc, academy arc, Genin arc, and something in your Chunnin. Or make it so that your history totals at least 10 paragraphs.
[green]Do I have to shift ANOTHER history or make a really noobish one for this one? Who knows, I'll TRY i Guess...I'm not good at histories. -.-'[/green]
Also, you don't post 700 words per post on average, we've all seen you post, so unless you intend to never drop below 500 on your posts I would highly suggest modifying this a more realistic RP Sample. Its not good to lie when people are watching for your posts to match your sample.
[green]LIES BISH! I've gotten Far better with my Noobish posting in the past month or two. I post around 500-800 words a post. now. e.e[/green]
Your catch phrases are also highly inappropriate, rape isn't very likely to be considered funny by everyone so I would highly suggest removing that.
[green]Awww..........Fine.[/green] |
| | | Uchiha Osore
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Tue 09 Mar 2010, 12:20 am | |
| You broke your coding there, and thats what we've been enforcing on the others, so thats what we have to enforce in this case as well. As for the RP Sample, thats fine, if you honestly intend to not drop below 500-600 words in your posts then go ahead, but you will be watched about your posting level. You're free to edit it to a lower amount, but if you want it that high then I won't stop you. |
| | | Hugh
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Mon 29 Mar 2010, 2:27 pm | |
| Archived duty to member's inactivity |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Wed 14 Apr 2010, 6:15 pm | |
| Unarchived, however chuunin and up have been filled |
| | | .Pride
Age : 32 Posts : 276
| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Wed 14 Apr 2010, 9:57 pm | |
| Shit...
So I'm stuck with a Puny Genin? D: |
| | | ₡amisado
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Wed 14 Apr 2010, 10:24 pm | |
| Afraid so |
| | | .Pride
Age : 32 Posts : 276
| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Wed 14 Apr 2010, 10:25 pm | |
| F*ck. >> Is there an option of waiting until a higher rank dies off? < |
| | | ₡amisado
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Wed 14 Apr 2010, 10:28 pm | |
| I suppose so, but I doing so would really be oh so lame of you; we need more genin. Plus you'd have to talk to the Kage about their village ranks. |
| | | .Pride
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Wed 14 Apr 2010, 10:29 pm | |
| I really hate being low ranks. Not enough power for me. :/
So i'll wait, when a rank opens up, I'll ask around. |
| | | ₡amisado
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Wed 14 Apr 2010, 10:43 pm | |
| Your not very humble are you? Anyhow, want me to lock and move this app to the archives then? |
| | | .Pride
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Wed 14 Apr 2010, 10:44 pm | |
| Sure, why not. << I'll do the history on Word. |
| | | ₡amisado
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| Subject: Re: Yazura, Narus [Kumogakure Chuunin] Wed 14 Apr 2010, 10:46 pm | |
| Locked and Archived. |
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