Ninja Art: Twin Buffalo Fists

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Name; Animal Sealing: Twin Buffalo Fists
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This is a technique utilized by Kinu of the Yamazaru Clan. By releasing the seal that takes the form of a intercepting triangle on the clan members body, they can release the special abilities which were bestowed within the seal using the clans unique Animal Sealing method. This technique turns the user's fists into the heads of buffaloes. With this ability each strike with the users fist is amplified to a pulverizing degree. The skull of the buffalo heads are incredibly thick and the bonus of two horns sticking from the them. This makes them wrecking balls in combat and gives Kinu a advantage in close combat. They have been shown to create large craters 15mtrs in radius and 3mtrs in depth. This technique can easily break bone and decimate an individual depending on the momentum Kinu puts into his lunges. This ability lasts until canceled but at the cost of Kinu not being able to utilize hand-seals. If Kinu punches something that is incredibly dense (ie. steel or impenetrable barriers) his wrists is damaged in the process. If continuous punches of exerted on the dense object then Kinu will eventually break his wrist in a couple of strikes.

Disclaimer: Given the Konin Rank, Kinu is allowed to have 1 B-ranked technique.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Can a mod check this please.

Age : 30 Posts : 1236

Looks almost fine with me. You state that you can smash boulder and create craters when they come into contact with something and can own someone; which you support with the fact due to 'Kinu's Strength'. Nowhere on your app, especially in your Special Characteristics state that Kinu has a lot of strength. So i'd suggest you tone it down a tad, make an actual limitation to the size/depth of the crater you can produce and the severity of the injury. I wouldn't suspect a B-ranked tech could obliterate someone, but break bones easily sounds good with me. Also, have you ever considered increasing the 'downside' to your tech. As in, when you do make contact you injure your wrist or something. For you to smash into something so hard with this tech, to me, seems like you'd have a bit of draw-back.

Also, one thing, this will be your only B-ranked jutsu so I assume you have no other B-ranked jutsu? And another thing, I give you approval to train it as well. And fix your bunny in your sig. D< it annoys me behind half-eared.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Heya Dan

Thank you for checking my app.

All edits have been made.

Quote :: Also, one thing, this will be your only B-ranked jutsu so I assume you have no other B-ranked jutsu? And another thing, I give you approval to train it as well. And fix your bunny in your sig. D< it annoys me behind half-eared.

I"m well aware, and no, I have no other B ranked techniques in my arsenal. Bunny has been repaired.

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Approved for training.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/t2417-kinu-and-miku-training-ccandyp

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Approved. Will place at the bottom of your jutsu list in the appropriate slot.
Congrats my friend