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| Yamanaka, Lily [Kumo Genin] | |
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Lily
Age : 29 Posts : 9
| Subject: Yamanaka, Lily [Kumo Genin] Fri 24 Dec 2010, 10:15 pm | |
| "Yamanaka's True Beauty"
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| | | Lily
Age : 29 Posts : 9
| Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Lily [Kumo Genin] Fri 24 Dec 2010, 10:15 pm | |
| Basic Information: Name: Yamanaka, Lily. Secondary Title: Lil Flower Age: 11 Gender: Male Physical Appearance: Standing at 4'11 and weighing at 112lbs, Lily is quite the average 11 year old girl. Having blonde hair she doesn't really stand out from the crowd. She usually has long hair which goes straight down her back, having a straight cut fringe, it often gets messed up when she is in battle because of her moving around too much and also it messes up when she has woken up. Lily also puts her hair up time to time so it doesn't get in her way when she is doing something important. The most noticable thing that people often point out to her is that she has beautiful bright blue eyes, these usually shine brightly when the sun is out and also he big eyes help show them more then the average girls eyes.
Usually seen in a long black top with grey stripes going across it, people often like to say "Awww" when they see her. With that she has a short white skirt which is very unusual for a 11 year old girl, but she doesn't really mind because it allows her to move around with more ease and with few distractions. Also seen with pink ribbons in her hair this can sometimes make her stand out a little more. Like most shinobi she wears the usual blue sandals which don't irritate her. Lily also wears the ninja pouch around her back which contain her shuriken's and also has the kunai pouch with kunai in it attached to her right leg.
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Personality: Lily is a kind of shy girl, often seen with her sleeves covering most of her hands all the time. This shows that she is not very interactive with anyone around her and when she see's someone she actually knows, she will simply let them be or if they greet her, she simply puts a little wave their way. Most of the time people try to get her to talk and etc but she just sits their with a little blush on her face or covers her mouth with her sleeve.
Lily doesn't usually speak much because she is embarrassed of her voice but when she does it sounds like the voice of an angel. This often attracts boys towards her but repels afterwards when she doesn't speak to them. Lily often sits on a swing in the park where it is quite peaceful, often she sings with the birds when people are not around. All in all Lily is one of them people who don't do anything wrong and a person who is not really noticed. Catch Phrase: "Heyaa" Clan: Yamanaka
Rank Information: Rank: Genin Village Affiliation: Kumogakure
Special Information: Character Speciality: Main:Ninjutsu Sub:Weaponry Elemental Affinity: Main:Water Sub:Lightning Special Characteristics: Incorruptible The character possesses a mysterious factor that keeps him from getting ill, literally rendering him immune to unknown pathogens, including the Plague. (Not Poisons/Acids/Etc, only "Disease")
Time Sense The character is never late. He possesses a preternatural sense of timing and knows the exact time down to a few seconds. Because punctuality and timeliness are intimately tied to professionalism in the Ninja mind, time sense is a much valued aptitude.
Weather Change The character's skin changes when the weather or tempature suddenly changes. Hot: Sweat Beads, Cold: Goosebumps.
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Age : 29 Posts : 9
| Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Lily [Kumo Genin] Fri 24 Dec 2010, 10:16 pm | |
| "Clan Jutsu" - Quote :
Name: Mind Transfer Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: - Description: This technique allows the user to enter the mind of another person or even an animal.[2] The user transfers their consciousness to the opponent, giving them complete control of the body for a short period of time. Their original body is left defenseless while this jutsu is active, leaving it susceptible to attack until they return. The mind transfer is slow-moving, moves in a straight direction, and takes some time to return to the user's body if it misses. Because of these reasons it should only be used on immobilized targets. Similarly, if the opponent's will is strong enough, they can force the user from their body. Lastly, should any physical injury befall the victim's body while the mind-link is active, it would cause the user's body to also receive those same injuries. For example, should the victim's arm be detached, the user's arm would be detached as well, leading to the conclusion that, should the victim die, the user would also die. Drains a C rank amount of chakra per post.
Name: Telepathy Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: - Description: This jutsu allows the user to telepathically communicate with other people. The user must control their chakra in order to keep the telepathic link with the designated communicator. If they are startled or attacked when they are concentrating the link breaks and takes up a C rank amount of chakra for every post it is used. It it is only good for up to ten meters.
"Suiton Jutsu" - Quote :
Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Suiton Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Lily will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Lily or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.
Name: Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Water Description: Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Lily will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.
Name: Teppoudama - Bullet Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Water Description:Suiton • Teppoudama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, Lily manifests a large amount of water in his mouth which he can then spit at his opponent as a large spherical projectile.
"Raiton Jutsu" - Quote :
N/A
"Items" Items:
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15x Shuriken 10x Kunai 10x Explosive Tags 5x Smoke Pellets
"Weapons" - Quote :
Name: N/A Quantity: 10x Rank: D Appearance: Just a normal key but at the tip it is more weighted so it digs into the ground and stands up. Also at the round bit the yamanaka sign is embedded in it. Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin: Made them herself.
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Age : 29 Posts : 9
| Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Lily [Kumo Genin] Fri 24 Dec 2010, 10:31 pm | |
| Background Information History: Childhood Arc Growing up as a child was hard in the Kumo country, there were poor supplies and not many defences. Many kids was orphans, Lily was one of those kids. Lily was treated poorly and had to get food for himself. While in the orphanage he made a young friend, her name was "Shia" she was very kind and loving. Lily was attracted to her and so he comforted her when she needed it.
Lily was picked by the Orphanage to be enrolled in the Kump Academy. The Orphanage saw his talents when he had to defend himself when him and Shia was attacked by a mugger. When Lily enrolled in the academy he had to leave the orphanage which meant leaving Shia.
After Lily left, Shia was alone and had no friends left. One night Shia killed herself because of the loneliness. Lily was summoned by the orphanage, this left him in bits. There was a burial and people from the orphanage, and Lily attened in his shinobi wear, not long after he realised that he could use his mind as a weapon, he was a Yamanaka.
Academy Arc When Lily left the Orphanage he left behind Shia and was devestated. Lily packed his bags and left, he then went to the academy and embarked on his life of the ninja. When he arrived at the academy it was a whole new surronding to him, it felt wrong all the faciltys was good and clean.
When Lily finally settled in he was doing well with his exams and made many friend's while there. Lily was a class A Student and got straight A's on his exams. He was voted most likley to become a jounin. Lily lived up to this reputation.When it came to the last exam, he was accused of cheating which made him get disquallified.
When Lily was disquallified he found the people who accused him of it and teached them a lesson. The teachers didn't know about this and Lily didn't want them to find out either, Lily then took the exam one year later and the people who accused him was know genin. Lily then passed with flying colour's.
Genin Arc Lily the next day felt lucky because he was genin, he went to the academy and collected his kumo headband. He wore his headband with pride and honour, even though he didn't have a team he still did low rank mission's to keep up his reputation up to its highest.
Role-Play Sample:
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Katsu ran through the forest and came to a familiar gate he knew, He walked in and looked around i havent been here for yonks ever since that mission Katsu walked up and stopped then smiled , He walked to the hokage building and walked up the stairs and came to the hokage door. Katsu knocked on the door then opened it" im Back Hokage" He looked around and couldnt see the Hokage there. He walked back out and closed the door behind him. Katsu scratched his head i wonder where the Hokage is Katsu walked down the stairs and walked to the mission room, he opened the door and walked in"ive finished my mission" Katsu walked out again, He yawned and he put his hand over his mouth.
He walked to his house and opened the door. Katsu looked around and saw a robe and a mask on his table. Katsu Shrugged his shoulders and walked over to it, He turned over the mask and there was a letter inside of it. Katsu took out the letter and opened it, he took out the paper and began reading it: Well done you have been promoted to Jounin best wishes the Hokage "yess" He put down the letter and walked over to his bed and lied down on it and went to sleep. Katsu woke up and looked around, he got out of bed and went over to his table and sat down. He got up again and walked over to a cupboard and got 1 glass out, he then got whisky and pourred some in, Katsu picked up the glass and put it down his throat in one. He got up dressed and went out and he then looked around and smiled. Katsu began walking and looked around the street.
He couldn’t believe that he was back in Kohona, He breathed in deeply and took in the fresh air and then he breathed out. Katsu smiled at everyone he looked at, He took out a cigarettes packet and opened it he took out a cigarette and lit it, He put it in his mouth and began smoking it, He left it in his mouth while smoke was coming out of his nose, Katsu walked to a bench and sat down , He looked at everyone walking by like they never knew he left. Katsu looked up in the air and smiled for a brief moment, he then looked down again and got off the bench. He walked past all the houses off people he knew and was friends with. He walked up to the memorial stone and he looked at all the names that was imprinted on it, some of his friends names was on there. Katsu smiled and a single tear fell from his eye, He wiped his eyes and by the time he did his cigarette was out, He took it out and threw it on the floor, he then stamped on it and wiggled his foot a little so he knew the flame was out. Katsu then turned around and began walking again, he came across a lake which he use to play in with all his friends, He sat down and took off his sandals, he then began walking into the lake until the water reached his 3 quarter height. He looked around and smiled, he then saw all his friends and him and they was all splashing in the lake playing with each other. He walked out and put on his sandals again.
Katsu walked across the fields like it he was a child again. He smiled at the kids at the park. He sat down on a bench and looked at the kids having fun, He smiled then got up again, he took out another cigarette and lit it he then put it in his mouth and began smoking. He walked and one person came up to him while he was walking, the child said”are you a jounin?” Katsu smiled then nodded, the child said ”im going to be one” He then smiled even more “well I hope you do” Katsu began walking and stood in front of the ramen shop, He put his cigarette on the floor and stamped on it. Katsu then walked in and looked at the owner ”could I have a normal ramen please” The owner smiled and then he began making it. He took the ramen off the table when it was done and he began eating it. He put money on the table ”keep the change” He smiled then got up from his seat and then left the building. Katsu walked until his legs was getting tired, He walked up to a field and lied down he then closed his eyes and began laughing. He opened his eyes again and he got up, He looked around and the fields was empty and there was a strong wind brewing, the sun was setting and it was getting dark. Katsu sat up and looked at the sun setting. When the sun was no longer in His eye sight.
Katsu got up and began walking home. He looked down the streets and alleys and it was empty the houses lights where off it was only him in the streets. He stood still and scratched his head it’s amazing what happens when your having fun He laughed a little then began walking. He then came upon his house, Katsu looked at the door and the hole thing. He then smiled and laughed a little he then walked to the one place he has wanted to see for a long time the academy. He reached the academy and he looked at the building and he thought about all the times he had at the academy. He smiled again and he walked back home and while he was walking back home there was a paper on the floor. Katsu bent down and picked it up he then began reading it the headline said He came home Katsu smiled and began walking again, when he met with his home he opened the door went to his bed lied down on it and dozed off to sleep.
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| | | Lily
Age : 29 Posts : 9
| Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Lily [Kumo Genin] Fri 24 Dec 2010, 11:04 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Lily [Kumo Genin] Mon 27 Dec 2010, 6:25 am | |
| Ok really this is just a simple profile and I really do not see anythin that needs major editing thouh I do have some things to point out.
1) Gender: Girl or boy you gotta let me know my friend. I read the stats and I read boy in the profile and arcs but I have Female in Appearance and Personality they are mixing "Him" and "Her"
2) If you can add a bit more to the personality it would be great.
3) I know you have keys but do you need them for jutsu because I see weaponry as a Spec. but I do not see any of those jutsu in your Profile.
4) Speaking of Weaponry there are a main and a sub for weaponry. You Choice are:
Swords - All forms of Swords Axes - All forms of Axe Polearms - All forms of polearms, from spears to halberds Blunt - All blunt weaponary, such as hammers, maces, ninchucks etc Ranged - All ranged weaponary such as bows and advanced forms of shuriken/kunai Exotic - Any weapons that don't fall into the norm such as whips and chains. Really odd shaped weapons of whatever variety count as exotic
Please pick 2; one for main weaponry, second for Sub weaponry |
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